OS- Wedding Ne Bana Di Jodi

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Posted: 11 years ago
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I had been waiting for this OS ever since you posted 'Airport Ne Bana Di Jodi' and then due to circumstances couldn't read this.

But now I'm finally here and would like to contradict my statement of the 'Airport Ne Bana Di Jodi' being your BEST attempt of an OS...



IS TRULY AND UNDOUBTEDLY, YOUR BEST OS!



It's was addictive and gripping and totally flawless! ❤️


"There goes My Shaadi.com Mom again.." Khushi whispered and Payal giggled. "I will be right back."


HAHAHAHA! I can imagine mothers like that! 😆


"Enjoying the Wedding?" A deep voice interrupted Khushi's glass from rising to Her lips.

Khushi turned and Her jaw dropped in surprise.

"Surprised?" Arnav smirked at Khushi's expression and snapped Her mouth close.

"Arnav!!!" Khushi squealed after absorbing the shock. "You are here?? In this wedding??"

"I had told You to 'Never say Never' !" Arnav smiled while Khushi laughed.


Ooohh!! Indeed Surprised! 😉 Never say Never! Rightly said! 👍🏼


"Can You be My boyfriend...?" Khushi said, making Arnav choke on His drink.

"Me, What?" Arnav questioned incredulously. "Khushi.. What are You asking? I mean..."

"... Just for today!" Khushi finished Her sentence.

Arnav kept His drink back on the table and turned to look at Khushi with raised eyebrows.

"See... My Mom is standing over there and I am damn sure She must be playing matchmaker for Me." Khushi gestured with Her eyes towards Her Mom. "I just need You to pose as My boyfriend so as to cool Her down."

Arnav followed Khushi's eyes and spotted Khushi's Mom speaking to Anjali. A smirk grew on His lips as He finally understood the situation.

"Cool!" Arnav said and snaked His arms around Khushi, making Her gasp. "Hello, Girlfriend."


OMG! 😲 HAHAHAHAHAHAHA!!! 🤣 This was sheer genius Sabz! Brilliant conceptualization and a wonderful scene!


"Mom.. I also want You to meet Someone. This is Arnav." Khushi paused for a moment. "My Boyfriend."

Khushi's Mom and Anjali reflected the same expression of shock and surprise on their faces.

"What? Oh My God! This is the best news I have ever heard!" Khushi's Mom squealed. "Congratulations! Half of My job is done. Don't You think, Anjali?"

Anjali stared at Her brother with raised eyebrows. "Huh? Yeah.. But, Is this miracle true, Arnav?"

"Yes, Di." Arnav said smoothly, intertwining His fingers through Khushi's fingers and bringing up Her hand to kiss. "I met Khushi in London. We are together."



Oh oh! 😛 Now what? Arnav called Anjali Di! Khushi is gonna get mad! 😆


"What was that?" Khushi questioned, once they were alone.

"What?" Arnav questioned, trying to keep His face straight.

"The intertwining of fingers, kissing My hand and Our Wedding???" Khushi almost shrieked the last word which drowned in the beats of the music being played.

"Hey... I am Your new Boyfriend and I am fully within My rights." Arnav smirked mischievously.

"Oh... So, You were aware of all this?" Khushi stared at Him straight in the eye. "I think We need to breakup... End of the one day relationship!"

"Okay." Arnav pouted. "I will just go and tell Di to find some other girl for Me because I just had a breakup."

"Don't You dare!" Khushi warned. "So, that's how You are going to play the situation? Blackmail!"

"Are You scared that You will fall in Love with Me?" Arnav provoked with a raised eyebrow.



Gosh Sabah! 😆 You're literally killing me with laughter! 🤣



BLACKMAIL! 😆 Zaroori hai! 😉

I'm sure Arnav would me smirking all the while.


Somewhat like this ^^^^

Arnav initiated the conversation really well. 👏


"Oh... " Arnav sighed. "Let's assume that We fall in Love, Will You be able to adjust in Mumbai after marriage?" Arnav asked before twirling Her again.


Reminded me of that scene in Hum Tum! 😳 Talking about the kids, cat and dog! The Picture Perfect Family.


"Khushi, Can We remove the fake element from this relationship and make this a real thing?"

"I would have never believed that Our fateful meeting would lead to this but My answer is Yes!" Khushi said, reflecting the same passionate spark in Her eyes.



Awww... The sweetest and most simplest yet mesmerizing proposal ever!



FLAWLESSNESS! ❤️

The 1 year leap was so cute! 😳 EARTHQUAKE! 🤣


"What is the procedure for an earthquake? Yeah.. Stay under the sturdy table, hide under the pillow and close your eyes... Everyth-..." Khushi's sentence trailed off as Arnav leaned forward and warmly pecked on Her lips.

"Finally!" Arnav mused and chuckled at Khushi's flushed face.

"Finally, What?" Khushi questioned unaware of the descending rush of the aircraft.

"I finally found a way to get rid of Your fear." Arnav chuckled.


Chooo cute! 😳 ADORABLE! ❤️


"I always want You around Forever because I Love You." Arnav kissed the engagement ring before holding Khushi's hand and walking towards the immigration counter from where it all started...


Haaayee!

I totally enjoyed this OS to bits!


Love you tons and tons Sabz! ❤️ I know you'll be saying.. This mad girl has quoted almost the whole OS.. But seriously, I'm not at fault! It was beyond perfection! 🤗



*Way to go Sabz! Cheers!*

Going to Read 'Puppy Love Ne Bana Di Jodi'

Love you heaps, ❤️

Minu
Edited by -Mrinalini- - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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TRULY THE MOST AMAZING OS EVER!



HOW? 😲

HOW CAN YOU? 😲

HOW CAN YOU DO THIS EVERY TIME! 😲

YOU HAVE ENTHRALLED ME!

READ IT 12 TIMES IN A GO!

STILL CAN'T GET ENOUGH OF IT! ❤️

Love you so much Twinie! 🤗
Edited by -Mrinalini- - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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since you have used NoCopy so can't quote my fav lines

But I am glad you used it

I loved this OS

It is so beautifully written



loved the whole fak boyfriend scenario

the way Khushi was bewildered was so cute

and yah obviously the line of break up that Khushi used was perfect

and yah of course the dance was mesmerizing

ArShi talks during the dance were superb

Sheer brilliance shown

I personally love the name snowball but a dog 😉

All this was so cute

They way Khushi said yes was perfect

and the journey to London again in the aircraft was perfect

Khuhsi's fear gone... yay

perfect this was


LOVE YOU SABAH 🤗




Edited by --Mahima-- - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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WOOOHOOO ME ON FIRST PAGE
RES
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Posted: 11 years ago
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My seat!!😉

This is amazingly perfect...

I love how you write all this...

All i can utter is a biggg WOW
" This is really PUR-FACT "
Edited by Maheerah - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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cant wait for this one
wonder what we shall have now
just love bana di jodi series
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Posted: 11 years ago
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mine ;)
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love reading it :)
a really cute one :)
they met again in the wedding
acted as if they were in relationship
they broke up :P
they dance together
Arnvv proposed and they are together again :)
I love the plane part :)
thanks for the pm
Edited by moumita03 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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loved it
that fake one day boyfriend is now her fianc.. wow
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Wow! so good... Love it! thx for the pm!

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