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Posted: 12 years ago

CHAPTER 27

AT THE BIRTHDAY PARTY:

Lakshmi introduces Vishnu to all her friends. Vishnu shakes hand with everyone and greets them.

The birthday girl cuts the cake and the guests sing birthday song for her. The cake is distributed to all. The DJ starts Music and everyone is invited to the dance floor. Lakshmi holds Vishnu's hand and takes him to the dance floor. They enjoy dancing together.

After dancing and having dinner Lakshmi and Vishnu say bye to her friend and exit from the party.

IN THE CAR:

Lakshmi and Vishnu are coming home from the party.

Lakshmi: Vishnu ...

Vishnu: enna Lakshmi?

Lakshmi: long drive polaam nu sonniye?

Vishnu: ippovaa?

Lakshmi: one hour polaam ...Vishnu ...

Vishnu: OK...Lakshmi...un ishtam...

He takes a U turn and changes the route.

Lakshmi: Vishnu ...

Vishnu: enna Lakshmi?

Lakshmi: nee innaikku party le en drink pannalai?

Vishnu: nee dhaane Lakshmi venaa nnu sonne?

Lakshmi: hey Vishnu ... Romba nallavan maadhiri nadikkaathe...

Vishnu: nijamaa Lakshmi...

Lakshmi: Vishnu ... Naan enna sonnaalum keppiyaa?

Vishnu: enna sonnaalum naa?

Lakshmi: sari vidu ...

Vishnu: Lakshmi... Oru relationship successful aah irukkanum naa adhule rendu perukkum konjam personal space irukkanum... illennaa possessiveness adhigamaa aayidum...

Lakshmi: nee enna solla vare Vishnu ...

Vishnu: innum konja naal poganum Lakshmi... Nee neeyaa iru... Naan naanaa irukken... Appadi irunthadhaal dhaane ... enakku unnaiyum... unakku ennaiyum pidichirukku?

Lakshmi: correct dhaan Vishnu ...

Vishnu: romba kozhaippikkavenaam Lakshmi...

Lakshmi: Vishnu ...Stop... Stop...

Vishnu: ennaachu Lakshmi?

Lakshmi: ange opposite le ice cream vandi irundhadhu ...

Vishnu: avvalo dhaana...

He stops the car. Both of them come out, cross the road and reach the icecream vendor on a tricycle. He buys the ice cream of her choice and she keeps eating as the number of ice creams she consumed goes on... Five... Six ... Seven... he stops her saying...

Vishnu: podhum Lakshmi...

Lakshmi: bayappadaadhe Vishnu ... Enakku evvalo ice cream saappittaalum onnum aagaathu...

Vishnu: podhum ... innum saappittaa thondai freeze aayittu ... pechu varaadhu... vaa polaam...

He pays for the ice cream, holds her hand and takes her to the car.

He asks her to get in but she doesn't.

Vishnu: enna Lakshmi...

Lakshmi: ippo soft music play panni inge ball dance pannalaama...

Vishnu: Lakshmi... Road le yaa?

Lakshmi: hey... Inge thaan yaarume illaiye...

He smiles and agrees. They dance on the road as music plays and enjoy being and spending time together.

After sometime,

Vishnu: Lakshmi... naalaikku Office ku leave aah?

Lakshmi: avvalo dhaan... Viswanathan Sir ... seat kizhichiduvaaru...

Vishnu: appo polaamaa?

Lakshmi: mmm... sari...

They get into the car and Lakshmi's phone rings. It's karthik...

Lakshmi: sollu Karthik...

Karthik: Lakshmi... Unga kitte key irukkaa?

Lakshmi: irukku karthik.

Karthik: OK... adhu confirm pannikkalaam nu dhaan call pannen.

Lakshmi: naanga innum half an hour le reach aayiduvom Karthik. Raji enna panraa?

Karthik: Ava thoongittaa. Naan TV parthittu irundhen. Sudden aah key eduthuttu poneengalaannu doubt aah irundhadhu. Adhaan call pannen.

Lakshmi: en kitte key irukku Karthik. Unakku thookkam vandhaa neeyum paduthukko.

Karthik: OK Lakshmi... bye... Good night.

Lakshmi: mmm... Good night.

They drive back home.

Vishnu: good night... Lakshmi...

Lakshmi: good night.

He moves towards Karthik's room and she calls him.

Lakshmi: Vishnu... oru nimisham...

He stops and asks ...Enna Lakshmi?

She comes and hugs him saying "Thank you ... Vishnu".

He is surprised and before he could react, she comes apart and goes to her room. He smiles and goes upstairs.


Chapter 28... coming soon...


CHAPTER 28


Edited by sweety16 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
oru chapter fulla VL omance vachu kalaitinga sweety..
next chap ASAP...!!

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Posted: 12 years ago
Wow... I like VL as a good friends of KR but never liked them like KR but after reading this chapter im just stunned.. Their love was magical like KR's too. I liked the little speech which vishnu gave about giving space and i liked the hug at the end.. Im in love with this story dear. Waiting for another magical update. Update soon.
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Posted: 12 years ago
VL ku thani space kuduthu avangalukum importance kuduthu irukinga sweety.
Great. Waiting for the next.
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Posted: 12 years ago
It is so nice..you have given importance to VL also..
cute part...sweety.👏
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Posted: 12 years ago
Nice chapter for Vishnu and Lakshmi.
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CHAPTER 28

THURSDAY MORNING:

AT THE DINING TABLE:

Raji comes and sits at the dining table with coffee in one hand and mobile in the other hand. She calls Karthik.

Karthik: Good Morning... Chellam...

Raji: good morning ... coffee ready... dining table ku variyaa?

Karthik: mmm... 2 minutes...

Raji: mm... OK...

Raji cuts the call and sips her coffee.

Karthik comes and sits beside her.

Karthik: enge coffee?

Raji: ukkaaru... eduthittu varen.

She goes into the kitchen and comes with coffee and sees Karthik drinking her coffee. She comes and sits beside him asking...

Raji: varadhukulle enna avasaram? Inthaa coffee...

Karthik: adhai neeye kudichikko... enakku ithu podhum...

Raji: (smiles) ... adhu sari... nee irukkiye...

Karthik: inge dhaan irukkinren kanmani... enna vendum?...

Raji: onnum venaam ... paa...

Both continue to have coffee and Lakshmi comes and joins them saying "Good Morning".

Raji: good morning Lakshmi... Iru Coffee konduvaren...

She gets her coffee too.

Lakshmi takes the coffee saying "Thanks Raji..."

Karthik: neenga pesittu irunga ... naan varen...

He goes upstairs.

Lakshmi: en di nethu party ku varalai?

Raji: avanga yaaru nne theriyaadhu...

Lakshmi: hey... ava ennoda close friend... Rajii..

Raji: sari Lakshmi... Oru thadavaiyaavadhu parthirundhaa sari... arimugame illaama neraa birthday party ku varadhu nallaa irukkaadhu Lakshmi... adhaan..

Lakshmi: appadinnu Karthik sonnaanaa?

Raji: illai ... naan phone pesittu vandha udane nee party ku vara sonne nnu dhaan Karthik sonnaan... naan dhaan varalai nnu sonnen...

Lakshmi: vittukudukka maattiye avanai...

Raji: nijamaa... Lakshmi...

Lakshmi: sari OK... nambitten...

Raji: adippaavi... Sonnaa othukka maatten nu adam pidikkure...

Lakshmi: sari vaa kilambalaam...

All of them get ready, have breakfast on the way and reach office.

Everyone becomes busy in their work whole day and return home very tired, have dinner and sleep off.

FRIDAY EVENING:

AT THE CUBICLES:

Lakshmi comes to the cubicles and sees Karthik and Vishnu working.

Lakshmi: karthik... Raji enge?

Karthik: Viswanathan sir kooptaaru nnu ponaa...

Lakshmi: naan ange irundhu dhaan varen... Ava anga illai...

Karthik: irunga call panren...

He calls her mobile and it's engaged.

Karthik: engage varudu... reception le paarunga ... phone pesittirukkaa pola...

Lakshmi: OK... enakku velai irukku Karthik... ava vandhaa naan mail anuppi irukken... adhukku reply panna sollu... Changes solli irukken adhula... Seekkiram anuppa sollu...

Karthik: mmm... Solren...

After 5 mins Raji comes to her place.

Karthik: enge ivvalavu neram?

Raji: athai phone panni irundaanga ..

Karthik: appdiyaa... Appa eppadi irukkaaraam?

Raji: nallaa irukkaaru... en kitta pesinaaru...

Karthik: mmm... OK... happy yaa?

Raji: aamaa... ippo nallaa clear aah pesaraaru... avaroda pesinadhum nimmadhiyaa irukku..

Karthik: Lakshmi mail anuppi irukkaangalaam... Reply panna sonnanga...

Raji: mmm... OK... Parkaren...

She gets on with her work.

Karthik's phone rings... he answers...

Karthik: hellooo... Appaa... sollunga paa... nallaa irukken... neenga eppadi irukkeenga? Appadiyaa ... OK... super paa... nalla vishayam dhaane... Congrats paa... appuram... amma eppadi irukkaanga? Enna sonnanga ... OK... (he continues to talk and after 5 minutes...) Oru nimisham paa...

He turns and calls Raji..

Raji: enna Karthik?

He gives his mobile to her and saying "Appaa line le irukkaaru un kitta pesanumaa".

Raji: mmm...

She takes phone from him and says..."hello"

Karthik's dad: hello.. Raji... eppadi maa irukke?

Raji: naan nallaa irukken paa... sorry ... Nallaa irukken uncle..

Karthik's dad: paravaa illai maa...

Raji: sorry uncle... ippo dhaan appaa kitta phone le pesittu irundhen .. adhe gnyaabagathule... thappaa eduthukkaadheenga... sorry...

Karthik's dad: ada enna maa ithana sorry sollure?

Raji: neenga eppadi irukkeenga uncle?

Karthik's dad: naan nallaa irukken maa... unga appaa eppadi irukkaaru?

Raji: nallaa irukkaanga... slow vaa recover aagittu irukkaanga... naalaikku thaan ICU le irundhu ward ku shift panraanga uncle..

Karthik's dad: appadiyaa...

Raji: aamaa uncle..

Karthik's dad: Raji... nee ennai Appa nne kooppidu maa...

Raji: uncle...

Karthik's dad: nee appaa nnu kooptadhu nallaa irundhadhu...

Raji: puriyalai uncle...

Karthik's dad: nee Appaa nnu kooptittu... Uncle nu sonnaa... ennamo anniyamaa thonudhu...

Raji: adhu vandhu...

Karthik's dad: thappa ninaikka venaam Raji... Karthi friends ... Vishnu, Madhan ellaarume ennai Appaa nnu dhaan kooppiduvaanga...

Raji: idhulai thappaa ninaikka enna irukku uncle?

Karthik's dad: nee marubadiyum uncle nu solre paaru...

Raji: sorry uncle...

Karthik's dad: unakku viruppam illennaa venaam vittudu maa...

Raji: ayyayyo uncle appadi ellaam illai... illai ... sorry ... inime Appaa nne koopidaren... sollunga paa..

Karthik's dad: (smiles)... good... nee appaa nnu kooptaa ennamo enakku nallaa irukku...

Raji: (smiles)

Karthik's dad: enakku promotion kidaichirukku maa... adhai sollalaam nu dhaan phone pannen...

Raji: appadiyaa paa... Congrats...paa...

Karthik's dad: thank you maa...

Raji: promotion naa idam maathuvaanga ille neenga Madras vara vaaypirukkaa paa?

Karthik's dad: aamaa Raji... Bangalore le ye vera branch ku maathi irukkaanga... Madras ku maathura chance kammi nnu dhaan sollanum.

Raji: oh...

Karthik's dad: sari maa ... nee velaiya paaru... Bye...

Raji: bye paa... irunga paa... Karthik kitta kudukkaren...

She gives phone to him and continues to work.

Karthik: mmm... sollunga paa... OK... Bye paa... (cuts the call.)

Karthik: Rajiii...

Raji: Enna?

Karthik: appa enna sonnanga?

Raji: kettukitte dhaane irundhe... appuram enna...

Karthik: nee sonnaa enna?

Raji: onnum illai... un kitta pesare maathiriye appaa nnu sollitten... thappaa ninaikkaporaarunnu... sorry uncle nu sonnaa...

Karthik: mmm.. sonnaa...

Raji: ennai appaa nne kooppidu nnu sollittaaru...

Karthik: mmm...

Raji: enna yosanai?

Karthik: appa oru maathiri hint kuduthukitte irukkaaru..

Raji: puriyalai...

Karthik: namma side thaan late... naama vishayam sonnaa YES solradhukku ready yaa irukkaaru nnu thonudhu...

Raji: over karpanai udambukku aagaathu... velaiya paaru...

Both smile and continue to work.


Chapter 29 ... coming soon...


CHAPTER 29


Edited by sweety16 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Very nice update sweety..
So K-oda appa ok sollra stage la thaan irukaaru...gud 👍🏼
sikkiram Karthik ka avunga appa ta matter-a pottu udaika vainga..
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Posted: 12 years ago
Superb update. 👏
Keep going. Continue ASAP.
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Posted: 12 years ago
I am eagerly waiting for the next episode... Please update soon...😃

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