Rishbala SS- Ishq Tu Hi Hai Mera (Epilogue Page 85) 19/04

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Ishq Tu hi Hai Mera

Hey friends!!!! I am back with a new ff...not sure whether it will be an ff or ss...but surely not an os!! So I am highly waiting for likes and comments. Pls also mention that I should continue or not???

This story is slightly inspired from the south film Brindavanam, but not entirely based on it, infact the main stories are completely different. So please have a look.

Character sketch

Rishab Kundra/RK : He is a very optimistic, young rich boyreading in the final year of his college. Charming looks, loads of girl friend(though he is not the boy friend of any of them) and huge bank balance is what he posses. He also has other talents such as good in studies, trained guitar artist, but no one is interested in his other talents.

Madhubala Malik: A bit pessimistic girl, always thinking about others before her own self. She is the daughter of a typical village man Shamsher Malik. She is seemed to be quite enthusiastic at outside, but inside she is torn. Also a final year student with Rishab.

Since these are the protagonists so I am not describing other characters in detail. I wanted to add a detail here, that is, since I am really a mad and self obsessed girl, so from now onwards, may be each and every story of mine will be having a character named Rimjhim, that is, this barkhurdaar. So pls tolerate me. Rimjhim, here is the best friend of Madhu.

Prologue:

RK was startled with Rimjhim's voice. She was panting and she asked him, "Madhu kaha hai?"

RK: Wo to mujhse puch rahi thi ki Western peak pe jaane ka sabse short cut raasta kaunsa hai?

R- What??? Aur tumne usse bata diya hoga??

RK- Haan, wo mujhse puchi aur maine bataya.

R- How could you RK?? Mana ki tumhara aur uska relation thoda ajeeb hai par tumne usse marne bhej diya??

RK- Marna??? Main kyun usse marne bhejunga??

R- Stupid, wo suicide karne gayi hai. Apne kamre mein ek suicidal note chor ke gayi thi wo. Jaldi chalo isse pehle ki wo kuch kar le.

RK- But wo suicide kyun karna chahti hai?

R- Mujhe kya pata??? Chalo jaldi...

Why did Madhu want to commit suicide?? Where was she?? To know this keep reading.



Index

Prologue- Page 1

Part 1- Page 8

Part 2- Page 14

Part 3- Page 20

Part 4- Page 27

Part 5- Page 31

Part 6- Page 39

Part 7- Page 46

Part 8- Page 51

Part 9- Page 59

Part 10- Page 65

Part 11- Page 70

Part 12, 13- Page 77

Part 14- Page 81

Epilogue- Page 85

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kg15 thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
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SOUNDS INTERESTING... DO CONTINUE...

AND AS I ALWAYS SAY, MOST IMPORTANT WORK FOR YOU IS TO PM ME... LOL..
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Interesting Concept šŸ˜›
Continue soon 😳
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Nice prologue, waiting for the first part, and the interesting part, is you Rimjhim,in Rishbala life,nicešŸ‘
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Posted: 12 years ago
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wow so u r back with another one ?
here also madhu is daughter of a villager like jtik ( junoon tere ishq ka )
i love the concept
is she suicidal in general ?
and what about her parents
am curious and interested
please make it ff
and i did not get pm for this
please pm me the updates
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Posted: 12 years ago
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awesum prolouge!!!!
wonderfulll!!!!
i just loved it!!
plz updt soon and do pm me!!!
waiting!!!!!!

p.s- madhu suicide??? haawww
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Congo for ur new ff it sound vry intresting soo continu n dont forget to pm me šŸ‘šŸ¼ šŸ‘ šŸ‘šŸ¼
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Sounds interesting, though I have heard the movie name but don't watch movies much, so it will be all new fr me even if u write on the same story base, so continue soon dear and thanks fr the PM.😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Superbbb prologue...loved it...plzzz continue soon...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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interesting concept..
cont.soon

thanks for pm dear..

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