GEET (NEW CHAPTER) updated @pg 12- OS

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Posted: 12 years ago
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It was 4 years . Raghu was still don't believe that antara has left him on their marriage day beacuase he is unknowingly killed his father .but he don't stop her or goes behind her because he himself has not forgiven himself
at Mami house
ishann- mami didi aayigi . maine pure maharastra mein class 10th mein top kiya hai. maharastra sarkar mujhe inaam dene wale hai aur mein chahta hoon mere pura parivar mere saath ho. lekin kya didi...
mami- ishu sab theek ho jayega. mujhe yakeen hai antara zaruur aayigi
ishu- aise ho mami . pata nahi didi Raghu bh ko kab maaf karigi . chalo mami mein Raghu bh ko is inaam wala baat bata kar aata ho
machmach garge
ishaan- Raghu bh who mere ko
Raghu- inaam de raha sarkaar. pata hai mujhe . kya lagta hai tere ko mujhe kuch pata nahi hai. sab khabar rakhta hoon
ishaan- lekin pata nahi didu aayigi ki nahi
Raghu- jahan tak mein zanta ho Ms. kaul ko who zaroor aayigi. usne hamesh apne parivar ke liye hi jiye hai. kaash mujhe ek baar aaf kar de jaise tumne aur aunty ne maaf kar diya
ishu- Raghu bh aap galat nahi ho apse galti hui hai anjane mein lekin aap guneh ghar nahi ho. aap chinta mat karo didu zaroor apko maaf kardegi
machmach- mein bhi yahi chahta ho ki yedi bhai ko maaf kar de .
suddenly taxi stopped in front of mami house. all three luked there
one little sweet girt age 4 come down and run towards the garge.
suddenly one sound come get come back
she come out and Raghu saya- MS. Kaul
yes she was antara wearing white colour saari and seeing towards that girl and shouting geet wapas aa jao
geet- ishu mama kaise ho
Raghu and machmach was shocked to hear "ishu mama"
ishu- geet kaise hai meri jaan . tumne bataya koi nahi ki tum aane wali ho
geet- mama mummy ne kaha ki who surprised dena chahti hai isliye maine nahi batya kal raat mein
antara come to garge and had a eyelock with Raghu (mahi miment)
antara control herself and says- geet agar tum aise badmashi karo gi tu aaj hi mein wapas Kashmir chali jao gi
geet- mummy ab aap akele jao mein to ishu mama aur dono nani ke saath yahi rahogi
antara asked machmach- machmach kaise hio
machmach- mein thik tu bata harek saal rakhi bhejti thilekin koi pata nahi bheji ki mein tumhe gift de sako aur yeh baachi tumhari hai tumne shadi kar li
ishu - arrey nahi yeh tu...
antara- ishu chalo ghar chalte hai
ishu took geet and they move towards home
machmach- bhai tu thek hai na . koi nahi agar yedi ne shadi kar li to kya tu bhi tu uski khushi chahta tha na
Raghu - hide his tears and said aaj bhi ms. akul waise hi aur uski beti bilkul uski tarah hai and he left the garge.
in night
Raghu was at terrace and suddenly he felt little hand on his face.
he open his eyes and see geet was standing there
Raghu- arrey tum yahan par
geet- haan mein yahan par chupne aayi ho mummy mujhe milk puilana chahti hai and I don't like it
Raghu- lekin tum milk nahi peeyogi tu tum stron kaisi bano gi apni mummy aur papa jaise
geet- mummy to stron g hai lekin maine kabhi papa ko dekha nahi. mummy kehti hai papa hum sab se bahut door hai.
Raghu in surprised and about to ask some thing suddenly he listen her voice yes its antara voice
antara- geet , geet kaha ho pls aa jao samne .milk time hai
Raghu come to the edge of terrace and see her.
antara also feel that raghuis seeing her so she turn arroud and see Raghu .
suddenly she see that machmach is having geet in his arm.
geet- mummy mein yahanupar ho uncle ke saath aap yahan aa jao
antara- nahi geet neeche aao aur milk khatam karo
geet - nahi mummy Kashmir mein bhi akele rakti ho aur yahan bhi . nahi mujhe accha lag raha hai uncle ke saath
machmach- yeh yedi upar aa na bhow koi kha rahi hai. chal upar aa aur geet ko le jaa
antara don't want ot do but she knows that all three machmach Raghu and geet are ziddi. so she decided to go up
Raghu- to geet tumhare mummy kyakarti hai
antara given her luk but she control herself.
geet- mummy subah school jati hai aur sham ko ek hotel mmein gaan gati hai. issey hame paise milta hai aur phir mummy mujhe saare chee kharid deti hai
machmach- koi tere papa kuch kamata nahi hai kya. koi re yedi tera pati kya karta hai
geet- ohoo uncle papa to hai hi nahi na
machmach- matlab to tu kahan se paide hui
geet- mummy kehti hai ki antara aur mukhde ke Milan se mein paida hui yani ki geet
Raghu was shocked to listen this lien.
antara got panic and took geet into her arm and leave the terrace
machmach- bhai kuch to loacha hai . geet agar antara ki beti ahi to uska baap kon hai
Raghu - mein samaj gaya geet meri beti hai . haan machamch geet meri aur antara ki beti hai...
hope guys u all hv liked this os. agar accha laga to pls cmnt and like karo so dat I can continue with 2nd part
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Posted: 12 years ago
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do continue with the next part soon.
i just loved it
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Haay kya story hai plz plz plz plz plz update today asap 😳 😳
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: richurachna

antara aur mukhde ke Milan se mein paida hui yani ki geet


This line made me cry 😭 This is so beautiful... absolutely loved it !!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Hey dear
Love the OS
wow,Geet
wt a sweet name
I lyk it 😉

plz continue soon
Take care

Geet
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Hey loved it pls do continue..:)<3
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Posted: 12 years ago
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thank u all of u tom i will update second part
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Posted: 12 years ago
#8
very intresting dear plz continoue
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Posted: 12 years ago
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DO CONTINUE SOOOn ...it was fabulous ...it was sad but tragedy me bhi maza hai ...beautifuly written ...geet perfect name for the princess of Raghu n Antara ... hat off to you ...grttt job done ..luv u
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Posted: 12 years ago
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me too loved it...plzzz continue

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