ASHLOK FF - PYAR YEH.. part 10 updated - page 41 - Page 2

Created

Last reply

Replies

259

Views

39.2k

Users

50

Likes

707

Frequent Posters

Asherkibiwi thumbnail
16th Anniversary Thumbnail Sparkler Thumbnail + 4
Posted: 11 years ago
#11
wowww
sounds very intresting...and here shlok dnt hate his mother, means very intresting relation with her.lol...I cant wait to read it...pls update it jaldi...waiting.
.
rajani_sid thumbnail
Explorer Thumbnail
Posted: 11 years ago
#12
Definitely interesting...waiting for the next part...upload it soon..please...
niki795 thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail Networker 2 Thumbnail
Posted: 11 years ago
#13
awesome synopsis and prologue
nice character sketch
loved it
eager to read more...!!!!!@@
thanks for the pm
continue soon
MereMahiyaa. thumbnail
14th Anniversary Thumbnail Trailblazer Thumbnail + 4
Posted: 11 years ago
#14
Awesomeee cant waaait fir the neext paart
NamuVyas thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Sparkler Thumbnail + 4
Posted: 11 years ago
#15

Part 1

Astha wakes up and streches herself and sees the idol of bappa in front of her on the wall.. she smiles and folds her hand " thank you bappa.. u have brought me till here.. and all the hard work has paid off.. today is my first day in AIHMS( short for agnihotri institute for higher management studies).. I promise I will study very hard and do well in life.. just hold ur blessings over me always"

" astha.. astha.. did u wake up?" an old lady from the ashram

" yes aunty.. I am awake.." astha gets up and hugs her from the back.." thank you tai.. u have helped me a lot..if not for you I would have never be able to get admission in this college.."

" no my dear.. u have got it on ur own intelligence and hard work.. I only got u a sponsor so that your hard work can reach its destination.." tai smiled and said.." ok chalo now u get ready fast.. I will get u something to eat.. and wear some good clothes as it's a very big college and lots of rich students.. u must not feel less in front of them and lose confidence"

Astha smiled and got ready.. she wore a white wavy skirt and a pink top and a stoll.. she wore her danglers that she bought in fashion street the day before.. and she tied her hair into a ponytail .. took her colourful and flashy jhola and put in some books into it.. she took the 2 vada pav that her tai packed it into a newspaper..

Finally she lit the diya in front of bappa and prayed.. she wore a simple slipper and left to college..

********************************************

Agnihotri mansion is one of the biggest houses in the city.. a huge hall with most designer furnitures and fixtures.. it houses Niranjan Agnihotri, his wife anjali agnihotri and only son Shlok Agnihotri and a dozen of servants..

Anjali starts the day with the morning pooja... wearing a beautiful silk sari and simple jewellery she does the arti to bappa and gives it to NA..

" Anjali where is Shlok?" NA asks her and smiles

" I will check about him sahib.. as usual is still sleeping I guess" anjali says with a smile ..

NA takes the arti and leaves to work..

Anjali finishes her pooja and comes out of the temple.. she ties her sari pallu to her waist and gets into a angry mode and goes to shloks room realizing he has not yet got up..

Climbing the pipe and balcony shlok is slowly getting into his room.. he sees from the window that his mom is coming into the room.. he runs and takes off his tshirt and gets into the bed and blanket and pretends to sleep..

Anjali enters the room and sees him sleeping " SHLOk.." she screams.. " get up and go to college now..."

shlok pretends to just wake up by stretching and wakes up " good morning aai.. I was studying so much last night and slept so late so I couldn't get up on time.."

" yeah I saw how hard u were studying shlok" anjali says with a stern face.. " get up and come down for breakfast and go to college.. don't forget that ur father is the chairman of the college and with all ur misconduct u will spoil his reputation"..

" I know that mom.. y do u say this to me everyday.. its like a chant now... every morning I have to hear it once before going to college.. I wish I had taken admission else where to study.. atleast I wouldn't had so much stress." Shlok says in irritation and starts to collect his clothes from the cupboard to change and get ready..

" u must be thankful to god that u have everything that u need.. all thanks to ur father.. and what stress do u have?? All ur stress must be due to too much dancing and drinking in the party last night." Anjali says with a sarcastic smile and leaves..

Shlok looks at her like a thief who was just caught..

"I hate this... If not for the pocket money I would have run away from this house.." shlok says and kicks the sofa nearby..

Anjali prepares the dining table with breakfast poha, toasts, juice and coffee for shlok.. Shlok slowly comes near the table and sees whats for breakfast... he sees poha and makes a annoyed face..

" haan mom.. I have to finish one of my projects.. so... I don't really have the time for breakfast.. ok ai.. byeee" he smiles and says and runs away without eating..

" thank god aai dint say anything.. I just hate this poha.. its better to have a chicken burger in college canteen" shlok says to himself

He goes out and decides which vehicle to take..then he takes his bike BMW 1600 and proudly puts his helmet and sunglasses and sets off to college..

*************************************************

Astha is waiting for a bus at a crowded bus stop... finally a bus arrives and all the crowd start getting inside it pushing and pulling each other.. Astha is unable to get inside...

She gets annoyed and looks at her watch and its getting late.. she starts walking down the street to find some other way to travel..

As she is walking in the scorching heat.. she holds a book on her head to cover her head..

Suddenly she sees a middle aged lady trying to cross the road with a huge basket of fruits on her head... astha sees her and feels sorry.. she tries to cross the road to help her but lots of vehicles are coming so she tries hard to cross...

As the lady crosses the road in half, Shloks bike comes in great speed towards her.. astha tries to warn the lady waving her hand... Shlok tries to put his breaks real hard but ends up minorly hitting the lady.. the lady falls down and all her fruits from the basket rolls away every where..

Shlok falls off his bike and his bike has crashed on the road.. luckily both shlok and the lady remain unhurt.. but the bike gets lots of scrathes and a dent

Astha runs to the lady and lots of people get collected there..

Shlok gets up and dusts himself.. he looks at his bike and gets disgusted..

Astha helps the lady to get up and dusts her clothes..

" what the hell.. cant u see and cross the road??. Does ur father own this road??" shlok screams at the woman..

" excuse me.. do u have any idea that in what speed u were driving?? And u couldn't see her carrying so much load on her head.. and by the way ur father doesn't own this road either I am sure" astha fights back

" am not talking to you.. who are u?" shlok questions back astha..

" actually even I don't know who u are.. but atleast u could be nice to this lady after causing an accident.. and all her fruits .. what will she sell today and eat today?" astha says nicely

" nice my foot.. why the hell do I need to be nice? There is not even a scratch on her.. u are talking about these cheap fruits..look at my bike.. do u have any idea how much it costs.. in ur lifetime u will not be able to see that much money" shlok says with loads of ego..

" anyways.. sorry is something u will have to say" astha firms her words..


" even my shoe will not say sorry to her.." shlok says


" oyee... do u wanna go home in one piece??" one man around screams

Then lots of collected people start screming at shlok to apologise..

Shlok gets irritated.. he looks at astha in disgust.. and seeing around he senses that he has no way out of here if he dint apologise


" SORRY !!" he says in irritation..


Astha smiles at shlok teasing him..

" Its ok boy.." the lady says and takes her basket " ok everyone just let him go and stop making a scene here"


" ok lets go" one man says.. and all disperse from there..


Astha helps the lady to go to a corner... Shlok picks up his bike and sees around to see that it is fine and looks at astha and controls his anger and rides his bike and rides away..

Astha sees him riding off and makes a irritated face..

*******************************************************


Astha reaches the college with lots of difficulty..


She reaches the college and sees the big board of the college name " AGNIHOTRI INSTITUTE OF HIGHER MANAGEMENT STUDIES"


Astha smiles.. then she bends down and takes blessing from the enterance and gets in..

She looks around and sees the college building.. its so big .. so many students walking around

Suddenly she hears a deafening horn of a car behind her.. she turns around scared

" hey you.. get out of my way" a girl shouts from the car..


Astha is tensed and she moves away... and the car speeds across her face..

Astha looks at the car and wonders.. she looks around that there are so many expensive vehicles that the students get..

She sees the girls dressed in the best designer dresses and shoes and bags... really big heels and loads of make up and attitude

Astha walks around looking for the office.. she is tensed to talk to anyone cos she doesn't know anyone..


She sees one girl sitting in a corner and reading with specs on her nose...

Astha thinks of approaching her and slowly goes close to her to talk..

" excuse me.." astha smiles and asks

That girl lifts her head off the book and asks her " what??"


" I am astha.. sorry but can u tell me where is the office.. actually am a new admission" astha streches her hand for a hand shake


" 3rd floor, room no 5" she says and digs back into her book not caring for astha's handshake


Astha thinks of not bothering her and walks away to the office


She goes up the floor looking for the room.. she finds the office and goes inside and gets her ID card..

As she walks out she is busy seeing her ID card and reading it..

She keeps reading her ID card and walking without seeing ahead.. suddenly she bumps into someones back..

" oh sorry sorry.." astha says


And the person turns around.. and astha is shocked to see its SHLOK...


Astha is stunned to see him and gets nervous

**************************************************


Precap - shlok takes astha's packed wada pav that she brought and throws it into a dustbin and everyone around laughs..

rbb1 thumbnail
19th Anniversary Thumbnail Elite Thumbnail + 4
Posted: 11 years ago
#16
Great update thank you, I feel sorry for Astha poor girl she needs to get a friend soon. Shlok will give her a hard time
khuwahish thumbnail
17th Anniversary Thumbnail Explorer Thumbnail Networker 1 Thumbnail
Posted: 11 years ago
#17
That was just Amazing...
Can't wait to read more...
jeenia123 thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail + 3
Posted: 11 years ago
#18
Wow... great update.so its going to be hate love story?????? just loved it, please update soon...
AnjuRish thumbnail
12th Anniversary Thumbnail Visit Streak 180 Thumbnail + 6
Posted: 11 years ago
#19
awww such a dhamaka meeting
NamuVyas thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Sparkler Thumbnail + 4
Posted: 11 years ago
#20

Originally posted by: rbb1

Great update thank you, I feel sorry for Astha poor girl she needs to get a friend soon. Shlok will give her a hard time


dont worry astha will also give hard time to shlok.. he he😉

Related Topics

Fan Fictions thumbnail

Posted by: LizzieBennet · 6 months ago

Hello, hello writers, graphicers, readers and all IF ites! We are finally ready to announce the results of the much-awaited Pyar ka trope fest...

Expand ▼
Fan Fictions thumbnail

Posted by: sakshi5050 · 11 months ago

Ranveer's unsaid feelings #14 updated Episode 1019 page no 29

Welcome to the new thread of Ranveer's unsaid feelings. Keep enjoying the world of Ishveer. Their unconditional Love, their friendship, their...

Expand ▼
Fan Fictions thumbnail

Posted by: sakshi5050 · 3 years ago

Welcome you all to the new thread of RANVEER'S UNSAID FEELINGS #13 Keep Travelling in the world of ISHVEER LOVE Warm Regards sakshi ❤️ Index...

Expand ▼
Fan Fictions thumbnail

Posted by: Rizz-ington · 1 years ago

A N A R H I F F ---- Iss Darr Ko Kya Naam Doon Summary: Khushi is an internet famous 27 year old fashion designer from Lucknow. She has a chirpy...

Expand ▼
Fan Fictions thumbnail

Posted by: abavi · 4 years ago

From the author's desk : Welcome to thread 6! I started to write this story years ago when the show was live and now when I look back on what...

Expand ▼
Top

Stay Connected with IndiaForums!

Be the first to know about the latest news, updates, and exclusive content.

Add to Home Screen!

Install this web app on your iPhone for the best experience. It's easy, just tap and then "Add to Home Screen".