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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: rjhr

she jumped on Asad, taking him by surprise, her sudden pounce making him lose his balance and dropping on the floor, Mango on top of him, barking at him licking him like a maniac.

The whole crew including Ayaan were shocked, they thought that Asad was being attacked and jumped into help, but his laughter stopped them in their tracks.

Asad was laughing, he was laughing with childlike abaondon,he didn't care that he was rolling in the mud, he didn't care that there was slobber all over him, he was just laughing. After about a minute he finally decided to stand up, lifting Mango in his hands, kissing her and enjoying being licked... jus loved readind these lyns...

AWESOME... CUTE UPDATE... 😊




Awww...thank u so very much..👏 n m flattered...to hear that u liked mthe updates n these lines...hope to keep it that way...so stay tuned...😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
a big wala WOW..loved it..truly amazing..plz continue soon n do pm me
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: AWriterAtHeart

Every one of your updates is filled with cuteness! I'm serious! Mango sensing Asad and running up to him and Asad laughing as he gets attacked by his sweetheart. I can imagine it, including the whole scene with Zoya confessing she missed Asad.

So Ayaan's starting to put two and two together and is nagging Dilshad to tell him what happened between the two? Hmm, let's see how far he gets.
The last part with Zoya's cover up was just amazing, how Asad glared at her to make her watch her tongue, total Asad mode!
Please continue soon and thank you so much for the PM!
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AWWW..😃.Im flattered..n way beyond happy reading ur comments..n u sayin such nice things bout my updates...so very happy ......hope to keep that goin...so read on...👍🏼
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: princess101

Loved it super excited for the next chapter thanx for the PM and pleaseee update soon pretty pleaseee( Puppy dog face) 😃



for sure...will try my best to update..usually its everyday..except weekends...so stay tuned..n ya thanks for ur comment...😃
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Rarepearl

Hi Dear,

Sorry for being unable to comment on the parts 11 & 12, actually I'm out of town & couldn't connect to net on my laptop. I did reserve a post for chap 11 but I'm so sorry I can't find it now in so many pages, so I'll just make another post now.
Chap 11 A:
Ayaan's character is really fun loving & still responsible & mature enough to handle situations properly. I know he cares deeply for Asad & hence wants to know the mystery connection between Asad & Zoe seeing their interactions & the rapid changes in Asad's moods on the sets. So Ayaan & Humi all set to tie the knot once their parents give the consent, i'm really happy for the two.
I am worried about the slip of paper dat dropped from the file which Ayaan was about to see but couldn't due to Asad's return, like what is in it that would stop Asad's past wounds from healing? hope of getting an answer soon for it.
Dilshaad: like last time I said that I do understand her plight when she asked Zoe for Asad, it was due to her husband's falling health & her love for him. but after reading this part, I really felt angry at her for using the words that she used with Zoe & the way she demanded her to leave Asad & let him return to his mother.
the situations do make you react illogically but seriously like this? she had been with Zoe for sometime, seen that she was her son's life & yet took it away in just a blink.
I am really sorry for Zoe. she has suffered a lot ever since her childhood & had to give away her love for his own good.
Najma kept in touch with Zeenat to be updated about Zoya, but Dilshad should have made efforts earlier to bring them together.
11 B:
Okay this part was really hilarious. I mean I felt bad for Zoe too but couldn't help enjoy her jealousy with Asad. Aww poor thing was so consumed with hatred towards Tanveer that she couldn't put the dots together to see the picture clearly. I swear I couldn't stop laughing at this line:

Ayaan- You are too funny Zoya, bhaijaan and engaged and that to with Tanveer, Allah you are a genius, kya joke maara hai'

Asad knows her too well. I don't agree with his way of finding whether she still has those deep feelings for him but I know he really needs an assurance to fight & snatch back what life had taken from him 4 years back and am glad that he got the answer in positive. Uff Asad's "meri jaan" takes me away to a dream land.
I was so excited about the surprise. I thought it would be something to do with Dilshaad. 😕 Am I not following the story properly?
Okay soo next chap review in next post.
Love.



Hey Nim...😃

Its always a pleasure reading your comments..its like a feedback..n I truly read it twice..basking in the compliments...I am so very happy that u r enjoyin the story so far...n i am gald that certain parts can make u laugh n cry..I guess thats one of the best compliments for a writer..a new one for that matter...it just makes me feel that all not in vain..ki kuch to imply kar paa rahi hu...that I can emote feelings with my words...so thanks for that..👏 Also thank u for taking the time out frm you travel..and posting comments...I appreciate it a lot...and here is a thing..or rather a clue about my writing..I am always leaving clues here and there in the chapter..and everything that I have talked about will come ito play at some point in the story...like how Zoya's photgraphy was expressed...n it will come into play again..n also Mango..I mentioned her twice..indicating her importance...so there is 1 more clue that has been mentioned..or rather half expressed in a 2-3 chapters now..so keep an eye on that..maybe once that fator of the story is revealed..maybe the clues would become visible😉..Dilshad is to mend it..but not yet..as of now they need to realise that nothing else matters..when they love each other..and thats their battle..so keep reading..n i'll try not to make things confusing..😃

Cheers!!!!👏
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: princess101

Loved it super excited for the next chapter thanx for the PM and pleaseee update soon pretty pleaseee( Puppy dog face) 😃



LOL...aww...😳..will update soon..for sure..so keep reading!!!!😃
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: ...1234

a big wala WOW..loved it..truly amazing..plz continue soon n do pm me



Thank u so very much...😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
NOTE!!!!
Ch13...coming soon!!!!

Sorry sorry sorry..but its been a very YUCK🤢 24 hours for me...and I dont want to be in this mood and write...kyunki..the coming update is...Well since I am not posting tonight..I'll give in some info bout it..So here goes👏

CH13

Time for Tango...

  • It will start with a special day...😃
  • Zoya will avenge herself..how well u'll see.😉 somethin related to tango!!!
  • temperature to upar jaana hi hai..😉😉
  • Maybe...just maybe...Najma might meet Zoya...
So please bear with me and hold on for another day...n u never know..I mite try n do a double update..no promises though..cos dekhte hai din kaisa jaata hai😭 n keep commenting and pass on the word if you find my FF worth sharing with ur friends on IF... Cya soon peeps..n u guys rock!!!


PS - As of now the timeline has been updated..n shayad se kya pata koi hint chod di ho maine usmein😲😉😆 so chk it out...👍🏼
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Hey Sorry for such a late comment though I read the update immediately...was not able to get my hands on my laptop n its very difficult to use a phone to comment. Hope you understand.

As usual I LOVED THE UPDATE n cant wait for the next one. Please pm me for the next part too.

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