Th#8 ArHi SS: Love Interrupted Th# 9 PG. 141 (24/10)

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Outstanding Zehra really...

Part 18 LI

The past revealing so much necessary
Pieces of a puzzle joining beautifully
Everyone knew, but maintained secrecy
To Ratna's wishes Khushi was too privy
Implications not understood in her naivety
To live with badi ma she was very happy
Marriage she thought was fun and gaiety
Befitting her age was the excitement certainly

Khushi so very thrilled at her destiny
Followed her beloved Ratna most closely
To be a Raizada she was training perfectly
Learning, watching every move attentively
Nothing more just to be her badi ma's beti
Until one day she felt something suddenly

Arnav's absence she did miss surprisingly
On his return happy, a bit excited was she
But pretended not to care and indifferent be.
Gifts for all but her he got specifically
Chocolates left in front of her halfheartedly
But stubborn was our Khushi equally
She continued to taunt him annoyingly
And claim his mother love completely

A girl with Arnav one day when she did see
Behaving like you do with the one you marry
Had explained to her Ratna while watching TV
Her chances by him being ruined considerably
Afraid his mother's wishes he will with disagree
And break her dreams unceremoniously
Yet feeling arose in her similar to jealousy
And so to Badi ma she complained slyly

Happiness soon was marred by tragedy
Everything ruined by death prematurely
Khushi scarred almost permanently
Tears and loneliness, always in misery
Unable to come to terms with reality
All she had were badi ma's memories
Life had lost it's charm completely
Even Arnav had moved away with family

Years later by chance she met Anjali
When Khushi was grieving quietly
Having lost her parents just recently
Was Arnav chosen for her by destiny
He still hated her like before unfortunately
To her circumstances he was not privy
But soon he was asking for her apology
And also brought for her comfort his nani

Friendship developing slow and steady
Opening up to each other during a journey
Nainital was a turning point luckily
A bond forming ever so beautifully
Their lives they shared voluntarily
But then Arnav became all flirty
Teasing her at every opportunity
His eyes looking at her mesmerisingly
Noticing every curve in her body

Feelings had just started blooming slowly
Accompanied by possessiveness & envy
They enjoyed stolen moments in privacy
And New year brought some intimacy
Closer they came almost naturally
He wanted her it he knew certainly
But everything came to a halt suddenly
For soon appeared the terror buaji

Along with Payal a saviour for Khushi
Bold and brave and very very gutsy
She took on her mother directly,
The past disclosed shocking everybody
Khushi was engaged to another previously
Arnav was filled with anger and fury
Breaking their trust almost immediatel
Accusing her once again hatefully
Plotting and planning and treachery
Akash by her was smitten slightly
And she with his flirted endearingly
Payal undiscovered the conspiracy
Saving Khushi from the Sinha lady
Matchmaking Aranv with his Khushi
Making way for their matrimony
We knew love they felt mutually
To know he wanted them to marry
She was from intrinsically happy

But hid it so very successfully
The family rejoiced at their unity
Khushi and Arnav together finally
But the bride as angry as could be
For the decision not taken jointly
Nor was she consulted by her hubby
They would sleep in one bed only
Khushi in her lingerie so sexy
Arnav tempted by her obviously

Controlling his urges desperately
A distance he maintained respectfully
Waking up entwined so comfortable
Painting a picture very cosy
Was a very bashful and shy Khushi
Embarrassed by his voice husky
Whispering his intentions for her naughty
After all she was his wife legally
He would convince her totally

And make her accept him readily
So his plans he put to motion quickly
To office she would him accompany
And at night hoping to get lucky
Now we wait eagerly to see
How he manages a suhaag raat
With his wife so lovely
Don't know about her but we are ready..
Edited by vandana.sagar - 11 years ago
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Kay!
Shaadi over but important rasam not over, that is not fair to everyone concerned.
Zee, write the next part fast, want help let me know šŸ˜‰
Edited by Kalyaani - 12 years ago
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Res!

~Unres:
it all began with a simple wish!
Khushi felt something, watching Anav kiss!
This urely was heights..
To kiss him, to miss him, were just her rights!
Marriage that bound her to Badi Amma for life..
Not knowing that first she will be Arnav's wife!
Fights continued so did the hate!
For them, then, to be together, wasn't in fate!

Badi Amma's demise took Khushi away.
Leaving just her all sad and astray..
Tears didn't seem to subside..
Her pain she couldn't hide!
The lost was vast!
But she did come up at last!
When Maariage proposal came!
All she looked for was Arnav's name..
In her heart, he had a place..
She looked for him, in each guy's face!
Soon came another blow..
Which threatened to overwhelm her fast or super slow..
Anjali and Dadi took her along..
She met Arnav after such long!
His hate was clear..
For him, she was no dear!
Days ahead she saw him anew!
Arnav that he was, in her Badi Amma's view!
A truce was made..
Sadness began to fade!
Soon Friendship came long..
Binding them with ties so strong!
Sharing fears, talking cool..
Feelings came around, just by the pool!
New years Party made her fall..
Fall for him, for once and all!
Bike ride when came..
Wondering if he too felt the same,
Reality came crashing around.
Her heartbroke with no audible sound!
She needed to break free..
In all her guilt spree..
She told him the about the ring!
Madhumati came in with the devils wing!
Came in the forgotten past!
It was time to face it at last!
He was mad, yet he came around!
Promising to be a friend forever..
Promising to leave her never..
Yet those 3 words didn't came!
She decided to play along the oblivious game!
The deceit of bua shook her..
Kalyaani's truth broke her..
Arnav held her hand then..
She needed hin the most, when!
But she realised it..
He still hadn't said it!
With rage and anger she asked him why..?
All he said : why.. Why..? To oppose did you even try?
That got her speechless..
His stares making her breathless..
His caress and touch affecting her zyada..
What will now do, MRS. Raizada..?
Arnav's words hold a promise..
Expecting her to give the other cheeck for kiss..
In the Night that's going to befall..
We will get our 'Rabba ve's' afterall..?
Edited by aashi12 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Twigs!
~Edit!~

So Khushi thought of him as her husband even when she did not like him, just because she'd be with her Badi Amma. Cannot imagine what that child must have gone through when Ratna passed away!
And then there is Arnav, he has turned on his charm on full throttle, how is one to escape ? He has flustered her with his flirting and his.. ermm.. sexiness :P No matter what, she revels in being Arnav's wife. Ohhh what happens tonight!? Though I am glad it is this way.. rather than making this look like a mock marriage by sleeping in two separate beds.

PS - Waise Arnav had some plans naa, payback plans? What happened to that? Thats going to come up soon, isn't it ?

Mast update tha, Zee! Aur teko Eid Mubarak :) Have a lovely time and stay blessed 😃
Edited by vgedin - 12 years ago
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D!
Edited!

What an update it was! It was good to read Khushi's POV which I've been meaning to read since their attraction track started. It was good to see that she had developed a tiny crush on him in her teens though never understood or acknowledged that. This was the reason he came in her mind when her marriage talk started.

I've seen, now a days parents are good with blackmails. Not all & everytime but some & sometimes. And she being an obedient child gave into their wishes. I see Ratna's death had a great effect on her but than they say na do something that people will remember you even after your death. And Ratna really made her place in everyone's heart, that after her death, it was her words which encouraged khushi to move ahead in life.

I loved this side of arnav. How much I craved this side of him in the show😭 And it was such a fun to read it all! Haye, I am in love with this all over again, bas! I want more😃😳

And I hope Akash soon recognizes his feelings for payal & brings her to his house permanently! Or will there also it will be love interrupted?

Update karo ab!
Edited by dj_arshifan - 11 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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R

Unres
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Awesome update.

Khushi was happy that she can stay with her
badi amma through her marriage.. she didnot
think about what marriage with Arnav means..
Arnav, on the other hand kisses a girl in garage
and Khushi feels bad about it :( This reminded
me of Arnav & lavanya where Khushi's eyes get wet
and Arnav is surprised to see it..a confused Khushi,
doesn't know that her heart is crying.


Phases of what Khushi thinks Arnav feels for her:
Hates her->friends->probably love->marriage!

Khushi is angry at Arnav because he didn't propose
but directly stated that he would marry her! I agree
with her... Arnav out of insecurity that he might
loose her didnot ask her if she was alright with the marriage.

In IPKKND, Arnav married Khushi without
telling her why, like here in LI. There is
a lot in common between LI and IPKKND except
for the real bitter parts gone😊
I wanted to see Khushi sleep..legs entangled,
holding Arnav's shirt in RM, thanks for making it happen here!


He made her say that she knows the rituals(SR),
they are married, whats the deal with his 3/4th kaam
done and whats the thing that is left..what is he
going to make her do/do to heršŸ˜‰

Payal talked to Lavanya about the matter Akash was
dreading to since ages. She solved his problem..

Payal looking at Aakash's watch and thinking that
her time in RM is over😭
I really want to see what Akash would do to make
Payal stay in RM forever! Donoo brothers itne budhu
hai ki diye huve chance ko utilize nahi karte..

Loved the update.. 😊
Edited by Skiran - 11 years ago

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