A TAAREY FF TILL MY LAST BREATH CHAP 27+NOTE PAGE 84 UPDATED

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sonali

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Posted: 11 years ago

#121

awesome updt
taani fighting awesome
updt soon

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Natasha

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Posted: 11 years ago

#122

Those idiot I tell u, they contact that jerk
Taani fighting with those goons was awesome
Now I want her to slap Swayam and the rest maybe then they will get some sense lol
Superb update

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tuli_jayee

@tuli_jayee

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Posted: 11 years ago

#123

Dr, I read ur full story today only. It's just awesome. If this story includes all the unknown characters, then also it appears so interesting as the story itself is very interesting. Plz update soon & do PM me.

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Anjana

@koochiepoo

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Posted: 11 years ago

#124

Originally posted by: navk
res/unres
yipee am the first
this was an amazing 🥳
update
again full of
action
omg taani was
so brave
she acts so strongly😲
against the goons
taani;s fight was
superb brilliant
can't even explain👏
i think there is a big
mystery behind it😉
i think boys are
dumb y they don't obey taani😡
overall this was superb update😊

A BIGG THANKUUU for your support...

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Anjana

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Posted: 11 years ago

#125

Originally posted by: d3fannm1
yeyeyyee
I am sooo in love with this ff
Thank you for the PM
Please please please please update soon
Kant wait
Do PM me when you update please please

I am really happy that you liked it...will update it soon...held up with some problems in college ...

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Anjana

@koochiepoo

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Posted: 11 years ago

#126

Originally posted by: .CuteKittyCat.
god...its becoming interesting and more interesting...what a great update...gang taani ko trust nahi karti but uske orders bhi follow karti hai...i cant wait to read further chapters...

😊

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Anjana

@koochiepoo

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Posted: 11 years ago

#127

Originally posted by: Natasha.
Those idiot I tell u, they contact that jerk
Taani fighting with those goons was awesome
Now I want her to slap Swayam and the rest maybe then they will get some sense lol
Superb update

you are right...but from swayam's pov Taani is an unknown person whose oders they are forced to follow..so it is natural that they will fight back...

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Anjana

@koochiepoo

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Posted: 11 years ago

#128

Originally posted by: tuli_jayee
Dr, I read ur full story today only. It's just awesome. If this story includes all the unknown characters, then also it appears so interesting as the story itself is very interesting. Plz update soon & do PM me.

thank you...there will be more unknown characters to make it more mysterious...

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tamanna-azaan

@tamanna-azaan

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Posted: 11 years ago

#129

Originally posted by: anjanankuttu

promise...

yaar update soon..

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Anjana

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Posted: 11 years ago

#130

CHAPTER 11:

They rushed to the hospital...Receptionist directed them to Rinni's room...When they entered the room they saw Rinni lying in the bed with her right upper arm dressed,Amar was looking at her

holding her left palm...Simmi and Sharon were sobbing while all others were consoling them...When Sharon saw Swayam she ran to him and hugged him tightly...

Swayam: its alright sharon...mein hoon na...

Soon Taani barges into the room with two hospital attenders with stetchers...

Taani: inhe lekar jaana hain...

This alerted the gang...Amar stopped the attenders from touching her...

Amar: KAHAN LE JA RAHE HO RINNI KO...

Taani: chillayiye mat...yeh hospital...

Rey: Varna kya karogi tum...hum ko bhi maar doge...

Taani ignoring this:(to attenders) aap log kiska intezaar kar rahe hain...apna kaam kijiye...

Nil: what are you doing...

Taani: can't you see...your hospital stay is over...take her...

Vicky:(blocking her) we won't allow you...

Taani: i don't need your permission...

Amar: for this you need...

Taani: don't test my patience,Amar...

Bharath: hum tumhare saath nahi aa rahe...

Taani: mein aapko lekar jaoongi...with or without your permission...so like nice kids come with me varna...

Swayam: varna kya...

Swayam was confident that Taani won't do anything dangerous,as this is a public place...but Taani was not going to give up,she too flower vase and smashed it on the opposite wall and then started

destrying the room...tearing the curtains,breaking chairs...making hell lot of noise...hearing the commotion doctor and securities come...

Doctor: WHAT THE HELL IS GOING ON...KYA KAR RAHE HO AAP LOG YAHAN...

Swayam: sir,yeh hame forcefully yahan se le kar jaane hi koshish kar rahi hain...

Doctor: SO? WHAT DO YOU EXPECT ME TO DO...SECURITY IN LOGGON KO BAHAR NIKALO...

Amar: sir..lekin Rinni...

Doctor: usse kuch hua hi nahi...the bullet just brushed past her arm...nothing much...mein aap loggon ke ssamne haath jodtha hoon...please yahan se chale jaoo...agar police ko iske baare mein patha

chala tho...hamare clinic ki badnami hogi...please mein aap loggon ka per padne keliye bhi tayaar hoon...jo bhi nuksaani aapne kiya hain,uske liye paise barne ki koi zaroorath nahi hain...hum police

mein bhi complaint nahi karenge...please...

Taani won...they knew it...now she is one who is going to decide everything...'not for long'thought Swayam..

Rinni was shifted to the same frieght truck named GITAANJALI...

Noone spoke much thriughout the journey...Taani was calling someone...

Soon they truck came to a halt,Taani opened the door...soon two men came and took Rinni out...Gang followed Rinni and found Annu standing next to Taani with her arms wide open...

Annu: after long time...(started jumping up and down)wooohooo...i'm back...yehhh

Taani was smiling at her antics..

Taani: shhh...dere sab log so rahe hain...

then she turned to the men...

Taani: aap log Rinniko hamare outhouse lekar jaayiye...hum abhi aathe hain...Annu unke saath jaa..unhe kamara dikha...

Annu: aye,aye...(giving gang least interested expression)follow me...

Soon they reached the outhouse...it seemed that noone really used it...They placed Rinni on the bed..

Annu: Ramesh bhaiyaaa,kaise ho...

Ramesh: ek dam mast...

Annu: aur bhabhi..

Ramesh: usse hospital mein admit kar diya...Anni kabhie bachoon jaise zid pakad thi hai...usne kaha ki Ramya ko hospital mein bohot accha care milegi...

Annu: aur nahi tho kya...Annine thik hi kiya...

Ramesh: Anni ki chamchi...

Then both started walking out...Gang was surprised with Annu's behaviour...she just left like that in an unknown place..

Annu: blanket cupboard mein hain..ok then..kal milenge..good night...Anni abhi aayegi..

with this Annu left them...

Vicky:(sitting on the bed) i just hope that this is just some stupid dream...

Rey: guys...we need to accept this,because it is the reality...we are trapped and we need to get out of this..as soon as possible...

Vishaka: guys...shhh

They heard a footstep approaching their room...it was Taani

Taani: Annu kahan gayi...

gang didnot reply..

Taani: ohh...Ramesh bhai ke saath hogi...ghar mein sab soogaye honge,is waqt unhe jagana thik nahi hoga...so we have to sleep here..

Aashi: what do you mean...you are sleeping with us...

Taani: no..besides i don't think you will like it..

Simmi: no...we will hate it...

Sharon came forwrd: you will have to pay for everything you have done Taani...and i will make sure of that...

Taani: (with a smile) i think you all need to sleep...good night...agar kuch jaaroorath ho tho mein bahar hi hongi...

Before she could complete it Sharon slammed the door on Taani's face...She stared at the door for few moment and walked away and sat on the bench kept at the other end of the room. After few minutes

someone came and sat besides her..she looked up...it was Rey..

Rey: tum yeh kyun kar rahi ho mujhe pata nahi...mein janna bhi nahi chahata...just wanted to tell you...everything is over...you and me...

Taani looked at him..tears were threatening to overpower her control..before that could happen she stood up

Taani: its is a closed chapter for me Rey...

Rey looked at her..her back was facing him now...he didnot expect this...his Taani will not do this...this is someone else,a complete stranger...