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Originally posted by: spvd

yep dear Dev deserves this for sure...hes too good...

OK! Sorting through the second thread for wishes right now! Once I go through all the reviews till now I will post this small scene!
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CHAPTER 57. AND THEY MEET!

 

 

 

Place - Anjali's Room In Shantivan

 

     "Hello! Khushiji! Kaisi hai aap? Laxminagar theek thaak pahunch gayi? Buaji kaisi hain?", spoke Anjali into the phone while making baby faces in front of Kanha who giggled at her expressions. She listened for a while and then mumbled, "Hum kya keh rahe the Khushiji? Kya aap thodi der ke liye yahaan aa sakti hain? Woh kya haina Naaniji chaahti hai ki hum unke khaandaani gehnon me se ghar ki bahuon ke liye ek ek set chune! Lekin humein na Lavanyaji ka taste pata hai aur na Paayalji ka toh aap aake zara humaari madat kar dijiye na! Please!" She listened for a while and then replied back excitedly, "Thank you Khushiji! Aapne aane ke liye haan kehke humaari ek tension kam kar di!" She cut the phone and tickled Kanha, "Suna tumne Kanha? Khushiji aa rahi hain!" Suddenly, someone came and hugged Anjali from behind. "Arre! Chali Office ko?", enquired Anjali. The person who was none other than our Geet nodded. Anjali frowned, "Parso hi aayi ho aur aaj se Office?" Geet pouted, "Aaj se kahaa AD? Kal se! Aaj toh bas introduction hai! Aur waise bhi AD itna achcha chance main khona nahi chaahti! After all mera sapna poora jo ho raha hai!" Anjali smiled as she remembered Geet's dream. She turned around and kissed Geet's forehead, "Vijayi Bhav Babyji!" she spoke in a mock traditional accent and Geet smiled and thanked her.

 

 

 

Place - Khurana Constructions

 

     Dressed in red colored sleeveless embroidered Chudidaar and holding her bag in her hand, Geet entered the premises of the company nervously. Even though she had spoken to Dev Singh Khurana pretty confidently few days back that she can join immediately the next Monday even though she landed in India only on Saturday, now she wished she had taken few days' break. The whole atmosphere of the company seemed to intimidate her.; people running around in hurry, tenders being discussed, all this was unnerving her. Her whole life she had dreamed of joining KC, but now that the day had come she was totally scared. She took a deep breath. "Chal Geet puttar", she mumbled to herself, "Tera sapna tere saamne hai! Poora kar le! Tu Arnav Singh Raizada ki behen hai! Darr jisse door bhaagta ho uski behen ek Office se dare! Nahi! Geet Handa darpok hogi par Geet Manohar Raizada nahi!" She nodded in determination and took a step ahead. Then her nervousness reared its head again and she looked up, "Bacha lena Babaji!".

 

    Geet walked towards the receptionist, "Ji mera naam Geet Raizada hai! Main yahaan Dev Singh Raizada se milne aayi hun job ke silsile mein!" The receptionist who was eating burger looked up and Geet felt a smile come on her face, "Pinky?", Geet exclaimed just as the receptionist shouted, "Geet!" They grinned at each other and Pinky came from behind the counter and hugged her. They exchanged pleasantries and then Pinky asked, "Par tera naam toh Geet Handa hai na toh Geet Raizada kaise? Shaadi karli hai kya?" Geet shook her head, "Nahi! Yeh ek lambi kahaani hai jo main tujhe kabhi fursat mein bataaungi. Aaj bas tu itna yaad rakh ki main ab Geet Raizadda hun Handa nahi!" Pinky nodded.

 

   "Geet! You are here!", came a voice from behind and Geet turned and smiled, "Mr. Dev Khurana!", she exclaimed. Dev smiled, "How are you Miss Raizada? Welcome to Khurana Constructions!" They shook hands and Geet replied, "I am fine and thank you!" Dev smiled, "Please come with me to my cabin and we will discuss about the job opportunities for you in KC!" and gestured her to follow her. Geet waved at Pinky and followed Dev all the while chatting with him about their families. Suddenly, a lady passing by dropped the papers in her hand accidently and Geet stopped to help her up. Dev continued to walk for a while but stopped and turned when he noticed Geet was not with him.

 

 

 

Place - Maan's cabin at KC

 

    Maan sighed as he concentrated on the presentation he was working upon. I need a break! Kabse is computer screen ko ghoore jaa raha hun! He saved his work and got up from his seat. He walked towards the door of his cabin which was made of wood but had a small rectangular gap in middle made up of glass. His eyes fell on a girl kneeling on the floor with his employee and he stopped breathing. Geet! His heart whispered and he gulped. He turned around and rubbed his eyes in shock. Geet yahaan kaise? He turned around and looked outside through the glass but Geet was gone. He shook his head. Yeh kya hua hai mujhe? But he knew what had happened. He was imagining Geet in KC as he knew she must have come back day before yesterday from her internship. Bhool jaao use Maan! Yahi tumhaare liye behetar hoga! He nodded and went back to his work.

 

 

 

Place - Dev's Cabin at KC

 

      It was an hour later when Geet and Dev got up from their seats after discussing Geet's job, her duties and remuneration. "Welcome to Khurana Constructions!", he raised his hand and Geet shook it while grinning happily. They walked out of the cabin and Dev called Sasha, Aditya and Pinky. As they came Dev introduced Geet to them as the trainee Architect who would assist Sasha and later on take her post when Sasha would go to Mumbai. Geet shook hands with each one and chatted happily with them. Dev told Adi to open a salary account for Geet and asked Pinky to make Geet an Employee I.D. He told Sasha to start Geet's training from next day. Dev walked away from there after saying bye to Geet while Sasha welcomed Geet and went off to her work. Pinky asked her to submit her photo to her in the counter and asked her number. Soon Pinky was off too and Geet followed Adi to his counter where he told her to fill the bank form.

 

 

     Dev smirked as he leaned back in his seat. Maan Bro! Ready ho jaao! Geet Bhabhi aa chuki hai aapke hosh udaane! He closed his eyes as he remembered how few days back Geet had called him up asking about a letter she had found in the bag NT had handed to her a year back. The letter was about her joining as a Trainee Architect at KC. Dev had mentally thanked his wife and had even gifted her a bouquet of roses for keeping the letter in Geet's bag and had replied to Geet that while staying at their house she had impressed Maan and him with her knowledge and Maan had given her the joining letter. Geet had gotten pretty excited at this news and asked him if the offer was still valid. Dev had replied in affirmative and had asked her to come to KC to meet him once she was back from her trip. He opened his eyes and smirked. Ab aap dekhlo Bro! Kaise main Geet Bhabhi ko Khurana Khaandaan ki badi bahu banaata hun! He smiled and called his wife to inform her about the succession of the first step in their plan.

 

 

 

Place - Outside Maan's cabin

 

    Maan walked towards his brother's cabin while looking at a file in his hand. Suddenly, he felt as if Geet was around him. He looked up and stopped for a moment. There stood Geet chatting with Adi. He closed his eyes and shook his head. Maan! Get a grip! Geet is not here. He opened his eyes and Geet was not there. He let out a sigh of relief and walked into Dev's cabin.

 

    Geet peaked up from the cubicle she was sitting and heaved a sigh of relief at the sight of Maan disappearing into Dev's cabin. She did not know why but from the day she met Maan at her brothers' engagement she had felt a nervousness enter her at his sight. She felt like melting in his presence. His glance sent her heartbeats in tizzy. Her friends from College had told her that she had a crush on Maan and that had shocked her. How can she have a crush on a guy she barely met. But she had no answer for that question. And hence, she avoided Maan anytime he was nearby. Once Maan entered the cabin, Geet submitted the form to Adi and walked away to go home. What Geet did not know was that the reason she felt such a way for Maan was that while she forgot Maan her heart did not. Her heart and her subconscious somewhere recognized Maan and reacted accordingly. But poor Geet did not know that and hence remain confused.

 

 

 

Place - Poolside at Shantivan

 

   Anjali smiled as Kanha played with his toys on the floor. It was 3 in the evening and Kanha had just gotten up from his nap time while Geet had just gone to her room to sleep after chatting with Anjali about her Office. Anjali heard the noise of paayals and looked up to see the servant leading Khushi to the poolside. Anjali got up to receive Khushi and both hugged each other. After exchanging pleasantries, Anjali spoke, "Khushiji! Aap thodi dair idhar Kanha ke saath baithiye aur hum turant gehne le aate hain!" Khushi nodded and grinned eagerly and sat down to play with Kanha.

 

 

 

Place - Arnav's Room at Shantivan

 

    Arnav wandered into his room searching for a file. He and Aakash had been holed up in the common study for hours discussing their latest order and their designs. Arnav picked up the file and was about to walk away when his eyes fell on the person sitting near the poolside playing with Kanha. For a moment his heart stopped and all he wanted to do was go and hug her, feel her. Ask her how was she? How did she cope with her father's death? Did she miss him at all? He took a step ahead as if to walk towards her when suddenly an image flashed in his head; the image of him removing the ghunghat and finding Lavanya instead of Khushi. The thought of her betrayal brought pain to his heart and anger to his head. After doing all this, how dare she come back here? What does she think of herself? Arnav's face contorted into anger and he glared at Khushi with all the hate filled in his heart. His hands clenched into fists and he marched off to confront the girl who broke his heart due to petty revenge.

 

 

 

Place - Poolside

    

    Khushi smiled as she played with Kanha. Kanha gave her a smile and she smiled back. She tickled him and both laughed heartily. Suddenly, she heard someone clapping. She looked up and pain seared through her heart. There stood Arnav Singh Raizada, her Arnavji, looking as handsome as the day they met, clapping. As she drank his sight, she felt dread enter her heart as she noticed his contempt filled expression. He hated her! She realized. But is this not what she wanted?  Him hating her? She should be happy! Then why was her heart filled with pain while her body longed to be in his arms. She took a deep breath and said Devi Maiyya's name in her heart.

 

   Arnav walked towards her and gave her a sarcastic smile, "Maanna padega tumhein? Phir se apna mooh uthaake yahaan chali aayi?" "Ji?", Khushi asked in shock. Arnav narrowed his eyes at her, "Mere saath itna bada dhoka karne ke baad tumne yahaan aane ki himmat bhi kaise ki? Sharam nahi aayi tumhein?" Khushi was in shock. She never expected Arnav to be this bitter to her. Arnav smirked at her, "Oh! Ab samjha! Ab mujhse khel liya toh aur kisi ko phasaane aayi ho? But I am sorry! Yahaan aur koi eligible bachelor nahi hai tumhaara khilona banne ke liye! Toh koi aur doosra ghar dekhlo!" Khushi felt tears well up in her eyes. Did he really think of her that badly? Did he not once think that maybe there had been some other reason behind her decisions? Arnavji! Kya aapko apne pyaar par thoda sa bhi bharosa nahi?

 

  "Arre! Chote! Tum yahaan?", Arnav and Khushi heard Anjali speak and they looked at her. Anjali smiled as she walked towards them. Arnav gave her a smile and turned to look at Khushi, "Bas yahin se jaa raha tha, toh Khushi ko dekha!", he gave her a self-deprecating smirk, "Toh socha apni Saale Sahiba se mil lun!" The words Saale Sahiba were said in such a manner that Khushi felt they were dipped in poison. Anjali, as usual oblivious to all this, gave him a smile, "Chote! Ab aap aahi gaye ho toh humaara ek kaam kar lijiye! Kal aap Khushiji ke Buaji ke ghar ho aayiye! Woh apna ghar rent pe dena chaahti hai toh unse ek baar baat kar lijiye! Kahin kuch madat chaahiye ho toh!" Arnav nodded and he walked away. Khushi wiped her tears discreetly and smiled at Anjali. Soon, they sat back to sort through the jewelries but Khushi's mind refused to forget Arnav's words.

 

 

 

Place - Khurana Constructions

 

   It was a new morning and the birds chirped in distance as Geet entered KC excitedly dressed in another one of AR's Chudidaars. She smiled at Pinky while handing over her passport sized Photo and walked off to report to Sasha. While walking towards Sasha's cabin, Geet purse slipped from her shoulder and she turned her head towards it while adjusting it with her hand not noticing a person coming towards her. The person also did not notice her as he was deeply involved in the file in his hand. BAM! Geet slammed into the person and fell backwards. She closed her eyes tightly waiting for her to hit the floor and feel the pain. But instead of that, she felt an arm encircling her waist making her feel safe. She opened her eyes and they widened as her heart beat started beating irregularly and her stomach erupted with butterflies. The person who crashed into her was none other than Maan. And as for Maan, he just stared at her without blinking. Never had he thought that he would get another chance to hold her again. Never had he thought that they would be this close ever again. Never had he thought that she would enter his life again. But here she was in his arms; staring at him with a sweet loving expression he associated with his Soni.

 

   Suddenly, someone cleared their throat and Maan and Geet came out of their thoughts and Maan pulled Geet up. They jumped apart and looked at each other nervously. They turned to look at the person and the person was none other than Tasha. Maan noticed the Office staff crowded around them and tried to compose his expression. He gave them a glare and they scattered away not wanting to face his wrath. His eyes reached Geet and he whispered, "Tum?" Tasha mumbled, "Sir?" Geet just gave him a smile. Maan's heart skipped a beat and suddenly he felt angry. How dare she just enter his life and send his feelings sprawling. He glanced at Tasha and roared, "Maine poocha ki yeh yahaan kya kar rahi hai?" He pointed his fingers at Geet while Geet looked at him in shock. Tasha brushed her hand on her pony tail and piped up, "Oh Silly me! Yeh Geet hai MK Sir! Geet Raizada!" Maan glared at her and took a deep breath. He spoke in a calm voice, "Yeh mujhe pata hai ki yeh Geet Raizada hai!", but his anger reared its head and he roared again, "Par yeh yahaan kya kar rahi hai?" Geet could not resist herself and spoke up, "Mujhe yahaan job mila hai Trainee Architect ka!" Maan glared at her but spoke in a calm voice, "Aur kisne rakha tumhein?" Geet shrugged, "Aapke bhai Dev ne!" "Dev!" Maan let out a shout and turned and walked away from there. Geet frowned; Yeh Mr. Khurana ko kya hua hai? Itne ghussail kabse ban gaye? Tasha offered to show her Sasha's cabin and Geet followed her.

 

 

 

Place - Dev's Cabin

 

    Maan slammed open the door as he entered the room. Dev who was working on some report stilled for a moment as he realized who had entered the cabin. He took a deep breath while praying to Geet's Babaji to give him some strength to face Maan and went back to his work. Maan came in front of him and slammed his hands on the table. Dev flinched but did not give any other outward reaction. Maan took a deep breath trying to control his anger, "Dev! Yeh ladki yahaan kya kar rahi hai?" Dev frowned while still working on the report, "Kaunsi ladki bro?" Maan glared at him and let out one word sharply, "Geet!" Dev finally looked up from his work, "Geet who?", his face showed confusion. Maan pulled the file out of Dev's hands and threw it on the floor. He started pacing, "Geet Handa you idiot!" Dev automatically responded, "Geet Raizada Bro not Handa!" Maan stopped and glared at Dev, "Tum mujhe bata rahe ho! Mujhe? Jisne Geet ke har court session ko attend kiya, jo us party mein gaya tha jahaan Arnav ne logon se uski Choti behen Geet Raizada ko introduce kiya tha! Woh main tha jisne Arnav ko woh London ki Architecture Company recommend ki taaki Geet apni internship successfully khatam karein aur tum mujhe bata rahe ho ki woh Geet Handa nahi Geet Raizada hai!" Jo bahut jald Geet Khurana ban jaayegi, thought Dev but did not say it. He was so not interested in making NT widow. He finally stood up and approached his brother, "But Bro usne call kiya tha yeh keh kar ki uske paas ek letter hai jis mein KC mein job hai uske liye! Ab main mana toh nahi kar sakta tha na! After all, humaare achche dost Arnav ki behen hai! Aur aap yeh kyun bhool rahe ho ki Geet ka jahaan pehla sapna Architect banne ka tha, uska doosra sapna KC mein kaam karne ka tha! Kya aapko nahi lagta ki humein uska sapna poora karna chaahiye?" Maan turned towards him and glared at him, "Mujhe mat sikhaao ki humein kya karna chaahiye aur kya nahi!" Dev took a step back. Maan nodded, "Theek hai! Let her work here! Par behetar hoga ki tum use mujhse door rakho!" Saying this, Maan walked out of the cabin.

 

       Dev smirked, "Yeh nahi ho sakta Bro! Kyunki Maan jahaan Geet wahaan! After all soulmates jo thehre! But I promise you Bro, agar woh aapke aas paas nahi aayi toh I will make sure she is around you, yeh waada hai Dev Singh Khurana ka!"

 

 

 

Place - Laxminagar

 

   "Arre! Arnav Babua! Aao aao andar aao!", Madhumati aka Buaji invited Arnav in. Arnav had come here after listening to his sister nagging him the whole day about how Buaji might need help renting her house and how he was supposed to ask her if she needed any help. According to his sister, anyone can fool or con Buaji and hence, he should help her. Arnav rolled his eyes. Buaji needing help? Yeah right! His Di, it seemed, had never noticed Buaji's size or attitude and loud mouth. God save the person who tried to con or fool Buaji! He entered and automatically his eyes started searching for his Khushi. When he noticed her standing in one corner, his expression hardened with so much hatred that even Khushi flinched and averted her eyes. Arnav's face took on a satisfied smirk as he sat down on the sofa. Buaji shuffled away to get him water while asking her Titaliya to join Arnav and talk to him. Khushi slowly walked towards him with trepidation marking her steps. He glared at her, "Achcha naatam karti ho tum bhole banne ka! Dekho kitna dar dar kar chalne naatak kar rahi ho!" Khushi's eyes filled with tears while she looked at him with pain. But he ignored the pain in her eyes and continued with his vitriol, "Achcha style hai ladko ko phasaane ka aur phir unka dil todne ka! Koi shauk hai ya kisine challenge diya hai?" Khushi could not resist herself, "Aap yeh kya bol rahe hain, Arnavji?" Arnav got up in anger, "Mat lo naam mera! Tumne jitne berehmi se mera dil toda hai uske baad toh tumhein koi haq nahi banta mera naam lene ka!" He took a step towards her, "Bolo na! Kitne ladke ab tak phasaaye? Ya phir main pehla hun?" Khushi shook her head, "Please aisa kuch mat boliye! Buaji sunlengi toh..." Arnav cut her off, "Tum chaahti ho ki main chup rahoon toh theek hai! Tum mere toote dil ko jod do main chup ho jaata hun! Tum mere dil se apni chavi nikaal do main chup ho jaata hun! Apni behen ki jagah tum mandap pe baitho main chup ho jaata hun!" Khushi cut him off, "Nahi! Aisa mat boliye! Hum apni Di ki zindagi..." "Toh phir mujhe bhi chup hone ko na kaho! Woh kehne ka haq tum kho chuki ho!", he snarked at her. Khushi could not control her tears anymore. She ran off to her room to hide her tears and Arnav sat down with a satisfied expression on his face.

 

    Khushi fell on her bed, hide her face into her pillow and started sobbing. She did not know that her Arnavji could be so cruel with words. Hey Devi Maiyya! Yeh aise kyun hai? Yeh humein samajhte kyun nahi? Yeh humaare nirnay ko samajhne koshish bhi nahi karte! Bas ilzaam lagaa rahe hain! Bas Devi Maiyya! Ab aap hi humein shakti dijiye ki hum kuch din ke liye yeh sab sehen kar lein! Bas kuch din aur!

 

 

 

Place - Living Room at Shantivan

 

    It was evening and Aakash was sitting on the floor playing with Kanha while Naani, Maami and Anjali sat on the sofa chatting about the jewelries chosen by Khushi for her sisters. Shyam sat nearby going through the notes of his latest case while Arnav sat beside him typing furiously on his laptop. Suddenly, these members of Raizada family noticed the door banging open and Geet marching in eerily looking like certain ASR! Her face was contorted in annoyance while her whole body language screamed of anger. As she marched towards her room in anger, Naani with great courage asked her, "Aaj ka Office kaisa tha bitiya rani?" Geet whirled around in such a manner that Naani leaned back in fear. Geet looked like she was about to shout on them but her reply was pretty calm one, "Mat poochiye DJ! Mat poochiye!" She turned to walk away in anger when suddenly, a tiny hand clutched her Duppatta while a childish voice called out, "Maashi!" Geet turned to looked at the caller and found Kanha sitting on the floor tugging at her Duppatta. All her anger flew away and she smiled at Kanha. She sat on the floor and pulled Kanha into a hug.

 

    After Geet played with Kanha for a while, Anjali cautiously asked her, "Sab theek toh haina Baby?" Geet looked up and huffed, "Poocho mat Di! Poocho mat! Woh ... woh ...  woh... Aargh!", Geet articulated her frustration and Arnav raised an eyebrow. "Kaun bitiya?", asked Maami warily. "Woh Khadoos! Woh Akdu! Woh Hitler!" Arnav's lips lifted a bit at Geet's antics while Aakash laid a hand on her shoulder, "Kaun?" Geet's face crumpled, "Woh Maan Singh Khurana! Kitna akdu hai! Galti se main ek baar unse kya takraayi, poora time mujhe ghoore jaa rahe the! Aur unki aankhen itni daraavni hai ki har waqt main toh yahi soch rahi thi ki mere saamne Yamraj khada hai! He was glaring at me Di!" Anjali looked at her wide eyed unable to imagine her best friend behaving like that while Aakash patted her head, "Maan Bro thode strict hai..." Geet cut him off, "Thode? Woh toh insaan nahi machine hai! Ghussa toh unke naak par baitha hai! Ek ek staaf ko choti choti galtiyon ke liye kitna daant te hain!" "Aapko daanta Maan ne Saali Sahiba?", asked Shyam in confusion. Geet shook her head, "Mujhe nahi SJ! Par bichaare unke Office waale! Sabko daant padi! Woh bahut bure hain Di! Aapke MS bahut hi bure hain!" Anjali bit her lip in worry, "Aap chaaho toh hum unse baat kar sakte hain!" Geet shook her head, "Nahi Di! Main unhein sambhaal loongi! Mere saath aisi unchi aawaaz mein baat ki toh chodungi nahi main unhein!" Aakash shook his head, "Jo bhi karo soch samajhke karna! Maan Bro utne bhi bure nahi hai jitna tum samajh rahi ho!" Geet turned to look at him incredulously and Aakash explained, "Unhonein tumhaari jaan bachaayi Brij aur uske aadmiyon se jab tum Chandigarh se bhaag aayi thi! Agar woh chaahte toh tumhein wahin hodpital mein chod aate ya tumhein bachaate bhi nahi! Lekin unhein tumhein bachaaya bhi aur do mahine tumhein se apne ghar mein rakhkar tumhaara khayaal bhi rakha! Toh woh bure toh nahi honge na?' Geet thought for a while, "Haan Veere! Yeh bhi sahi hai! Agar kisi anjaan ladki ki jaan bachaayi ho aur uska itna khayaal rakha ho toh Maan Singh Khurana itne bure toh ho hi nahi sakte!" She smiled softly thinking of Maan's smart looks and dashing body. She shook her head bringing herself out of those thoughts and went back to playing with Kanha.  

 

 

 

 

AUTHOR NOTES

 

Next update also on Friday, coz another exam on Sunday!

 

Wish list has been updated till half of the Second thread so go check it out!

 

So how was the day one and day two after the leap?

Do leave a review!

 

 

WISHES FULFILLED!

 

The Geet's first scene in KC is dedicated to Deepa (spvd) who wanted to see Geet in KC! And also wanted to see Geet meeting Maan's Dusht Daanav avatar at Office! I fulfilled your two wishes in one scene!

For details of the wishes, check out the wish list.

 

PRECAP

 

Arnav continues to snap at Khushi while Maan's feelings are overwhelming him.

Meanwhile, Aakash gives another performance, (Sorry folks but Sad song again)!

So, good folks, Tune in on IF, next Friday for another rocking update!

 

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Awsome update
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Hahahahahaha geet bani lady asr
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hi thanks 4 da pm n terrific long detailed update! superbly written! Poor Khushi! update soon
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awesome dear... loved it!! ol d best fa ur exmz do well... n updae sooon 'l be waitin fa d update !!! tc
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Khushi deserved every bit dished out to her...how can she even imagine that her sister would be happy with this...
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Originally posted by: Deelight

awesome dear... loved it!! ol d best fa ur exmz do well... n updae sooon 'l be waitin fa d update !!! tc

Thank you!😃
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Sorry dear couldn't do this yesterday

My net was being right pain in the well you can guess where

And the most annoying thing is it decided to do that just when I sat down to do your stories and other longish stories

The damn thing was working fine before

Best of luck for your exams

And hope your hand is good

Well lets see how arhi and maneet shall cope with their meeting again

And what our ASR and MSK shall behave like with the one they love

DD and LG they will be for sure ufff poor geet and khushi I tell Ya

Awww you have to give it to anj she cares for her a lot

Well she cares for others a lot more sometimes I think forgetting herself

So once khushi gets to their house with payal anj can finally pay some attention to herself too

Hey bhagwaan she is asking khushi to come there and choose for her sisters

With the possibility of arnie coming there too

Danger alert I tell ya for her

But of course she would go and help anj why wont she

Hmmm so geet whose office you going to sweetie not your DD

Of course she is going to work for her dusht danav man

Hmmm he wont make it easy for her though am sure not that we want him to

 So she is joining KC ahhh this should be good

And I must say good move dev getting your bhabhi closer to your bhai again

Geet thand paa le kuch nahin hoga

Well of course KC is like that ek ASR ki nahin balki MSK too is right terror

But don't you go afraid dear doesn't suit you for sure

Hain geet and pinky know one another

But how I wonder but cool naa that she found some friends her already

 No she isn't married and if she was pinky dear then her surname shall be khurana

Well you will know soon why she is raizada and not handa soon enough dear

Hmmm well he sure is eager aint he to get her a job here

Bless you geet ke devar haiyye ab toh love story shuru hone se phir se koi nahin rok sakta

Not even maan himself

Yup your geet is here

But of course when you are in front of her you wont be maan but MSK or DD as she shall call you soon enough

And no it aint your dream either

Dude like I said not dream but reality only mate

But then lets not let him know too soon

And you cant forget someone who stays in your heart in your soul and basically in you

Then you will have to forget yourself too mate

 Hmmm what job did he give her and how soon shall maan know about it

Okies so she is the new trainee architect who shall be working under sasha hmmm

Hmmm so he got her in and maan don't know as of yet

But of course he will know eventually after all company unki hai

So let the games of love begin I hope

I know right she is gonna make him fall in love with her again no matter what

We shall always be grateful for dev for doing this for them

Not only dev but NT came to their rescue too man

And this way geet got her job at KC and got this much closer to maan again yipeee

Oh yes it is still valid for the reasons known more to him

But its not as if she isn't good at it either

He isn't just keeping her so maneet get closer but also because she has the potential

Stage one of their plan was a success but of course it just got harder from here

Awww he thinks still he is hallucinating when that aint the case

Awww you feel for him don't ya

Wait till it comes to him as a shock that she was there and she is back in his life

Awww so she too was hiding from him

Pssttt geet if you do that aap dono ki love story phir se kaise bhadegi ji

Well if we can wait that long we can wait more naa

Oh ho so he has started to affect her man now that's good news right

She at least has a crush on him that's a start people

Well she too cant run from the love her heart feels for him

Though her mind might not remember him but her heart cant forget his either

Hmmm this just got more fun here

Oh ho so now khushi turn with arnie well lets see then

 Awww so our khushi is playing with her future bhanja

Well am sure arnie is gonna come before she goes for sure

Oh lord arnie really

Even though she did what she did was bad you still cant console her

She lost her babuji and all you can think about is what she did

And am sure he is gonna make things worse aint he

Well him and maan are expert at doing that

Kabhi kabhi dil ki bhi sunn liya kariye aap dono parr nahin they wont

Man its time like this I just wish I could oh forget it no point he wont listen anyway

He is gonna break her heart aint he like she did yup

Oh khushi can you ever be happy to see him hate you

Even though you wanted him to do that

After all he is the one you love so of course its gonna hurt and he is here to make it worse

Excuse me inhe koi shauk nahin hai apna dil aur toodne ka parr she is here only because your sister asked her to come

But of course you wont know and just blast her for wrong thing

This is gonna haunt him later on for sure

 Cant believe he could say that to her

Baaki samajh mein aata hain but that was the worst thing he could say

Well one of the worse things he could say

He shall regret it later on saying all this to her

But now his anger is just gonna take over

Am afraid this is the only reason his brain shall come up with

You see he has fallen in love but still don't know how to use his heart for that

Hard luck dear to have fallen for him but then guess what he is like this would be his reaction only

Agar apne pyaar parr bharosa hota he wouldn't have thought of you like this

And neither would he have hid his love from his family

Okay that's bit harsh right I guess

Arnie what to do

The less said here the better I am afraid

Or might just end up abusing him lots for sure

He can see and feel his pain but not the one she has

Kaisa yeh oyaar hai ji

So geet is back again I see and this time maneet face to face for sure

Arrey waah first day and bam she is in his arms

Haiyye kya scene hai boss

Mann gaye bhale hi inka pyaar naa badh raha ho parr maahi moments toh bann hi jaate hain

As if he will let her fall ever

Maan my man she wasnt a hallucination but reality for sure

Soni nahin sirf geet guess he will have to forget that facet of geet and fall for this geet

Dono ek doosre ki aankhon mein khoye huye hain

And no one said anything hain how did that happen ji

Peeps get out of it this aint KM but KC snap snap

No actually don't come out of it please

Just be in each others arms and be lost in one another

See told ya in KC not KM my dears so this was gonna happen

Hmmm not him too man hadh hain inn dono lover boys ki

Jab dekho gussa aur sirf gussa hota hai naak parr

Oh so geet shall meet the MSK it seems

Dev my man you are dead meat

But then he knew this would happen

Tasha dear he knows who she is more than anyone else so don't tell him that

But then how is she to know

Loved how geet spoke for herself though good tell your dusht daanva you aint scared of him

Well he became the angry young man since you came back into his life but without you remembering him

So dear it will be only you who will get him back to his normal self again

 Dev ke liye sab prathna kariye ki who maan ke gusse se bach sake

He shall need all his wits to survive this right yup geetke babaji protect this man please

Good one lets go for being innocent here and make him say why he is mad

In the end it wont matter any way will it

Dude don't say about geet being khurana or he might just explode on you

Even I don't like to see NT in white saree please

So he got her the internship in London hmm interesting for sure

Well we all know that wont help

Dev has to make sure she stays more with you so the love happens again naa

Sorry to say but this one thing he cant do for you at all

 That is so true where is maan there shall be geet too yaar

Wow love this man so much I do yaar

Tussi toh chaah gaye boss

 Anj here am with arnie no way can someone con buaji that easily

She can make anyone cower in fear before her

But well how to tell her that

But this means more arhi meeting and that's not good either

I know right arnie god save that person trying to fool buaji including you mate

Pathetic aint it when he thinks its good he is hurting her

Okay better not start on him again

She aint faking it she is really afraid of what you might say to break her fragile heart again mate

He can see she is hurt with him saying such things but does he relent hell no

Haan haan sirf aap ka hi dil toota that she is really happy aint she

She has been cryinf tears of blood here mate

But then why would you bother to find out the real reason

All he can see is his hurt and heart break not hers

Really you are happy to see her cry arnie

Your heart doesn't melt seeing her cry

Was that all the love you had for her

Am this made me cry when she did

Hope she makes him pay for every single tears for hers later on

But of course she wont after all she is khushi naa

Dammmit arnie don't do this please

But when has he ever listened

You really think that he is good choice for your sister

If he can you in tears he can make her cry too

Do we really want that for your sister

 And khushi you should know that he has turned into ruthless heartless arrogant jerk again

Ahhh this is hard to see her broken like this

Come one khushi you have to show him that you wont fall any more

That if he cant tell why you did this don't waste your time in trying to make him see sense

I know being harsh on arnie but why is everything to do with him

Its always me me me me for this man never about her

Trust me you don't know he can be even worse but then in the end it will be he who suffers too

I wonder what maan did that she is this mad

Waise agar apni heroines too get to it they can give the heroes a run for their money in the anger department and geet is just demonstrating that it seems

Oh teri she sure is scaring nani with her anger yaar

Thank god for kanha man he sure cooled her down

So was it maan the dusht daanav or someone else

Though I doubt it can be any one else

Waise it seems kanha is gonna be good there to reduce anger of people it seems starting with geet

Well that is so apt way of describing her future hubby

By the way this also goes for the rakshash laad governor too

But then he isn't being discussed but maan so back to him

Sheesh waah kya baat hai isse ohele no one else would have called him all those names but then they aint geet naa so of course they wouldn't say that

Well since you forgot him he is back to being a machine

Warna even we have seen what lover boy was doing didn't we

Arrey haan gussa how can we forget that huh

Waise itni toh who gustaki nahin karenge ki aap ko bina wajah daante

Warna aap bhi thodi naa hain unn logon mein se joh chup baithe hain naa geet

Awww geet you will see more of this MSK am afraid but then only you can stop him from being MSK either dear

Anj no need to interfere in this yaar

Yeh toh maneet ke beech main hi solved hogi

After all she is the only one who can have a lasting affect on him

And this way she can be closer to him my dear

But then they don't know naa

You go girl if he does do that make sure you make him see your angry side he needs it

No one said that he is bad person but he sure can be right pain when he wants to be

And especially now that geet isn't there to cool him down

She is slowly falling for him

Awww she was thinking about him that way cool yaar

Well that's a start for sure

I call it some progress

But arhi unka kya hoga what with arnie being such rakshash

Okay best of luck for your exam dear

And what a wonderful update

But you must forgive me for being so mean to arnie sorry dear

Hope you don't hate me too much

Cheers for pm

Edited by chavvi16 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
loved the update...
loved Maaneet's first meeting in office...atleast Maan understands Geet's feeling but very disappointed with Arnav...it was all due 2 hisaction that they are in this mess and he s hurting Khushi with his cutting words...if he s in pain then Khushi s in more pain than him...y s he accusing Khushi that she trapped him in her love,it was he who used 2 stalk her and nt the other way around...once he realises his mistake Khushi should nt forgive him easily as he was at more fault than her and he s hurting her self respect a lot...please don't show Khushi 2 b all forgiving when Arnav realises her stand as he s nt even trying 2 understand her POV bt still s throwing accusation at her...if he feels Khushi has betrayed him then even he had betrayed her by hiding his real identity from her...
so nw Geet and Dusht Davan's love story will start...so Geet's heart has not 4go10 her love for Maan...
good update...
update soon...
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Posted: 10 years ago
Nice update arnav is so cruel to kushi if he realy lov her hw can he huqt her so much wish their misunderstanding wil clear soon lov geet in kc scene