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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: cherrybloom1


ahhh
that sounds like an amazing idea!!!
ab toh i will ask for 2 updates only!!!!😉

Phir done ab to do updates mile ge😆
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: IPK..Jenny

Phir done ab to do updates mile ge😆


really??
meri toh lottery lag gayi!!!!
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: cherrybloom1


really??
meri toh lottery lag gayi!!!!

haha haan 😆
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Posted: 12 years ago
No worries
Shall wait till then
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: sushi08

Awsommmiiieee i just luv dis story...khushi met shyam whn she was in boarding school n man he was such a bas***d back den whn he was a kid he tried 2 rape hr...bloody son of a bitch!!! *sorry 4 da language but cudn't help it* i'm realy curious how arnav get in2 dis whole picture...arshi finly reachd london...i luv da bonding mami has with arshi...shez realy vry nice...well bout arshi planning idk mayb 2 make shyam anjali's lyf hard...i mean shyam luvz money so probably bankcrupt dem i guess idk seriously nxt chp sooon waiting 4 da garima story 2 continue n reveal soon!!


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Your along the right track regarding how shyam will suffer
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Originally posted by: raniluvsasr

Omg khushi had to go thru so much in her child hood. Really well. Keep updating.


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Originally posted by: raniluvsasr

Hey thnxx for d pm,loved d update. Khushi had to suffer so much. Very well written. Cudnt be more better. Shyam is such a creep. very long update. Keep updating.


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Originally posted by: chavvi16

man what he did was even worse than what one thought

and there seems to be more too
how could he do this
no wonder she has restraining order placed against him
oh man so mami knows all about it now
well at least someone other than them in the family knows of the truth
it is needed to protect payal and even that anjali
even though she is being right pain
well so they are finally gonna start again
and wonder what they have planned for creep
hope its something good
and make him suffer for sure
also make that stupid sister of his to see sense
cheers for pm


Yup there more to it
Yes she still need protecting
Of course he shall suffer
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Originally posted by: Happytwinkle

awesome update

thanks for the pm
Twinkle


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Originally posted by: yappingduck

simply amazing.loved it-


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Edited by Jenny_PMS - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago

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Originally posted by: navjot7

nice updt
so shyam was after her in college
how arnav help her
i want to know about their past
thnx for pm
updt soon


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Originally posted by: sfghfj

Awesome update. poor khushi she had to suffer so much . waiting to read further


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Originally posted by: suji5

now what arnav is going to do..


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Originally posted by: venkata

Awesome update. Felt really bad for kushi when Garima told what Shyam did to her. Happy tat they are going to start new phase of life. Loved the update.


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Originally posted by: tparvaiz

Awesome update
Shyam 😡 he almost
Sad for khushi past😭
Arshi know each other from 10 years n 6 months.
But I'm 😕 how they meet each other. ????
How they meet..what happen ??? N why shaym did this to khushi
Do he get to know thst arshi are in love
And how khushi parent come to know about shyam did this 😕
Please continue
Thank you for MP me


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Originally posted by: gayu2308

Hii there... just got to read ur update completely from the beginning...

Nice story.. very different.. first time am reading anjali in a negative role.. or maybe grey? ?

Kushi's past is shocking! !!... so I guess she must have met arnav too around the same time... so that it tally's with the 10yrs 6 mnths count! ?!

Quite a heavy plot with plenty of mystery attached to the flash back...

Waiting for the story to unfold... do continue to update... all the best...

Do try to pm if possi :)


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Right she met him in london
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Edited by Jenny_PMS - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago

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Originally posted by: cherrybloom1

eeks, finally read it and absolutely loved it!

i love the pace at which ur opening all the secrets one by one!
ofcourse shyam an never be anything but a creep, trying to rape a young girl, i wonder where arnav fits in here.
i loved how khushi was like "my husband finally realizes that im awesome after knowing me for 10yrs and 6months."
im so excited to know more about it, update sooon pleaseee


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Originally posted by: yappingduck

simply superb
loved it-


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Originally posted by: anumeha_PM

beautiful ff..

simply amazing...

loved the concept...

cont. soon..

thnx for the pm...


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Originally posted by: katj

Hi, just started to read your story...seems interesting...will catch up soon with rest of the updates...pls add me in your bubby list thanks...


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Originally posted by: katj

ooh snake played a very careful move...and y anjali don't like khushi?

nice update


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Originally posted by: katj

its too interesting..next part soon ...


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Edited by Jenny_PMS - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Okay here we go chapter 6

Once out of the plane and checked they walked out to the baggage area. 'mumma, papa you go out and find NK me and Khushi will bring the bags' 'no don't worry Arnav i will get mine and Garima's you just get yours and Khushi's'. After much argument from Shashi, Khushi got the upper hand and they reluctantly agreed and left out of the gate to the Arrivals Area and went to find NK. Garima and Shashi walked out of the baggage area and scanned the airport for their son. 'Shashi i bet that good for nothing son of your doesn't even remember that we are coming.' 'he's my son now!?..how is it my fault if he forgot' Shashi retorted. 'who said he forgot in the first place' a deep masculine voice said. Before she could turn around Garima was hugged from behind 'i missed you mumma' He kissed her cheek. Garima turned around and hugged him properly. 'Aaw my baby i missed you too' they were inturupted by Shashi 'kamal hai, everyone seems to be forgetting me these days' they laughed. NK walked towards him and gave him a big bear hug. 'don't worry papa, its nothing personal' he paused and went back to garima and hugged her from behind then continued 'but mumma is too beautiful to miss' 'haww besharm ladka' Garima hit him over the head. 'Ouch maaa' NK wined. And the two of them burst out laughing.

Baggage area

Arnav had just put the last bag on the trolley when he felt two arms sneak in around his waist from behind. He smirked and turned around in her arms, as he turned his eyes met with Khushi's water filled ones and instantly the smirk was wiped of is face and replaced with worry filled eyes which soon turned into concern as he began to understand why her condition was like this. Khushi was amazed by the speed in which Arnav understood her without her having to say anything and instantly buried her head into the crook of his neck and cried her heart out and Arnav didn't stop he just hugged her back and stroked her back from time to time whilst whispering comforting words in her ear ashe thought of what happened.

Flashback

It had been 7 years and Khushi was final returning back to India after finishing her studies. The past three years had been great for Khushi with Arnav's help she was back to her normal self and was able to face shyam. They were on there way into the airport when 2 men came in from behind and grabbed Khushi and dragged her to a big white van, before Arnav could do anything the van was on its way out of the airport. Arnav just stared at it.

He was brought back when NK came up to him and touched his shoulder.' Arnav...Arnav.' 'Huh' 'Arnav, where is Di' 'NK go get the car' 'but where is Di' 'get the god damn car NK' Arnav yelled and withiin minutes NK and thecar where infront of Arnav. As he got in he said 'follow that white van and dont lose it' by now NK understood that something very wrong had happened and decided to stay quiet and just follow Arnav's instructions.

After 30 mins of driving in the middle of fields Arnavs phone rang and khushi's name flashed. He looked at NK ' Arnav answer it come on' after a few seconds of staring at the screen he finally pressed the green button and accepted the call.

'What did you think Khushi that i would let you leave with that lover boy of yours hmm...you really think that i would let you go so easily ... For the past seven years i have been wait to mark you as mine and you were giving me such a hard time ... first time you parents interrupted us ... then throughout boarding school that ... anyways leave all that ... You my dear will be mine soon ...' He caressed her cheek 'mmm' 'what...you don't like me touching you ... To bad' 'mmm' tears fell from khushis eyes and she held the phone tigh in her captive arms behind her back'

'Tring tring' a shrilling ringtone played from Shyam's pocket. He took out his phone and 'Rani Sahiba what stupid times you call at' shes eyes went wide as well as Arnavs and NK's on the other end of the phone. 'Rani Sahiba?? NK jiju calls Di Rani Sahiba ...It can't be ... '

SMASH!! The car window shattered sending shards of glass flying everywhere, some of which cut Arnavs tightly enclosed fist, and one that cut deep through his left eyebrow. As blood flowed down it missed with the tears that came from his eyes. To say NK was Scared was an understatement he had just witnessed the life of the most ruthless and scary personality ASR came alive.

Khushi stopped crying and looked up to Arnav and kissed his scar, which brought him back 'I'm sorry, i shouldn't be crying...come on lets get out of here ' she wiped her tears and stood up straight. Arnav stood in front of her and folded his arms at his chest. 'What' Khushi asked. 'Nothing come on' he held her and and pulled her to his side and used his other hand to push the luggage trolley. Before the entered the Arrivals area Khushi pulled Arnav to the side 'thank you ... If you and NKhadn't have came that day only Devi Mayyia knows what would have happened' arnavwas about to speak when she stopped him 'Arnav let me speak please

As they walked out the saw NK hugging Garima and the three of them laughing about something NK had said. 'Care to share the joke with us' Khushi said from behind and the three of them turned. 'Finally!' NK called and gave Arnav a brotherly hug before turning towards Khushi, who had her arms folded at her chest. 'Di..' He held open his arms and Khushi ran into them and hugged him as tears fell from her eyes. 'Di' they hugged each other for what felt like hours. Eventually NK came back and with Khushi still hugging him he spoke. 'By the way Di, I'm very angry with you' and Khushi was brought back she pulled out of his arms and put her arms on her hips. 'What, Why?'... 'Hogaye Shuru' said Arnav shaking his head. Before NK and Khushi could continue Shashi and pulled NK to the trolley and sent him towards the exit. 'Kids come on home first continue later, i want to sit down' Garima announced while Arnav pushed a pouting Khushi out of the door and to NK's car.

The drive home wasn't any longer than 25 minutes. During this time Arnav and NK spoke about the new business. 'Okaii Jeeju, everything is pretty much set for you and Di, all you need to do is speak to the banks and some interviews, and you have started up a business.' 'We, NK, we.' Arnav said as he turned to look at him as he drove. 'Nothing would have been possible if you hadn't helped us. Th...' ' no way don't you dare say thanks, any ways leave that as i was saying none of the employees know you too are married like Di said they all think that you are friends only and that Di is the boss, but i don't understand why you don't want them to know??'

Thats all for now

Okay before Miss Cherrybloom blows my head for not giving two updates 😆

i want to say that i did have two updates then my ipad crashed before i could save the second one to icloud 🤢
so im in the middle of rewriting it and will have it up by monday evening here time 😃
Therefore PMs will go out on Monday

Jenny x
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Edited by IPK..Jenny - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
me
unres!!


heheh!
so ur second update got deleted?
i can understand, it happened once with me too!
i was ready to destroy anything and everything that came in front of me!!!


waise i loved the update
i can see how shyam has been around, doing all types of crap with khushi!
aww arnav and NK seem to share quite a cute bond!

khushi crying and arnav understanding withen seconds was totally adorable!
i wonder what the secret behind them keeping their relationship hidden is!!
cant wait to find out!!

hoping to get the next chapter soon!!!!😊
Edited by cherrybloom1 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
oh dear you wrote them but it crashed so nothing was left
wow ASR is fun to watch when he goes after others right
so he had also tried to molest her
am saying molest here as arnie got to her before he could do anything else
thank god for arnie
he was the one who got her out of her state and he once again saved her when that creep was about to do what he did
man his crimes keep on increasing
and now he gotta pay and pay real bad
so nk is her woohoo
and this boy is very naughty for sure
wait whats all this about arhi being married not being known to theiir emloyees iska peeche kya raaz hai boss
Edited by chavvi16 - 12 years ago

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