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hello guys yeh forum walo kp Hua kya hai. Maine socha chalo is os likh do. Hope you all will like it.
antara- Raghu tumhe mujhpar barosa nahi. Yeh tum kya keh rahe ho
raghu- tumhe Jo sochna hai socho. Tumhe kya Mein tere saath kahon jao ya saheeb. Tumhe to bas ek insaan chayie Jo tumhare aggey piche gumhe.tumhe kahan jaana hai tumare saath chale. Tumhe to bas ek insaan chayie Jo tumahare aggey peeche gumhe.
antara- raghuuu tum kya bol rahe ho.
Raghu grab his hand tightly and says- antaraaa Mein sach bol rahe ho. Mein pehle tere baare meein sach sochta Tha tum srif acche logo ka fayada uttana janti ho . Tumhe dekha basti Mein mera raj chalta hai tu tumne mere pass anna suru kar Diya ab tumne dekha satya is basti ka Malik hai tum uske pass jaana suru kar di.
antara-Raghu tum kya bol rahe ho pls chup ho jao. Aise kuch na bolo Ki aggey hamare riste min daarar aa jaye
raghu- kon Sa rista khatam karta ho tumse har rista.and leave d parlour
antara was shocked and move towards home.
evening
rukshana see antara is not happy even she see Raghu is also not happy.
she come to machmach and says mm hame kuch karna chayie.
machmach- kya kar sakte hai . Bhai Kisi ka Abhi nahi sunega. Aur aaj to usne antara Ko kaha hai bhai apne aao Ko maaf nahi karega aur apne gamand Mein antara ke pass jaa kar mafi nahi mange ga.
rukhsana-agar woh nahi jaa sakta to kya hum usko le kar jayege antara ke pass
she says something to mm and move towards antara
rukshana- antara kya Hua . To mujhe bol sakti hai
antara- nahi rukshana aisi koi baat nahi hai
rukshana- to kya baat hai bolo
antara- actually Mein soch rahi Thi Ki Mein Kashmir kis din wapas jao. Mai ne mujhe yeh zimedari mujhpar Diya hai. Soch rahi ho navrat ke dusre din kasmir wapas chali jao
rukhsana in suprised- kya bol rahi hai. Aur ragu ka kya
antara start crying badly and say- usne mujhse sab rista khatam kar Diya. Shayad mere pyar Mein kami thijo Mein uska Biswas nahi jeet payi. Koi baat nahi Mein yahan se chalo jaogi. Uske samne reh kar usko aur takleef nahi Dena chahti and she left d pandal
Raghu had listen all this conversation . He was shocked and felt with guilt that how badly he has told everything to her.
dandiya started all were dancing in circle. Suddenly Raghu and antara beco.e partner. Antara tried to smile but c was not able to hide her tears. Raghu notice all her activity. Suddenly he pulled her hand and tken her to d back of pandal
he pinned her to,the pole.
raghu- mummy aayi hospital se tumne bataya nahi
antara don't want to talk with him so she said Mr. Raghunath naik s,leave mujhe jaane do
raghu- jaane doga lekin yeh baat batade Ki tumne koi nahi bataya
antara in pain - koiki Mein tumhara fayada mahi uttana chahti Thi. Mein akele sab kuch kar sakti ho. Pls ragh mujhe jaane do and she started crying badly
Raghu was also very sad. He want to cry but he control and happy hug her tightly and says antara pls mujhe maaf kar do . Pls Mein tumhe khona nahi chata hoon. Mein wada karte ho...
antara move back and says nahi Raghu koi wada mat karna koi Ki tumne koi wada nahi nibhaya aur ab hamare beech Mein kuch nahi hai yaad hai na tumne subah saare risttod Diya hai.
ragu- pined hr to pole again and says antaraaa kya bolne se rista khatam Jo jata hai. Isliye to kasmir jaane ka baat kar rahi hai .thik hai to ja lekin mujhe. Mere zindagi waps kar do. Tu meri sabkuvh hai agar to nahivto Mein zinda reh kar kya karogs. He tookt knife and cut his hand vein.
antara get scared and says- Raghu yeh tumne kya kiya. Pls Dr ke pass chalo dekho kahin tum kuch ho Gaya to Mein kya karog
raghu- tumhe Jo Maine dard Diya uske aggey yeh dard kuch nahi tu pls apun Ko maaf karde
antara Raghu tumhari ms. Call tumse naraz nahi hai and she kiss his forehead
Raghu become some cool and says tumhari ankho Mein ansoo laane ke liye in ankhovse maafi mangta ho andvhe kissed her both eyes.
then he kissed her cheeks and want to kiss her lip . But he backout as anatara was not comfortable.
antara understand his state of mind and she make a wrap of her arm to his shoulder and bring herself near to him and closed her eyes. Raghu see this and he also closed his eyes and start kissing her lips. Simple kiss turn to,passionate kiss...

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Hmmm richu!!! Pehlay panga fir danga wahh!!
Nyc OS!! Aj kal sab OS, SS ending achi lekhtay hain!!
Really loved it!!
Do write more!!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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omg riche loved it yaar :) nice os
Posted: 12 years ago
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good os
o how rude of Raghu... ghusse m bohot bol gaya
continue soon

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Nice os.. He said a lot in anger though.. Bless Antu.. But great ending
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Posted: 12 years ago
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So lovely yaar i love ur os so much 😆 😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Richa superb, kal ke episode deke muje rona aaya tha but after reading this i am sooo happy
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Hayeee...
Lovely OS richu... I luved that last para very much...❤️
Well done... 👏
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Awwh that was too good pehle taqraar phir.pyar 😉
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Posted: 12 years ago
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loved it ...it was mindblowing

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