MG SS : A CURSE OR HIS LOVE part 5,6pg 11,13 nov 4,5 COMPLETE - Page 6

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Awesme
loved it
pls update next part little earlier...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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I started to read this story today😳 I am blown away!!!! Saccchi!!! specially today's update😭
I am not sure what to say...actually i can't say cause i am crying...when from two lovers one hold back & the other tries to become closer...they pain both feels...brilliant yaar!!!!👏
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Nice part
Geet followed him
Maan is scared to loose geet like chahat
Egaerly waiting for the next part
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Posted: 11 years ago
#54
intense emotional update! Well written! update soon! pls update will u marry me (OS) Thanks
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Awesome update👏⭐️Its an emotional one...beautifully written😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
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MG SS: A CURSE OR HIS LOVE

PART 6





"2nd November 1870"

She died in his arms.. he was not at fault still he gave up his life... he was an angel who gave up his life for that love which was cursed for him... she was chahat...chahat means another form of love..everything mean love and the pious feeling related with it... he was ignorant of that feeling he needed a guardian angel who could save him ..but before that he kissed her poisonous lips and gave up his life for her love... I saw them leaving together she claimed that she loved him ..chahat loved maan , but maan what was with him.. everytime I think about him my senses betray me thinking that why did it happen to the noble soul ...

Maan ne toh use kabhi nahi chaha phir bhi uske pyar me khud ko qurbaan kar gaya ..."

She cried and looked at the next page.. the yellow pages still glowed like it was written the same time..she frantically looked at looked at the next writing...

" though he was dead at that instant but I cant see him dying which was not his death..he was an angel that died for such a selfish soul..i made him drink that potion.(magical drink)..there was no life within him ..he was dead his eyes were closed but I still cant let him die..i don't know why I had to keep him alive... though I had nothing to do with them but I cant see a true soul dying I had to let him fight for his love .. yes he was meant to find and love the angel that will keep him alive all the way and love him... two drops touch his lips that brought the lost soul but this was just the start for him... I gave him all the power he was a dead living with long lost senses..he cursed himself he was in remorse that she died for him ..some where he held himself responsible for that death ... I tried to say him the truth but he didn't listen to me... I gave him the power to rule the world.. he wont be deprived off anything but the pain and agony he will be suffering every month on the day he died..on the day she died I cant relieve him..."

Geet's eyes went wide as she knew that what he had gone through .. she looked at the next paper if his life was described here then the way to get rid of this ache will also be there..she looked at all the place..nothing was there just wild grass... she found herself wild..she wanted his cure..she cant see him..

Geet read the next paper ...

2nd December 1870 ( a month after maan died)

" it was past twelve at night he was here at there grave..though grave was empty since I had made him alive but to live a normal life he needs a SACRIFICE... his tears were dried off I saw blood oozing from his eyes.. it was his vegenance that he was paying or was it her LOVE that was a curse for him..."

CURSE .. this was a curse ...ye pyar kaise ho sakta hai.. why did you maan..itna dard..why this much of pain and suffering ... that blood were his tears..he doesn't have heart... his heart will beat when he will be free from this curse...

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Days went she went there daily in search of more ..she wanted to know him..but he was not there as per she had known that he comes at that abandoned mansion every month she was also there ... she had followed him every minute every second..he knew she was there just like a shadow but he can let her come near him..

This was his punishment day he will be again punished..as he walk towards the grave he looked at the flowers but there was none..she had already destroyed their presence.. she was looking at him through some distance there was a small lake that was covered with the flowers everyone but there was an ugly thrown residing between that beautiful lake..that was surrounding it..she went there as she saw something shining with the dust ... she didn't knew but her hands went there and she read that phrase .. her lips curved into a smile.. there was no pain no agony ..she cried and laughed knowing that she got her treasure today ...

Maan looked at the places but there was none ... he looked at the wild flowers that were there ..but those were not the ones which can soothe them .. when he heard some voice...

You wont be able to find any flower that curse I will kill today... How dare she love you ..her love was poison ... she killed you..

Geet hold his coller he looked away but she forced him to look at him... his eyes were closed he just jerked her away in a moment and she cried in his pain...

You can't get away , I wont let you have all that alone... she cried and hold his hand.. he jerked her away in a fit and yelled ...

Get away from me... Get away ...

She didn't get away ... his eyes were spitting fire it was his helpless that was making her smile...

Why did you want me to go away..she asked slamming her lips on him ..she was aggressive and maan was helpless this was his love that was dominating she was kissing him aggressively his lips were assaulted with hers..she didn't looked at anything she left him and in that instant she stabbed her heart right there falling in his arms...

It was a shock that made him freeze her lifeless body made him frightened ..he hold her tight ...and kept his hand on her heart above her breast..but she smiled...

It wont stop , how can I let you die in remorse maan.. your life resides in my death...

True love will free you..today I sacrificed my life for you ... there is no meaning for me without you..he was shocked listening to her words..he knew that her death specially a painful one that only means by stabbing her heart that will kill her love and he knew that he cant see her dying he was ready to burn himself for his entire life his entire being was cursed and she freed him.. today his touch was not even doing anything..till today if he touch any wound then it will be cured but he forget that for his LOVE , HIS BELOVED his touch was just ordinary ...

Why did you..he asked her..he hold her in his arms tight and picked her in his arms s..he cant let her die...

She didn't love you...chahat's love was an obsession...love only means to give away but she took your entire being..i hate her existence in our life maan..i plucked those flowers that gave you pain...my existence meant with you and today I found my khwab.. aap mera khwab ho...

She fainted holding his hands...

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It was two hours since he brought her to the hospital ..he had rubbed off her blood from his hands with the mud..he didn't want her to die..

If I would have known that you will know the truth I would have killed my existence...

Maan went to the same dargah and for the first time he prayed a life.. he wanted life for her...he will be burned in that fire that chahat lit he was ready but if something happen to him he will die that instant...

Life doesn't mean to him... if she was not there ...

Geet's words made him cry infront of the lord and he just bruised his arms ..he wanted to give away himself..he wanted her just her life ...

Uski zindagi baksh dijiye...

The words escaped his mouth and he just went to the hospital but heard something that he didn't understand...

" he knew that you were tested enough and she proved that love never wants anything except giving... "

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It was an hour maan was sitting infront of her holding her hand since he returned from the dargah ... he was still she opened her eyes and just kept staring at him there was nothing that could stop her to see him she cried as she wiped his tears .. her eyes went to his hands..blood was covering his hands..his wounds were deep .. a cry erupted from her throat she cried as he hold her close...

You brought me back ...

Ye aansu... she exclaimed he just hold her hand and kept it near his heart ...

DHAK...

DHAK..

DHAK...

It is beating you brought me back... meri zindagi wapis de di ... my heart Is beating .. you are the reason ...

She didn't need anything she just kept looking in his dark brown eyes and said the words that made him fall for her ...

I can die thousands deaths for you , but you brought me back... It was your love... my angel brought me back...

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Love never wants it just knows to give...

Chahat didn't love maan she just wanted to prove her love and maan proved that you should love the person and give away yourself who loved you .. that made him to take his life...

Geet didn't knew anything except saving him..she gave away her life to bring him back...

Her love brought back an immortal lifeless person to life ...

The person who wrote the excerpt was the one who witnessed maan's sacrifice and he made him immortal knowing that he will find his true love someday ... and geet found that excerpt .. she found that his sacrifice can be only paid off if someone who loves him more than himself will give away her life like he did ...

Maan's heart beat will start from the moment his beloved will sacrifice herself..he will be a human again but that will mean to loose her ... but destiny again played...

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This brings the end of curse or love

Me loved writing it soo much

Thank you for the readers who took pain to read this.. thank you so much ...

I am planning to bring its season two but there will be no immortal maan..but a different concept altogether ...







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Posted: 11 years ago
#57
it was just awesome
geet is right chahat never loved him truly . she was selfish to make him guilty for not loving her but geet's true love brought him back and his love saved geet
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Posted: 11 years ago
#58
wow that was amazing...

ur way of defining love was fantastic...

luv all ur works...

keep going..

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Posted: 11 years ago
#59
so she wasnt chahat
and chahat love wasnt really pure love
well good to know he didnt loose his love
the one that would free him
hmmm that sure was interesting
so all she had to do was sacrifice herself for him
just like he did for chahat
which is why they both got their love
she was saved and she saved him
that was so beautiful
so she made sure to get rid of his curse that he took upon himself
well if she didnt who would right
cheers for pm
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Awesome Update...Thank u for PM..

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