SwaRon FF : Kahi Ankahi [JDM S2] Chap 11 : 111 - 25/10/2013 [Updated] - Page 66

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The indore connection..😆
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Originally posted by: sweet16cash

The indore connection..😆

indore is more known for its food 😛😆
btw i don't like KAS🥱
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indore is more known for its food😛😆
btw i don't like KAS🥱

Food like wat?? Ohhh ohkk..😛
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Wohooo pg 110..🥳. Hi5 tashu we've spammed till 110 within quite a short span..🤗.
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congo !!!
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First of all, very happy at the way this chapter ended. Thank you for clearing their misunderstanding in this chapter itself.

Coming to the update, really liked the way you showed Swayam's concern for Sharon and Deepy and Kriya and Rey. Looking forward to Kriyansh and how they will play part in the story. Also looking forward to lots of Swaron and Deepy moments at farm house.
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Well, exact 60! Not bad. I am happy! Keep it up, fella'.
Thanks everyone who liked and comment o previous chapter, i doesn't need to say more.

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Chapter # 11

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Sharon stirred in her sleep and then she tasted something on her lips, something like skin. She stirred more to move her head but she was tightly pinned in someone. Then suddenly she heard a very light beeping sound from her cell phone, indicating it is 6:00 now. She needs to wake up. She moaned being lazy and tried to open her eyes. After few attempts when she did, she saw she was snuggling into Swayam and that skin she tasted was Swayam's collarbone. She gasped and blush a deep shade of pink, and turning her ears pink too. She looked down and found herself totally caged in his arms, protectively. The best or may be the worst thing she noticed was he wasn't wearing anything like shirt! Shit, they we did that? Was the first thought come into her mind then she slapped it off. Of course, they didn't. Swayam groaned in his sleep when he felt movements from Sharon.

"Good timing. Wake up, Swayam!" Sharon said to him who has started stirring next to her. He groaned louder this time. "No, I am not hearing any excuses. Wake up and wear your shirt too!" She said and Swayam opened his eyes, looking at her totally confused. "I have my shirt on!" He lightly whisper in husky tone but then looked at himself. "Where did it go?" He asked to Sharon, "Not like I stole, naked man!" She teased him. "Sharon! Half naked! I have my pants on." He said without even thinking and Sharon turned pink, twice in single morning. There was a very cute thing about her blushing agenda that her ear and nose turns pink first then her cheeks. "Shut up. Good morning." She said and gave him a stern smile. "These two are deadly combination, I daresay!" He taunted her and earned a snap slap on his chest. "Ouch!" He faked hurt. "Get off of bed because you need to drop Deepy at school and so for that we both have to get out of this farm house sooner, considering we also have to drop Sarah our home for work." She said and pushed herself up from the bed and, his grip.

"Why women are such a pain in the ass!" He mumbled quietly. "Language!" Sharon scolded him and here he though she won't listen. Guess she have high pitch hearing machine in her body. "I am too tired, Sharon. I can't drive." He said to Sharon. "What do you mean you can't drive?" Sharon glared at him taking the place next to him, and sat again on the bed. "I don't know. I am not feeling fine suddenly." He said groaning and took a little turn as if he is in pain. "If this is your plan to sleep some more then it won't work. Is it?" Sharon asked clearing her doubts as she believed Swayam that he is really not well. Her face could show the concern. "Alright, move your hand." Sharon said bend down to Swayam who was half lying and half sitting on the bed and touched his cheeks then his forehead. "What are you doing?" Swayam tried to stop her as he was a bit ticklish but Sharon glared at him, "Shh.." She said and then touched is neck, resting her hand there for few seconds. It will be understatement for both of them that they felt something different because felt electric and ticklish, almost pleasuring currents on their skins when they touched.

"OMG, Swayam! You have fever!" Sharon almost shouted making Swayam put his fingers in his ear. "Oh lord, oh God! What do I do? What do I do?" She started pacing in room then, thinking of doing something. "Sharon, calm down!" He told her, "What? Calm down? You have fever and you except me to calm down, really?" Sharon shouted again. "Yes, because if you wouldn't then Mr. Swayam Shekhawat will turn into Mr. Deaf Swayam Shekhawat!" Swayam also shouted, but next second he pouted when Sharon glared at him. He almost sulked into the bed, like scared of his tigress. "Yes, good idea! You told me once that you have some family doctor, right? Give me her number, I will ask him to come here." Sharon jumping on a bed, searching for his phone. She punched his fist on the bed when she couldn't find it. "There it is, on your side table. You looked at the table 2 times but didn't saw a small phone, genius!" Swayam said teasing her. "Now what's his name? Shambu, Devdas, Karamdas?" Sharon started annoying Swayam, "Nope, Diana Patrick is her name!" Swayam said and winked at her.

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Sharon had called Dr. Diana even after Swayam denied for. Now they were waiting for her. Sharon had tell Deepy that she needs to skip the school today as her jiju has fever and from that time she is sitting next to Swayam. She never let Swayam even move out of bed as Sharon give this Make Swayam statue' task to Deepy. She knew no one could do better than her, as she is the example of tantrums and stubbornness. Sharon was preparing soup and salad herself for sick Swayam in kitchen with Sarah guiding her. "It's all ready!" Sharon glowed with happiness and walked towards their bedroom, holding the tray with salad and soup in her hand. She was entering in the room, smiling at Swayam who smiled back but the taunted one for her deed of sticking a honey bee next him, suddenly bell rang. Sharon kept the try next to bed and yelled, "Sarah, it must be Doctor. Take her here." Sharon said and ruffled the hairs of Deepy who was lying next to Swayam and touched Swayam's forehead which now was quiet hot. "Oh God, your fever has increased. She saw a doctor, rather a very beautiful and even a hot doctor coming inside the room. She was exposing but still she looked hot. She thought if she thinks that this doctor is hot being a girl then what about Swayam and turned to face him with a jerk! She thanked God when she didn't find him starring at the doctor.

Sharon stood and greeted the doctor, "I see! So Swayam has fever, right Sharon?" She asked eyeing Swayam. Of course she was eyeing a patient for her but then Sharon was Mrs. Shekhawat and felt like she was eyeing his husband. "Yes, he has. Check him!" She said check him' rather like she was snapping at him and Swayam looked at her, shocked. "I mean I am very worried, check him and tell why suddenly he has this fever?" She said politely after earning a glare from Swayam. It is true that a wife will always come to train's right track after getting scolded by his loving husband. Diana checked Swayam by thermometer and other stuff she had. "Well Sharon, I think he has a flue." Dr. Diana said taking her telescope from her ears. "What?" Sharon shouted in panic, startling Diana and Deepy who got closer to Swayam thinking Sharon has got angry. "Calm down, Sharon." Diana said chuckling at Sharon. "Err, I am sorry." She said and bit her tongue. "Well, it is not like don't you worry' here but he will be fine. I need to do some tests because I think it is Malaria." Diana told. "So, when you are all coming to home then so I can take the tests?" She asked. "We will be there tomorrow and I will bring him to the hospital as well, by tomorrow." Sharon said. "Then all if fine for now till we finally see what is the matter after results. Make sure he doesn't eat too spicy food!" She said.

Swayam immediately looked at Sharon, knowing now h will be eating this soup and salad for many says. "What if Sharon prepares normal food with less rather than these greenery!" He said making a puking face. Sharon glared at him and Diana laughed. "Don't worry Sharon. It's Ok, he can eat normal everyday food but with lesser spices and oil." Diana said, "Are you sure?" Sharon verified. "Yes, absolutely I am." Diana said and smiled at her. She took her doctor pad and pen from her case and wrote few medicines for Swayam, "You can eat normal food, doesn't mean you are free from medicines!" She strictly told Swayam, "Sharon, make sure he takes it or else you can shove these medicine in his throat because they are important, for health and these will also prepare his body for tests." She said. After few more important discussions she was left, not before Sharon personally thanks her for coming so long here.

She sat next to Swayam and held his hand, "Are you feeling any better?" She asked looking down at his hand. At that point Swayam noticed that she was spilling pearls. "Sharon!? What is this now? You shouldn't cry after the jerk like me." He tried to tease her and sat straight on the bed and wrapped his arm around her shoulder, taking her closer in his arms. "Sorry, I was just worried and... scared." She mildly whispered, wiping away her tears. "Oh, don't be. I am all fit and fine except this fever. I will be fine soon, I promise." He said and soothed her back. "I know. I love you Swayam!" Sharon said hugged him, hiding her face in his chest. For a second Swayam stiffened hearing those words from her. Those magical words every person crave to hear and he did. He so wanted to say he does too but he didn't. He needs to give this relationship some time to develop itself, like naturally. He knew everything is right, and he knew when all these were happening, under his nose but he didn't knew one thing, how it happened, when and where. That he was falling in love with her hard and fast and now he has fallen in love with her.

Sharon peaked at him, raising her head. "Sorry." She whispered, "Sorry?" Swayam asked back not finding any reason for her to be sorry. "I hugged you." She replied and twitched her brows, "Oh, that!" He said grinning and wrapped his arms around her lovingly, amusing her. "I thought..." She was saying but Swayam cut her off in between, "that I would mind. Nope, not even a slightest." He said and grinned at her, again. "Swayam?" Sharon asked playing with Swayam's arm. "Yes?" He asked calmly. "Can I ask you for something?" Sharon asked. Swayam confusingly smile and nodded his head, not saying anything. "Err, can you just stay in this room and not come out for few hours, if I will you?" Sharon said, making Swayam raised his head as his chin was resting over Sharon's head. "Huh, because?" He asked raising an eye brow at her. Sharon's face suddenly fell when he asked for the reason, "I knew you would ask. Let it be." She said and turned to pick tray with food, only to be stopped by Swayam who held her hand. "I am not asking because I don't trust you and I think you are going to set this farm house on fire and run away, but I am asking because I want to know if something is wrong," He assured her. Sharon smiled lightly at him. "Then be positive that nothing is wrong!" Sharon grinned at him. "So, till when?" He asked making Sharon squealed with happiness. "It's almost 8:00 so till 2:00!" She said with much more happiness.

Sharon had make Swayam gulp all the atoms and molecules down, as he likes to say to this food. Swayam was resting now waiting for clock to strike 2:00 so that he could go out of that room and tease and bit or two to Sharon and have a little laugh with Deepy, means family time. He was wondering what exactly Sharon wants to do so that she asked for 6 hours. No wonder, she is a cat-women. Very weird! That weird reminds him of Kriya. Oh, he was supposed to meet Rey and Elena today at office. Knowing Sharon wouldn't even let him step his finger out of this farm house he thought to tell Rey to meet some other time. He picked his IPhone 5 which hid dad have gifted him few months back. He always smiles whenever he sees something gifted by his dad. He was the best dad he could ask for, unlike his mom. He shook his head and shrugged all those bad thought taking place in his mind and called Rey.

"Hey, Rey," He greeted Rey on other line. He chuckled when she heard her baby sister shouting at Rey and throwing something in their house, may be vase. Oh, must be! "Yeah, right, you also laugh on me. I swear Swayam, if this little sister of yours wouldn't have pregnant that I would have hanged myself already!" He groaned earning laughter from Swayam. "You love her. You know you wouldn't have even in the worst!" Swayam said and smirked. "Oh, fine! Now come to the point. Anything urgent that you called because I am about to leave for your office, we can talk there." Rey said. "No no, nothing is urgent but I needed t tell you that you can't come because, well, I am not at home. I am at farm house and... Ok, promise me that you won't tell Kriya that I have fever and it might be Malaria or she will rip mosquitoes out from this earth. Or she will start reading 100 ways to kill mosquitoes' books rather than 100 of having a baby and that too of Kriya Singhania'!" Swayam said and both of them stopped themselves from bursting into a fits of laughter. "Alright, then I can come to the farm house." He said, "No, please don't because what I need to talk to you is something a little serious and I don't want Kriya or Sharon to know about it yet, so we will talk but after when I will be back home and too office, alright?" Swayam said. Rey agreed and after few healthy and normal chats they ended the call.

It's been 12:00 already and Swayam had tried to escape this cage like thousand of time only to end with pissed off Deepy in his room to look after him. "Why are you're here and not Sharon?" Swayam asked folding his arms on his chest exactly like Deepy. She looked at him, giving him Keep quiet' look and turned to look straight again. "Stop this You keep quiet' looks already! Why am I here, am I some physic prisoner?" He gulped down and whispered, looking straight and not towards Deepy who was not paying heed to him at all. "You can't escape to anywhere! Di has given me strict order to jump and sit on you if you try to escape." Deepy said calmly. They both were having a very exciting and stupid conversation in a very bored way. "Ok." Swayam said and sighed and not it stuck to him that what just Deepy said. "Sharon said what!?" He yelled looking at her in shocked with his mouth wide open. "To sit on you if you try to escape. She had better plans but then you have fever so she doesn't want to endanger you." Deepy said with exact same boring tone, looking anywhere except him. "And you sitting on a sick man; is safe for him! Whoa, great! My wife is turning crazy now!" He said while moving his hands in air like he was damsel in distress, sure he could relate though.

Sharon had asked for 2:00 PM in afternoon but it was 8:00 PM at night and was throwing tantrums like Deepy. He was pissed that asking for 6 hours Sharon made him stay for double of it. So not fair! He should have been there, in garden, or in his pool, with Sharon. "Argh, what am I thinking!" He mentally slapped him. He looked at the clock which strikes exactly 8:15 now. That's it! He isn't waiting anymore and beside Deepy had just run out of the room scaring that Swayam would kill her by his irritating questions. Surprisingly Sharon didn't send someone else to look after him in these 5-10 minutes. Oh, she must have forgotten. Swayam smirked and rubbed his palms together with evil laugh. He changed his dress into something at least full and ironed and stepped out of his room. Bang!




Edited by -Marium- - 11 years ago
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I know sometimes my updates seems like fillers and as if i really wasn't in mood to write while i wrote but it is nothing like that. I like keeping my story natural. Everything bad or excited doesn't come with no gap, right? Every day isn't excited or pleasing. We spend boring days as well. So i try to always try something which i could relate to the real life when i read.

Of course i can't keep the entire plot to real but i can at least give story the fell of real and life. So yeah, you guys have to pardon me if you think any update is a filler because our whole life in almost half percent filler.

Swayam or Sharon isn't super hero or not living being so that i show them like robot and keep writing something shocking or exciting in each update. For out loud, i am showing them as humans.

So yeah, review the chapter how you like it and how you don't. Please i asking one thing again don't comment like 'It's amazing, awesome, i loved it' because that makes me wonder if the person has really read or not. If you don't want to read, then don't but at least try not to make me happy with all these kind of comments and also don't give comments like summarizing the entire chapter in shorten word and in end write 'I love it'. Please, i am a writer and i know what have i written so no need to summarize in the name of commenting.

I have complaints with few of my readers and what, i have mentioned above but the rest of them are truly my heart. Love you guys! The non-complaint one and complaint once both.


60 likes and 10 pages of spamming. MUST!

Keep in mind to only start spamming when you see that almost all the readers have done with commenting. 😛


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finally mujhe time mil gaya 😆
now i can unres..
khush ho ja marium 😉


okay coming to the update
amazing update...
it was totally fantastic..
and that DR. 😆 sharon ki toh phat gayi..
her reactions were fab


you even added mosquitoes to your FF..
well done marium 👏😆
but marum please do add a little more kriyam.. i am actually missing them a lot 😭
lovely update as always...
you simply rock it.. 😃


Thank you for the PM
tune finally de diya 😆😆


update soon and do PM me
i am waiting..


PS. me first 😃
lets dance
party 🥳
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