SwaRon FF : Kahi Ankahi [JDM S2] Chap 11 : 111 - 25/10/2013 [Updated]

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Chapter # 10

Pals, i do be really gentle from this time so please read the thank you post and below one the note post too, since you all need to know something. OK? GOOD!

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Swayam wore a random but smart suit, which obviously Sharon had picked for him yesterday night and had hang it in the wardrobe in bathroom for him. He walked out of the room to found no one except Sarah who was placing fresh plates on dining table for him. "Sarah, where is Sharon and Deepy?" He asked Sarah who looked at him, "Swayam sir, Deepy went to school as her bus arrived and ma'am left too for office. She told me to inform you that she had some important work so she is leaving early then you." Sarah said and resumed her work. Swayam knew there was no work except the meeting, they both have to attend so obviously she was gone for a reason which he knew. He felt moreover guilty on what he did but even after thinking that if he ashamed too, he couldn't agree to it because he was not ashamed. He respect Sharon and he likes her. What he did was out of purity and not physical attraction towards her but he thought maybe he still shouldn't have done that.

"Swayam sir, breakfast is ready. Have something or you will be wait for the office." Sarah said to him and broke the train of his thoughts. "Huh, oh, no I am not hungry." He said and turned to walk in his bedroom to grab his wallet and cell phone. "But Swayam sir, ma'am told me to ask you to eat or at least drink juice. She won't like it if you will not eat anything." Sarah said to him and immediately Swayam stopped in his track. "Sharon said?" He asked while turning back to her. She simply nodded and smiled lightly afterwards. Swayam waited a second and sat on the dining table. He didn't eat as much he regularly did, but he did. After eating, he drove to his office. The only thought ringing in his mind in entire journey was that how will he face Sharon now.

He reached his office and asked the receptionist for Sharon. "Good morning boss. Ma'am is in her cabin." She told Swayam and he walked towards his own cabin after nodding to her. Swayam and Sharon had separate cabins but were only inches apart from each other. Their cabins were the most ravishing once and were located in the back end of the office building with permission for only few people to come there, other else could just convey the messages from phones. All this happened few weeks ago when Swayam started getting worried for Sharon and made a rule to allow only few very close and trustworthy employees to enter in the area where the cabins were located, even the cabins were located in such a safe side before. Swayam got everything constructed, saying Sharon that she should feel special from now on. Of course he couldn't find the better excuse to tell Sharon. His and Sharon's cabin was of transparent glasses. People can least see 50% person of what is happening inside.

Swayam didn't wait for and entered in his cabin. He asked his close two close employees, Karan and Ajay to come to his cabin through phone. In less than 5 minutes they knocked on the door, as Swayam also saw Sharon eyeing towards him cabin. "Good morning, Swayam sir. You called us?" Ajay asked. "Good morning, Ajay, Karan. Yes, I called you for something really important. Sit?" Swayam said while a light smile. Swayam is always very calm and polite with his employees. "Thank you, sir." Karan said he they sat down. "Look, Ajay and Karan, you both are working in this company from past 5 years, you both are the oldest once here since I transferred all of my staff from this office to another company. You both may also know the reason, right?" He asked and both of them nodded. "Ok, I trusted you before then that is why I didn't transferred you both. You are here since the I didn't even joined this company. I need your help, aright?" He asked and both of nodded after giving a confusing look to Swayam.

Swayam told them something important and secure, which he never thought to share to anyone but he couldn't be around Sharon all the time in office or in her cabin so he did this all for her. "Now, you both know that you both have to help Sharon in every possible way with this contract, but only if she asks or I tell to since she might won't like that I am have personally asked you help her. She is new to all this, alright?" Swayam said. "Don't worry sir, we will take care of Sharon in every possible way. She is a nice friend to us." Karan said and Ajay glared at him. "Oh, no problem Ajay, you both can call her Sharon, after all she was your friend before my wife." Swayam smiled towards them. "So how many days will you both day to do my work?" Swayam asked. "It won't take much time sir. We will make to leave everything and work for it first." They both said and bid to Swayam leaving his cabin.

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Sharon was working on computer 'that other thought' but she was not doing anything besides thinking about what happened in the morning. She couldn't get her mind of from what she felt when Swayam jerked away from her, she saw regret in his eyes and it broke her heart. She sighed almost 50th time in last 2 hours. She decided to leave these thoughts behind her for now and work. Yes, needed to work. She called Ajay and asked him to come to her cabin. He came after some time. "Hey, Sharon... ma'am." Ajay said in a bit of teasing tone. "Oh come one Ajay, now don't start now. You know I am absolutely fine with Sharon?" She said grinning at him. "Yes, Swayam has told me too." He said smiling at her. "He told, when?" Sharon asked. "When I was his cabin, precisely 15 minutes ago." He said watching his wrist watch. After that Ajay helped her getting her mind off from things which were making her upset and then they talked about the contact. Sharon was so happy till morning because something, something really very special is today but then she couldn't be happy anymore. She picked her phone and called, "Hello, I am Sharon Raipr, I mean Sharon Shekhawat." She waited as someone was speaking on the other line. "Yes, I had the order but due to some issues I am not willing to pick it. Please cancel it, but I can pay for the money." She said and waited a minute, "Oh thank you, yes. Good afternoon!" She said and snapped at phone shut in anger, not on the person she just talked but on her fate.

Sharon was sighing like some granny after every minute, but then she saw someone entering in Swayam's cabin. She saw Elena! "She must be here to do what I wanted to so first, my luck!" She said to herself, and felt really sorry for herself. She knew from childhood that her luck is written with think dark and permanent black pen, but it got proven only after she met Swayam, or rather fell for him. How much she craves for one single long lasting happiness in her life. She got only one, Deepy. And she will never let it go, ever.

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Swayam was looking at Elena with his mouth wide open, almost hanging between his legs. He was shocked, "K Printing Corporations, really?" He asked 5th time to Elena. "Yes Swayam, K Printing Corporation! What is so shocking with this stupid name? I sent the letter to my bureau and I got the name that this company name was written on the letter." Elena said sipping the cup of her coffee. "Because it was our company!" Swayam said, still being partially stunned. Elena choked on her sip, "What, you must be kidding? You have no agency naming 'K. Printing Corporation'!" She said looking at him, equally confused and stunned. "Yeah, it is not practically mine. Dad, gifted this company to Kriya when she got married to Rey an year and half back. K means, Kriyansh!" He said and slapped on his forehead. Elena made a disgusted face, hearing Kriyansh."Don't make such faces. Kriyansh was Kriya's idea. Rey would never do that." He said and drunk some water from the glass aside him.

They both didn't talk for few minutes, "Then it means we need Kriya and Rey, right?" Elena asked. "NO! Now way, Kriya is pregnant and I don't want to drag her in anything like this. She doesn't even know that she is not our own blood!" Swayam panicked hearing Elena asking for Kriya and Rey. "What? She isn't, I mean.." Elena said, hesitantly as Swayam accidentally slipped this information towards her in his panicked emotions. He looked at her and realized what he just said. "Look, Elena you can't tell this to anyone. No one knows except dad, me and Sharon. We haven't tell this to Kriya, we can't. It will break her heart and I can't see my sister in that position. We have to tell her someday but that day isn't any nearing to us, I will make sure!" He said looked at her with pleading eyes. "Of course, Swayam! What did you tell me? Did I hear anything? NO!" She said trying telling him that she doesn't even know and this truth will be hidden in her. Swayam couldn't help but simply thank to God and smiled at her.

Swayam talked to Elena and informed her about what has she asked his loyal employees Ajay and Karan to do. "I think it is right. It will be only for good." She replied. " I am only thinking of Sharon and Deepy at the moment, they are my highest priorities and I can't let anything happen to them. So I took this step." He said. "I understand, but Swayam you know what we need Kriya and Rey, if not Kriya certainly then at least Rey. We have to tell him some part of the story and ask for his help, this is also for Sharon and Deepy, right?" Elena asked him, seeing a worried expression on his face. He didn't said anything, instead he picked his cell phone and made a call. "Hi, Rey. How are you?" Swayam said grinning on the phone. "Yeah, I know my sister can be headache lots of them but it was your choice. Now handle her." Swayam said and chuckled on the phone, "Yeah, yeah. Well, Rey I needed to ask you something, can you just come tomorrow at office?" He asked on his phone. "Yup, all good. Chal, I'll see you tomorrow. Take care. Bye, and have fun with my sister!" He said and shut the phone before Rey would have voice glared at him. "He will come, you should come too." He said, and Elena bid him goodbye and left.

Entire day went like normal day, nothing too interesting happen neither anything happened which could cause curiosity in Swayam again. He was relieved by then, one thing which was making him nervous was Deepy. She had call him in afternoon after Elena was gone and told him that she has arrived from school and she is missing both of them, Swayam and Sharon. Swayam couldn't deny that he had ever thought to have his own child, then it would have been exactly like this little angel in his life. She just makes his day and makes him smile and laugh on his silliest antics. The important was that she has asked that her dolls are ruined since she spilled ink on those and now she wants new one, and that too today because according to her she needs to sleep with them and she is getting bored without them. Swayam doesn't know how to buy gift for kids or rather for baby kid, such tantrum queen! And he couldn't ask Sharon for help right now too. What is he going to do?

It was almost 7:45 when he thought that he should go home now and left over work can be done by employees since few of them were doing extra time for a week. He shut his laptop and did things necessary to do before leaving the cabin, wore his coat and stuffed his cell phone in the pocket. He picked few files he needed to study and walked out of his cabin, closing it from behind. He was about to knock at Sharon's cabin but he noticed the darkness inside it, and it was locked from outside. Sharon was already gone! He thought and quickly walked out of the private area into normal area and bid good bye to his employees. He asked Ajay for Sharon and he told him that she just left hour ago, saying she has told Swayam. Swayam left the office after making an excuse to hide the little misunderstanding between them from Ajay.

He was driving his car and calling Sharon only to be answered by a beep. Why was she cutting the call? That was what running in his mind. He drove for about 5-6 minutes until something caught his eyes and he stopped the car. Someone was standing in the corner of road and with a person looking like mechanic and the girl stopping a auto rickshaw. No any girl, it was Sharon! He stopped his car with jerk and walked out of the car, seeing Sharon had stop the auto he ran to her. Before she could step into auto he held her hand and she looked at him in a snap. "You can go now." He said to the auto rickshaw driver and before Sharon could protest he left. "I am Swayam. I can go on my own, just that car broke down or else I would have been at home till now." She said never showing her broken self. "But you are, let's go." He said and took a step with her. "Swayam, please, I can go on my own. I am not a kid!" She said to him. "Then stop acting like one. You are going with me either you like it or not." He said and without wasting another second starting walking, crossing the road he reached his car. He made Sharon sit in passenger side and then walked towards the driver seat and started driving.

The silence was enough to put both of their hearts into deep down darken of loneliness and emptiness. Swayam couldn't take it any longer, guilt of hurting her so much was hurting him. He just wanted say one word, one single word 'sorry'. He took the fast left turn and that way was always take to go to highway. Sharon looked at him for the first time in entire ride, "Where are we going? Swayam stop the car!" Sharon said to him, not shouting at all, yet. "You know what, we need to talk, now." He said and stopped the car and took his cell phone out from his pocket. He called someone, "Hey, Karan." He said, "Yes, I need you to do me a favor right now. Can you go to my home and take my maid Sarah and Deepy to my farm house please?" He asked as if he was saying something very normal but his words made Sharon lose her temper. "Yeah, I am going there only. Sharon is with me. We will be waiting!" He said and cut the call. "We are not going anywhere, Swayam. Why can't you understand?" Sharon said to him in a bit higher pitch. "Don't you need to worry, OK? Just stop talking for now, please? Will you?" He asked politely. "Swayam.." Sharon tried to say something but he cut her off, "Please, Sharon! Why are you worrying too much? Deepy will be us." He said and Sharon gave her head a slight angry shook but she agreed.

He didn't went further but turned back, "Now why are you going back?" She asked irritating of what he was doing, "Because I need to get some dinner packed from any restaurant as we won't be able to prepare dinner all over there and even Deepy wants some dolls for her." He said and Sharon rested her back again to the seat, folding her arms on her chest. It wasn't long when he took get away pizzas for dinner and bought few dolls for Deepy, not to mention even a big and beautiful doll house and other girl toys for her as a gift for her. She would be really happy, he knew.

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It wasn't long when Swayam stopped the car in front of his huge and break taking beautiful farm house. Sharon came out of the car and so wanted to just stand there and keep starring at this small heaven but then she didn't, of course. She walked into the farm house like tigress and started kicking on the door when it didn't open. "It needs a key!" Swayam said from behind her who was holding boxes of gifts on his both hands and large shopper with pizza inside was in between his teeth. "Then where is it?" She asked, poor he because she didn't eve offer for help. "In my pocket with our house key." He said and without waiting for one single second Sharon walked close to him and opened his arms, coming between his and taking the key chain from inside his coat's pocket. Getting it she unlocked the door and merged inside. It was huge like small castle or something, it was totally designed in traditional style and the design was too classy and elegant. Everything is sparkling clean and shiny, just like new. There were huge fountains, everything was made by white wood. This farm house must look like a Cadbury milky bar in the sun shine, she wondered. Whatever the design was, she exactly knew that she hasn't seen anything so stylish and beautiful even I magazines and not to forget so expensive. Of course he has way too much money left by his father but his own money is also uncountable. Sometimes Sharon thinks that what if someone taunts her that she married him for his money, because she didn't.

"How did you get such a huge place and that too such a beautiful place around highway?" She asked him, not looking at him at all. "Well, I bought when it was only a lone ground and about beautiful, then I personally designed it and then build." He said. Sharon was excited suddenly hearing her husband has such an amazing taste, but she didn't show. "I am hungry. Give me the pizzas, Deepy and Sarah will be coming in few minutes, I think." She said sternly looking at her watch, and walked towards the house. "Be careful not to faint inside." Swayam shouted from behind. "I am not some patient!" Sharon shouted back, almost snapped back. "Oops!" Swayam muttered to himself and chuckled at her. Sharon walked inside the house and just like he said, she controlled herself to not faint. The beautiful and class she saw outside couldn't touch even the 10% of inside, for sure. She didn't think more as her mind was totally blank. Even when she was taking steps, she felt like she was erasing the beauty of this farm house. "So, how did you like our farm house?" Swayam asked from behind, but of course she didn't replied.

Sharon walked into the kitchen, taking the plates out of the magnificent shelf she put the pizza in oven for bit more crust and heat, she the way she like it. She washed her hand when they heard a car horn. Sharon smiled widely and ran towards the garden, and saw Deepy walking in the farm house hesitantly as if fearing for something. Sharon shook her head and called her, "Deepy?" and she instantly looked at Sharon. Next thing Swayam saw that she was running towards Sharon laughing cutely. She hugged Sharon on her waist and Sharon caressed her hairs, "How are you, my nugget?" Sharon asked kneeling down to her level. "I am good but I am hungry, I never eat so late, di, right?" She asked pouting cutely and pointing towards her tummy. "Aw, come! Food id just ready." She said and stood up, taking her hand and walking towards Swayam. Sarah followed them. Deepy smiled like a chiseled cat looking at Swayam, "Naughty you! Yes, I have your dolls!" He said and smiled at her. "You are the best," She said and Swayam smiled at her, "Everybody says that!" Swayam replied, "Must be blind!" Now this time Sharon replied. Sharon and Deepy walked inside.

Swayam thanks Karan for the help and bid him good bye before going inside the house. Sarah was already helping Sharon in kitchen and Deepy was playing drums on table with spoons, shouting and singing. "I need food. I want food. Deepy wants food!" She was the most adorable creature Swayam could ever see. She abruptly stopped singing and asks Swayam to come sit next to her. He smiled and ran to sit next to her, but she did something with made Swayam burst into laughter. She handled two more spoons to him and maybe she wanted him to join in her spoon-ish 'do-re-me-fa-so-la-ti-do' thing. "If I will sing and shout like this so your sister will eat me up!" He said and looked at busy Sharon in kitchen. "Not like she isn't eating now, right?" Deepy said and showed him her tongue. "What, how do you know?" Swayam asked turning towards her completely. "You know she always taunts the person who she gets angry with and she just taunts you right now. She always does that to me as well." Deepy said and smirked at him. "What the hell? Did you just smirked, Deepy?" Swayam said with an open mouth, "No, jiju. I just smiled at you!" She said naughtily. "Yeah, a devilish one, Geez!" He said and looked at Sharon, praying all this mess get cleared soon.

"Dinner is here!" Sharon announced walking out of the kitchen with large tray filled with pizza slices. Sharon smiled at excited looking Sharon. She set down next to Deepy leaving Swayam's empty next chair. He groaned, all he could do right now. "Oh, Pizza! I love pizza, sissy!" Deepy said and immediately took a slice. Sharon placed two hot slices in Swayam's plate without looking at him and passed the chili sauce to him too, since Deepy doesn't like having chili sauce and right now Sharon was already set on hot chilis so she decided not to heat herself more with it. Swayam smiled at her but she proudly ignored it and started eating. "Humph!" Deepy started making sounds, showing she was loving the pizza. "My choice, Deepy!" Swayam said to her and winked at her. "I know because Sharon di always goes for simple cheese and chicken pizza, but I like mushrooms and lots of olives. It is so tasty!" Deepy said picking a mushroom from pizza slice and eating it like she was gulping down the noodle. "You like these things? Really, but kids don't eat mushrooms and olives, they prefer to throw in on someone's face telling these as trash!" Swayam said surprisingly, taking a bite more. "Well, because I am lady remember!" Deepy said and resumed eating, leaving a amused Swayam.

They soon finished eating and it was still not to so late, for Swayam's apology for Sharon. Today after many attempts Swayam finally helped Deepy in color her super beautiful drawing made of her, Sharon and him, again. He wonders she has already made 5-6 drawings of them but why she keeps drawing them only! God knows these girls! He thought and tucked Deepy in her bed. "Haw, jiju my van uncle won't know that I am here and not at home!" Deepy suddenly said, "Oh, don't worry about that. I will drive you to school in morning then, alright? Now go, good girl, sleep now." He said and ruffled her hairs. After few minutes when she saw her snoring lightly so he left the room, switching the lights off behind. He looked around but Sharon was not there when he saw Sarah going to the room Sharon asked her to sleep in. He went into their bedroom and saw Sharon half sitting and half lying on bed, watching TV. He noticed one thing that she wasn't actually watching was going on TV, she was lost in her thoughts. He felt guiltier now.

He took remote from her hand and she didn't even realize and switched off the TV. Well, after then without any notice he picked the statue like Sharon in her arms and broke her trance. She looked at herself and then at him, horrified. She opened her mouth to say something but she couldn't so simply she started moving in his grip. "Let go of me, Swayam! I said let go of me!" She started yelling her at but making sure not to awake Sarah or Deepy or else it will be major awkward. "Shh, don't shout! I am not kidnapping you! I need to talk to you right now and I knew you would haven't come to the garden if I have personally asked so I am just taking you there." He said and resumed walking towards the garden, but right now beside everything, one thing was ringing in his mind. 'How he wishes that he wouldn't have build this 2000 square ft. but on a little smaller frame as she is heavy, man! "I can walk, let go of me." Sharon said, this time a little politely. He looked at her and resumes walking again without letting her stand on her own little feet. Who knows if she stabs him and run off!

He looked around and smiled before walking towards the ravishing and beautiful sitting setting and that two between 6 gorgeous fountains of glass. God, the sitting table and 2 chairs were placed exactly between the rounds of surrounded fountains. Sharon felt like someone has taken her in room made of glass and pure and fresh water with silver balls were sprinkling everywhere around. She had to admit that it was beautiful. He put her down on the white big sized wooden seat with dark blue velvet cushion on it. He took his own seat next to her and settled on it before she could start shouting at him again, and held her hand in his hands. "I am sorry." He said lightly, "What?" Sharon asked but this time she was more than hurt. She thought that he regretted what happened but she never thought that he will confess it to her, openly. "I am sorry, Sharon. I know you are hurt, and I am really sorry for hurting you!" He said and looked at her. "You know what, now I am hurt!" She said and tried to stand up but he tightened his grip and made her sit again. "Listen to me, please? I am sorry for hurting you because it was never my intention but I can't apologize you about what I did but I am not ashamed what I did, neither I think it was wrong. What makes me feel ashamed it that you were not comfortable and it was wrong there. I am sorry but if you expect me to apologize you for that part, then sorry again because I can't and I won't!" He said to simply to her.

Sharon didn't said anything but then next second Swayam left her hands when he saw tear rolling down from her eyes. "Alright, sorry. Sorry for that part too!" He said and sighed loudly. "NO!" Sharon scolded him. "What, no?" He asked, "Don't apologize! I am such a dumb!" Sharon said and slapped her hand on her thigh. "What is wrong with you Sharon, few minutes ago you were all ready to chew me and now you are hitting yourself!?" He said looking shocked at her behavior. "Yes, because I am. I am sorry Swayam. I was upset, hurt and angry because I though you regretted what happened deeply and everything we started in our relationship, you would want it end not and when you didn't came to me, it's confirmed. You just.. Just jerked away like something horrible happened and turned your back on me when Deepy had call then I felt bad and then.." Sharon kept saying and Swayam kept listening to until.

He held her one hand and placed the other of his on the side of her cheek, wiping her tears with his thumb. "No, Sharon. I, no actually we both want to be happy, with each other. I just was so stupid to take that step to early. I never regretted it! Sharon, you should like thing like this. I wasn't drunk, man! Sharon, I felt hat you were not comfortable and that you would be thinking that I took advantage of you that is why I jerked away like that. I am sorry, alright? Forgive me?" He asked and gave her a slight smile. She smiled back with tears in her eyes. "You are forgiven. Am I too?" She asked looking in his eyes. "Do you need an answer for that?" He said and hugged her head on his chest and wrapped his arm around her shoulders, caressing her hairs. After a long time as they didn't count, they broke the sentimental and innocent hug. "You should sleep, alright?" Swayam asked and took her hand and walked into the house again, but one thing he did made Sharon smile and him too. He wrapped his arm around her securely which made her smile and she rested her head on her shoulder which made him smile.

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Add --mystery.me-- to get PM's of this FF!

I dunno wanna talk to much for now, just wanna let you all know that i am having some serious problems at my home, and when i mention serious means critical! And i also need to study more now and do households too, so i never get even a slightest time to write. This update has been written in 5 days, can you believe it? but it is still a shit, right? I hope now! 😔

Sorry, if any of you doesn't feel that the wait was worth. I am really sorry for that.

And yes, did you guys read the name Kriya and Rey, they will be here in next to next update!

*And yes, here comes the news*

As i have set the demand for 60 likes, but obviously it doesn't get fulfill in a very happy mode, seems like people just hit the like for now reason. So in that case you are seeing lots of spamming in my FF threads, right?

So from now on i want 10 pages to be spammed if the demand won't be reached for likes even with a minor 1 like distance and 5 pages spam when demand will be reached. So spamming pages i must for every time! You all are a lot, you can do it, right? 😛

So, yeah i will surely try to publish next chapter as soon as possible and happy news, next time full of SwaRon, Deepy and farm house! Only for you all!

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Dearest dii,

1) Yippee you updated

I'm literally dancing.

2) one more update of

Awesomeness that to

of 5000 words, thank you.

2)coming to the chapter, it was

Very interesting.( as usual) .

3) I love deepy, I wish

I had a sister like her

Her innocence, playful

nature, her attitude, everything

About her is beautifully portrayed

That's how kids are.

4)love the swayam-deepy bonding

It's so natural and real.

5) swaron misunderstanding cleared

It's a sigh of relief.

6)kriyaansh entry+farmhouse masti

I'm super exited

7) I want more of mystery

Basically it was a superb update

( as usual).

And your writing toh mashallah

I don't have words to

Complement it

P.s : update soon

Thanks for the pm

Nidhi

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thank yu for updatin

it was fast and innocent .

wat a catch when yu pin it down in the mud lyk tis ...👏

it was a graceful and authentic update .

luved it !!! 😃

i m luvin tis swayam-deepy relationship

do update soon n dont forget 2 pm me 🤗

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Great update marium loved it..👍🏼.
Sharon and swayam's bond is getting stronger day by day swayam immediately ate when sarah told him that sharon would'nt like it if he would'nt eat breakfast and sharon was touched when ajay told her that swayam had already told him to call her sharon.. The letter was printed at a company under kria and rey's name?? Hell this is confusing..
The aloofness and indifference from sharon's side before swayam cleared things with her.. Her awe on looking at the beauty of the farmhouse swayam had designed and not to forget deepy's cute antics they were making me smile wide..😆. I like the bond between swayam and deepy its adorable..😊
I liked how swayam cleared things with sharon he is the gentleman as always thinking he took advantage of her but not regretting that moment as sharon had assumed. His refusal to apologise for the moment they shared only confirms that he does not regret their special moment for even as much as a second..😊. I'm waiting for the swaron romance coming our way so update soon marium as soon as you can..😃.
Matlab mujhe 5 pages toh spam karne hi padenge minimum irrespective whether you get the likes or not..😛.
Sort your issues out soon and give us a nice long swaronlicious update..😳.

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Sadaf Khalid

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Posted: 11 years ago

#607

It was awsum amazing zabardast out of this world just perfect

I luved it alooot se bhi bohat zyada

I mean are u serious

I found this part very amazing

And u say that its a lame one

Plzzz agar yeh lame hai then isse acha kya hoga

The way u potrayed the farmhouse i toh thought that its a mahal aur sumthing 😆

The way sharon was scolding was sooo hillarious

And when swayam deepy were talking aur should i say were backbitting about sharon i was toh lyk ROFLing 🤣

It was so fun to read

I have always adored swayam and deepy part alooot se bhi zyada

hayye swayam lifted sharon in his hands i went to my dreamland at that tym

Marium i wanted to request sumthing

Actually my exams are starting from 31st of this month and i wont be using internet from 16 or 17

So i just wanted to say that plzzz dont stop sending me pm

I will continue reading all ur work after 14th nov

Plzzz update next part sooon and do pm me

Thanx for the pm

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Anindita Dhar

@AninditaSwaRon

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Posted: 11 years ago

#608

OMG😲
Hadh wala cute update tha yeh to😳😳😳
Deepy's antics were as usual cute, I like her taste too mushrooms yummy 😆😆😆
You described the farm house beautifully and yes you are writing in such a way that I am doubting every other character. I have strong suspicion on those guys who work for Swayam 😕
Okay I don't know ummm I am confused so I should stop blabbering
coming to the love birds awww 😳😳😳😳😳😳
Akhir Swayam ne mana hi lia n sharon understood too. Both are confused idiots just like me😆
Both should say I love u and baat khatam😆😆😆😆

Anyways loved it to the core.I hope you will update your other works soon 😳 me waiting for AT 😃

Edited by AninditaSwaRon - 11 years ago

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ANMOL

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Posted: 11 years ago

#609

res...

unres...

its was aswom update

loved it to d core...

deepy char. is the very good nd loved her more than swaron...

hw hey solve tere m u was aswom...

nd there last gesture was good...

plzz update soon .

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Mehvash Naazneen

@dashinggirl

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Posted: 11 years ago

#610

Hey Marium 😊

actually u know what the wait was really worth it 🥳

and the update is not lame and boring ok 😔

don't say it ok i hate it when u say that your work is lame so never ever say that 😡

coming back to update it was just superb, amazing, excellent

really really loved it ❤️

it is penned down very beautifully ❤️

u describes the farm house whole scenario exceptionally really very amazing loved it ❤️

our doll deepy what can say about her she is so so adorable and cute can't get over her and her antics 😊

and finally swaron misunderstanding is cleared yipeee i m so happy 🥳

Now we can see more nice and happy scenes of swaron and i really loved how u ended the update swaron was smiling together it was just perfect ❤️

congratulations for writing a such great piece of work 👏

Awesome job 👍🏼

keep up the great work 👍🏼

wants to read further the FF is becoming to so interesting

so plzzz update next part asap ok

thanks for the PM and do PM me...

and thanks for giving such a biggg update 👍🏼

sort your problems yaar don't worry everything will be fine and study hard 😉

my exams r u coming i will be inactive for some days so plzzz keep sending me PM's when u update your work ok i will surely read it all when i will be back...

love

Mehvash

Edited by dashinggirl - 11 years ago

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SwaRon FF : Kahi Ankahi [JDM S2] Chap 11 : 111 - 25/10/2013 [Updated] - Page 61

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