Kissa kamarband ka

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Main kamarband hoon Kumud ka

Sab gehnon main sabse favorite main hi to hoon

Meri chun chun bahut pasand hai Kumud ko

Par sabse important - main nishani hoon uske aur Saras ke pyaar ka

Saras ke liye main pehli awaaz hoon Kumud ki,

Main pehli jhalak hoon Jis ne uske dil to pukara tha

Main pehchan hoon Kumud ki,

Saras ke liye main ek ehsaas hoon

Phir kyon Kumud yeh baat samajh nahi pati

Un kali raaton main jab main Saras ka vishvas tha

Main uski himmat bhi tha

Aur uski meethi yaadon ka hissa tha

Aaj jab phir se Kumud ki kamariya

Ne mujhe gale lagaya

Main Saras ki ummeed bana

Phir se jaaga hua armaan bana

Aur wohi Purana ehsaas bana

Phir kyon kiya Kumud ne aisa

Kyon de diya mujhe kusum ko

Kyon woh nahi jaanti ki pyaar iss tarah diya nahi jaata

Kyon wohi nahi samajhti ki

Saras ke liye main uska dil hoon

Mere Ghunghroo dhadkan hain uski

Kyon nahi samajhti woh ki

Kusum chahe Kumud ki parchayi ho

Parchayi sirf ek dhoka hoti hai

Woh kisi ka sach nahi ban sakti

Saras ka pyaar dhoop ki tarah

Tez aur saaf hai

Aur parchayi maar deti hai dhoop ko!

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Arshi, I just get the gist of this poem and am sure it's Kusum who purposely dangles the KB to gain attention. What else is this b**** gonna do? I don't wanna imagine...

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Another brilliant ode from you, Arshi! 👏 👏 👏

Reminded me of Veera's exceptionally astute post on the kamarbandh (and payal) as being "game pieces"... Of course, it also goes to prove that some rather unimaginative hands are abusing the joystick with impunity, this time around.

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Arshi

Sooo beautiful !

My heart broke when Kumud handed the kamarbandh to Kusum. It was as though there was a break in Saras -Kumud love.

CVs can get so insensitive at times ! Really hope the kamarbandh and Saras return to the rightful owner !

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Originally posted by: -Ivy-
Another brilliant ode from you, Arshi! 👏 👏 👏
Reminded me of Veera's exceptionally astute post on the kamarbandh (and payal) as being "game pieces"... Of course, it also goes to prove that some rather unimaginative hands are abusing the joystick with impunity, this time around.

So rightly said !

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Originally posted by: -Ivy-
Another brilliant ode from you, Arshi! 👏 👏 👏
Reminded me of Veera's exceptionally astute post on the kamarbandh (and payal) as being "game pieces"... Of course, it also goes to prove that some rather unimaginative hands are abusing the joystick with impunity, this time around.

I couldn't get that at all, Kumud is the modern day female Karn. That's the only explanation. It was just there for the mishap to happen. Just like the Danny-Saras fight was inserted to pave way for S to play Kanha. Why couldn't Prammy give the henchmen a photo of Kumud... sickening tale this is..

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Originally posted by: tryforceful

I couldn't get that at all, Kumud is the modern day female Karn. That's the only explanation. It was just there for the mishap to happen. Just like the Danny-Saras fight was inserted to pave way for S to play Kanha. Why couldn't Prammy give the henchmen a photo of Kumud... sickening tale this is..

Shrija... If you look at it, the way events are being contrived, and everything in sight is getting blatantly compromised to fit in the absurd 'narrative points' (use this term real loosely)... It represents such an insult to character sketches. The revelation and fight and quick fix culmination, was a huge insult to Danny, I felt. This was HUGE, finesse, poignancy and better handling was needed on the storyboard. Simply wreching great performances from actors was not enough. It left a bad taste, because it was so blatantly used to provide 'asmaan se tapki' Meera, with her 'khajoor me atka' Kanha. Did not like it in the least.

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Originally posted by: -Ivy-

Shrija... If you look at it, the way events are being contrived, and everything in sight is getting blatantly compromised to fit in the absurd 'narrative points' (use this term real loosely)... It represents such an insult to character sketches. The revelation and fight and quick fix culmination, was a huge insult to Danny, I felt. This was HUGE, finesse, poignancy and better handling was needed on the storyboard. Simply wreching great performances from actors was not enough. It left a bad taste, because it was so blatantly used to provide 'asmaan se tapki' Meera, with her 'khajoor me atka' Kanha. Did not like it in the least.

So true ivy. A big point, that of Danny getting to know the truth - something that could have had all of us bound- something that would have been one of the highs, became an abysmal cheap trick.

Shoddy conception, shoddy writing, shoddy direction, shoddy execution

And the poor actors have to try to pull it off convincingly

Woh bechare phir bhi great expressions dete hain

Any other actor in mr rode's place would have been sleep walking through this meaningless trash by now.

But this man, he still puts in conviction and emotions in it!

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Originally posted by: -Ivy-

Shrija... If you look at it, the way events are being contrived, and everything in sight is getting blatantly compromised to fit in the absurd 'narrative points' (use this term real loosely)... It represents such an insult to character sketches. The revelation and fight and quick fix culmination, was a huge insult to Danny, I felt. This was HUGE, finesse, poignancy and better handling was needed on the storyboard. Simply wreching great performances from actors was not enough. It left a bad taste, because it was so blatantly used to provide 'asmaan se tapki' Meera, with her 'khajoor me atka' Kanha. Did not like it in the least.

YES, YES, YES!

Even GR couldn't salvage Thursday's episode. Look at the quantum leap in TRPs and people enjoy this hokum. HOW, I wonder😕

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Originally posted by: tryforceful
Arshi, I just get the gist of this poem and am sure it's Kusum who purposely dangles the KB to gain attention. What else is this b**** gonna do? I don't wanna imagine...

Shrija, I tried my best to think in English, but nahi hua.

Sorry dear.

Basically the essence is :

The kamarband is just a favorite accessory to Kumud

But to Saras it is her presence

It was a memory and his vishvas in the dark days

It is his hope in the present

And it's ghunghroos are his heartbeat

By giving it to kusum

Kumud has given away something vital

And thus killed it

Kumud calls kusum her shadow