NEW FF 'MISTAKEN IDENTITY' chap 2 pg 7

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MISTAKEN IDENTITY

Hi all !!! 😃I am here with another story😆, I know I am not regular with my stories but my college life is so hectic that I don't get time to write. Yet I just cant get this story out of my mind, so I am sharing it with you.. thank you navi for telling me to go on with the story😃...

Plot

This is basically a manveer story, with manveer caught in a web of evil and tries to escape from there. But would they escape? or would the web suffocate them as they get more and more tangled in it??

So basically this is suspense story , like my other stories. Lol... here is the character sketch.

Udayveer Singh: a young man of 28 years, who has come to Mumbai with a lot of dreams, he is presently a teacher in a college that offers distance education. He is a orphan, looking for a place to stay in Mumbai

Manyta sinha: a young lady of 26 years, a bubbly lady who is a student of uday. Her family lives in the interior parts of Maharashtra, she works part time in a shopping mall. Becomes close friends with her teacher

Shreya singh: a bubbly 20 year old girl, the apple of the eye of her brother. She enjoys life to the fullest

Veerendra singh: a 30 year old police officer, he has never ever failed to solve a case. Has a clean record. Loves his sister a lot.Recently shifted to Mumbai for a new case

Dhirendar baba: a very powerful underworld don, merciless in his actions. Kills his enemy without a second thought. Has several charitable institutions, is the savior of the N.K colony. He was the sole person responsible for putting education institutions and water supply and electricity for the people n nk colony. He is the living god for the people in that colony. But his ways of making money is not good. He deals with drugs and grooming goons and stealing, he has a army of goons at his service. Baba and his army terrorizes the people in Mumbai for more than a decade

Abhayya mehar: 29 years old girl, circumstances had made her so bold. She can kill a person without regrets. The sight of blood does not make her drizzy like other girls. she Knows to handle guns and knife, good in martial arts.

So how is it? do you want me to continue? Do give me your honest answers...

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Chapter 1
chapter 2
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Prologue

The DGP of Mumbai police patted virendra singh on his shoulder and told him," I believe you veer, you can solve this case, you can put that dhirendar baba in jail, he and his men should no longer terrorize the city

Veerendra smiled and said" I will try my best sir"

DGP: just make sure that you get him before, he gets you. Not a single officer has ever come alive after trying to get him in prison. He can smell a police officer a 1000 yards away. Be careful

Veerendra nodded and saluted the officer and left

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Abhayya sat on the couch playing with her gun, she asked her uncle "so a new officer is out there for catching baba???

Her uncle looked at her and answered: yes that's what I heard.

Abayya caressed the body of her gun and added: come my new prey, I will sure enjoy killing you

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Uday smiled as he entered the office of his new college, finally he was going a job for which he had studied. Teaching was his passion, and now here he was going to be the guru of many kids, to show them the right path, the path of truth.

The principal greeted him and told " good to have you here, uday, isn't it?" uday nodded . the principal continued " you will have to work six days a week from morning 8 to evening 4, is it ok?"

"sure sir" .

" then there is nothing more to add, your first class is in room no. 26, here is the timetable and the syllabus"

"thanks sir"

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Manyata walked cheerfully to her class. She was finally attending college after saving enough. She straightened her salwar as she walked and reached the outside of her class room. After praying to god to help her achieve her goal, she entered the class room only to find a teacher already taking class.

"excuse me?" she asked

Uday who was giving a short introduction to the children, stopped the class for a moment and added after looking at her "get in miss, but next time you come late, don't stop to here , but go home, I don't tolerate late comers , is that clear?"

Manyata mumbled " iam sorry sir" and silently cursed him under her breadth

Uday heard it and he just chucked. " its going to be interesting teaching here" though uday

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So that brings us to the end of the prologue. It's a story where life gets too complicated, due to some unsaid actions and how people try to untangle themselves, but in vain. it's a love story tainted By external evil

Do tell me if you want me to continue this story

Don't forget to comment and like.

Edited by andy.a - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Fantastic CS and prolouge andy
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Posted: 11 years ago
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woah nice teacher student love story han??
awesome update soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Looks interseting :)
Please continue soon:) And thank you for the PM :)
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Posted: 11 years ago
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awesome awesome awesome teri her story mai kuch na kuch suspence hota hai plz pm me 😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Awesome!!!
Really interesting cs and prologue.
Can't wait for the 1st chappy.
So do continue asap.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Looks interesting... Wanna read it further to see what happens...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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hey jiji
how are you?
it truly awesome
i loved every bits of it
the tittle, the characters and
even the prologue
this is going to be very interesting
aha guess we can get some
teacher student romance
thanks for the pm continue asap
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: huma12.

Fantastic CS and prolouge andy

thanks so much huma.

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