kya love story hai-akpt 18 upd pg 12.

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Hello friends,it's my seconf ff.in it there will be of course ur favourite stars,so her's the list:

  • Angad-kripa.
  • Shiv-gauri.
  • kkavya-anjali.
  • Bani-jai.
  • Nikhil-ananya(anu).
  • Dev and kaajal and their respective families!!

The title here is bewaafaa-judaai and the ff itself is based on the theme of jealousy🤢,sadness,anger😡,misunderstandings😕 but at the end all end well!😆😆

# 1.

ANGAD-A

KRIPA-K

SHIV-S.

GAURI-G

KKAVYA-KK

ANJALI-AN

NIKHIL-N

ANANYA-ANU

DEV-D

KAAJAL-KAA

BANI-B

JAI-J.

Location :At a bachelor party.

N:Arrey kkavya tum to gaye kaam se,bechari Anjali!

K:Bechari kyon??mero dost ho ya uski??😡(Kkavya was getting married to anjali).

-Angad was a rockstar,had a temper sometimes and was the most eligible bachelor in town as well as Shiv(who obviously,both are played by iq khan but for the ff,they r different person).Everyone was crazy about him!.

DEV-The hot/short tempered of all.He hated paries,he hated the word love which he didn't approve for his family.Something happened with his first wife and hold his family responsible for the daeth of payal.Later kaajal came into his life and both approved something for each other but with dev sir's temper nothing was...........(ther's no ashth dhatu,sandug).

Nikhil-The owner of Front Page and kept himself busy when anu came in his life as his child's surrogate mother.He knew that anu was the one but even that he wanted to know anu's feelings towards him.

KKavya-with his mother nitya,he succeeded in convincing her mum about anjali who was a part in destroying kk's life!Anjali only wanted to take her revenge of Anjum's death.Both were getting married and the truth nedds to be omitted.......Let's see how kk will the truth and what he'll do?

Jai-Finally jai walia,who's married to bani and the angerness he has towards her!how will they be the normal jai and bani!let's wait and watch!

So,they were discussing about their life when shiv and angad came and everyone gathered around them,Both were dressed smartly and girls............😆😆

Late jai came with dev always fuming and all partied till 5 in the morning and dev was sitting in a corner drinking as usual thinking about kaajal.😆😆

# 2

Location:in anjali's room.

Everyone was chatting(kaa,anu,bani) with anjali and was teasing anjali and in their conversation,they said that kripa chaterjee uncle d) is coming along with kaya n gauri and that mahen uncle'ne shiv ke liye gauri ko choona hai'

in the morning,at the bus station,shashank was waiting for gauri and her family,gauri thought that he was her would be fiancee and in the car both were staring at each ther!

kripa also were in a train and when she reached khanna's house a red ferrari car speed up at the entrance and mud fell on kripa.

She was very angery but then sha came across with naina khanna-"tum,tum kaun ho?"

k-aunty mein kripa".

naina_oh tony,tonyyy,usko aapna kamra dikha do aur angad se kehna ke mujhe khosla ke office mein aakar mile".

kripa was shifted in the outhouse and wandering around she stubled in front of angad.

precap:what'll happen??shiv yells at gauri and dev insults kaajal.

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Posted: 18 years ago
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hey great yeaa.
it's really different from what i've about other ff,.
it's great,wow.
keep continuing.
it's like u've restarted the story and perhaps it seems that it's u the dureactor who will make the story very diferent from the true serial itself!

sorry a bit long! 😆
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Posted: 18 years ago
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my god!!!!!!!!
ur ssccchhhooooo creative yaar!!!!
keep up wid ur excellent work nd continue
by the wat the concept is excellent 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Originally posted by: eijaz-anita

my god!!!!!!!!
ur ssccchhhooooo creative yaar!!!!
keep up wid ur excellent work nd continue
by the wat the concept is excellent 👏

woww!such applause!

thx a lot yaar.

u've encouraged me a lot!😉

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Posted: 18 years ago
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thx.

u've encouraged me!😆

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Posted: 18 years ago
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hey if u like it n want me to continue then please let me know through posting here!
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Posted: 18 years ago
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sounds pretty cool!! woah, so many characters 😆 😳 ...will be lookin forward to next parts, continue soon! 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
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WELL u deserva a lot more applauses.....
now plz plz plz plz continue soon.....
am waiting
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Posted: 18 years ago
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god,i'm so happy and excited!

thxxxxx soooooo much!!
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Recap:Kripa comes to khanna house,angad made mud fall on her......after sometime,she stumbled in front of angad!!

Tony was passing by and angad said:Hey tony,yeh kaun hai??(looking quite mischievous).

tony:yeh kripa sharma hain, aapke dad ke dost Suryabant ki beti hain.kucch dino ke liye yahaan rehne ke liye aayi hain.Naina mme ne kaha hain ke use outhouse mein rehne di jaaye.

A:Hey what's ur name ?[addressing to kripa]

tony:Sir maine aapko bataya yaa tha naa??(looking puzzled).

A:arre tony dad tumhe bulara the,(tony was nodding his head saying no,but then angad winked at him and he finally understood the whole thing).

tony:oh yes sir,main abhi jaa hi raha tha ke aapne mujhe bulaa liya!

A:Maine tumhara naam pucha tha?

K:(kripa didn't know where she was,Angad the rockstar was asking her name!no she thought,Thinking that it was a dream she pinched herself n yeah she had to admit it-her favourite star.........oh god!!)

ji.ji(she was stammering)mera naam kripa sharme hain.

A-Kaun si class mein parti ho??

K-(wat!wat he's saying)-mein school nahin jaati hoon.

A-oh,haan koyi baat nahin.mein bhi to parahi mein dyaan nahi deta tha.it's ok .mein samajta houn.

k-excuse me! mein aapni college ki sabse acchi aur hoshyar student reh chuki hoon.

A-(angad thought she was sadhi-sidhi,lekin yeh to)Oh mein to samaj nahi paaya.....

Both were staring at each other when kartik called him-Angad,yahaan kya kar rahe ho??mom tumhe phone lagaa rahi hain aur toum.....phone kahaan hai tumhara??

A-Woh.....

kar-theek hai,theek hai.Abhi ke liye jaao.(karthik was going when he noticed kripa but he didn't saud anything thinking that she was a maid).

Angad left and kripa thought if she had talk to angad like that!



#2

in the car,shashank was staring at gauri and vice -versa.

kaya-didi kya dekh rahi hain aap?vahaan dekhi naa.

g-haan.

reaching at kapoor's house,they were welcomed by Nikhila.

Maya was aware of S-G's marriage and she went into shiv's room.

maya-shiv,khucch log aaye hue hain-u know middle class ke lagte hain aur(she hadn't yet finished her sentence when shiv told her)

S-aapko aur koyi kaam nahin hai kya??main bahut zarrori kaam kar raha hoon.please leave me alone....

Shiv was in a very anger mood as Mahen had scolded him as he went to a party instead of a business meeting!

A-hi shiv!wat's up??hey dude aa rahe ho naa tum,khosla ke yahaan?

S-thx buddy,marva hi diya tha-thx tumne mujhe phir se yaad dilaya-dad toh mujhe maar hi dethe iss baar!

A-it's ok.jaldi aajao.yahaan shayad bore ho jaaoon.

On the other hane gauri was thinking of shashank(she's unaware of her marriage with shiv as well as shiv).

gauri was going to the kitchen and shiv was there drinking water,gauri wasn't looking at her way and she bumped onto him and the glass fell from his hands.

S-dekhe nahi chal sakti kya.aur kaun ho toum yahaan kya kar rahi ho.

g-i'm sorry.(she said it inocently)

but when shiv is anger whatever he's grasped,he omits it out unintentionally.

S-middle-class ke log to aise hi hote hain.tum samajti kya ho.....oh yeah kappor house ko dekh rahi thi naa.lya kara zindagi mein to aisa dekhi nahi hogi shaayaad.

Gauri was really touched and weeped a lot and shiv left.

#3

dev,kaajaal and others r at radio city sitting in the conference room.

D-toh meine apnaa topic decide kar liya hai.hum log nafrat par ek show karenge jisme log apne mann ki baat hame bataan(he hasn't finished his conversation when kajjal interrupted him).

Kaa-Sir mujhe aisa nahin lagta hain ke hame iss topic par show karna chhahiyen.

D-to kiss topic par baat karni cchahiyeen.

Kaa-sir mujhe lagta hain hai ke log iss show ko acchaa nahi lage gein.hamein to pyaar par..........

dev interrupts her also and yells at her:Miss kaajal behl,tumhe lagta kya hain ke yeh duniyaan sirf pyaar par tikhi hain.nahi miss kaajal,aapko koi galaphehmi hui hai..yeah mussouri nahi hain yeh mumbai shehaar haii.aur aise bhi khucch log hain jo pyaar ke shabd se nafrat karte hain jaise ke me...........'

he was going to take his name when he stopped and said :this meeting is over for today.

everyone left,kaajal was very hurt and went to talk to her gannu bhaiya!

* Preacp:Angad and Shiv r at the meeting and both teeling each other about kripa and gauri.
* Jai is at the office and he saw bani talking to a guy(unknown).Ji fumes at bani and bani retorts.
* anjali is shown giving ransom to someone..........................
* kripa and prithvi meet each other and naina insults kripa!



So hope u like it all.

that's for today!





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