MG SS : A CURSE OR HIS LOVE part 5,6pg 11,13 nov 4,5 COMPLETE - Page 3

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Posted: 11 years ago
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loved it
it is not fatoor, it is your imaginative creation
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Posted: 11 years ago
#22
oh nice 😊
I remember this story 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
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amazing concept ...maan is a dead soul ...aur cursed geet ne punan janam liya he maan k liye now waiting for their meeeting
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Posted: 11 years ago
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part 3
nice...
cont soon dear...

PS - why part 3 alone in new thread dear?
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Posted: 11 years ago
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ITS VERY NICE STORY... I LIKE IT 😊😊😊😊😊😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
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lovely
thanks for the pm
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: spvd

part 3
nice...
cont soon dear...

PS - why part 3 alone in new thread dear?



actually di thread seems to be purana..
toh socha naye me update karun 😛
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Posted: 11 years ago
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MG SS: A CURSE OR HIS LOVE

PART 4





I know with every passing update this is getting hell boring ...

This short story is total figment of my imagination.. I don't even know wheather immortals does exist or not ..well maine nahi dekhe...



He was jerked back to the reality as he saw something going to happen..his mind his senses everything was betraying him though physically he was present but he was still lost in the dark abbeys of the fate sitting in the conference hall ..he was the most powerful man ..he was the one who was desired amongst most of the female population though none of them his background his family..he was like a big question including his existence ... his eyes were always dark having a unknown emotion.. though that unknown emotion was the loss that he had incurred in his life but was this his loss .. he had just been a doll in the hands of destiny...

Maan's monologue

Never I wanted this to happen..

Never I wanted anyone to loose for me... but she did..chahat died leaving him in remorse .. today he was still standing on the same place..he didn't died ..he was still alive though his heart had stopped beating or was it him who forced himself to have this everlasting life that too without her...

I was so lost without her ..her words still haunts me..

Sacha pyar hi tumhe muqt karega

"true love will lead you to salvation maan.."

Time changed years went but he still couldn't understand the deep understanding of those words.

TRUE LOVE ...

Yes true love the love who will even not think before dying for him... the love that will be pure and divine the words will be less to describe that pure goddess who will took him out of that love .. he was still waiting unknown to that the love he was waiting will enter and will not even let him know that it was there for him...

Chahat loved me , she died for me.. she proved that her love was pure and it took him to the brink of death ... he surrendered himself in her obsession... yes obsession , love never wants any sacrifice it never asks any favor it just knows to give .. the love that cannot think of giving can never be counted as the feeling that will made him to die with a satisfaction ...

End of monologue...

The words of his staff brought him back he looked at the person who was discussing the plans for the new housing plan.. he didn't knew what they had written still he knew everything this was the curse .the curse of his love ... he looked at the person's face and he knew what they were discussing ... the client was quite satisfied and signed the deal.. his company the empire he was establishing never lacked in anything ...

Client : will meet you in the inaugural party MR KHURANA... no emotions , his cold emotionless face said many things..he was like this ..though he was just twenty six but his words that he hardly spoke told that he knew things that they will take ages to know..

Maan : sure , mr chopra ..

He excited the conference room while his assistant followed , maan was not angry but his demeanor was enough to scare anyone..he used to talk in monosyllables , he was a enigma ..a handsome and sexy enigma.. he was a clear yet there was something that no one knew about him...

Aditya came and informed him about his meeting and schedule..

Adi : sir you are invited at the *** orphanage as the chief guest they wanted you to deliver a short speech on your success ...

Adi was waiting for his word , he knew that either he will attend or would refuse straightly ...

Maan: tell me the timings and schedule...

Hearing the details he left , knowing that today there wont be any other thing that will disturb him.. success everything around him just mocks him , success was never in his terms..it was gifted or say he was forced to live with it..

She gave him this life , chahat is responsible for all this ...

Taking his keys from the driver , he chose to drove himself to the destination that partially gave him the peace , the place was deserted , it was a wide nature screaming towards him to come to him.. yet he was helpless since the mother nature was calling him..

He dropped on his knees and roared like he never did before ..he was feeling restless..the last night have been most painful..he wanted to cry he wanted someone to soothe his burning soul.. he wanted her ..if she has given him this punishment then she can only soothe him..




Why does life seems to be painful..why cant I close my eyes forever ...leave me ..today for the first time in all these years he was hating her .. he was hating her to be reason of his grief.. why did she put him in such a heart wrenching situation...

He looked above , the heavens even choose to cry seeing his endless pain... he was there looking helpless he should have hated her..but he respected her devotion , her love .. but that was a curse ..

Did I ask you to love me.. did I asked you to die ..did I ask you to leave me... why cant you be here to endure the same pain you have put me in... what was my mistake... you destroyed me .. you destroyed me... why cant you come back...

Come back please..

He pleaded , he whimpered .. tears came but that was blood the significance of his bleeding heart ... He was drenched the blood was wiped off his face ..like it was reassuring him that this curse will be taken off..your angel will be taken to give your broken soul peace...

She rushed to the darga .. she was late ... today was the most important day of her life she wanted it to be perfect ... the way she had dreamed to be..but on the rush she was already late she had been dreaming about HIM ..that HIM who she was still unaware ... the slight flutter in her heart on the thought of him made her blush she smile and after getting ready in the pure white anarkali today , she felt that today he wanted her to wear this..she never liked white she was full of color and white just makes her feel disoriented ..she still cant believe that she left her choice of wearing and choose something that she never had till now...

He wanted to seek forgiveness for his sins..

For him it was a sin to not reciprocate the pure love ...

He walked bare foot ... this place where he shouldn't be allowed was making him feel peace he looked at the place crowed ..something made his head snapped as he looked into the other location and found something brushed with his hand .. cold or warm he didn't knew but it was the balm for his aching self... he heard someone saying something and didn't knew that he could find the relief here ..

Seeing those eyes..the way those hazels were comforting her , he knew that he can see her till eternity ..the life seems to be short but his sins made him to divert his eyes and walk past her ...

She was having a perfect scowl seeing the person , didn't even thanked her for returning his keys..maan had dropped his car keys which she returned and he just went without saying anything ...


"arrogant and dusht "

She tied the mannat ka dhaga and prayed to get that special person who was there in her dreams..she knew that now only her babaji can help her .. praying biting her lips she blushed when she confessed her feelings to the almighty ... she was the one who should have some shame but she knew that she couldn't feel ashamed only he can help her in finding HIM...

She was going when a fakir baba told her something that made her confirmed that she was on the right path he was actually her destiny , she was just worried hearing his words..

"difficult love.. difficult to attain the sacrifice he did ... "

Her eyes went teary , he was suffering he sacrificed she just wanted his comfort .. why cant he be in the bliss ..she couldn't help again asked the fakir baba making him smile.. she was indeed his destiny and she will rewrite his fate... he wont loose this time...

"why is he In pain... "

"he chose it himself .. but you will get him out of that curse "

Her eyes were having a blocked vision , the words were repeating in her mind .. why was he suffering.there was a deep ache ..without knowing him she was feeling helpless ...





Unknown to the surrounding she was going no conscious , drenched in rain...she was walking didn't saw that she will be knocked off .. the next moment she was pulled to a strong frame... his eyes were spitting fire .. she was crying and hug him in a reflex..she sobbed and sobbed ..his arms didn't know without seeking his permission wrapped around her .. she was sobbing wetting his already wet shirt .. his angel was finally in his arms ... he didn't knew when the time passed ..they stayed in each other's arms savouring the feel ...

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Next : second meeting , geet at chahat's grave


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Posted: 11 years ago
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too good
after all geet and maan met

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Posted: 11 years ago
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lovely update yaar..finally destiny is going to unite maaneet.. very sad to see maan in pain..pls cont soon..

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