Intoxication #1. Part 5 on pg 126/ Link to new thread and teaser pg1.

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deepa

@deeswarna

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Posted: 11 years ago

#761

just read the last 2 updates in one go and the only thing i can say that im always biting my nails while reading every update! im loving the way u are portraying the story; mysterious but still with a touch of romance!

i think like arnav, khushi also has a past and thats why she is obliged to do this kind of job for a living! n arnav is the most handsome and hot mysterious man ive ever read about. i have a feeling that arnav is protecting her from the murderer!

looking forward to the next part

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@-MIMOSA-

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#762

Update day is here...😊

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tparvaiz

@tparvaiz

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#763

Awesome updates

Sorry for the late reply.

Thank you so much for mp me.

😕About arnav... he is scare in night and see nightmare

He aslo have black and white photo...???

He cares for khushi... Khushi is 😕 to believe

But teaser is too scaring

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momoahmd

@momoahmd

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#764

beautiful update dear...

both harbor feelings for each other...

interesting turn of events...

plxxx continue soon...

thnxxx a lot 4 pm...

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sanja_here

@sanja_here

Rocker

+ 6

Posted: 11 years ago

#765

I thought arnav is the killer b4 reading ur note... 😆 ..thanks for the note now

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dima_a

@dima_a

Navigator

Posted: 11 years ago

#766

amazing my dear... a lot of confusion and before reading your note i thought that arnav will be the killer ...waiting for next ...really awesome story

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Ananya

@Anarocksick

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Posted: 11 years ago

#767

Originally posted by: Anarocksick
Okay, Jenny, this story is so super cool, badass and mysterious, that I almost...almost feel stupid to write a comment, wondering whether it'll make sense or not, wondering whether or not that I;ll just end up sounding stupid if I put forward my guess or try to make sense of situations 😆
So pardon me. But I REALLY DO NOT KNOW WHAT TO WRITE.

But from what a little voice in my head is telling, it seems that Arnav wants something from Khushi, perhaps to protect her, or she he might need her help... for that reason, he visits the cheap bar. And of course, he's finding himself instead falling for her instead and a little too attracted to her eyes 😃

Poor Khushi. A lot's going on for her. I think she's going to give in finally and that's how Arnav will get her sedated. Seriously now...I would really like to know why in the world he'd do that...

And why why are the clues pointing towards Major Raizada 😕

un-reserved on page 93 😳