An ArHi SS: Seduction *Thread One* (COMPLETED)

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Asmi

@Ekaanek100

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Posted: 12 years ago

#541

the more the no of chapters increase the more intriguing it becomes...y do u leave me all confused...nd nd thirsty for more...

the way arnav described abt akash i felt as if he holds himself responsible for his demise...

the attraction has begun...from both the sides...i love the way u use the words to express their inner turmoil abt the existing attraction between the two in all ur stories...it feels dat m nt reading but actully watching evythng in front of my eyes...

i loved the key wala dialogue...how do u come across such beautiful dialogues...u define articulation.

nd here we come to the frst stage of seduction...seduction by just a simple dance...a classical one to be more appropriate...

waiting for some more seduction to come...

Edited by arsf - 12 years ago

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ranogill

@ranogill

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Posted: 12 years ago

#542

Wonderful...can I tell you that we are seduced without being aware of the seduction...that is the magic of your story...please don't ever stop writing

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CheshireBilli

@CheshireBilli

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Posted: 12 years ago

#543

Res

Aaj toh ho hi jaayein unres

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Call from Di-- check.

So Anjali is alive and well and is not the point of conflict. (not that I had ever expected you to repeat plot elements) And as always, she can sense when an important woman appears. Di ki sixth sense ke liye taaliyan ya?

But Arnav clearly harbours tremendous guilt over something.

Man, all this talk of past pain and having faith makes me jittery. Now if only I knew the genre of this story...

Ha! Now THIS I could see coming. How can Khushi not go to the dargah when Arnav is going? Not a chance. Good for you, Lavanya Kashyap.

Incidentally, I love this scene where Khushi is immersed in embroidery. It tell me how she BREATHES this work. She's not some random adviser or consultant. She knows what she's doing and can do the actual task too, if necessary. She fits in beautifully at Sheesh Mahal. Like you can imagine her as one of its erstwhile mistresses-- proficient in all the arts that are needed to run the house.

YAY for rewriting the Dargah scene. I do like it when ASR isn't being a complete asshole and also absolutely unreasonable, into the bargain.

This is how it was always meant to be between them. The potent attraction, the recognition of a kindred soul who shares their pain, easy conversation...

Oh what's this? Arnav has lost a brother. I was right about the mourning part. But why is he so GUILTY? Not to mention, Khushi's demons. Gah! I'll just have to wait.

Guilty pleasure et al. Tch tch, Arnavji, you are a goner. What a beautiful picture you paint, J! Of Khushi dancing in coral, whirling around the old room stripped bare, while Arnav watches in mute fascination! LOL. We have the beginning of Arnavji. I have to confess, I think it's quaint and sweet.

Missing painting? Black lentils, I sense. And a lunch date already? My my, Arnavji, you sure move fast. But I approve.

P.S. I hope you appreciate how difficult it was to not read the next chapter only because I haven't unres-ed heer.

Edited by Semanti - 11 years ago

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Cherylann

@tvpal007

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Posted: 12 years ago

#544

The Mannat ki Chabi scene ..one of. My favorite scenes from the show.

Loved your take on it😃

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shalini_s

@shalini_s

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Posted: 12 years ago

#545

interesting chapter.. both of them coming closer..

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Parvathi Devi

@honey-sweety

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Posted: 12 years ago

#546

Awww Excellent Update..

I really loved Kushi's simplicity and her positive nature towards people and her tramundous knowledge on Lucknow..

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canapoem

@canapoem

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Posted: 12 years ago

#547

I loved the part where she asked him how her dance was. Love this Khushi. Nice update.

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Sj236

@Sj236

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Posted: 12 years ago

#548

D way u r writing arnav's pain and his mourning for his brother touched my heart!
Coz frm d past few days, i am doing d same thing ...hiding myself from d whole world... And while reading dis update i found dat how deeply u writers think about every point! Evry small insignificant thing is thought about!!!
D mannat scene was perfectly portrayed!
*hats off for dat*
here khushi is a mystery! Though shez a sanka devi, shez also dat intelligent lady who knows everything about everything!
Waiting for d next part!
Thanx for d update :)

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lala rukh

@lalarukh

Inactive

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Posted: 12 years ago

#549

wow yaar i am in love with the story ...too good...loved it ...its like both hurt,lost souls found each other to heal each other pain ...beautifully written...dargah scene ...that key...wow all brought back so many memories of the arnav and khushi :)