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Posted: 18 years ago
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dat was great wonder wat mukti's secret is n why she's hidin it from bajaj n prena i mean how bad could it be 😕 n i'm guessin mukti's luv is probably lucky 😳 continue soon 😊
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Sharath was staring at the photograph when a man came behind him, "She looks dazzling does she not? Sit down Sai, I am Ervan Yash's brother…" (played by Yuvraj) "Hi." Sharath wished sitting down, Ervan looked at the picture, "Sad story you know there was a woman who once fell in love with a man who wanted to go into politics. He promised her everything…but gave her only a child. That child was the reason she died, poor lady in child birth…her eldest brother took the girl and went away…became a driver in a good family. The man made it into politics and big, it so happened the son of the man's wife and him got married into a girl of the family. He was very close to his sister with out even knowing that she was his sister, but treated her like a friend till one day a momentary loss of control and rapped his own sister…he pacified him self thinking that she was a kind who slept with anyone only because she gave her self to a man she loved. A Casanova – a huge prise you know, for loving some one. Poor girl soon her love had gone into another woman in front of her very eyes…she left the place, with pain. The pain soon made her a part of our group because she is the sister of an important person…now some thing different. You know the uncle of the girl not the one who raised her but the younger one, came to Dellhi for work but got involved in the industry, he developed soon to become the king. A few months ago he found her took her in…when she was orphaned and soon trained her. She was a very fast learner one month and learnt everything that needed to be known for the group and about the group, now in a top rank. You know who the girl is? The one in this photograph you were starring at, the one you are longing to seek forgiveness from Sharath – your flesh and blood. Your sister, your half-sister!" the listener fell back with his hands on his face weeping at his crime, the other let him and left the room for five minutes. He walked into the room with a glass of water, "Have this Sharath."

"Thanks –um…" he hesitated, "Yuvraj for the record, by brother is Omi." The other man declared, Sharath took a deep draught of the water then placed the glass getting up. Would I be able to meet Mukti would she forgive me? Does she know?"

"She does Sai, Akanksha does but I don't think she is ready to forgive you as yet…" Sharath turned around, to find the great Don him self Omi…Yash, Sharath moved forward to kiss his hand but Omi healed his hand up, "No…that would not be necessary in a private audience but a lady's you must even in private." Both men smiled at each other politely, "Now you have some important assignments I want you and Akanskha to work on together, she would be hear any moment."

"No Yash she does not need a moment she is all ready hear." Mukti stood on the top of the stairs, dressed in a black leather trousers with a silver belt that had a crunched cut with a round buckle. Her t-shirt was a littlie above her waist a light brown crumpled stitched tank top, with a leather jacket that was at the moment left unzipped. Her neck had a simple silver chain with another placed in layers around her left wrist, a black watch on her right. Along with them she wore completely black sports shoes…along with some light make up. She walked down with elegance and confidence steppes, when the jacket moved away a bit Sharath noticed a gun like his in her waist. He could not read her eyes because of the dark glasses she was wearing. As soon as she reached down, she stretched her hand to be shaken, Sharath took it bending down on his knees and kissing it softly. After he got up, she took of her glasses he saw anger and hatred in them, "Just because I don't accept you does not mean you have to be formal Sai. Now lets go, Akanksha hates time being wasted, aathi hoon bai."

A black car (normal) goes into a posh building, two figures get out of it Mukti and Sharath, they go inside a hotel room, two other men sit there Mukti sits down so does Sharath, "You have the goods?" one of the men push a bag towards Mukti, she opens it and looks through it, the bag has something she was looking for, "Perfect." Sharath handed a similar bag the man looked in smiled put his hands up for a thumbs up Sharath and Mukti got up and left. They walked and turned around only to find two people with guns standing when they reached the parking lot, they still stood in the lift, Mukti pressed the close buttons as soon as she jammed the button of the top most floor, Sharath looked at her. She held his hand and jammed another button mid way, the lift stopped in the next flood and both walked out as a crowd came in with their shopping's. They got into another elevator and went down soon Sharath was lead away towards the car suddenly Sharath sees a person has aimed a sniper to kill her, just after the shot is heard he pushes Mukti away and takes the shot him self on his hand. Mukti recovers quickly and takes him to the docter.

Sharath feels the pain reduceing but at the same time shaken, the very girl he wanted to hurt was the one he was saveing now. She walked in this time dressed much softer, a long blue skirt with a white top that had a single large blue flower on it. The smile was geinuine and the eyes showed love, he smilled happily when she hugged him. "You did not have to do that you know." Her voice was low and the eyes tried not to meet his, his hands found hers, "It was my pleasure now finally I am guilt free…" Mukti pressed her lips to Sharath's left cheek, then hugged him, "Don't be bai lets start a new behining…" he hugged her back pressing his lips to her shoulder.

Krishi
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Posted: 18 years ago
#13
i'm kinda confused is mukti involved in sum sort of a gang? 😕 nice update kinda confusin at times but da 3rd time i read it i kinda understood da update😆 continue soon hope da next part has prem in it 😊
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Mukti sat up in bed wearing her night dress but looking through a jewel in her box, Sharath dressed walked in and handed her a cup of coffee. "Kya hua? Why are you looking at this – I have never seen you like this before."

"Why did she give this to me? She had her own daughter but she gave this to me…her most prised position." He looked at the then the pendent in the box, "She said that…I don't know why…any way get ready you have to go away with Prem for a week kid. Man I am going to miss you." Sharath and Mukti hug one last time and she starts packing her stuff…Snaha comes there. "Umm hi Mukti, mama said you would be leaving for some work…jaana bahoth zaruri hai kya?"

"Haan thoda zaruri hai lekin I will come back soon. Kuch chahiya Snaha?" she asked she shook her head. Both the girls hugged and Mukti Prerna comes with the aarthi and puts tika on Mukti's head in the hall, "Jaldi aaja mera beta yaha nahi hai aur beti bi chali gayi tho bahoth suna lagtha hai beta." Mukti nodded and finally picked up her bags and handed left the building with Sharath who was going to drop her in the airport.

Prem is looking at his watch and thinking where is Mukti when he heared a, "Hi Yudi!" immidiatly he started yelling at her, "Yahi aana ka waqth hai kya can't you come a littile earlier god." Mukti looked down, for the first time Prem noticed how she was dressed, a light blue skirt with a blue pull over and a white business sute. "Good, you remembered we are going for a business trip…acha chalo." Prem him self was dressed in a black sute with a yellow shirt. They checked in and found their seats after dumping their cabin bagages opened her laptops, she ordered her self a soft drink and Prem wine and browsed through some magazines before opening his own laptop. Mukti was checking some mails and ran a hand though her hair, Prem glanced at her but went back to his work…some how she was too attractive now. Half an hour latter the flight landed in Bangalore where the seminar was healed, Mukti got up but she felt a bit dizzy but some how managed to get up. She left with Prem who did not even notice this momentary change…

Mukti was resting in her hotale room when she heared a knock, "Come in." it was Prem. "I came to remaind you about the party today evening."

Krishi
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Posted: 18 years ago
#15
All right all right, mai re-write karu the whole fan-fic...monday sa.

Krishi
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Posted: 18 years ago
#16
hey just wondering if you were planning to continue this fanfic? its really good, you should keep going!
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Posted: 18 years ago
#17
wow its wonderful update pls continue it 👏 😭
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Posted: 18 years ago
#18
wow fantastic 👏 LAGE RAHO KRISHI BHAI
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Posted: 18 years ago
#19
PLS IAM WATING FOM LONG TIME PLS CONTINUE IT PLS 😭

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