Do PaL kA sAaTh...(ak)

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Posted: 18 years ago
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*~PRELOUGUE~*

" kripa and angad... how boring is that?? couldn't you think of anything a lil mordern..?? i mean angad is quite ok... but kripa.... boringgg with a capital B.." a girl whispered as she took her seat in the bus..... annoyance could be clearly seen in her face...and could be heard in her voice....

" well i couldn't think of anything else... i just said the first name that came to my mind.... and anywyass what did you want me to say??? bunty adn bubbly??" whispered the guy as he took his seat next to the girl.....

" whatever... and well yes... bunty and bubbly sound cute... adn i could always imagine abhisekh bachan instead of you...... and btw what was wrong with my original name...???" the girl replied.....(remember they are whispering to eachother..soo noone knows what they are talkign about...)

" # 1 i dont even know your original name.....#2 do you think those gangsters will let us live in peace if they get any clue of where we are... i am teh one who doesn't know your name not them.... well.. as for now.. you are kripa and i am angad.... adn we are married..... lets try to atleast pretend we are a happy-go-lucky couple!!!" he said a lil loudly......

" ok fine..... but cant i change my name.... it doesn't match my image....." she pleaded with a puppy face....

" do hell with you and your image..... the names are final... you are kripa.... K-R-I-P-A... understand??" he said sternly..... the girl got a lil scared....adn nodded....

" dont you wanna know my real name???" the girl asked.....

" noo... for mee you are kripa...adn please dont tell mee what your so-called pretty mordern real name is... or ask mee what my real name is....(pause) i am not doing this because i want to.... i got you into this mess... i'll get you out of this mess and take you home safe and sound... whether i have to pay my own life...." he said adn drifted off to sleep......

speaking to herslef.. the girl..who is supposedly to be called kripa.. said " yeh aadmi itna kadoosh kyu hai??"

the guy who is supposedly to be called angad replied " its non of your business.... did i interfere with your life... did i ask you why are you such a spoilt brat??"

" ugghhhh... go to hell..." she turned teh other way and looked out of the window.....

" sure... i would love to...." he smiled and this time really went to sleep.....

ok soo this is it... my new ff... i will continue both this and 'AND IT WAS TEH END OR WAS IT?' tomorrow.... guys i am confused what shoul i name the ff..... ok here are some of my idea... you guys can help mee.... just say which title do you like or you can suggest your own title... and yea plsss comment.... i love to here from you all....ok soo thats it i guesss...... will continue tomorrow ... both my ff.....btw for those who dont know mee i am Nisha....

the title choices for the ff are:

  1. JoUrNeY
  2. Do PaL kA sAaTh
  3. WoH lAmHe
  4. BhAgAm BhAaG( i know this doesn't suit but still this is one of the titles that came to my mind..)
  5. ChUpKe ChUpKe
  6. DaUd

okay soo this is it... 6 choices... plss do suggest the title... if you dont like any of these ttles would love to hear suggestion of titles from you guys.....

ok i am off to bed... wow everytime i write a ff or a part.. i feel sleepy.... 😳

soo good uhhh morning afternoon or evening.... i am going to sleep.....

will come a ll later to check on my project soo will visit IF then... soo i may continue the other ff today.... not sure...


the title has been chosen according to this voting chart....

#1JoUrNeY= 3
#2Do PaL kA sAaTh= 4
#3WoH lAmHe= 2
#4BhAgAm BhAaG= 1
#5ChUpKe ChUpKe= 2
#6DaUd= 2

soo the title will bee 'do pal ka saath'...😃

Edited by Anjaani_luver - 18 years ago

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Posted: 18 years ago
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i like #4 nd 5 awesome ff cont soon! 😳
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Posted: 18 years ago
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i like #4 nd 5 awesome ff cont soon! 😳
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Excellent 1st part, cnt wait to read more of this n ur other ff, that rocks as well, I think the best name is 'do pal ka saath' it sounds kool, sweet n romantic!!!! 😳
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Posted: 18 years ago
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weeeeeeeeeee
another ff from you....
yayyyyy....
great work nisha di....
it sounds awesomeee....
continue soooooooooooon...
ohh for the title i think..' do pal ka saath' or 'journey'
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Posted: 18 years ago
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WOW!!!! really interesting, cant wait to read more!!!!!!! 😃
4 the name, i like, Do Pal Ka Saath & Woh Lamhe!!! 😛
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Posted: 18 years ago
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hey can someone teach mee how to quote alll of teh replies adn reply to them... i mean like karishma(Desi Pride), rach(Gaurav's love) does... while replying all of your comments.... can someone help mee do that???
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Posted: 18 years ago
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i like number 1 and 3 they are really nice and plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz cont soon i really like it so far but who are the characters i cant tell if it really is angadkrpa ff 😆
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Originally posted by: Prianka

i like number 1 and 3 they are really nice and plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz cont soon i really like it so far but who are the characters i cant tell if it really is angadkrpa ff 😆



yep it is angad and kripa's ff....
but in my ff... thats not their real name...
well even i dont know what their names in the ff are...
but just to stay away from teh gangsters....
they.. actuallly angad(iqbal) changed their names to angad and kripa....

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Posted: 18 years ago
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hey glad u r starting another FF great part umm i like #1 and #6 😊

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