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Posted: 12 years ago
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Taarey:Night Club
hey guys thanx for the comments for my first os.I am back with another os hope u like it.Sorry for the mistakes .

Rey and Taani are in a relationship.Rey is a singer a Taani is a fashion designer.Rey takes Taani to a club to cheer up her mood cause since 2 days she is upset for an unknown reason.Its not that he did not ask her,infact he asked several times but everytime he wud ask her instead of giving a reply she wud hug him tight and start crying.He cannot see tears in her eyes so he wud let it go.

In the car

Taani was constantly looking out of the window .Rey noticed it and was worried cause she always enjoyed drives wid him and never sat quietly.When they reached the club Rey went to park the car.When he came back he saw her sitting at the the bar table he again got worried as she wud always dance in the club and wud never sit for a moment .He walked towards her in the mean time a goon came to Taani.
Goon:hey sexy
Taani:excuse me
Goon:excused babe
Wanna dance
Rey got angry seeing this he come the Goon😡
Rey:excuse me she is my gf
Goon:no prob we will share her
Rey got really angry and hit him hard on his nose and it started bleeding😡
Goon hit Rey on his nose it started bleeding Taani got worried and came between them the goon was going to punch Rey but he bymistake punched Taani😡
Her lip started bleeding Rey got angry and started beating the man the man fell down Taani took Rey towards the car he drove to her home.:
Taani went inside and sat on the couch wid her head on her lap.😭
Rey tried to talk to her.
Taani:I don't wanna talk to anyone .
Rey came up wid an idea and started singing Taani's favourite song.

Rey:Dil hote jo mere seene mein do
Doosra dil bhi main tumhe deta todne ko

Hosanna..Hosanna..Hosanna
Ho..Sannna...Hosanna..Ho...

Dilkash thi woh shaam pehle pehal
Jab ke tumse mili thi nazar
Aisa chakraya ki ab ye na jaanu
Ke jaaun tto jaaun kidhar
Hosanna tum samne thi pal
Hosanna Agle hi pal thi ojhal
Ab kya bataaun main
Kis haal mein hu main
Yahaan-wahaan bas apna dil aur hosh dhoodta hu main

Hosanna.. (Madhoshi deewanagi)
Hosanna.. (main aur teri bandagi)
Hosanna.. (ab hai yehi zindagi)
Hosanna..

Everybody wanna know be like be like
I really wanna be here with you
Is that enough to say that
We are made for each other is all that is Hosanna true

Hosanna... be there when you are calling i will be there
Hosanna... feeling like my life's changed
I never wanna be the same..
Its time we re-arrange i take a step
you take a step and me calling out to you

Hellooo... Hellooo... Hellooo ooo
Yooo Hosanna

Ho..sanna...ooo...

Udti hui titli ki rangeen parchhaai reh jaati hai phoolon mein
Waise hi tum ek tasveer ke jaise chhaye ho inn aankhon mein
Hosanna, Tum jo mera khwaab ho
Hosanna, Dil kyon na betaab ho
Kahoon to kya kahoon
Main kyun deewana hoon
Tumhare baare mein hi har ghadi main sochta hoon kyun.

Hello.. Hello.. Hello...
Hosanna... (ab din ho ya raat ho)
Hosanna... (dil chahe tum saath ho)
Hosanna... (bas haathon mein haath ho)
Hosanna...

Dil hote jo, mere seene mein do
Doosra dil bhi main, tumhe deta todne ko


Taani started crying.😭
Rey got worried he sat on his knees and cupped her face
Rey(wid tears):hey why r u crying okay u don't wanna talk to me don't
He by mistake kept his hand on her wound.
Taani:ahh
Rey:sorry wait I will get the first aid box
Taani stops him and hug him tightly he hugs her back
rey:it's okay
Taani:I love u
Rey:I love u too

INDEX
Part 1-Above
Part2-Pg2
Part3-Pg4
Part4-pg6

Plz ,my other os 1st aaniversary
Edited by sarry_taarey - 11 years ago

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raddhi thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Luvly dear but y is taani avoiding
Rey n is quite quite confuse
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Posted: 12 years ago
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lovely update,
but a little confused why is Taani upset and avoiding Rey
you should continue to explain
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Will surely write part2 .If anyone has any idea plz suggest me!! 😕
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Posted: 12 years ago
#5
Awesome os
keep writing more :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
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nice
but what is the secret behind taani's bad mood
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Posted: 12 years ago
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nice.. but pretty confusing !
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Posted: 12 years ago
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it was sweet n short os !!
bt y is taani upset ...??

nyways keep writing :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Part -2 THE REASON
Rey:Hey calm down and tell me what happened
Taani:Rey 2 weeks back i met Kriya in the market😭

Flashback

(Kriya stops Taani)
Kriya:Hey u are Taani right?Rey's Girlfriend?
Taani:yeah.Kriya?
Kriya:Yeah.I have been looking for u since past 1month.
Taani:Why?
Kriya:I wanted to tell u to stay away from Rey
Taani:Why?
Kriya:Cause i love him and he is only mine
Taani:But he does not love u.U left him
Kriya:I was forced to do so.Stay away from him or i will kill u and ur family

End of flashback
Taani:I did not take all this seriously but last week when u were in London for ur concert dad met with an accident,he was hit by a car😭.(P.S-Taani is not an orphan,her sister and her parents live in Pune)when i went there i got a call from an UNKNOWN no.
Flasback
Taani:Hello who is it?
Kriya:Taani how can forget me so easily.
Taani:Kr..Kriya😲
Kriya:Yes darling.I think u did not take me seriously see cause of u what happened to ur dad.Its still not late stay away from Rey and mind u Rey shud not get to know abt all dis.
End of Flashback
Rey:shit.Thats why u did not tell me anything and was ignoring me?
Taani:(nods her head in yes)Rey i am scared i don't know wat to do.😭
Rey:(cups her face)Don't be scared sweetheart I have a plan.

PRECAP-Execution of plan.Taani gets a shock


Edited by sarry_taarey - 12 years ago
raddhi thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Wow now dis is interesting
Awsm hate tht kriya but luv tht
Taarey r together awsm per-cape
Awsm n bit shocking

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