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Their Love Land ❤️
This os is on my favorite couple Virika and I hope enjoy it. Please give you feedback.
Happy Reading 😊
Jeevika's POV
Dear Diar!
13th Sept 2013. This date changed our life for ever. Our life was filled with happiness. Nothing could have been better. I had everything my family next to me my sister, my cute little angel Mansi, my other baby in my womb (hope it's a boy now :P) and the person who was by my side through all the thick and thins, my husband Virenji. When Virenji got to know that I'm pregnant he was the happiest person on the planet earth. Sometimes it seems it's a dream. Everything is just perfect. Now I am seven months pregnant. In three months I'll be mother of another angel. Can't wait for that day. Okay now I have to go finally my husband is back from his stupid office :P I hope Virenji brought my ice cream and if not then he's in a big trouble :P
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Jeevikaaa! Viren entered the room with a big smile on his face to meet his wife. Jeevika got up from the bed and went up to him but he engulf her in a hug. Jeevika put her hand between them and a frown appeared on Viren's face.
Viren: What?
Jeevika put her hand forward: My Ice cream
Viren bit the tip of his tongue: Uh umm actually
Jeevika angrily: You again forgot to bring my ice cream? How could you? Virenji I called trice to remind to bring me my ice cream and still. Don't talk to me Virenji And she turned around.
Viren came from behind and engulf her in a back hug: Jeevika
Jeevika swayed off his hands and turned around: don't Jeevika me. VIRNJI I AM VERY ANGRY SO JUST DON'T TALK TO ME AND JUST JUST DON'T TALK TO ME. She yelled.
Viren: Hushhh Mansi is sleeping. She'll wake up
Jeevika: Toh? Ussye bhi toh patta chyle ke usskye papa uski Ma se kitna pyar kartye hai. You can't even get me an ice cream.
Viren: Jeevika Darling at least listen to me
Jeevika: No Virenji you don't love me anymore. She said sadly
Viren: Jeevika where did that came from.
Jeevika's tear started coming from her eyes.
Viren engulf her in a hug: Jeevika what's wrong?
Jeevika: Idk. And hugged him tightly. Viren chuckled
Viren: Jeevika god. And kissed her on her hair. Jeevika pulled out of the hug and Viren wiped her tears and smiled: Pagal. And nuzzled her nose with her's whereas Jeevika pouted and Viren kissed her forehead. Just then Mansi started crying.
Jeevika went to her and picked her up: Oh my baby what happened?
Viren: Mansi is angry as you didn't let her papa kiss her. While taking Mansi from Jeevika's hand and kissing her forehead
Jeevika: When did I stopped you?
Viren: Oh so who started yelling at me when I entered the room?
Jeevika: But you forgot my ice cream? While pouting
Viren put her arm around Jeevika: Who said? And kissed her hair.
Jeevika: that means that you got me my ice-cream?
Viren nodded
Jeevika's smile winded: where is it?
Viren: Kitchen
Jeevika: OMG I love you so much Virenji she kissed her on his cheek and ran out of the room to get her favourite blueberry ice cream.
Viren: Arre sambal ke he screamed and to Mansi god I love your mom so much on which Mansi giggled and Viren smiled.

3 days later
Mansi's birthday
11:45 pm
Jeevika was lying on her bed adoring her angel who was sleeping beside her. In few minutes she'll be turning 1. Time just flew away. It's been a year that there angel came to this world. Mansi was adored my everyone. She was mother's angel and father's princess. She was pampered by the whole family. She was not at all a trouble child. She was like her mother calm and beautiful. And in a month or so she'll be turning to an elder sister.

Jeevika was lost in her thoughts when Viren came and held her from behind and lay on bed. He put her hand on her belly.
Viren: What were you thinking?
Jeevika: Hmm nothing was just thinking thanking god everything. Life can't be better no?
Viren: Hmmm finally everything is falling at its right place. Everyone's happy.
Jeevika: But Virenji I miss everyone. It's been 6 months that we've shifted here. I miss everyone. While turning around and hugging him
Viren: I know I miss them too. But it was important for us to shift here in Chicago because of our new law firm.
Jeevika: Hmmm
Viren: But don't worry we'll go back real soon and Jeevika smiles.
Jeevika: But for now let's wish our little angel it's 12
Both turn towards Mansi's side to see her eyes wide open and was staring at her parents.
HAPPY BIRTHDAY BABY :* Virika in union and kissed her on each side of her cheek. While Mansi was busy giggling.


9 month of pregnancy
Viren and Jeevika were lying on bed in each other's arms where as Mansi was asleep in her nursery. Jeevika was drawing different patterns on Viren chest whereas Viren was stroking her hair. Both we're thinking about there lives. In a few days there baby will be in this world and they'll be proud parents of two angels. They couldn't wait to hold their second bundle of joy in their arms. And thinking about their future both went to deep slumber in each other's arm feeling completed.

A few days later
Viren was waiting outside of the OT with Mansi in his arms. It had been 2 hours that Jeevika was in. And I'm last 2 hours for the 100th time the family had called to know if their prince/princess was here but guess fate had something else in store for them.

After 15 minutes the doctor came out of the OT. Viren gave Mansi to her nanny.

Dr Smith: Mr Vadhera
Viren: Dr Smith is my wife okay? And baby?
Dr Smith: Mr Vadhera you have to sign these papers.
Viren (confused): Papers?
Dr Smith: Mr Vadhera there were complications in your wife's pregnancy and your wife knew about it. We told your wife to abort the baby but she refused to do so.
Viren: But..
Dr Smith: Mrs Vadhera didn't wanted you to know about it. And you have to sign these papers in which it's written that if any thing happens to your baby or wife the hospital won't be responsible for the lose.
Viren: But how... I mean... And his eyes welled up
Dr Smith: Mr Vadhera I can very well understand what you're going through but please don't waste time. Your putting your wife's and baby's life in danger. Please sign the paper.

Tears pickle his eyes. He took the papers from the doctor and signed them. Dr patted his back and went back to the OT while Viren sat on the bench shattered. He couldn't whatever just happened. 10 minutes before he was waiting to see his bundle of joy and his wife. He was the happiest man and now just in 10 minutes he has the fear of loosing his love ones. His love, his wife and a part of himself, his baby. He was lost in deep thoughts and a voice broke his chain of thoughts.

Daadaa daaa.

Viren turned around to see his daughter jumping in Nanny's lap and asking him to take her in his embrace. A fat tear escaped his eye and took her daughter in a tight hug and cried his heart out.

After an hour which was not less than a year for Viren the door of OT opened and doctor came out.

Viren went to the doctor and asked through welled hopeful eyes if his life and baby were alright. Doctor gave his a small smile.

Doc: They're fine don't worry and congratulations it's a boy.
Viren gave a teary smile: Thank you doctor. Thanks a lot.
Dc smiled: Go meet her. Viren nodded and went in Jeevika's room with nanny following her as Mansi was in her arms. As Viren Entered the room he saw Jeevika's lying on the bed unconscious. He was still staring at her, but a voice caught his attention and he saw his son in the cot next to Jeevika's bed. A smile came on his face and went to the cot. His son was peacefully sleeping wrapped in a white cloth provided by the hospital. Viren couldn't get in enough of him. He could believe that he was on about to loose them but again god can't be that unfair. He was busy admiring his son that he felt a movement on his hand when he turned around he saw Jeevika staring at her with a teary smile. He went towards her and sat on the edge of the bed and creased her face lightly and dropped a gentle kiss on her forehead.
Viren asked softly while kissing her hand: How could you?
Tears making their down their eyes.
Jeevika: I am sorry.
Viren: No you'll get your punishment once we're back home.
Jeevika smiled trough her tears.
Viren: Never do that again. NEVER
Jeevika: I won't. I promise.
Viren bent and pecked her lips ever so lightly and wrapped his arms around her shoulder and took her in his embrace. And placed her lips on her forehead.
Mamaaa haa aaa
They looked up to saw their daughter extending her arms towards them, indicating to pick her up. Viren got up and took Mansi in his arms and gave it to Jeevika and went to pick his son. Jeevika kissed her daughter's forehead and then his son's.
Viren: Hey at least now tell me the name you've decided. I've been waiting from last 2 months. (With a pout)
Jeevika: Awww. Okay his name will be Viraj
Viren: But that Dad's
Jeevika: I know
Viren smiled and kissed her forehead: Thank you :) Thanks for the lovely gifts ( Mansi and Viraj)
Jeevika hugged him: Thanks for the lovely family and life. And kissed his cheek.
Viren: I love you
Jeevika looked up: I love you more and Viren bent down and placed his lips on her' sand took her to another beautiful land. Opps sorry "Their Love Land". ❤️
********************************THE END**************************************
So guys I hope you guys like this OS 😃
And this OS is only and only for my Kenni Penni 😉
Kenni I hope you like and now I want my Zaanie 😛
So guys please and comment 😊
I'll be waiting for the response 😃
Love Hajra ❤️
❤️ 😊 Like and comment 😊 ❤️
P.S Haven't proofed read it so please ignore the grammar mistakes. 😆

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Grt os...loved it!!!!
Keeni u got an os...
Nw I want party...in las vegas...
we will go together!!!!!!! 🤣
splendid os...
marvellous...
amazing!!!!
mansi nd viraj!!!
adorable!!!
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this OS is super
no one has ever written an OS like this
i havent got any words to describe
continue to write these amazing os's
thanks for the pm
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This one is just phenomenal..
haju ur just amazing dear
nd its just a realistic piece of work
Loved it!
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awwiiiee awwiiieee❤️
fantabulous os👍🏼👍🏼
luvd it❤️
everythng waz just perfect👍🏼
first jeevi's anger😃 for nt getting ice cream n da other side viren's tears for signing those papers😔
truly awsummm..thnx 4 da pm hun🤗
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Amazing OS
Needed this after all those hours in the plane
Keep writing stories!!
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oh my god this was totally beautiful absolutely loved it
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👏 👏 👏 SUPERB!!! 👏 👏 👏
I'm In Love With It!! Reading It Over And Over Again!!! 😃
Seriously Haju! It's One Of The Awesome OS I Ever Read!!! ❤️ 😛
It WasToo Beautiful & marvelous! Start To End I Adored Every Single Moment!! 😊 😳

Thanks For The PM!
TC!! 😃

& Keep Writing Buddy! 😃
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awesome update thanks for the pm
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Loved it Haju! ❤️ You are really one heck of a talented girl hunn! Loved how you described and wrote everything! You sure have a natural flair of writing! Keep it up(: & Thank you for the PM.

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