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@rbb1

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Posted: 11 years ago

#21

Originally posted by: namratavyas
dont worry astha will also give hard time to shlok.. he he😉

Yay that's good can't wait to read that 😊

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Vindhya Mounika Patnaik

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Posted: 11 years ago

#22

This is just amazing... Aastha is a confident and helpful girl... Shlok is as usual arrogant.. But his relation towards his mom is good...

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@MereMahiyaa.

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Posted: 11 years ago

#23

Awesomeee updateee pleas continueee sooon

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NamuVyas

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Posted: 11 years ago

#24

Originally posted by: VindhyaMounika
This is just amazing... Aastha is a confident and helpful girl... Shlok is as usual arrogant.. But his relation towards his mom is good...

thanks vindhya.. this ff is very close to my heart.. some parts of it is related to me personally.. hope the rest turns out to be good.. am excited to write actually..

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NamuVyas

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Posted: 11 years ago

#25

Originally posted by: .Siham.
Awesomeee updateee pleas continueee sooon

yeah will continue soon.. was down with fever from many days.. feeling better today so sat down to write.. 😊

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latha_555

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Posted: 11 years ago

#26

oh love it... cant wait till the next update...so shlock rich, party boy, and aastha hard working, smart...like the characters and the environment with other rich kids...poor astha, so shlock takes his revenge...hope he feels guilty

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mariyam rifna

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Posted: 11 years ago

#27

oh wow...fantabulous starting. ..loved it...I lovd anjali here and how she s aware of shlok's late night parties. .and hiss expression .lol...loved how u presented aastha here, very nice . and I studied n a strict girls nly college, so I missd all d fun there...but m sure I could experience funfilled college life reading dis ff...
and nw m so excited to read d next part..pls update it soon, cant wait for it...

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NamuVyas

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Posted: 11 years ago

#28

Originally posted by: Asharkibiwi
oh wow...fantabulous starting. ..loved it...I lovd anjali here and how she s aware of shlok's late night parties. .and hiss expression .lol...loved how u presented aastha here, very nice . and I studied n a strict girls nly college, so I missd all d fun there...but m sure I could experience funfilled college life reading dis ff...
and nw m so excited to read d next part..pls update it soon, cant wait for it...

oh really.. anyways u will enjoy as u will get to see 2 different shades of both astha and shlok over the time leap.. it will be quite connecting and nice..

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neha2005

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Posted: 11 years ago

#29

nice first chapter. thanks for the pm

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lmathew77

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Posted: 11 years ago

#30

Wonderful update. Can't wait to read more. I'm already thinking about how they'll fall in love even though shlok is a spoilt brat. Please update soon.