~ Jodha Akbar Love Story ~ Ch 2 Uptd Pg 2

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Hello Peoples! I am Nancy..and I am new on Fan Fictions Forum! Though I have written FFs on other Forums, I want to share my work with you all ! Hope you will like it ! And also, I am looking forward to make new friends here!
My story is Based on the Zee Tv Serial Jodha Akbar! Its a romantic story! Hope you like it!!
Characters :
Jallaludin Mohammad Akbar - Shahenshah of Mughal Sultanate
Jodha Bai - Wife of Shahenshah Jalal
Hameeda Begum - Mother of Jalal
Ruqaiya - Chief COnsort and First wife of Jalal
Maham Anga - The upbringing mother of Jalal
Adham Khan - Son on Maham Anga
and other characters...
Chapter 1 :
(The Background story is that, Jalal and Jodha got married because of Political reasons and not due to love. It were some incidents in their lives that lead to a True love story)
Jodha was running out in jungle angrily. She remembered how she was humiliated and insulted in the court by Maham Anga. Yet Jalal didn't utter a word. She couldn't take it anymore. She didn't know where she was heading but she was running and running.
Jalal was shocked to know that Jodha is missing from her chamber. He knew that Jodha was insulted more than she deserved. He took up his sword and sat on his horse and went to search for Jodha. Ruqaiya, Maham and everyone else were shocked to see Jalal taking this step.
Jalal for first time felt tensed and a feeling of fear went down his spine. He wanted to see Jodha fully fine. He also went running on his horse towards Jungle. On the other side, Jodha was in a trance. She thought, Its better to die now and end everything that happened and also it would be better for her parents also. They wont have to tolerate her as a divorcee later.
She came across a lake and jumped without waiting. Meanwhile, Jalal has reached near Jodha. He was continuously shouting "BEGUM JODHA" Kahan hain aap? ... Ya Allah,, Begum Jodha ko kuch nahi hona chahiye...
Next moment he reached near the lake. He was shocked to his core when he saw Jodha floating lifelessly in the lake. Tears rolled down his eyes. He jumped in the lake and shouted to his highest " JODHAAA" ... Hum tumhe kuch nahin hone denge. He carried Jodha in his arms and came out of Lake.
He saw a pale faced Jodha unconscious in his lap. He remembered " how Jodha had said a thousand times that she didn't do that intentionally" . He rubbed her feet and hands but she didn't open her eyes. For the first time, Akbar felt so fearful.
This feeling was different. He couldn't even stand a scar on Jodha.but now she was lying lifelessly in front of his eyes.
He promised himself that he wont let Jodha die. He pressed her back and Jodha coughed. He felt so much relieved. He thanked Allah and said Jodha Begum, Are you okay?
Jodha was still semi -conscious. After sometime, she gained conscious. She was weak by now. Jalal fumed, "How dare you think this Jodha Begum"? How could you do this?
Jodha was angry as well. She shouted at her best - To kya ab maut bhi haemin naseeb nahi ho sakti? I said I could accept any punishment and I also said I am sorry. But Insult is what I cant stand. For me, my self respect is the most important. Jalal looked down.
Jodha cried a lot. SHe could not control herself now. She bursted out - Aapne humein samajh kya rakha hai? Jab hum keh rahe the ki humne kuch bhi jaan bujhkar nahi kiya, phir bhi hum saja ko sweekar kar lete. Lekin apki Badi Ammi ne jo hamari bezatti ki, kya jawab denge aap? Aur Humne aisa kaun sa gunah kiya jo humein vapas amer bheja ja raha hai. Hum mante hain ki hum yahan khush nahi hain lekin kya apko pata hai ki humare masa aur baapu sa par kya asar hoga?
Jalal was listening to all this with patience. As she saw Jalal was lost in what she was saying, she again grabbed the opportunity and ran again.
Jalal was shocked. He understood how much Jodha was hurt mentally and emotionally. He shouted again JODHAA... As Jodha was weak, she couldn't run farther..Instead, after running some distance, she fell again.
Jalal came near her...
At this point of time, Jalal was really very emotional. He was so tearful seeing Jodha's condition. He said - Aap kyun baar baar aisa kar rahi hain?
Jodha cried again. Jalal took her in his arms and took her to a comfortable place. Jodha was breathing very low. She was still fully wet in water.
Jodha gained some strength and said- Leave me alone. Please leave me alone. This is what you wanted. Just leave me. If you cared a bit, you would have rather punished me, but you also saw me being insulted for a crime which was purely unintentional. She broke down in his arms.
Jalal said softly - I know you didn't do anything with intention, Please forgive me. We will discuss this later. But how can you take such a step?
Jodha separated herself from him now. She said - PLease Shahenshah..I played Holi because you granted that wish.. Why will I do that intentionally? Why I was being insulted so much...Why...She coughed badly..
Jalal was shocked..He knew Jodha's condition was getting worse..
Jalal rubbed her back again. She was somewhat okay.
Jalal said - Now don't say anything else. Alright.
Least did they both know that in this Running and chasing , they were brought in deep jungle.
Jalal - We both should go now. You have done this once. Don't dare to do this again. You will not go to Amer. You will be in Agra always, forever.
Jodha's eyes gleamed lightly. She was relieved although she doubted.
Jalal and Jodha got up and turned to their horse to go back. But what they saw rooted them then and there.
A Tiger waiting for them!! The tiger looked at both of them lusciously!! Jodha was shivering! The tiger pounced at Jodha... She screamed."aaa" ..Jalal Screamed "JODHAAA"... Jodha was beneath tiger when suddenly Jalal pounced on Tiger.. Both Jalal and tiger fought.. Jalal got hurt badly...
Jodha was scared ...She was badly hurt too...
As Tiger angered more and more...He finally gave a frown sound and jumped high to attack on Jalal when Suddenly Jodha came in between...
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I hope you like it ! if you don't ,,please let me know!!šŸ˜›šŸ˜›šŸ˜›
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Chapter 1 (above)
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Yippe!! Nancy!!!!
Love this FF of urs..
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Hey..Nancy DearšŸ¤—
I just lOve Ur FFs..this is the beSt Oneā¤ļø
You are an Amazing writerā­ļøā­ļøā­ļø
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Love this FF of your Nancy !!!
Keep up the good work ..
Hope you get lots of fans for your FFs ...
Thanks for the PM ...

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You are an amazing writer
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Nancy you're an amazing writer luv this ff
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Is there no one out there on FF Forum ??😭😭 Cuz I can see only my frnds commenting!!
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šŸ˜‰Very nice update soon! waiting for romantic scenes! In serial looks like we have to wait a lot! But ff enjoy kar skate hai...

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CHAPTER - 2

Jalal was shocked with this. Jodha had come in between. Tiger pounced on Jodha. Jalal Shouted - JODHAAA... Without wasting a second, he got hold his shamsheer and killed the tiger in no time.

Both Jalal and Jodha were badly and seriously injured. Jodha lied on ground. Jalal ran towards Jodha and he could see how badly she was wounded.

She managed to got up and sat. Jalal could figure out that something was wrong. Jodha was trying to hide something. Jalal asked faintly as he was slowly becoming unconscious - Are you okay Jodha?Why did you do this?
WHyyy??? He shouted in caring tone!!

Jodha was trying to hide her lower back. She smiled falsely and said I am totally fine Shahenshah!!
Jalal became unconscious and lied there.

Jodha immediately took out her dupatta and tied it tightly around her lower back and waist!!She moaned and cried with a highly wounded back.

She sat there remembering how Shahenshah had accepted her marriage conditions, how he had allowed her to play Holi, How boldly and proudly he said - You will not go to Amer. You will stay in Amer only, forever!!

She determined there itself that she would not let happen anything to Shahenshah.

She stood up. SHe could hardly walk. But her determination was above all. She brought water from the lake in her little hands. She cleaned the wounds and injuries of Jalal.

She took the fertile soil on the ground and applied on his wounds with utmost care.

Then she looked for some cloth to tie around his injuries. But she had already tied the dupatta around her waist.

Then, she looked at her long lengthy Ghagra/Lehnga. She thought, "What's the use of these clothes when She knows her end is near".
She torn a small piece of cloth from her ghagra and managed to tie around all his wounds.

She had lost all her energy by now.
But she was satisfied, Jalal was fine and would wake up without feeling any pain.
She sat near him and closed her eyes and waited peacefully for her end.
It was night time. Jalal was still unconsious. But Jodha still had some consciousness. It was bitter cold. And still her clothes were somewhat wet.

She saw a shivering Jalal. She herself was shivering. She tried to get up and thought of lighting a fire.

But, no, SHe couldn't get up due to extreme weakness. She tried again and she stood.

SHe collected some woods from nearby and put to them fire by rubbing 2 stones. This was extremely difficult for her.

Now, both of them could feel little warmth with the fire. Jalal had healed much. She just waited for him to wake up.
Night passed by.
It was morning. Jalal opened his eyes slowly and soothing sunrays fell on his face. He didn't feel very much pain.

Infact, as he woke up, he felt quite at peace and his wounds were healing at fast pace.

His eyes went on Jodha who was lying beside him, He smiled by seeing her sleeping peacefully.

He saw his wounds were cleaned up, and treated well. He knew this must be Jodha who did this. He felt very happy.

Suddenly, something striked his mind. He remembered the scene of the day before. He remembered that she was hiing something from him.
Immediately, he turned around to Jodha and as soon he touched her.. He was in GREAT SHOCK.

She was very cold and pale. He checked for her pulse which was almost nil. He untied her dupatta and saw her lower back..which shocked him to the core...
He saw that Her back had been brutally bruised by the tiger. The skin had been scrapped off. She had lost a lot of blood.

He understood everything..Why Jodha was trying to hide..SHe knew she would die.. WHy did she still did so much for me?

He cried bitterly seeing her in this condition. He tied dupatta again, took her in his arms,, adjusted himself and Jodha on horse
and rode the horse faster than ever towards his Mahal..His eyes glowed with fear and determination..
Jalal and Jodha had reached the Palace. Everyone including people, ministers, Begums, Maham Anga, Hameeda Begum etc. all were shocked to see both of their states.

They saw how badly they were injured especially Jalal. They all were unaware of Jodha's injury. Ruqaiya was fuming with jealousy. Jalal held Jodha in her arms, he was still lost in a trance beyond repair.
He went straight into Jodha's chamber and ordered everyone to stay away in loud voice. His voice had anger.

He called the the Doctors and allowed Jodha's 2 Dasis to stay there. He watched Jodha's face which was so calm amd peaceful.

He had never felt such pain before. His eyes had a fear of loss. He begged for first time. He said - Humari Jodha ko bacha li jiye.
Inhe kuch nahi hona chahhiye"

Moti and Reva were surprised and focussed on how Jalal said " HUMARI JODHA" ...

They prayed to krishna to save their Jodha. Doctors cleaned her wound. They were really shocked to see that Jodha had been deeply wounded. They put the herbs and necessary medicine on her wounds. They wrapped her wound.

Jalal was watching each and every move.

Moti said - Gustakhi maaf Shahenshah lekin aapko bhi bahut aaram ki zarurat hai!
Jalal didnt say anything. He didnt want to leave Jodha even for one second. But then, He will just go and come soon so that
he can care for her better.
Jalal, before leaving room, asked the doctors about Jodha, they said It is very critical condition but they will do their 200%
to save her.

Jalal tears rolled down and he left the room.
As he moved out of room, He saw everyone standing out in Garden. They had many questions. But he didnt pay any attention.

He also saw Maham Anga, and looked at her with highly angered eyes. Maham noticed this. She was fearful.
Jalal went straight in his room. Doctors came to attend him. They examined him and applied all necessary medicines
on his wounds.
What they said after examination made Jalal even more sorry. They said - Shahenshah! Although you have a lot of injuries but we couldnt find any serious injury. All your injuries have already healed to high extent. This is nothing but Allah's blessing that your inner strength healed your injuries. We have applied some more medicines just to make you completely alright."
Shahenshah was lost in thoughts. Why did she do this? WHy she saved me when she was also dying? How can she leave me?

He freshened up and went straight into Jodha's Chamber. He saw the highly tensed faces of Doctors. Moti and Reva were crying bitterly
in a corner.

He asked with loudest voice ever - Kya hua?? Aap log aise kyun ro rahe hain?
Doctors trembled. They said - Maaf kijiyega Shahenshah! Hum Begum Jodha ko nahi bacha paye...

WHat he heard was what he never wanted to think, never wanted to hear!! He stood there still!! Motionless!


Time had stopped for him. He smiled. He looked at Doctors, Moti and Reva with a happy face. Tears rolled down his eyes.

He said - Aisa kabhi nahi ho sakta!! Acha mazak hai lekin humein zara bhi pasand nahi aya!!😭

He went near Jodha who lying lifelessly. She has proven to him that She was always right and he was always wrong.


He pulled up Jodha and hugged her. He was still smiling. As he hugged her, he closed his eyes.

*** DREAM STATE*** (I know guys,,,too much..lol)

Jodha in white attire - Hamara samay aa chuka hai Shahenshah! Hum behad khush hain ke hum apki jaan bacha sake. Humse hui
saari galtiyon ke liye hamein maaf kijiye ga.

Jalal(with tears and anger) - Nahin!! Tum humein aise chodkar nahin jaa sakti! Abhi humein tumse muafi mangi hain. Apni galtiyon
ka paschaptap karna hai. Agar humne sahi kadam uthaya hota to aap yeh galat kadam kabhi nahi uthati!! Rukjaiye.. He held her very tight.

Jodha - Ab kuch nahi ho sakta Shahenshah! Humein Jaana hoga..She tried to free herself from his grip But she was unable to do so.

Jalal - Aap chahe jitni koshish karle..Lekin hum apko nahin jaane denge!! He held her more tight!

***DREAM STATE OVER ***

Jalal opened his eyes and he could feel heartbeat near his chest. His happiness knew no bounds.
(Ishq hai vo Ehsaas, Ishq hai vo Juzbaat.. In BG)

He said - Jodha zinda hain...Jaldi inhe dekhiye.😊

The doctors checked her and they were surpised and happy. They said- Only Power of Love can do this.
They checked her pulse which was very low. They did their best treatment.

Jalal cried with happiness.

After sometime, Doctors said - Shahenshah!! Begum Jodha ki haalat mein ab sudhar hai! Badhai Ho!!😊😊

He was very happy. He was never as happy as he was today!!He asked himself - What is happening to me? Why I care for her so much
when I hate her..No I cant hate her.. I..I Love her?? WHat?? I love her??

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ PLz yaaron...Koi to like karo..😭😭
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