VIRIKA LOVE IS HARD

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Oke im sooo sorry i was soo bussy with school and you know how school is:((( but oke will start PART 4

So ViRIKA headed in rush the hospital Viren's head was lying in Jeevika's lap and she was just crying crying crying for many reasons 1. Of fearness 2. Will viren be able to wake up?? 3. ALL ARE IMPORTENT!! But jeevika was giving herself the fault she's said biggest fault ever VIREN WHY I DIDNT HEARD YOU WHYY?? When you said plz listen to me plz! Why i didnt stand back and just listen to your story ALL MY FAULT ALL MY FAULT tears were rolling over her cheek Nd also fell on virens face! 😭 😭 But then she tryed to be strong swap all her tears away and said: VIREN PLZ OOTHO WAKE UP IF YOU DONT. I HATE YOU VIREN PLZZ VIREN PLZZZ and she even didnt know but tears ware already flowing again of her beautyfull eyes!!! Luckely she had waterproof mascara!

So VIRIKA headed in rush to the hospital Viren's parents were out off the town. And jeevika achually dont knw who to call but she said to her mom till Viren recover then only will go home. They had a longgg discusion but thn Jeevika's mom had to say yess. Viren went to the ISU yaa it was tht serious!! After 3 hours long the light went green
Jeevika: DOKTER DOKTER howss viren??
Doktor: How to tell you miss he putted his glasses off and. Said the operation didnt go well
Jeevika: screaming jelling bilkool pagal hogi thi and was pulling the collars of th doktor YEH NAHI HO SAKTAHAI
Doktor: Nurceee samballoh isko
Jeevika: dont touch me i said dont touch me plzzz dont touch...

And Jeevika feeled dizzy and fell on the floor she was unconsiouss
Nurce: Doktor Doktor
And jeevika was also admitted too but after 2 hours she was alreadyy consiouss luckely her eyes went slowly open and just said one name Viren
Doktor: how are you feeling miss choudery ??
Jeevika: Where's viren what happend??!
Doktor: here some fruits you fell unconsiouss To much stress and you also didnt eat so much i think?!
Jeevika: yess but where's viren hows he??!
Doktor: oke will tell you but dont lose hope oke promise??
Jeevika: oke i, i, promise stammel she
Doktor: i dont knw hoe to say but he felt really hard on his backbone and as you knw there so many wains and...
Jeevika: andd what doktor plz tell me??
Doktor: oke will say it straightelly HE'S IN COMA if he dont will wake up in 2 days I think he will never go out of this coma
Jeevika: she was like a statue and there where not only tears flowing it also anger she was trowimg things what saw and was like IT ALL MYN FAULT VIREN CANT LEFT ME ALONE NO NO!!!
Nurses taked care off her

TOMMOROW

Jeevika waked up and saw the nurses who were around here (btw jeevika mom would go today to london she thought shes just helping a friend but it was more then a friend THIS IS CALLED LOVE!!!
Jeevika was just praying her prayers!!!! Friend rucha also reached and viren's friend also came

Rucha: Itni barre baaat hogai aur tumne battaya nahi whyy?
Jeevika: because i was already broken and jeevika told the whole story
Rucha and Rahul shokked
Rahul: will never spare Maya all her fault and was looking in the ICU were viren was lying and cryed
Jeevika: Its all myn fault went she again!!
Already 1 day passed and viren still in coma 😭

Jeevika: doktor can i see Viren plz plz ???
Doctor:No jeevika t cant
Jeevika: why not?!! You dindt let me yday plz want to see him
Doctor: do you love him so much??
Jeevika: YESS I DO DOCTER AND WILL NEVER LOVE ANYONE ELSE SACHME
Doctor: THEN STOP LOVING HIM!!!
Jeevika: SHOKKED WHATT DID U SAID???
Doctor: YESS JEEVIKA YESS I loved you always when you came here with your sister Maanvi you can only love me only me!!! He said and was jeevika holding so tightley in her arms
Jeevika: shokked LEAVE ME LEAVE ME SHE SCREAMED!!!
She achually ran away and the doctor ran after her but then someone of the nurses said doctor help!! And she pulled him away!
Jeevika just ran how fast she can to virens room and entered
Jeevika saw the beautyfull face off viren she sat next to him and just saw him condition and said SORRY VIREN IM SORRY!!! One off her tear fell agin on his face and his hand was moving
Jeevika didnt saw it but said I LOVE YOU VIREN!! And kisssed with now any shy on his lips so her juicy lips crashed in to his and she had her eyes closed but then virens hand moved more and then jeevika saw it!!

Well that was part 4 PLZ COMMENT AND LIKE IT PLZZZ Sorry for the grammarr and just hope you love it!!!will soon update it ONLY IF YOU WANT TO READ MORE!

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sumayyah1 thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago
#2
awesome update
this was so upsetting
the docter wanted jeeevika
but she wanted viren
thanks for the pm
but can u send me part 3
thanks
continue soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
#3
fabulous awsome update😊
what a twist in the story 😲
love it ā¤ļø
really u r awesome writier šŸ‘ šŸ‘ šŸ‘
absoulutly brillianšŸ‘t
mza aa gya 😃
waiting viren to get up😊
ughh the docter 😔really hate him😔
awwšŸ˜‰ the kiss😳
and thanx for the PM😊
UPDATE SOON 😊 😊


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Posted: 11 years ago
#4
Awesome update...
Hopefully viren will come around soon...
That doc wants jeevs...wanna kill him...
Update soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
#5
amazing update thanks for the pm
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Posted: 11 years ago
#6
PART 5

Im SOOO SORRYYY FR THE LATE UPDATE !!!!! Dnt want to give school the fault OKAY ACHUALLY IT IS THE FAULT OF SCHOOL HAHA šŸ˜†

Small recap Jeevika saw Viren in the hospital and Jeevika said I LOVE YOU VIREN!! And kisssed with no any shy on his lips so her juicy lips crashed in to his and she had her eyes closed but then virens hand moved more and then jeevika saw it!!

Yes its true Viren Was awake Like The disney story But this time The Princess kissed The prince alive it was such a BEAUTYFULL MOMENT šŸ‘ TO MAGICAL NO WORDS!!!
The doctor also came but not That doctor who have a dirty eye on Jeevika he dessepeared And his name is Sameer.

AFTER 2 WEEKS

Doctor sameer is still missed!!!
Viren: Thank you Doc
Doctor: Ab Theek se Ghayyal Rakhna !!! Hope to see you never on Tht condition back
Jeevika: No doctor me huna Kuchnahi hone doonghi
Viren: Shockingly and said Achaa?!
Jeevika: gave a smile and said Bye to the doktor and Viren too

OUTSIDE

Jeevika was walking with Viren and was little nervous Cause she thought off the kiss Nd at the same time Viren was also remembering that he knewed some details of that beautyfull kiss session.
Viren: ehmmm Thank you Jeevika Tumne itna khayaal rakha koi apna whi nahi istara karta.
Jeevika: Who to meri dutie thi !! Shyingly said
Viren: Acha To who kiss whi Dutie thi?! With a smile on his face
Jeevika: Mouth wide open and wanted to run away
Viren pulled jeevika's hand and she slipped and falles in Virens arms. There was an eyelock for 5 min
Then it was raining and the beautyfull position of Virika was disturbed
Viren: Jeevika come to my house tumhara ghar bohot dhoor hai aur aapki ma whi US me hai so come to my house plzzz??
Jeevika: Theek hai waisebhi mujje bohot darr lagtahai akkele
Viren was happy to hear that and they ride to the place of Viren
Virens family went outside cause of a wedding and they didnt know that viren gad a serious accident Jeevika did so much for Viren. That he didnt feeled the Kammi
Viren: Come inside Jeevika, here is the bathroom if you want to freshup
Jeevika: Okay Thank you Viren She freshed up and went to Viren
Vire also freshed up and came but he forgot his T-Shirt
Jeevika saw Viren shirtless and sidnt know how to react. She wanted to go but she was staring at his beautyfull body with so many abs
Viren came next to her and said... But jeevika interupted Viren I pick t-shirt for you
Viren did his fingers on the juicy lips of jeevika and said THANK YOU SO MUCH JEEVIKA THANK YOU SO MUCH really i dont know what i had to do without you and really if i didnt met you i really wish I Would die Because your The Beautyfull Nice Sweet Prettiest Honest girl in the world achually shortly said MY LOVE!!! I LOVE YOUUU
Jeevika: No VIREN THANK YOU you saved my life and... Ive to say something importent..
Viren: yess
Jeevika: im in love with somebody Really Sweet humble cute SEXXY HANDSOME GUY
Viren was really in shock 😲 What but but... Why you Kisses me and was really shocked!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
#7
SHITTT SHITTT SHITTT HAVE TO WRITE IT AGAIN ALL MY HARD WORK IN VAIN HATE THIS !!!
Its really harf to type this on your phone second time it deleted by Mehnet My parents already shout me for what yr doing so long on yr phone Well have to wrote again only for u guys !!

PART 5

Jeevika kissed Viren interrupting him and Viren wanted to talk while there kissen OH IT WAS ME !! Jeevika give slap on his back and they continued kissing Viren was sooo happy and entered his tongue in hers Jeevika shocked you can see it on her eyes but later she let her tongue go and Virikas tongues were playing with each otherss

Jeevika was shy and wanted to go but Viren pulled her and she falled in is lap
Jeevika: choro mujje shyingly
Viren: why so shy yaar Ms KiSS so perfectly jeevika blushed and wanted to say Viren plzz jaane do bit viren interrupted and nuzzled in her neck chin jawline and untied her dress Jeevika shocked but letted go and she was wnjoying every touch of viren and she mowed in plessure
Viren heared it and planted soft kisses and wet kisses on her back and shoulder Jeevika also kisses viren chest. His chest was full off red lipstick
Jeevika was in her bra and pants and viren in his pants
Jeevika saw viren intention and viren also asked premission with his eyes and jeevika nodde shyingly Viren untied the bra with his mounth and jeevika was mowing and enjoyed it

Virens pov: I saw jeevika beautyfull boldness and her sweet smile and coulndt bare it and ik damn sure she also wanted to... I untied her bra and saw her beauty and was licking her back planted hard lovebites and by her soft chest i planted soft kissen and was nuzzling around i heard her mowing and that made me become more naughtier and licked it

Jeevikas pov: I was so shocked but also loved it bcause i also wanted to be the closest to my dear boyfriend i was just enjoying every touch f his and dicided to have more

Jeevika mowed and asked viren can i viren was to bussy with sucking her chest and back and lips but heard it and said yess??

Jeevika unzipped virens pant and did it off and also did her pant off
Viren was shocked at this bahaviour of jeevika and went more naugtier he picked her up to the bed and was adjusting on her
Jeevika was bussy kissing virens chest and Viren was licking her legs he first did honey on the legs and licked it away And also sucked between jeevikas legs (laugh) Jeevika mowed AAAH and she spread her legs how far she could and was pulling virens hair and was gasping
Viren entered between her legs and was in her
Jeevika feeled lil bit pain but later it was hurting allot and mowed in pain VIREEENNN
Viren: im sorry did i hurt you??
Jeevika: no keep going its okay She enjoyed it!!
Viren saw in her eyes that it hurted her allot so he decided to enter slowly
Jeevika was enjoingg it an Mowedd VIRENNN
Viren also mowed AHHH JEEEVIKAAA
and they mowed and get wilder and wilder they were still atached to each other and they kissed also
Viren was tired and jeevika wanted to give love bites on viren whole body between legs back chest and wanted to move but
Viren: mowed AHHH it hurts
Jeevika: im sorry i didnt know were still attached viren also disnt knw so viren went slowly ou jeevika
Both were Mowing in pain that much OOO AAAHHH UUU it was a really loud moan viren
And he climaxed to late when he already was out jeevika

I AM SO SORRY IF THIS WAS TOO MUCH ROMANCE !!!Really if you dont like it plZ say i will never write anymre such off stories IM SORRY ONCE AGAIN HOPE YOU LOVE IT only then will continue
Lots of love
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Posted: 11 years ago
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amazing
soo gud
IT WAS TIME ANOL THAT U UPDATED
THNX
continue soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Grt update..
Finally virika is together...
Aww jeevs kiss him 1st ...wow i like this style of jeevs..
Update soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
#10
god this was so HOT!!!ā˜ŗļøšŸ˜³šŸ˜³
both parts were awesomešŸ‘šŸ˜Š
virika r togetheršŸ˜ŠšŸ˜‰ā¤ļø
jeevika in viren's placešŸ˜†šŸ˜‰
loved how jeevika teased viren that she loves someonešŸ˜†
the huggs and kissā¤ļøā¤ļø
and the last i was blushing like hellšŸ˜³ā˜ŗļøā˜ŗļøšŸ˜³šŸ˜³
loved it ā¤ļø
continue soon 😊
thanx for the PM 😊

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