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Posted: 12 years ago

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Posted: 12 years ago

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CHAPTER 29
IN VISHNU'S CAR:
Karthik, Vishnu, Lakshmi and Raji are returning home from work.
Vishnu: machaan... weekend outing polaama?
Karthik: idea nallaa irukke... enna Raji... Lakshmi... enna solreenga?
Lakshmi: outing aah? Enge?
Vishnu: engeyaavadhu... Naalaikku morning kilambi poyittu, Sunday evening vandhidalaam...
Lakshmi: nallaa dhaan irukkum... enna Raji nee enna solre?
Raji: unga ishtam...
Vishnu: mahabalipuram polaama?
Raji: ayyayyo...
Vishnu: enna Raji? Flash Back le thanni adichu, dance aadinadhellaam gnyaabagam varudhaa?
All of them laugh.
Karthik: en Raji bayappadare?
Raji: bayam nu illai...
Vishnu: appo Pondicherry polaama?
Lakshmi: dei... naanga kooda varanum naa thanni adikkaratha pathi maranthidu... illennaa neeyum karthik um poyittu vaanga... naanum, Rajiyum veettileye irukkom... Enna Raji?
Raji: (smiles)... mmm...
Karthik: appo nee mattum poyittu vaa daa... naanum varalai...
Vishnu: adappaavi... ippadi kavuthittiye...
Karthik: jokes apart... Raji... Lakshmi... naama naalu perum onnaa irukkara ovvoru nimishamum celebate pannitte irukkanum... enga polaam nu neenga sollunga...
Lakshmi: enakku enga ponaalum OK dhaan...
Karthik: Raji unakku?
Raji:mmm ... night stay venaam... Kaalaile poyittu night return vandhidara maathiri plan panna enna?
Vishnu: adhukku edhukku poganum?
Raji: appadi illai...
Lakshmi: appadi enge poyittu vandhida mudiyum sollu? Mahabalipuram, Pondicherry rendu idamum pakkathula dhaan irukku... aanaalum stay pannaa dhaan enjoy panna mudiyum... vera engeyaavadhu ore naal la poyittu varadhellaam mudiyaadhu Rajii...
Raji: adhu vandhu...
Karthik: enna prachanai unakku?
Raji: oru prachnaiyum illai...
Lakshmi: sari neeye sollu... enga polaamnu...
Vishnu: Raji kku Chennai suthu pakkathula enna irukkunne theriyaadhu Lakshmi... avangalai poyii...
Karthik: illa daa... nee sollu Raji...
Raji: mmm... KONE falls polaamaa?
Vishnu: adraa sakkai... Rajikku Karthik oda thaniya first time pona idathukku marubadiyum poganum nu aasai vandiruchi... appadi thaane?
Raji: appadi illai... neenga thaane night kulla thirumbi vandidaraa maathiri idam sollu nnu sonneenga... adhaan...
Lakshmi: nambittom...
Karthik looks at Raji admiringly.
Vishnu: OK... neengalum, karthi yum KONE falls ponga, naanum, Lakshmiyum Pondicherry porom.
Lakshmi: hellooo... enna honeymoon kaa porom... verum outing dhaan... enge ponaalum naalu perum onnaa dhaan porom...
Vishnu: enna Lakshmi.. ippadi sollitte...
Lakshmi:appuram?
Karthik: Lakshmi... indha idea vum nalla irukke...
Lakshmi: enna Karthik?
Karthik: pesaama honeymoon kum naalu perum onnaa polaam pola irukke... enna machaan...
Vishnu: polaame...
Lakshmi: (blushes and smiles) enna karthik... ippadi sollitte?
Raji: modhal le kalyaanam nadakkattum...
Karthik: nee irukkiye...
Vishnu: deii... thirumbavum aarambikkaatheenga... Lakshmi unakku KONE falls OK vaaa?
Lakshmi: OK thaan... last time Raji appa vukku udambu sari illaama poyi ore tension aayiduchi...
Karthik: sari.. ellaathukkum serthu naalaikku enjoy panniduvom...
Vishnu: OK... dinner enge?
Lakshmi: veettukku poyidalaam... Maid vandhu samaichu vachiruppaanga...
Vishnu: ok...
He drives home.
IN THE NIGHT:

Karthik is standing in the terrace leaning against the wall and looks lost deep in his thoughts that he doesn't notice Raji coming towards him. Raji comes and stands beside asking... " enna Karthik... balamaana yosanai pola irukku"...

He just stares her and turns the otherside.

She comes around and stands in front of him and asks..." enna aachu?"

He tries to move from there... and she takes hold of his hand and stops him.

Raji: enna Karthik? En mela kovamaa irukkiyaa?

He still remains silent.

Raji: sollu Karthik... sonnaa dhaane theriyum...

Karthik: unakku theriyaadhaa... illai theriyaadha maathiri nadikkiriyaa?

Raji: puriyalai...

Karthik: appo vidu...

Raji: sari... naa enna solli irundhaalum... unnai hurt panni irundhaa SORRYYY!!!!!!

Karthik: enna panne nnu theriyaame edhukku sorry kekkare?

Raji: edhuvaa irundhaalum... unnoda manasukku kashtamaa irundhaa ...iva oru loosu... theriyaame sollittaa appadinnu ninaichikittu mannichudu Karthik... PLEASE...

Karthik: (no reaction)

Raji moves close to him and says "ennai paaru Karthik..."

She is still holding his hand and when he looks into her eyes he couldn't take his eyes off her.

within a fraction of a second she comes still close and kisses him and says "I LOVE YOU".

He is completely surprised and overwhelmed, in the meantime... she leaves his hand and walks towards the staircase.

Only after seeing her moving away from him is that he comes out of his trance, he reaches her and hugs her saying "I LOVE YOU TOO".

Raji: kovam pochaa?

Karthik: (smiles) edhukku kovam?

Raji: adappaavii... ivvalo neram eppadi ummunnu irundhe...

Karthik: appadiyaa?

Raji: sari edhukku kochikitte nnu sollu,,,,,

Karthik: nee edhukku appadi sonne?

Raji: enna sonnen?

Karthik: modhalle Kalyaanam mudiyattum nu... appo unakku indha kalyaanam nadakkum nu nambikkai illai appadi thaane?

Raji: Karthik... en ippadi thappu thappaa yosikkare?

Karthik: appo en outing venaam nu sonne?

Raji: naan eppo venaam nu sonnen...

He doesn't answer and she continues...

Raji: enakku bayammaa irukku Karthik... namakkulla nerukkam adhigam aaga aaga chinna pirivu kooda thaanga mudiyaama aayidum. naama onnu serradhu pattunnu oru naal le nadakkira vishayam illai... kandippaa time aagum...

Karthik: puriyalai...

Raji: bangalore le irundhu appa oda call vandhadhukkappuram nee romba santhoshamaa irukke... naan appa kitta pesinadhai vachi avar namma kalyaanathukku othukkuvaaru nnu yosikkare...

Karthik: othukka maattaaru nnu unakku thonudhaa?

Raji: appadi illai Karthik... naan adhai pathi pesalai...

Karthik: vera enna?

Raji: naa avar kitta pesinadhai nee muzhusaa gavanikkalai... avar ennoda appa pathi visaarichappo ... innaikku avarai ICU le irundhu ward ku shift panraangannu sonnen..

Karthik: aamaa ... sonne... adhukku enna ippo?
Raji: ward ku shift pannaa...rendu moonu naal observation kappuram appaavai discharge panniduvaanga...

Karthik: nalla vishayam thaane...

Raji: appa discharge aana udane ... athai, mama Madras vandhiduvaanga... naa inge irundhu kilambanum nu yosichaale ennamo maathiri irukku...

Karthik: RAJIII...

Raji: unnoda irukkara entha vaaypaiyum vittuda koodaadhu nnu thaan inge irukken... intha nerukkame avvalavu baadhippu yerpaduthumbodhu... nee solra maathiri trip ellaam poyittu vandhaa piriyaradhu innum kashtam ...

Karthik: naa itha pathi yosikkave illai... pirivu nnu sollaadhe Raji... kekkave ennamo maathiri irukku...

Raji: naa antha arthathula sollalai...

Karthik: naama udal alavula pakkathula irundhaalum... aayiram kilometer thaandi irundhaalum... unakkulle irukkira ennoda manasayum, uyirayum... enakkulle irukkira unnoda manasayum, uyirayum yaaraalum pirikka mudiyaadhu... Puriyudhaaa?

Raji:(she has tears) karthik...

He wipes her tears and hugs her saying..."I LOVE YOU RAJII"

She also reciprocates "ME TOO".

Chapter 30... coming soon...

CHAPTER 30

Edited by sweety16 - 11 years ago

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joe_arhi

@joe_arhi

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#153

Emotional update...

Loved it..

Take care dear update when u r well..

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Jayanthi

@hemanthkrishna

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#154

Nice update.
So sweet. 😳

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Smiles-20

@Smiles-20

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#155

Thanks Sweety, how are you feeling now.

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sweety

@sweety16

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#156

CHAPTER 30

SATURDAY:

Karthik, Vishnu, Lakshmi & Raji set out for a trip to KONE falls. They start early in the morning and when they reach there, each of them has a flashback of memories of the last time they visited.

Vishnu remembers how Lakshmi made fun of him when he tried to say "I LOVE YOU" in different languages.

Lakshmi also remembers the same and thinks if Vishnu says his LOVE today then she is going to accept it right away by reciprocating that she too is madly in love with him.

Karthik fondly remembers the way Raji gave her hand to him, the way she spoke her heart out and finally how she fainted on his shoulder.

Raji thinks had I told him my LOVE that day itself, his birthday would have been different.

It was Vishnu who comes out of memories first.

Vishnu: flashback podhum... ellaam present ku vaanga...

Everyone smiles and look at each other.

After having the breakfast they bought with them, they decide to come back to the car for lunch and split in two ways.

KARTHIK & RAJI:

They start walking towards the falls and he takes hold of her hand.

She smiles looking at him.

Karthik: enna yosanai?

Raji: onnum illai...

Karthik: appuram en silent aah vare?

Raji: pona thadavai vandhappo nadandhadhellaam gnyaabagam varudhu...

Karthik: mmm... enakkum...

Raji: appa vukku mattum annaikku edhuvum aagaama irundhirundhaa inneram nilamai vera maathiri irunthirukkum.

Karthik: vera maathiri nnaa?

Raji: theriyalai... ore kuzhappamaa irukku...

Karthik: edhukku thevai illaama mandaya pottu kodaiyare?

Raji: Karthik...

Karthik: enna?

Raji: naan appa kitta jaadaiyaa sonna vishayam Vishnu, Lakshmi kitta sollanum ille...

Karthik: mmm... sollanum...

Raji: innaikku sollidalaaama?

Karthik: mmm... sari return pogum podhu sollalaam...

Raji steps on a stone and slips but Karthik grabs and stops her from falling.

Karthik: parthu nadakka maattiyaa...

Raji: sorry... gavanikkalai...

Karthik: enakku edhukku sorry? Naan un kaiya pidichikkaama irundhirundhaa ... Vizhundhiruppe...

Raji: mmm...

Both of them reach the falls and sit beside each other on a rock.

She holds his hand, puts her head on his shoulder and closes her eyes.

Karthik: enna Raji... tired aah irukkaa?

Raji: sh... Amaithiyaa aruviya paru...

He smiles and keeps looking at her. She opens her eyes, takes her head off his shoulder and says..." Naan ennai parka sollalai"...

Karthik: un mela irundhu parvaiyai thiruppave mudiyalai...

Raji: romba thaan...

She smiles and again rests on his shoulder; he kisses her forehead and looks at the water falls.

After a while, Raji's phone rings...

Raji: helloo... Ammaa... eppadi irukke maa? Naan nalla irukken maa. Appa eppadi irukkaanga? Appadiyaa...

Karthik looks tensedly at her and she presses his hand slightly and smiles indicating that there's nothing to worry. He also smiles and holds her hand more tightly.

Raji: hello... appaa... eppadi irkkeenga? Naan nallaa irukken paa... naanum Lakshmiyum kadaikku vandhirukkom paa... sollunga... yaaru? Ennavaam... oh... mmm sari paa... neenga udambu parthukkonga ... naan vachidaren...

She cuts the call.

Karthik: ennachu

Raji: onnum illai ... periappa naan varalaiyaa nnu kekkaraaraam...

Karthik: Oh..

Raji: sari oru paattu paaden...

Karthik: ingeyaa... venaa

Raji: en?

Karthik: inge paattu paadinaa thoongittu irukkira miruganga ellaam ezhundhu odi varum...

Raji: ayyayyoo... appo venaam..

Both laugh and he looks at her admiringly.

Raji: enna parkare?

Karthik: nee intha dress la romba azhagaa irukke..

Raji: nee vaangittu vandhadhu thaane...

Karthik: aamaa... adhukku thaan nee oru thanks kooda sollalaiye...

Raji: naan appove sonnene..

Karthik: enna?

Raji: thanks nu...

Karthik: sari vidu...

Raji moves closer to him, kisses on his cheek and says "Thank You".

Karthik: (smiles) I LOVE YOU Raji...

Raji: (smiles) me too...

VISHNU & LAKSHMI:

Vishnu and Lakshmi are walking through the slopes of the woods and it was like they were trekking.

Vishnu: Lakshmi...

Lakshmi: enna Vishnu?

Vishnu: naama marubadiyum inge varuvom nu ninaikkave illai Lakshmi...

Lakshmi: naanum ninaikkale Vishnu...

Vishnu: Lakshmi... Naan onnu sonnaa kochikka maattiye...

Lakshmi: enna Vishnu?

Vishnu: Lakshmi... Nee romba azhagaa irukke...

Lakshmi: enna Vishnu... Comedy panriyaa?

Vishnu: comedy yaa...

Vishnu keeps quiet and thinks that now he should remain silent until Lakshmi speaks. She notices this and pretends to be unaware of his silence.

Lakshmi: Vishnu...

Vishnu: enna Lakshmi?

Lakshmi: konja neram ukkanthukkalaam Vishnu... enakku kaal valikkudhu...

Vishnu: OK... inge ukkaaru Lakshmi...

Both of them sit on a flat rock.

Lakshmi: enna Vishnu silent aah irukke?

Vishnu: appadi ellaam onnum illai Lakshmi...

Lakshmi remembers the way he proposed previously and laughs.

Vishnu: Lakshmi... Ippo edhukku sirikkare?

Lakshmi: onnum illa Vishnu... edho gnyaabagam vandhuchi..

Vishnu: Lakshmi...

Lakshmi: enna Vishnu?

Vishnu: malarum ninaivugal dhaane?

Lakshmi: mmm hmm...(smiles)

Vishnu: poi solladhe Lakshmi...

Lakshmi: enna venum daa unakku?

Vishnu: Lakshmi... Ennai kalyaanam pannikkariyaa?

Lakshmi: maatten...

Vishnu: (disappointedly) Lakshmi...

Lakshmi: enna Vishnu?

Vishnu: nadikkaadhe Lakshmi... Unakku ennai pidikkumaa illaiyaa?

Lakshmi: enna daa venum unakku?

Vishnu: badhil sollu Lakshmi... Ennai pidikkumaa pidikkaadhaa?

Lakshmi: pidikkaradhu vera... kalyaanam pannikkaradhu vera...

Vishnu: Enna vera?

Lakshmi: ippo naan enna sollanum nu ninaikkire?

Vishnu: mmm... Adhaiyum en kitteye kelu...

Lakshmi: dei... loosaa daa nee? Ippadiyaa propose pannuve? Po daa... idhukku pona thadavai vandhappo sonna "I LOVE YOU" evvalavo better...

Vishnu: naan enna sonnen?

Lakshmi: I love you nnu

Vishnu: THANK YOU Lakshmi... I love you too...

Lakshmi: dei...

Vishnu: Lakshmi... Bayappadaadhe naan unnai kazhatti vida maatten... kandippaa kalyaanam pannikkuven...

Lakshmi: adappaavi... naan edhuvume ennai pathi sollale...

Vishnu: chellaadhu... chellaaadhu... Nee thaan I love you nu sonne... naan othukittu OK sollitten...

Lakshmi: naan onnum sollalai... Nee pona thadavai vandhappo sonniye nnu ...

Vishnu: Lakshmi... Serious aah kekkaren... Ennai kalyaanam pannikkariyaa?

She keeps quiet.

Vishnu: nee ippo badhil sollalai nnaa life le eppavume naan unnai idha pathi kekka maatten... unakku pidikkalai nna thayangaama NO sollidu... kadaisi varaikkum nalla friends aah ve irundhiduvom...

Lakshmi: dei oru nimisham yosikka time kodu daa... ozhungaa propose pannale... Romantic aah love sollale... aana ayya vukku kovathai paaru... sari nalla friends aah ve irundhiduvom... enna?

Vishnu: enna Lakshmi... ippadi sollitte...

Lakshmi: pinne... mavane en kitta un vilaiyaattai vachikkaadhe... podaa nnu poyikitte iruppen...

Vishnu: ippo enna solla vare? ... avvalo thaanaa?

Lakshmi: dei... naama love pannaalum, kalyaanam pannaalum, yen... thathaa, paatti aanaalum basic aah nalla friends aah iruppom nu solla vandhen...

Vishnu: Lakshmi...

Lakshmi: enna?

Vishnu: ore oru thadavai sollen...

Lakshmi: un style le sollavaa...

Vishnu: en style aah? Sollu paappom...

Lakshmi: Vishnu maama... Vishnu maama... I love you maama... (and she blushes)..

Vishnu: me too... (laughs)...

Chapter 31... coming soon...

CHAPTER 31

Edited by sweety16 - 11 years ago