An ArHi SS: Seduction *Thread One* (COMPLETED)

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arnshi

@arnshi

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Posted: 12 years ago

#741

The submission was beautiful...loved the cuisine journey...mouth watering😆
The answer to why she ran away is obviously in her past...hmm let see what happens.
Amazing update

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PixieFlame

@PixieFlame

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#742

Wow!

Love the air of mystery you have around this story! :D

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luvbug

@luvbug

Dazzler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#743

wow wat a wonderful chapter... and the kiss... wonder what those statues were doing in the garden :-s

and oh her room unoccupied?? and she is no where to be seen?? is she a ghost??

oh n loved reading abt all the luckhnowi cusine...:D

this khuhsi is a mystery..

lovely chapter!

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pixiegirl

@pixiegirl

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Posted: 12 years ago

#744

Wow! that was something...

They finally acknowledged that they are attracted to each other despite everything going on in their lives... Nice to see them both accepting what they feel for the other... So Arnav was miffed when Khushi turned him down, then was pleased when Khushi made it up to him... But why is Khushi so scared?? What is bothering her, why is she trying so hard to not give in to this madness... Though she took him on a tour of Lukhnowi delights ignoring what her mind was telling... It is almost as if she wanted to please him yet was afraid of leading him on?? How will she keep the two separate?? She can't & the kiss proved it... I was really pleased to see that she stopped him from apologizing about the kiss, she wanted it just as much as he did & was an equal partner so I am really glad she didn't put the blame on him solely for the kiss & confessed to him that it was certainly the most beautiful thing she had enjoyed... Yet she ran away, almost as if she had transgressed into forbidden territory... And later ran away to stop things from progressing further...

She herself has acknowledged she has never been in a situation like this, she has never been chased or sought after, never the known the pleasure of being pursued by a man romantically yet all this is forbidden to her in some way... So who is she?? Is she a child widow, so where are in-laws or have they abandoned her?? Or is she the daughter of a criminal or some questionable person which is why she doesn't consider herself to be worthy of anybody let alone Arnav??

I too want to know, "Why was she inside while everyone else was out at the fireworks display?"

And why are Aman & Anjali so worried about Arnav?? Isn't it good that he is coming out of his self-imposed exile & dark shell?? Does Arnav suffer from any mental illness?? Is that why they are so worried?? I hope not... Or was he is accidentally responsible for his brother's death?? Does he feel guilty about his brother's death, is that why he has been hiding himself??

Ah! mystery shrouds this entire story Juhi, just like you said it would... Have so many questions... Waiting for you to reveal more... Loving this intrigue, & can't help guessing what is going on with both Arnav & Khushi... Looking forward to the next chapter already...

P.S. Loved all the description of all the yummy Awadhi food & now I want some... :(

Edited by pixiegirl - 12 years ago

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nnhk

@nnhk

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Posted: 12 years ago

#745

Juhi, why do I have a feeling that they new each other in the past or at least Khushi knows him, Well I could be wrong.

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kclovearshi

@kclovearshi

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#746

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Khushi's idea of culinary dates is fabulous 😉 I know you are going to reveal this later but I cant wait to ask why Khushi is holding back? what makes her not reciprocate the feelings?

Hmm he wants her to call him ny name. All the delicacies you mentioned are mouth watering (provided they are all vegetarian 😉). Now I'm tempted to visit Lucknow 😉

The Enclosed Gardens - I couldn't even guess what could be in there when Khushi was urging Arnav to leave from there!! Hmm, Arnav's dad must be a naughty one 😉 The surroundings as soon as Arnav realized turned into a seductive one and fueled their unbridled passion, attraction for each other 😳 Oh, the Kiss was wild, hot, passionate and awesome 😳

But then she ran away? who does that? why there is always so much mystery in your stories 😲

Love, Love, Loved the Kiss!!

Cheers

Edited by kclovearshi - 12 years ago

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sanjubanju

@sanjubanju

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Posted: 12 years ago

#747

What a beautiful update and story.

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beenish

@beenish248

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#748

fabulous di ..

i am dieing to know their past..

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Sonaparam29

@Sonaparam29

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#749

Juhi juhi juhi..wat shud i say abt u..i dnt hav wrds to describe ur writin ..ur my inspiration fr writin n readin..dis chp was mindblowin..d kiss was pure love of b oth..bt y khushi left m unable to understand..
Bt aneways its amazinnn!!
M in love wid dis arnav!!
😳 😊

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DMGFan-2b-not2b

@DMGFan-2b-not2b

Dazzler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#750

An awesome update.. loved the build-up to the kiss.. and to me the kiss was beautiful, like Khushi said - not because of the passion but because finally two damaged souls found their relief and release in being with one another...

Anjali and Aman's concern adds even more mystery to the whole story..