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Posted: 11 years ago

thanks so much rihan bro...😃
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Hello guys!!!

A BIG THANKSS to ALL



Chapter Five: A Sin


Rahul walk in trishna's room where both she nd madhu were lying on bed after coming from long walk...

He said "lets go out trishna..."

Trishna stood up boringly saying "no rahul... I m tired nw..." madhu spoke in defending trishna "ya rahul we just nw return frm long walk nd we r literally exhausted..."

Rahul fumes in anger nd luking at madhu hiss saying "I m not talking with u..." trishna baffled at his way of speaking said "rahul behave..."

Rahul speak with ease "wat behave trishna... here I am talking with u not her...so why she always try to come in between us???"

Trishna speak in anger "because she is our friend...nd how stupid things u r talking means how she can come between us nd when u spend time with RK I don't complain u saying RK is coming between us..."

Rahul surprised at trishna's raising voice nd spat at her "u knw wat trishna u changed because before this u never behave like this with me and all this cause of stupid madhu..."

Trishna not taking more shouted like hell "just shut up rahul !!! u crossing ur limits nw..."

Poor madhu sitting aside witnessing there quarrel whose reason is she...guilt taking over her mind... she stood up from bed nd speak in sad tone..." plzz u both don't fight cause of me...if I hurted u rahul so I m really sorry I was not having any intention for doing so..." madhu walked out from the room...bt rahul's nxt statement stop her "wow!! Nw u being so innocent madhu... u knw very well how to play... one side u always trying to lure over RK nd otherside trying to break my nd trishna's relation... well done..." saying so he clapped coming infront of madhu...

The nxt sound echoed the whole room was a SLAP!!! Rahul's cheek sting turning into red colour nd trishna standing infront of him her eyes red with fury as she slapped him...

Before rahul can say anything trishna speak "u deserve this rahul nw get lost from here..." nd he walked out...

A tear rolled down from madhu's cheek nd she fall on her knees...

Trishna sit beside her hugging her trying to console madhu... madhu speak between sobs "trishu I never have such intentions I truly never want this to happen... I consider u as my sister..." she burst into cry...

Trishna's eyes too watery with tears...brushing off tears she speak actively "don't cry madhu I knw u... for me also u r like my little sister... rahul have lost his mind nd talking non sense..."

Madhu back off little nd spoke hesitantly "but one thing he said is true... I hide it from u also trishu I do love RK..."

Trishna was shocked at her statement bt madhu took her hand in her saying assuringly "but I never desire him because I knw hw much he loves dipali he will never accept my love so I never wanted him too...I m happy with our friendship relation only... believe me trishna I don't want RK I have no intention to broke up his relation with dips..."

Trishna smiled luking down "I trust u madhu... somewhere it is not ur fault also that u fall for RK he is having such a charm that anyone can fall for him... and believe me if u both will be together I will be the most happy person in the world... as dips is such a b***h who should not deserve even RK's friendship... bt let it be forget all this nd smile as we all r gud friend atleast... who knws someday RK will also fall for ur innocence nd pure heart..." tishna winked at madhu...

Madhu giggled between her sobs nd also blushing...

Outside the room dips hearing all their convo walked off her mind bursting with anger... trishna's words ringing again nd again in her brain...she sat on bed in her room speaking to herself "that's it madhu nw u r over I don't want to loose my RK...u fall for a very wrong guy..."

Dips throwed a vase on floor shouting "he is mine... RK is mine only..."

Hearing the sound RK come in room running nd asked her "wat happen dips???" dips straightened herself hiding her fury speak with smile "nothing RK just this vase fall accidently nd I startled..." RK laughed saying "dips u r so stupid I got tense hearing ur voice... ok I will send laxmi tai to clean up this..."

Dips nodded her head nd RK walked out... Rahul was standing at room's door keenly observing her...

Dips speak with smirk "I have a plan..." rahul asked in confusion "wat plan???" dips eyed him to come in room nd she said "don't u want a revenge for that slap... whose reason is madhu..." his expression change to disgust as he remember hw trishna slapped him nd nxt moment he gave in saying "wat is the plan??? Tell me..."

At night everyone ate dinner in silent no one uttering a single word... RK who is unaware of things occurred at evening was confused luking at all of them... dips smiled luking at him nd RK return it too...

After dinner madhu clean up table nd trishna helped her as laxmi tai already left for her home making an xcuse...

while washing utensil trishna felt dizzy nd almost going to fall but madhu supported her... madhu told her "trishu u go nd sleep I will do it..." trishna denied her saying "I m ok madhu just that tiredness of the day..." madhu made hr stop nd speak in fake anger "trishu u just go from here nd sleep... right nw..." trishna gave up nd walked out from kitchen...

Sometime later madhu went in her room but trishna was not there she checked in washroom nd didn't found her... in panic madhu walk out luking for her nd bumped with dips... she asked madhu with fake worry "hey wacth out... wat's the prblm u running for???

Madhu replied in tense "trishna she is not in room..." dips luking outside the house said "I saw her walking out from backside door in anger nd she was crying also... I tried to stop her but she was in hurry... may be she fought with rahul I think so as I also saw rahul coming out from her room..."

Madhu was horrified as luking out cause backside way is just linked up with dark forest... without thinking further she went out luking for trishna...

Dips laughed at her victory nd rahul too joined in saying "she is soo stupid became fool so easily..." dips nodded in agreement nd asked him "btw where is trishna???"

Rahul replied smirking "she is in my room nd wat about Rk???"

Dips walked to her room saying "don't worry sleeping pills worked he is in deep slumber u too go nd have a peacefull sleep from nw... as madhu malik chapter overs right here right nw..."

EARLIER AT EVENING

Dips said circling around rahul "we have to make her fool nd create a situation that she go deep in forest where she will be dinner of that wild animals nd we will be free... so think hw to do it..."

Rahul said with worry "dips r u gone mad u want to kill her??" dips smirked saying "I don't mind if she die in that forest or come back in worst condition..."

Rahul thought for a while nd said "Ok I got it hw to force her to go in forest she love trishna like her sis na... her love will only drag her to her death... nw wait nd watch..."

Both rahul nd dips baffled at sound of something falling...luking at door found laxmi standing horrified after witnessing there evil side... she speak in scary tone "u both planning to kill madhu... but I will not let this happen... right nw I m going to tell this all ur sin things to RK..."

Before she could leave dips speak raising her pitch of tone "if u love ur life so u will nt tell RK anything..."

Laxmi turn around nd startled as dips was standing mere distance away from her nd hovering over her... dips said threatening her "if we can kill madhu so will not hesitate a little to kill u right nw nd throw in jungle from where ur single body part will not found out... so better keep ur mouth mum nd leave from the house after completing ur chores..."

Laxmi just shook her head more horror-struck from dips behavior nd begun to clean up the floor picking up vase pieces...

PRESENT

Madhu without sensing anything just keep walking deeper nd deeper in jungle shouting trishna's name...

Finally she get exhausted nd fall on ground taking deep breathes nd luk around...

"trishu where r u??" she murmured...

Coming to sense she notice that she herself lost ways nd didn't knw how to get back home...

But to her luck she was having trishna's cell which she took while searching for her...first she dialed RK's number nd after many rings cell answered not waiting to hear opposite side voice she speak crying "Hello Rk it's me madhu... I lost way in forest when I came to find trishna nd I still didn't found her..."

She heard laughing voice nd her tears stop in dismay as dips spoke "trishna is at home madhu... it's only u lost in dark forest...nd this ur punishment for coming between me nd RK... so enjoy ur night with wild animals... gud night...bye bye at last..."

Madhu perplexed nd numb sitting on dirtied ground her world shattered off into pieces...

In her horrible dream also she never thought that dips will go this much low... after a moment she encouraged herself dialing her own number as she left her cell in her room thinking may be trishna will help her...

But today was worst night of her life... her fate was playing a dangerous game with her the call was answered by rahul who came to drop unconscious trishna back into her room...

Madhu speak in low tone "hello..." this time waiting for a reply... a voice came "hello who is this..."

She said in worried tone "hello rahul it's me madhu... plz help me rahul I m stuck in forest plz help me..."

At one point his heart went in turmoil hearing her sobs nd worry bt nxt moment his eyes falls on trishna nd he spat in anger "y should I help u madhu??? Because of u today trishna slapped me u spoiled my years old relationship with her... nw time to pay for it... nor me or trishna is going to help u out..."

Before she can say anything line went dead... poor madhu burst in cry nd started to shout "plz someone help me... help me plzz !!!"

chanting it like mantras madhu lost her consciousness nd her head fall touching the ground...

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THE END



IMPORTANT

Firstly don't throw chappals on me for such a heart breaking update...but I m trying to justify the concept of my story as I said before only it will be a thriller nd horror story... so hope u all will understand it nd also support me...I m writing such stuff first time...

U might also got it why I paired rk nd dips in story...and many of u were asking for rishbala pairing a big sorry to them as it is not a love story but I can assure u all that it will be very interesting without romance also...

Also it is happy endingwali story so relax and keep reading my readers !!!

Nw do share ur views guys...

Thanks and Love

SuRu😊

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Posted: 11 years ago
he he...i'm the first one to comment
zohra dear,i was looking 4ward 2 know what trap dips had set 4 her...but never thought this one!!!
and madhu lost consciousness!!!!!!!!omg!!!!!!!!!what wil happen now????????????????
it is a horror ss,so is there any good spirit 2 help her?????? ...i wish so

oooh...i feel like running 2 farm house&wake up rk...his angel needs him now...😭
it was a nice update,even it pained us...its okke,climax wil be happy,isn't it?
update soon...eager 2 know what wil happen 2 madhu
Edited by meiejrishbala - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Will send PMs later...😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
nice one.. interested to know what next .. Who will help poor madhu 😕
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Posted: 11 years ago
Mast update Suru...!! 👏👏
Quite a thrilling one...!!! 👏
Rahul and Deepali stooped so low in their revenge...😡😡
Feeling pity for poor Madhu...!! 😕
If I'm not wrong you are going to turn it in other way... somewhat horror and full of suspense... 😳
Well... I don't want RK to come and save Madhu...!!! At least not now !!!😉😉
I want this thrill to increase to its height...!!!😉
Very captivating part Suru !!! 👏👏
Well Done !!! 👏

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Posted: 11 years ago
Very nice update.
I hope someone will save Madhu.
Dipali and Rahul both are so cheap.
I just hate them.
Edited by SHINYSHREYA - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Awesome update dear
Hope rk goes to save madhu
She needs him
Hate dips n rahul too selfish folks
Continue soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
awesome update!i didn't think that dips will go so low in her plans to seperate rishbala!hate dips & trish's bf!its a horror story!so will we see that some vampire will come & save madhu?or will the vampire make madhu also a vampire?what will be rk & trishna's reaction at madhu's missing news?but it will have a happy ending,right?so we don't need to worry much!pls update the next part soon & pm me...
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Posted: 11 years ago
awesome dear...
madhu lost in forest...
wat will r.k do now...????

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