Th#8 ArHi SS: Love Interrupted Th# 9 PG. 141 (24/10)

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Anu

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Posted: 12 years ago

#51

i had lost touch wit this story after t 4th chap...n then suddenly came across this again n was really thrilled to read it straight to tis point. i should say ur an amazing writer! i just admire the way u had depicted t feelings of each of t character n related to our beloved story as well!

t time is 3 in t morning now n i was just sitting n reading t story not even knowing its this late! it was just awesome to see arnav flirting wit khushi again...i just love t way u describe their flirting scenes! though its just words spoken bet them their impact is way beyond tat! giving goosebumps to us..

please please cont this story soon!

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Nisha

@NishaAP

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Posted: 12 years ago

#52

Wow Amazing update. You justified Kushi's serialstic/unrealistic behavior with this update. Now it makes sense. Though you did not justify our Arnie's behavior I do not mind at all because our Arnie is a confused soul hence unjustification about his actions only suits him. But I really want him give explanation what the heck he was doing with that girl when he himself promised his Mom that he would whole heartedly give a thought about marry Kushi. Please do not forget about it.

Btw how everybody knows about Sinhas and Madhumathi's deeds. Did Arnav reviled that later to his family? And why did not revealed in front of the guests?

Payal ready to leave. I am little sad hearing that even though I know she won't leave and Akash, if not Akash even Arnav won't let her leave. Glad that Lavanya asked Akash to keep Payal forever. At least now he would think about going beyond friendship with her and propose her. She deserves it.

Kushi's anger is so cute and Arnav's naughtiness is super cute. While reading that part I was smiling like an idiot and my husband's expression seeing me like that proved that I was indeed looking like an idiot but I can help it.

Edited by nishaipkkdian - 12 years ago

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dumas

@dumas

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Posted: 12 years ago

#53

loved the update loved Khushi inner thought and the flash back so Khushi had already knew she was going to marry him and she had build her dreams only for it to be squashed and in her anger and her jealousy she had told his mother what she had seen with him and the girl in the shed so sad and so cute Khushi had been in love with him for a long time its just know ASR is realizing his loved and he broke his promise to his mom back then and young Khushi knew what he was doing with that girl is what he was supposed to be doing with his wife loved he reaction heartbreaking glad everyone knows about sinhas and the aunts and how far the went to get the own way loving Payal , Payal ready to leave loved that La asked Akash to keep Payal forever loving Khushi anger on Arnav loved the push and so cute that he explained away that she accepted when she did not say anything loved it and loving Arnav trying to seduced her in to accept him loving his naughtiness is super cute super sexy wicked awesome

Edited by dumas - 12 years ago

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kclovearshi

@kclovearshi

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Posted: 12 years ago

#54

Res for Part1:

wow Khushi eavesdropped on Ratna & Garima's conversation and knew about the proposal..!😉And Khushi's reasons to marry Arnav are sooo cute 😆 She stiil didn't change her attitude towards him.!!! But she did miss him when he wnt to US, got annoyed when he didn't bring her any gift and felt jealous when she saw him kissing the other girl (I like it when you connect the dots Zehra..)

But felt very sad for Khushi when her world upside down after she came back from vacation..!! Khushi must have been a strong girl any other girl would have gone into serous depression with that kind of an attachment 😭 I wish Dadi or Nani or Arnav contacted her family knowing how much attached she was to Ratna 😲

It was so sweet to read that Ratna's very words were instrumental in her healing!! But then a bigger blow came with her parents' demise. why God why? what would have happened to her if Subhadra dadi and Anjali did not see her in the hospital? She was in a haze, not in her surroundings, how could she have contacted Abhishek's family? You are right, some bonds are eternal..!!!

Cheers

Edited by kclovearshi - 12 years ago

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kclovearshi

@kclovearshi

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Posted: 12 years ago

#55

Res for Part2:

I just loved how you revisited all the happenings when Khushi is brought back to Shantivan after her parents' death, with a different point of view. It seems to me now, only Khushi harbored feelings for Arnav thoughout and he hated her with passon!! No wonder he didn't want her in his house but ofcourse without knowing anything about waht happened. When he did come to know he became a sweetheart isn't it 😳 Glad both opened up to each other be it in their poolside conversations or in Nainital or their ride back home. So while promising to be her friend he started developing feelings for her but didn't realize them? Khushi wasn't sure if he reciprocated feelings untill after the kiss but then she saw her engagement ring and events to follow took a turn for the worse with heartbreak, accusations et el 😡

The he waits untill the last minute, escape with her when he finds out about the evil plan of Madhumati & SInhas but still won't confess!! He announced to the world that he will marry her without ever proposing to her, no wonder Khushi is upset over him? 😆

Yes Khushi's thoughts are totally justified 😉

Payal's name should have been Chulbuli!! 😉 Glad Akash & her made up! 😛

Cheers

Edited by kclovearshi - 12 years ago

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kclovearshi

@kclovearshi

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Posted: 12 years ago

#56

Res for Part3:

Poor Khushi, could not bring her point across because Arnav could easily shut her up, he had apoint though that she didn't refuse. But how could she, even if she had wanted him to propose first she wouldn't make a scene infront of the whole family right? Not fair Arnav, you are taking advantage of Khushi's good manners 😛

Arnav and Khushi's nok jhoks, will will both of them get serious 😉 And what is Arnav upto? instead of cajoling her he suggests to go to sleep 😆

Khushi in a sexy barely there nightwear beside him and how he is able to keep his hands to himself 😆 So desiced to take a sweet revenge on her 😛 so he has seen hs name in her mehandi 😳

Haaye, La wants to keep Payal for ever 😛

Morning after: Loving a naughty Arnav 😳😉

"If he behaved like this with her in the morning what will he do with her tonight?"

Eid Mubarak Zehra - God bless

Cheers

Edited by kclovearshi - 12 years ago

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sudhalata1

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Posted: 12 years ago

#57

Lovely update and the teasing Arnav is sooo cute.

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shree99

@shree99

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Posted: 12 years ago

#58

The teasing, flirty arnav with his one liners was one of the best phases of ipk
u bring it to more than life.. and.. with more thadka... loving it..

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ananya321

@ananya321

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Posted: 12 years ago

#59

superb update... loved it ...

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Filmyshilmy

@dennisdmenace

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Posted: 12 years ago

#60

Z, the longer the update the bigger the hug gets.🤗

Interesting is Akash and lavanya and payal. Such lovely healthy relationships. Payal is so pragmatic. Whatever unnatural bit of protectiveness is theire from Akash towards lavanya will get corrected by payal's practical sense and her individualistic approach. She is a strong girl. Lavanya will get the needed emotional strength from her.

Adorable khushi, whether kid or teenager or a young lady. Want to stay close to badi amma and her parents. For that she can marry Arnav. Whatever will come along with deal will be countered later.😆

I loved when you say khushi didn't understand why was she crying when Arnav kissed someone else. 😉

Now you have presented a sexy Arnav in the morning.😳will I survive in the night? Nazook Dil mera.

Edited by dennisdmenace - 12 years ago