Forever Yours - Final Part pg. 101 Updt - Page 79

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Posted: 18 years ago

Sangs darling,

Let me start by 👏 Awonderfully beautiful end to such a lovely and heart warming and "Happy" fanfic dear. 😆

Loved this fanfic,😳 as I loved all the others as well😃 and just as Rani I too hope that you donot stop writing fanfics at all, no matter if they are heart wrenchingly emotional wepy stuff.😉😃

You are a good writer dear and I for one love reading what you have to say and write.😃👏

Till the next one dear, even a sad one would do.😉😛😃

Love

Krishna

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Posted: 18 years ago
Ur ff gives a feeling of sitting in a cozy room on a comfy chair,reading a book ,munching on a fave snack . That was a heartwarming, sweet & tender conclusion to a lovely story.

Thanx 😊
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Posted: 18 years ago
Hey Sangita
What a lovely end to a beautifully penned tale…marvelous my dear!! You have depicted perfectly the anguish a bride experiences at leaving her home….even though she's ready to start a new life with her beloved, yet the pain of leaving behind her childhood is immense. Brought back memories of my own wedding and tears to my eyes again
Looking forward to you starting another ff soon….that's what keeps me going, esp with the current crap (oops track) of KS!!
Cheers
Sims
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Posted: 18 years ago
Sangita
A wonderful ending to a fantabulous fanfic!!!
The way you described their emotions throughout the journey of finding one another was simply awesome!!! the conflict Bani had between duty as a daughter and to a commitment and being with her soulmate/true love was so wonderfully portrayed through your magnificent writing!!!

So sorry to see this FF end but it did end at the perfect point - the culmination of true lovers and soulmates being united!!!

Hope to see another happy JB FF soon as that is what keeps the forum alive these days!!!

Nina
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Posted: 18 years ago
Enjoyed your ff. Great effort. Wonderful writing. 👏 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago


Sangiiiiiiiiiiiiii!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! 😃

Sorry, I just felt like shrieking. 😆

I finally got a chance to catch up on the last two parts and what can i say? Except... 👏

The lead up to the wedding, JW at the sangeet, haila 😳 he's so cute na?!! 😆 bechara, all that teasing!! 😆 no wonder he was annoyed! 😉

i have to say though, out of everything, I loved the final part the most!! No passionate and immediate consummation, no "drunk on joy" 19/6, but an initially awkward, but eventually perfect union of two soulmates. 😳

the fact that the two of them found the new step in their relationship a little new or confusing was just so perfect!! they spent so many years as friends, and now this sudden graduation to husband and wife, to lovers... their hesitation was so realistic!! 👏 😳 😃

and JW is such a sweetheart!! his silent support at the bidaai... leaving things up to her on their suhaag raat... just the perfect gentlemen na?! 😳 😳 😃

although i'm sad you finished the story, i think you have wrapped it up at the perfect spot, finished it on a fairy-tale like note... well done Sangs, and thanks so much for the happy ending!! 🤗
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Posted: 18 years ago
Wonderful ending! Two bodies have finally become one soul. Jai is such a caring hubby its cute. Bani really trusts him and he doesn't want to hurt her. Their relationship has reached a new level and both are happy.

Sobia
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Posted: 18 years ago
Sangita,

That was an amazing finale to the beautifully written love story, the friendship turning into a new leaf with marriage.

The bidhaai and Jai's handling of it was so tender and gentle. I loved the whole the new found intimacy between them so appealing...

Yaar, it was truly amazing...

Loved it!! 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago

Dear Sangita,

At last a happy ending. I was dreading to open the final part.....did not want to cry you see....but the ending is beautiful...very romantic...very real.... 👏 👏 👏 ...love Tin
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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: coolgurl_2005

Sangita Di 😃
that was just beautiful.the prefect end to a prefect FF. Thanks a lot.

it was very sweet and touching.the union of two souls becoming one,was written beautifully.I'd truly enjoyed reading this ff.Will be eagerly waiting for the new ff,cant wait.loved it. 😊

preet 😳



Thanks a lot Preet for being with me thru'out this journey.

Your lovely comments surely encouraged me.

As for another FF, I am not to sure.

Cheers 😊

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