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Posted: 12 years ago
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LOST IN LOVE

Prolouge:

Some where in a grand wedding hall mantras are heard slightly as the crowd there are lost in the discussions of the bridegrooms luck of marrying the most successful business tycoon MAAN SINGH KHURANA.
Some are jealous,some are happy,some are sad.
But two people are feeling the two quite opposite feelings. Those are the married couple.
MAANs heart is filled with overwhelming happiness because he married his love of life.
GEET is heartbroken for marrying someone other than his lost love.
She doesnt even imagine in her dreams that she will marry someone other than ARJUN.

Will she ever forget her past and love maan who loves her unconditionally?


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Posted: 12 years ago
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I just dont wanna continue this story if u dnt like it.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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congrats for new ff
nice story
continue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
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congrats! interesting prologue! Pls continue
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Posted: 12 years ago
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nice would love to read it, continue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Part 1:

Maan is walking towards his room.
He is talking with his friends but his thoughts are wandering only around geet.
He is excited,tensed,happy about his SR with geet.
A large room with king size bed filled with rose petals and a small pool before bed with candles are giving the room a romantic atmosphere.
There in the middle of bed sat geet without any emotion.
Her mind became numb.she kept looking lost.
She didnt even realise maan came and sat on bed.
Maan took her hands into his and is saying something.
He took her right hand and places a soft kiss.
Thats when she realised her surroundings and looks at maan who is kissing her hand.
She took away her hand harshly.
He thought that she is shy and nervous.
He lifts her gunghat.
She closes her eyes in fear.
He holds her face in his hands and places a gentle kiss on her forehead.
He kisses her eyes one by one.
She felt so suffocated and sad.
He kisses the corner of her lips and came to her neck.
He lays there kissing around her neck.
Thats when a lone tear escapes her eyes and falls on maan cheek.
He lifts his head to see geet who is controlling her tears.
"geet" he called confused why she is crying now.
He shook her holding her shoulders.
"Geet" he again called her.
Geet cant control her tears burst into uncontrolled sobs.
In the mid of her sobs she said "i dnt want this."

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Posted: 12 years ago
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good start
waiting for maan's reaction...
update soon!!!!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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WAS GEET FORCED INTO THE MARRIAGE
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awesome prologue
please continue
and update soon

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