MG SS~VEIL LOVE~ Part 10, pg-80@9Feb2014 - Page 44

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Originally posted by: Thesaurus

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really happy yaar.
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@tumhari dp bahut hi hot & mysterious lagti hai mujhe.
mysterious red lady...
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Originally posted by: Thesaurus

@tumhari dp bahut hi hot & mysterious lagti hai mujhe.
mysterious red lady...



lol😆
seriously i am mysterious
girls hearts r deeper than ocean
just simple i like it and put it
red and black is my fav that's y
sorry for late commenting my internet dead today
every time i say dona
now today is my turn
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may be i can't update today
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Part 8

In this University people are from different country, culture so there is no restriction on the dress code. Khushi parked the car respective parking and they got down.

Annie's dress


Annie is little bit trendy, but in reality she is very shy in talking with boys. Actually she had a big crush on Arjun, she knows he also like her but she is waiting for Arjun to come ahead first 'why should I tell first, he is a boy he have to tell first' her girl's ego.


Khushi's dress


Khushi is simple yet stylish; she is free open-minded because everyone knows she is marked by Arnav means she is married'.

Geet dress


Geet's Abaya is not the loose one like olden day, she is modern century girl, so with everything goes on with recent perception, and it will be tight fitting with her body. Abaya is embroidered with golden color. Her shoes and handbags always matched with the embroidered Abaya colour. Every time her Abaya will be different and fashionable.

And Abaya is not a big deal, where anybody can wear it; most important of her dress is 'Veil'.

'Veil!

Yes Veil!

Her full face is veiled and only her mesmerizing hazels are visible. Only because of this veil entire university she is known as 'Veil Girl' not by her name 'Geet'.

Her only motto is she came here for only 'study'. With her attire everyone believes that she is very calm, timid, reserve.

Her real appearance u will know only from the boys'.

Yep boys!

Although she is fully covered but her style, talk, walk elegance she holds a different kind of aura, where nobody failed to notice. Boys had tried their best to flirt with her but she is Geet only Geet' No chance' everyone failed.

But after with Arjun' incident, boys only maintain their distance because of her bold nature. Not only bold thousands of times they will think before talking with her.

And according to 'girl' perception except Annie and Khushi she is arrogant, brilliant, moody, selfish, overconfident etc. etc.'

'Chale' Khushi point to the entrance of uni.

'Hmm' Geet nodded

'Guys u go I will come after 5 mins still there is time to begin the class, plzzz' Annie pleaded

'Ok as ur wish' Khushi agreed

'No way' Geet gave angry glared to Khushi 'u r also taking her side'

'She is already damaged, what else is there to damaged' Khushi smiled and turned to Annie 'and u what is there ogling from far, just go and tell him that u like him' she suggested it is as just a matter of fact.

'Huh! It is not that easy' Annie stunned 'What he will think of me, that I am such a characterless girl, and I don't want to show I am dying for him, and moreover he is my weaknesses, it is his responsibility to tell me first, I will never tell him and that's it'

'Whoa! Where is ur character when u r checking out from far' Geet taunted with a cheesy smile 'and did u 4get that first day ragging incident, or you want more'

Khushi came to halt or this will never end, Annie like Arjun crazily and Geet don't want to understand she think Arjun is not suitable for her 'ok Geet plz, leave this topic here, come to class, honey, plzz'

Geet give up and said with grumpy tone 'Ok'

Khushi dragged her to the entrance and turned back to give look to Annie go-on and she will be f9' she smile give a flying kiss 'love u guys'

Both entered the uni gate.

At the moment Maan and Arjun both enter the university parking with their respective cars and parked their usual place.

Maan appear from the car, fixing black shades here girls r dying for 1 look and here he is hiding his orbs behind shades, holding iPhone in his hand he closed the door.

Annie is staring at Arjun when he books slipped from her hand Arjun came running to help out her. After helping her Arjun joined Maan she came out she is trying to get 1 sneak peak of him and acting she is busy in her mobile and suddenly all is cursing her that was so good opportunity to thank him but she could utter a single word I could have at least said thanks, but it won't come out of my mouth, what happen to me when he comes near I got tongue tied, fool, u lose such a good opportunity' she thought now what! Go to class'.

Maan is staring at Arjun and shook his head what?

'She looks good, isn't it?' Maan remarked.

'Hmm' Arjun smiled unintentionally suddenly his brain clicked and shouted making him deaf 'WHAT? DO YOU LIKE HER?'

Maan closed his eyes with irritate and muttered 'What The 🤬 !!'

'I knows she isn't your type'Arjun muttered 'but if veil girl ever comes to know that I like her than my death is certain for sure'

'What! What did u say? Something about Veil' Maan just faintly hears what he muttered.

'No! No!' he stammered 'Na... Nothing at all'

Maan shrugged off and ignite the cigarette start walking through the campus; it has become his habitual for him every day finishing in 5 min it before entering the building.

'Hey Maan' a girl called out Maan waved him and greeted him; he just nodded 'what r u doing now?'

'Heading for class' he gave straight forward answer

'Actually my class got cancel, I was thinking for long time we don't have talk, so ...'

Maan interrupted her' I can't this is important class; I am free after 12' throwing the cigarette stomping on it and move into building.

Arjun observed Maan, he had lot of GFs in his life, just for fun or either his so called Khurana image to showing off 'Sometime I wonder what made you get engaged with Sameera' Arjun knows very well sameera doesn't belong to any category as a his GFs and further as a life partner never.

'There is nothing to wonder, it's my decision' he spitted out 'can't you just stop reminding that topic again again' he entered the class.

~~~Flashback~~~

Two day before engagement when he came know that his father fixed alliance with Sameera without his consent. He directly disagreed with the proposal.

'I am not going to engage with that girl, and marriage is far away' he seethed angrily to his father 'and how could you fixed the proposal without my consent'

'I am not asking your permission; here I came to know you my decision' Armaan enforced his decision and left from there.

'Do whatever u want but this is never gonna happen' Maan looked at his mother pleading, she is the last hope may she will disentangle him from such jeopardy 'Mom, I am not going to marry that girl, please make him understand'

'Maan, what is my importance in your life?' Ayesha asked him

He frowned at her question 'what kind of question is this?'

'Just give my answer'

'Everything! U r everything, for u I can do anything' he replied honestly, for him mom is first than anything else.

'Do as your father says' her one answer make him flabbergasted, he thought at least his mom will be take his side.

May be he would never approve if this was only his father but for him his mother decision was 'pattar ki lakir' even God comes and tells him change the decision he will never change.

~~~Flashback End~~~

Usually after finishing the classes Maan is standing outside food court with his friend keeping him busy in chitchat, and trying his best forget about that incident what happen in cultural function, he console his heart and mind that was just an hallucination, nothing else. While entering inside the food court Arjun asked Maan whether he want to give company with him. He really prefers outside rather than inside because of two reasons that is inside the food court he can't smoke and outside nobody has dare to stop him.

Boys are busying who is going on with whom and who got broke up with their GFs Maan is least interested in that.

'How much you try to grab her will slip from your hand like water; that Veil girl unreachable so stop attempting' one of boy said to other

The one word was enough to gain attention of Maan 'Veil girl'

'If I am not wrong, did u just say veil girl' ' he asked them & they nodded their head 'in the morning also Arjun is blabbering something, so what's so mystery in that girl name' he raised his two index finger showed them in inverted comma "Veil girl"

'Why don't you ask Arjun? He knows her better than us' few chuckled, Maan finds something dubious Arjun knew and he still unknown about the girl.

Somebody elbowed each other to keep shut their mouth off. 'Just stop nagging and come to straight point' Maan glared angrily

One of them said him 'she is other creation only, mean she is fully covered in veil only eyes are visible'

'Why not boys head-over-heels over beautiful girls, huh? Other said 'and she is not your type'

'Who is MSk type or not that's only decided by MSK only' Maan said in attitude

'I dare you MSK She won't give a single look, and moreover she is warning!'

'Really, than I would love to meet warning' Maan is adamant like kid ''let see, how you don't give look' he smiled at his thought and lighted one more cigarette.

*****

Here Geet just emerge from the library one hand book and other hand holding the phone 'Uffo! I am coming'

'Come fast, I am famished, if you don't come in a minute than I will start eating without you' saying that directly Annie cut the call.

Geet is looking at mobile at amaze 'how someone can eat so much?' Actually her favorite place is library where she can live with her beloved books, she hate outside especially outside the food court because of smell of cigarette. She starts walking quickly looking down to her destination to the food court.

'MSK your wish is granted, there she is' Maan turned to look pointed girl, still in his eyes a vague appearance with black veiled and books in hand approaching to his direction. He twisted his lips with an attitude smirk and turned to his friend make eye contact with them just-wait-and-watch.

'What?' Arjun shouted in disbelieve

He come to know about Maan's bet that he is going to mess with the veil girl. He just ran out to stop him from messing with that girl. Before he could reach there was big bang' with Maan and Geet and direct they landed to principal office. I didn't expect this from you' Maan's dad said to him. Dad, I didn't do anything, it's everything done by Arjun' Maan defended himself. Arjun O' expression and muttered me, when I did, even I don't know'. Arjun's father came with them I know, iss nalayak nahi hi kuch ki hoga[I know, this idiot had done something] and give one slap to Arjun. Maan chuckled.

Sudden jerk on Arjun's shoulder by his friend realization hit on him 'where have been you lost?'

He start rubbing his cheek and thought messing with the veil girl totally fiasco' Oh no, if this this slap turns into reality, for sure will turn reality show and my cheek, NOOO! Arjun go and stop him before he do something stupid' and he run out in hurry to stop Maan.

As soon as possible Arjun reached their Maan shoot out quite loudly feigning that he is talking with friend actually indicating to veil girl 'I don't understand people caliber, when they so much hesitancy with the co-education, why don't they send their girls to some girl's college, on the top they are sending here and showing off with veil and all, when they will stop their bigotry?' he smirked


Everyone chuckled at his words.

'Margaya, Arjun jaldi se kat-le yeh se' Arjun mumble the word [Damn, just run away from here, Arjun]

Coincidentally, Geet hazel met with Maan.

*****

Precape -Few past Memories😳 + clash between Maan and Geet 😉

If you want you to read or otherwise ignore it.

*I want to acknowledge the Annie character had taken from real person (she is not interested to reveal her name) According to other character I made little change, but I tried to keeps her dialogues almost same. khsuhi's dialogues are mine lol ok guys, don't take everything serious . And Geet's character is totally my imagination even doesn't exit that person. So some are reality, some are my imagination some of my experienced.

* Warning: "Smoking Seriously Harms You and Others Around You"

Disclaimer: This is just a fiction. Any names, characters, occupation and places of residence, incidents are all my imagination. Any resemblance to any profession, any similar scene to any other fiction or actual events is purely spontaneous.

Edited by fatima_FM - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
awsum update
luvd it
waiting 4 their meet
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Posted: 11 years ago
superb updt

I have to go rajasthan for 8 days so I will not be able to comment
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Posted: 11 years ago
superb
every one is fearing to mess with veil girl
witing for maan-veil girl meeting😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
part 8
awesome...
lovely...
Geet is so strict...
and Arjun's thoughts and doings are funny...
so Arjun and Geet have had a tiff...
cont soon...
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Superb update...
Loved it...
Waiting fr maneet clash...

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