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Posted: 11 years ago
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waiting...update soon 😊
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Wow...amazing start..
Mysterious girl nd lattoo Maan
Would love to read more of it..
Plz continue soon with it
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Next update on NOV 4th... thank you all for you lovely comments.. love you all...
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Originally posted by: mayarhea

<font color="#0000FF" face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="4">Next update on NOV 4th... thank you all for you lovely comments.. love you all...
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OK WILL WAIT .

HAPPY DIWALI.
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k...will wait! Happy Diwali

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very intriguing beautiful story...

waiting for next part...
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A Girl who was born on 15th October


Part 2

October 15, 2013

Maan was standing there, looking at her, her smile so bright, her moves so graceful, "who the hell is she, why doesn't she want to relieve her true identity to me, and these guys seems to adore her and don't know whether she had said her true identity, to atleast one of them" Maan thought confused,

"She doesn't seem to be bad, yet a girl with multiple names, it's like cheating," Maan got confused, "Mr. Khurana, What a surprise?" A voice pulled him from his thought, "Mr.Kumar," Maan recognized him immediately, a guy who runs a travel agency and the official travel resource of Khurana concern, "Mr.Khurana, I am sorry, I thought your party is upstairs, I came here to attend a birthday party, sorry,"

"Mr.Kumar, it is the birthday party, and I am the guest of," What name will I say, Maan thought irritated, "Ms.Sona", he completed, "Sona, not another name," Maan thought as he shook his head in frustration and he turned to where Geet was standing, "You mean that Girl," Maan pointed towards her, "Yes she is, well Mr.Khurana, please excuse me, I am on work, need to deliver her tickets, now" He said,

Maan looked at him, "Tickets?," Maan asked with his raised eye brow look, "Mr.Kumar, won't you verify the persons personal details who are making your trip, like her passport and identity proofs," Maan asked puzzled, "Of course Mr.Khurana, why?" Mr.Kumar asked puzzled, "Just asking, so Ms.Sona, is that her full name," Maan asked still confused, "No sir, Ms.Sona Sharma," he said and then Maan drown back into his thought,

Maan then thought of the guy who was speaking with her a few minutes ago regarding some work, he must be her boss, Maan thought, he must have know some information about her and so searched for him and also found him, and he slowly walked towards him, that guy become all alter as Maan went near him and that guy suddenly turned nervous,

"Excuse, Mr.," Maan paused, "Mr. Deepak," He said with a humble gesture, "What do you do Mr. Deepak," Maan asked as if starting his enquiry, "Sir, I ran a Small Event Management company," He said shivering as he can't believe that he is talking to the great Khurana himself, he was so excited,

"So, She works in your company," Maan pointed to the birthday girl standing there, "yes Sir," He replied, "What name did you say hers is," Maan asked and Mr. Deepak looked at him puzzled, "He doesn't know her name, yet he came for her birthday party," Mr. Deepak was confused, "Ms. Reena, sir, Ms. Reena Tagore"

"Ms. Reena Tagore, so when you employ a staff do you do back ground checks," Maan asked again, "Yes sir, of course, each and every details," Mr. Deepak said, and Maan nodded and went away leaving Mr. Deepak into confusion, he never knew why Maan came and asked him these details and why he is go now without a word,

Maan went and stood there alone, "No, No, she is not right, she must have given them forged documents to proof her identity, a girl who has too many fake names and has forged documents, can never be good one, I must have done an great mistake by misunderstanding her as a pure and innocent one, I just got to get out of here," Maan thought and walked away,


The birthday girl saw him moving way, got shocked and rushed towards him and stopped him, "Mr.Khurana, are you leaving," she asked with her innocent shocked face, "Yes, I can't stay here anymore, I can't attend a party of an faker," Maan said looking at her big brown eyes shining at him, "faker?" The girl asked puzzled,

"Yes, I think that's what we call someone who has too many identities along with forged documents to prove it, or should I call you a criminal for going against the law," Maan said his anger rising up, and he looked at her with his anger filled eyes and she smiled big, surprising Maan, "Your smiling? Are you going to say that it's not true," Maan asked between his teeth controlling his anger,

"No, I had many names and have documents to prove my identity in all those names, and I have more than 5 passports with five different names, and all documents too and of course they are forged," she said with the same smile, "Why?" Maan asked frustrated, "Do you want to know, really?" she asked and Maan nodded, "Ok, I promise, I will say it, if you dance with me," she said with a naughty grin,

Is she playing me into something, Maan thought, "No, I don't dance," Maan said looking away, "But I knew you know all the dance forms," she said still looking at his angry face, "Just because I knew to dance, doesn't mean that I had to dance," Maan said still filled with his anger, " I don't dance in the parities, with strangers understand" Maan finished, "not a bad time to start Mr.Khurana," she said, and Maan turned away.

"Unless you are afraid and nervous to dance before others," she continued with a grin and Maan looked at her, "Maan Singh Khurana, don't get nervous or he is afraid of anything," Maan said between his teeth, "But seems like you are, it's normal for person to get nervous like this," she said with a mischievous grin and walked away,

"She, she said I am nervous and scared, how dare she is, now I will prove her who is nervous," Maan thought and removed his coat and gave it to a waiter there and went and held her hands and pulled her close to him, and she looked at him puzzled, "let's dance," Maan whispered into her ears, his hot breath touching her ears, and she pulled away and looked at him,


Maan then made her to dance by pulling her close into him by his perfect steps, shocking her, she was so aroused by his closeness and so as Maan, after a few steps he stopped a let her free and looked at her, she was blushing high and her face turned red and she was breathing high, which mesmerized him, then suddenly the lights went out and a song started to play,

As the music started and she walked away blushing and unable to control her desire for him and scared of herself falling into Maan but Maan stopped her and pulled her close and looked at her, face filled with desire for him, her eyes shining as two little golden stars, he then held her and started to dance with her,


Kurbaan hua

Teri tishnagi mein yun

Kurbaan hua

Teri aashiqui mein yun


Bekhudi mein

Bekali mein

Bekafi mein hua

Tujhko har dua di

Aur daga bhi

Aur fanaa hua


Kurbaan hua

Kurbaan hua ha haaa


Ada pe

Wafa pe

Jafa Pe

Kurbaan hua

Kurbaan hua aaa aa aa


Rubaru Tu Magar

Tanaha hai yeh jahan

Jal uthe Meri kuft se

Saanson ka yeh saamaa


Kya hua

Pal mein jane kho gaya kyun

Tu mila

Aur judaimaa hua yun

Bekhudi mein

Bekali mein

Bekafi mein hua


Kurbaan hua

Kurbaan hua aaa aa aa


Ada pe

Wafa pe

Jafa Pe

Kurbaan hua

Kurbaan hua aaa aa aa


Marne ka sabba mangata raha

Dar badar

Mitne ko to dil pal mein razzi hua aaa aaa

Puri hui har arzoo har dastaaan meri

ki Tum suru hue jahan mein khatam hua


Kurbaan hua

Kurbaan hua aaa aa aa

Ada pe

Wafa pe

JAfa Pe

Kurbaan hua

Kurbaan hua aaa aa aa


The Music stopped and Maan was hold her by her waist and starring into her big eyes, she slowly touched Maan's hands holding her waist and the softness of her hands gave a electric vib as she touched his hand and it pulled him from his fantasy and he stepped back immediately removing his hands from her waist, and turned away, "What the hell did I do," Maan thought,


Maan then tried to walk away, "Mr. Khurana, please," the girl stopped him and he looked at her puzzled, "Thank you," she said, "Thanks for that Passionate dance, I had never felt like this before, you know, you are making me fall for you Mr.Khurana and for the first time, I getting the fear of falling in love," she said looking into his shining eyes, surprising Maan,

Maan didn't know how to react, it was an odd, embarrassing, awkward, moment in his life and he was so stud, and most of all, he liked it, it was so strange for him, "Excuse me," Maan said as he tried to move, "Mr.Khurana, I promised you some answers, won't you wait," she said but before she could finish, suddenly a waiter trembled and fall straight on to them, pouring the drinks on them,

He had two kinds of drinks, his strawberry juice fell on to that girls white saree, making it look pink in the front and his alcoholic drink fell on Maan just making his shirt wet, "Sorry Mam, sorry sir," the waiter begged, "it's ok, you go," she said and he too went away, "I am sorry Mr.Khurana," she apologies,


"I am ok, looks like you are the one who has to change," Maan commented and she too nodded, "oh my god, how will I go to my room, now," she said and Maan got his coat and gave her, "Thank you" she said with a big smile, "you too had to change Mr.Khurana", she said looking at his wet shirt, and Maan too nodded, then they both walked out,

"Mr.Khurana, why do you come and join me for a dinner, so I could answer you all your questions", she said and Maan looked at her face which was filled with excitement, he too wanted to spend his time with her, and he doesn't care whether she is a good girl or not, he can feel that he is into her more than he thought, so he said an yes,

"Wow, thank you Mr.Khurana" she jumped up and slipped and lost her balance and Maan caught her by her waist, and held her, she just stared into his big black eyes, he too looked at her shining golden eyes, she felt a heat rising in her body as his hands touched her bare skin, she liked the warmth and she loved looking into his shining black eyes,


Maan to loved the softness under his hands, he loved it, her blush filled face was divine to look at "you fall a lot," Maan commented slowly without pulling her up, "just for you, I guess," she replied in a sweet honey voice, making Maan to fall in to her dazzling eyes more, after a few minutes Maan realized he was still holding her down and so he pulled her up,

The Girl feared that she is losing on Maan, " I will change and Meet you at the gallery near the diner," Maan said, and she too nodded, "Mr.Khurana, you will come right?" she asked with a doubt, "Hmm," Maan reacted and that gave the girl a big smile, "see you in few minutes" she said and Maan turned a walked away,

"What am I doing, I attend a party of a strange girl who has so many identities, and I danced with her, which I had never done before, and I loved it, I love her closeness, I love her naughtiness, I love her guts, I think, I love her, but who is she, who ever she is she has to say the truth to me and she had to be with me," Maan decided, "I like her and I want her to be my lover and wife and I will make her to be, even if she don't want to,"

(Thank guys, for you patience and love... hope you like it,,,, love you all,,,)

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Yayee me first...

Will comment after reading. .
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this is very mysterious!!! And also amazing to read!!!
Chapter 1: you had me scared when the girl is first identified as Pari. I am thinking WHAT!!!! Deep breathes. Then another name and then another. Finally I was as confused as Maan.😆

Chapter 2: the mystery continues. But so does their connection!!

Looking forward to their dinner and hopefully some answers!!!

Very good story!!!
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Still wondering what's the name of the girls?? very suspenseful update! Beautifully written! Continue soon... will be waiting

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