kahaN GayA UssE DhoondhO- A KriYaM 3 ShoT pt 2 PG9 - Page 8

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Posted: 12 years ago
#71
awesome part... just loved d os... beautiful.. u showed swayam's feelings beautifully.. 1 line of swayam that sharon would ve kicked me out n not loved was funny.. loved each n every line in d os n d way showed kriyam friendship... missing kriyam a lot..

chap 2
awesome.. taani wants to know kria in person loved that part.. she went in search of her n found her number from owner.. now she knows where kria s n ll search her but after NDC.. d way she declared that swayam ll dance for memories n friendship theme in memory of kria was like wow.. gang s devastated .. but this line d most it was funny...
By their expressions.. It looked like I had told them that I would be raping them and cutting their heads of their body' waiting for next part update soon...

ps: don leave IF plz...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#72
loved the first 2 chapters :) can't wait for the next part, continue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
#73
luved d update...:)
jus waiting fr kriyam's meet n kriya's truth to b revealed
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Posted: 12 years ago
#74
nice!!!!
par iska third part kab milega??
waiting for it eagerly!!!!!!

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