Aarya OS- What if DISCONTINUED

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Im a new member to this forum. Im not good in Hindi.So please bear it...This is my first aarya os.In my version of story.Ayu is not kidnapped. Paridhi s given birth to baby girl and named as anu scindia. How ishita is trapped. Pls bear if any grammatical error s der...Here story goes.I've not yet planned how many parts it contains...







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Posted: 12 years ago
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surely i would like u to continue😃
will be waiting for the update😉
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Yes dear I am very much interested, please continue
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Ya nice idea we welcome it please continue your ff nd give update soon
Waiting...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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An Aarya Os-What If

PART I

Yash, returning to the home who s highly disappointed that aarti went to hospital for ayu's vacation without him and hell anger on her.On the other hand aarti who s praying to god for well being of yash and at same time driving the car along with ayu where the accident took place on the highway.Eventhough yash was hell anger on aarti who s highly possessive on her and wanna to know about her safety so he made call to her to know about where s she and while making cal to her and then only he realized the phone doesn't belong to him.(As all remember the phone has been exchanged in the office) and got confused how the phone has been changed😲.And he got now worried that something s going wrong.. At same time, making a cal to her😲 and thinking why she s not picking up the cal.(Aarti s carrying her phone along wit her because of tensed up on the accident and she s not concentrate on the cal).So he decided to trace the phone and find where s she(here yash spoke to ishita thru landline as aarti didnt pick his cal and she doesnt ve idea dat aarti carried her mob...)
On the other hand aarti reached the spot left ayu in the car ,was shocked to know such an accident doesnt take place .At same time kidnapper are there who was informed by witch.By the aarti reached the car and shocked to known that ayu is missing in the car and turned around to see that ayu s carried by some strangers and she s running behind them by calling ayu's name and hearing her the kidnappers started to run. Yash who reached the spot was shocked to see that ayu s being kidnapped by strangers(yash who is coming oppposite to that of the strangers) and came out of the car and beaten the kidnappers black and blue and got ayu from them.At the same time aarti reached the place and got ayu from yash and filled with kisses on ayu's face😭.And both yash & aarti turned around to who the kidnappers are but the kidnappers are managed to escape from the place😲.Among them one of the dropped his mob in the place.



Index
Part I 1
Promo 3
Part II 4
Part III 8
Promo 8







Sorry for shorter one... Comment pls... if any feedback !!!!!!!!!

Edited by mick89 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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If pv was shown like this instead of the hulk yash witchita we are more in joy.. mainly ayu safe and sound with aarya .but not happend like that...your thought,was super ...continue the next part...want to know how witchita caught...wat punishment aarya gave to her...
Update soon ...waitin...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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I love the first part. Like Chandu said I too want to see how Ishitha is being caught and what her punishment will be.
Please update soon. Eagerly waiting.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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even though it is short it is nice that yash atlast saved aayu from the hands of kidnappers😃😃...and even he is aware of mobile jumbling😲😃...

hope he will soon find some clues abt person who is behind all this😊😉...

nice job dear👏
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Posted: 12 years ago
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good start please do continue
waiting for the next update
update soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
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great start,,will be waiting for the next update

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