Intoxication #1. Part 5 on pg 126/ Link to new thread and teaser pg1.

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msmarple

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Posted: 11 years ago

#771

Thank God I read the PS: in your note!!!!!😊

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A_BA

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Posted: 11 years ago

#772

I finally got a chance to catch up on the last two chapters! Even though there is so much mystery surrounding Arnav, Khushi, and the serial killer, I am loving the way you have laid out this story! Thanks for reassuring us that Arnav is not the serial killer (though I never though he was!).

Khushi definitely has a past and it's led her to her situation and to her having this dark, dry humor who doesn't feel like she has the right to hope for something. Arnav also has this past with his wife and friend betraying him. I'm looking forward to knowing what the real deal is!

I don't want to speculate much because I know I won't even be able to guess what you have planned, so I will just sit back and enjoy this story as it moves forward😊

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IPK007

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Posted: 11 years ago

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-MIMOSA-

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Posted: 11 years ago

#774

Lot of things revealed in this chapter...

Arnav is really under some mission...

Khushi had fallen really hard for Arnav...

Shyam is an agent...but I feel like he is double crossing...

and what the?...Shyam is Khushi's husband?

and there is an impending heart break for Khushi, as Arnav apparently don't share the feeling which she have for him...

And of course Arnav is NOT a serial killer...

Great going Jen...really enjoying this story a lot...👏

Update jaldi jaldi...😊

Edited by mimosa658 - 11 years ago

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Anupama

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Posted: 11 years ago

#775

R!
Quite an eventful chapter.
Arnav clearly has some mission on mind. In the process, he knows he has to have her. He has contempt for her. Right now, I have that for him. He is always thinking one this thing that 'of whatever he knows of her.' . He obviously knows that she is married. He is kind of seeing her as the betrayal that his wife was. Still, if he himself is that fair and saint , why spend the night with her.? Due to his reasoning that what 'women like her' are , he'l go about generalizing it what his wife did? :/

also, I feel here either some daddy of all Misunderstanding has taken place. His bugging the area and collecting the content of the package seems to say that. And / Or She wasnt the target. Khushi has just been a stepping stone for some other ulterior motive of his.

Their time together in the apartment had been very hurtful for me to read. I really wanted to kick him when she wakes up in the dawn with all her guards down.

Rest Shyam and all i couldnt understand what he is upto being her husband. I have just gathered from earlier chapters too that this marriage may be kind of sham or a deciet.

BRILLIANT CHAPTER JEN! 🤗

Edited by Anupama. - 11 years ago

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AquaSandhya

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Posted: 11 years ago

#776

It is hard to not second guess who/why/where /what...but I'm going to try and resist that at this point.

What is glaringly clear is that Khushi has fallen and fallen hard for Arnav. I say fallen because he is in this relationship for a different purpose altogether and not love. So right now...it is Khushi alone in it while Arnav is in it for physical gratification that he unable to resist. After all he is very much attracted despite resistance from himself.

I love the way you described Khushi's internal battle. Knowing that Arnav doesn't reciprocate her feelings but unable to resist him despite that. It is like being in between a rock and a hard place. It is no choice at all, if at all we can call it that.

The passion they share is mind blowing.

Arnav is scarred...not only mentally but also physically. Very badly scarred. But what is he unto? I cannot resist it anymore.

He is behind Shyam Jha...who may be the reason behind those scars. And Arnav thinks Khushi shares a decent relationship with Jha..no wonder he is contemptuous coz he believes Khushi is doing something that Lavanya did to Arnav. In a way, I'm happy about the bugs coz he will know what Khushi is exactly.

Inspector Khan definitely does not think Arnav is the culprit...Have a feeling he may seek Arnav's help in nabbing the killer.

Brain work...😆

Waiting waiting waiting...Jen. Good one.👍🏼

Edited by AquaSandhya - 11 years ago

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golpokobita

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Posted: 11 years ago

#777

Edited.

Sorry for keeping it res'ed for such long time.

Now about the update, your love scenes are always intense and beautiful. That was true today. But what I liked the most is there was a different type of rawness in this story which was so aesthetically presented! I loved it...

Mystery continues.. Now even Khushi has become mysterious. So far it was only arnav who was all confusing..

Shyam is her husband. I guess khushi is not in good terms with him. Or is she Shyam's agent working in the bar for a purpose? I don't want that to be true, though!

But of course, i have complete faith in your imagination!

Looking forward to the next update!~

Edited by golpokobita - 11 years ago

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kclovearshi

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Posted: 11 years ago

#778

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Khushi's fears came true about Arnav's intentions!! So she was just a one night stand for him and had an ulterior motive in pursuing her!! It is clear now that he is after Shyam Manohar Jha but why? Hmm I was half right in assuming this was some kind of sting/covert operation but instead of being it by an agent it is against an agent, so then what is Arnav? Is he acting on his own?

But why such feelings for Khushi? that he is contempt towards such women?? If his wife wronged him, it doesn't mean all women are s**ts. Obviously Khushi is forced to do this for a living that reminds me to ask why? She is the wife of a secret agent (which was like bomb shell) and how has she come down to earn her own living? (it's not that she is not supposed to, but there are other decent ways of earning a living!!). Seems to me she ran away from him for some reasons and living here by herself secretly!!

Updates are getting scary, heart-racing and nail byting and on the edge of your seat type..👏

Oh, their passionate encounter was hmm 😳. Beautifully narrated 😉

Cheers

Edited by kclovearshi - 11 years ago

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kondhili

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Posted: 11 years ago

#779

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Good Lord Jen you astounded me with this update. I am on the edge of my seat wondering what the hell is happening.

I am not going to make any guesses here cause i know i shall fall flat on my face...Khushi has obviously fallen hard for Major sahab but major sahab is with khushi for his own hidden agenda. One of which is Shyam Manohar Jha who OMG happens to be khushi's husband.

Is that why Major is so contemptuous towards khushi and has such a low opinion about her?

Just a few meetings and khushi was tempted enough to commit adultery. This makes me ponder about khushi's marriage and her equation with her so called husband?

But the sexual attraction between Arnav and khushi was just oh so HOT.

As if all this drama was not enough And in the middle of this you have a Inspector khan who is running another show.

I bow down to your awesome talent Jen. Such an amazing mysterious story from the creator of Foster.❤️

Your ability to handle all genres is mind boggling 👏⭐️

Edited by kondhili - 11 years ago