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jagrutid

@jagrutid

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+ 7

Posted: 11 years ago

#21

aw think the concept was really sweet and the first part where Arnav was writing on the back of her photograph really loved that bit!! The theme of loving someone so much that you can let them go.. and Arnavs wait for Khushi after she had left were really nice elements. Thank you for this and i'm looking forward to Tum hi ho, however get well soon that is always first priority...best of regards - Jagruti

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Dhanya C Babu

@dhanyac

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#22

awesome...

loved it...

thanx 4 d pm...😊

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..Breeze..

@..Breeze..

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#23

The story is really good! Great work😊

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Nicky saluja

@Nickysweet

Stunner

+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

#24

unres on page 1..sorry for being late

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raniluvsasr

@raniluvsasr

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

#25

Dis was an excellent concept. Keep writing more

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Anumeha Khanna

@anumeha_PM

Navigator

Posted: 11 years ago

#26

awww...

that was really sweet n cute one...

loved it..

thnx for the pm...

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Chandana

@chandana.s

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#27

Aww...Arnav lost his memory & La used it & made Arshi separate ...even though he got his memory back but it was too late,he had already lost his love..

After two years he met her again .. Loved it

Beautifully written