ASHLOK FF - PYAR YEH.. part 10 updated - page 41 - Page 4

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Posted: 11 years ago
#31
wow ashlok in college...loveeely😃😳cont. soon!!😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Dhamakedaar start...very different from the story of the serial or other FF's. Hope that Aastha finds atleast one genuine friend...she needs to b a strong girl to survive in a college full of students who r selfish, arrogant & too full of themselves...good luck Aastha. Update soon...please.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: rajani_sid

Dhamakedaar start...very different from the story of the serial or other FF's. Hope that Aastha finds atleast one genuine friend...she needs to b a strong girl to survive in a college full of students who r selfish, arrogant & too full of themselves...good luck Aastha. Update soon...please.


yeah will do that.. its not just a college story of u have read the prologue.. it will have a 12 year leap 😳.. u will surely like it.. as of now i am badly juggling with house work, baby and ffs 😆😆😆.. will try to update as soon as i get the time.. please bear..😃 thank you
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Good update...continue soon thanks for pm
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: sand88

Good update...continue soon thanks for pm


thanks sand88.. will continue as soon as possible.. 😛
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Thanks namrata.. Fantastic as usual.. is Shlok her senior?? Looks like ragging coming in next chap.. Waiting..:-)
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Part 2

" you !!! what the hell are U doing here??" exclaimed shlok in irritation

" am a student of this college.. do u have a problem??" astha proudly says and walks away..

" I don't have any problem.. but u will have lots of problem.. shlok agnihotri doesn't forget his insult so soon !!!" shlok says with a vengeance

" hey find out who is she.." he tells one of his friends

" yeah shlok.. I will do that.." his friend says

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Astha walks around the corridor admiring the college.. she sees the library, computer sections, staff rooms, recreation room etc..

" wow astha.. what a cool college is this.." she talks to herself.. " I just hope I get some friends here.. but seeing all these rich kids here, I doubt if anyone will speak to me.." astha worries as she reaches her classroom

She enters her classroom.. it's a huge classroom with all high-tech teaching equipments.. there are so many students.. all chatting in groups..

She slowly enters the class and sees some girls chit chatting.. she checks out their clothes and shoes.. some with short tight skirts, expensive dresses and shoes..

Astha feels a bit awkward.. but she looks for an empty chair..

Suddenly everyone in the class take a notice of her.. she smiles at everyone and slowly walks towards the chair she saw..

" who the hell are u??" one girl speaks up with a smirk

Astha stops and responds smilingly " hi, I am astha.. I am a new joinee"

All of them burst into laughter..

" are u serious??" the girl says laughing sarcastically

Astha gets disappointed and feels bad... " I am a new student of this class.." she says in a soft tone " u can see my ID card" she says and shows her ID card to the girl..

Another girl comes ahead" so aastha... where did u get this dress from? And ofcourse this designer bag?' she says in a ridiculing tone and laughing a bit

" ok no points for guessing.. fashion street I suppose" another girl interrupts

" and I know it might have costed u about 200 rupees right" the first girl speaks up again " or is it 150 after fighting and bargaining from the shopkeeper at the street"

All laugh again..

Astha feels put down.. she is almost in tears and she hold her bag tightly to gather courage..

Just then a lecturer enters the class.. " whats happening here?" she says firmly and all the students stop harassing astha and sit down in their seats..

" yes who are u?"

Astha slowly goes upto the lecturer and hands over her joining papers and id card..

The lecturer takes a look at it.. then she gets up and speaks to the class " this is astha .. a new joinee to the class.. she has joined us on scolorship merit and all of you make her feel welcomed her... astha, go and sit"

Astha sits down as the class goes on.. she takes out her book and feels worried about how she will handle this college students behaviour

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Its lunch break

Astha slowly walks around looking for a place to sit and eat..

She sees a canteen and walks up there to see.. she sees so many students are there.. all eating pizzas, cold drinks, burgers.. lots of groups and all laughing, chatting, playing and enjoying themselves

Astha goes to the food counter and sees all the food kept there.. there are burgers, pizzas, sandwiches, pastries, muffins and a lot more stuff.. and then she looks at the prices... the least price is like 100 bucks

" oh my god.. this is so expensive" she thinks to herself.. she gulps as she sees students buying so many things and paying up with notes of 1000 and 500..

She takes out her wada pav that was wapped in the newspaper and about to open it.. but suddenly she looks around and feels that its not the right place for her to eat this..

So she slowly starts walking out of the canteen..

As she is walking out her exit is blocked by Shlok... and a lot of his friends..

Shlok looks at her hand with the packet... but astha quickly puts it into her bag and tries to go..

But shloks friends block her way again..

" wait ms. Astha... in what kind of a hurry are you?? " says shlok sarcastically " lunch break is for one hour.. so lets know you better ..haaan"

A crowd gathers to see whats happening.. " chalo, lets start with your introduction.. all new students need to give their introduction to me first"

Astha gulps in nervousness and looks around to see the crowd.. she hopes that someone helps her.. but then she decides to face shlok

" my name is astha.." she says

" astha what??" shlok sits on a table stretching his legs on the chair head..

" only astha.." she says...

" ok guys!! Lets give a big clap for ONLY ASTHA" he claps his hand and so does everyone else..

"ok continue ms.only astha" shlok smirks

" I got admission in this college through scholarship and sponsor.. and I am in first semester MBA marketing" she says softly feeling humiliated..

" oh very good.. so astha what else do u do? Apart from studying and bothering people on the streets??" shlok gets serious

Astha gives him a stern look..

" put ur eyes down.. dint u learn that u need to show some respect to ur seniors??" shlok insults her..

" ok so did u like our canteen??" shlok asks with a smile and astha stares back.. " no?? u dint like anything?? Ahh I know I know.. u brought food from home right.."

He grabs her jhola bag and removes the newspaper wrapped wada pav from it..

" ok friends .. look here . this is our astha's lunch" he holds it high as all the other students start laughing...

" don't u know the rules of this college?? No? I will tell you.. u are not supposed to bring any food from outside to eat here in the canteen.. aaandd if u do so then there will be punishment" shlok says embarrassing astha

He opens the paper and throws the wada pav into the dustbin.. and all the students around start lauging and demeaning astha..

Astha feels degraded.. and her eyes fill with tears seeing her food being thrown away..

" oh are u going to cry??" shlok asks.. " don't worry u wont have to be hungry.. chalo go and choose what u want from the canteen items and eat.. don't worry about the money.. u know why ?? because this damn college belongs to MY father" shlok boasts..

Astha just takes her bag and walks away from there teary eyed..

Shlok smirks with a feeling of victory.. " how was it astha?? How does it feel to be humiliated in front of so many people?? This is not the end for you.. u have challenged shlok agnihotri.. so how will I let u off without teaching you a lesson?"

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Astha runs to the washroom and goes to a corner and weeps.. she doesn't want anyone to see her weeping and make fun of her again..

Suddenly a hand comes in front of her with a tissue..

Astha looks at the tissue with sobbing eyes.. and then turns wround to see who it is..

It is the same specs girl whom she met when she entered the college..

" thanks" astha says and takes the tissue

" shlok agnihotri.. son of chairman of this institution..." she says.. " be careful!!" she exclaims and starts walking away

Suddenly she turns around and says " by the way, I am gauri.. if u want to survive in this college.. stop being so emotional.. learn to face these students"

She smirks and walks out..

Astha wipes of her tears and washes her face.. she realizes that its time to go for her class and she walks away too

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Astha finished her day and starts going home..

As she is walking out of the college.. she keeps thinking about what all happened.. she keeps remembering how shlok insulted her in the canteen and feels terrible..

" astha u need to be courageous.. u have to study in this college for 2 years.. how can u give up in one day??" she says to herself and walks fast outside..

As she is walking fast.. suddenly a vehicle comes behind her and screeches and breaks .. astha gets scared and loses balance and falls into a muddy slush... dirtying all her clothes and face..

She looks at the vehicle in anger .. its shlok again and some girl behind him..

" so astha.. u will not collect everyone now??" he says sarcastically.. " Soorrryyy" he says jokingly and drives away

Astha fumes..

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ok guys.. on many requests i have updated the second part very soon.. so please keep those lovely comments coming in.. i love to read them and encourages me to write better and bring smiles on ur faces.. thank you😊

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Posted: 11 years ago
#38
first rule avoid
second if it goes beyond a point confront but calmly dnt lose temper

man it does become irritating

me was lucky ..if both the above did not work esp. in the beginning i would casually mention my bros name who was a senior :)
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: AnjuRish

first rule avoid

second if it goes beyond a point confront but calmly dnt lose temper

man it does become irritating

me was lucky ..if both the above did not work esp. in the beginning i would casually mention my bros name who was a senior :)

Lucky u to have a bro as senior. Nyways our astha wont sir back
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Loveeed it namratavyas...
Eagerly w8in 4 nxt update ba plxxx make sure it shd v little long nt da much short plx plx plx...

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