SS: Part 1 My Avenging Angel (Khushi kicking ass)

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Water

@Water.

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#221

Wow

Part one was brutal, painful, heartbreaking.

But those loser (both family) deserved it.

Sowwy calling them losers...but were and are...lost a gem of a person.

Now on to page 2

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Amanda D'Souza

@amandadsouza95

Stunner

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#222

@Marybarton: Awesum n fantastic SS!!!!😊

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vks11

@vks11

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#223

I love this side of Kushi.

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Sugi

@Arshi.Sugi.IPK

Inactive

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#224

Read it before & then missed it...Bookmark 😊

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Shruti_0505

@Shruti_0505

Inactive

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#225

loved this

i so wanted to see khushi kicking some solid a**

and everyone repenting

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tashi26

@tashi26

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#226

Well written part...it's great how khushi stood for herself...she was breaking from inside and everyone present their hurt her a lot...loved it

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vittoriA Giardano

@kbtr

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#227

I love this FF. Re-reading it!

👏

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Namrutha

@namrutha

Navigator

Posted: 11 years ago

#228

A writer par excellence!!⭐️ You have given the story the finishing touches I always wanted to see on air. I'm sure I will read it again,thank you for this amazing work👏👏. Loved it to the core, especially these

1)Excellent portrayal of Khushi's new avatar. Always wanted to see her financially dominating Arnav for insulting her about her class .The writer in you, gave her character the well deserved justice . When she started giving back, he couldn't take it, felt pity for him but he deserved it.

2)The Anjali you portrayed has more depth and was strong enough for both Arnav and herself. Also you gave her the reason to be strong ( the baby),cv's should have taken that move. You have wonderfully finished the cv's untold story with the new entry ,a truly genuine and deserving guy who can treat her right.

3)You have brilliantly unraveled the interconnected past of the protagonists, and Arnav's father's involvement in it adds another feather in your cap.

I know one should never question 'how' in a story, but still felt a little confused on how Khushi collected the evidence of her fight with Shyam on the terrace, guessing Shyam(the creepiest guy ever😆) bugged the terrace as well long before Khushi found his true intentions .

Enjoyed your work thoroughly, thank you.

It is a job well done.

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