#1 AsYa(KaBhi)FF: Fallen in the Trap of Love (link to #2 pg 148) - Page 21

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Posted: 11 years ago
Amazing story :)
PM me pls
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Posted: 11 years ago
This is a beautiful FF...👏 I have read it before but i decided to read again and comment😃
Brilliantly Written, Your characterizations of the characters are superb and each scenario that you pen are always better than the previous one... You truly are a talented writer...
I simply love asad and zoya's relationship, It's beautiful the way you portray their every emotions❤️
Thank you Najma for helping to get rid of the she cat (Tannu)😃
This chapter was funny, Zoya calling mr khan gay (as if)...
This is an amazing story with the perfect blend of everything: Drama, Romance and seriously funny sense of humour👍🏼
Simply loving this ff... Waiting eagerly to read more...
All the best for you exams and am sure you will do extremely well👍🏼
If possible do pm me when you update, would really appreciate it...
Once again thanks for an amazing story..
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Posted: 11 years ago
PM me please! awesome update.❤️
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Posted: 11 years ago
awesome ff
can u plz pm when u next update

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Posted: 11 years ago
Ramya pleeeze update soon yaar 😊
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Hi guys 😊! I know it's been quite a while since I updated, so I decided to put up a teaser, here it is:

A Night to Remember

Sleep had evaded Asad in every possible way. He sat up from his bed, completely annoyed, he looked at his wall clock. "It's just midnight?", he groaned and flopped back down. He sat back up after a while and stared into empty space. He grumbled to himself and bounced off the bed. He made his way to his window and looked out and there she was. Zoya. His breath hitched as he caught sight of her serene form. She looked purely angelic under the shimmering rays of moon light. Her hair was swaying accordingly, to the wind, an instant grace surrounding her already beautiful form. Right then, she could have even given Aphrodite a run for her looks. But something was wrong, he could clearly tell she was crying, even from that distance. The way her shoulders lifted up and went back down, very few seconds, explained very well that she was crying. He sighed and made his way to the kitchen. He made himself his black and bitter coffee and made another one with milk and sugar. He quietly slipped out of the house and made his towards the bench were Zoya was seated. He stopped when he heard her say, "Why can't you be here?" Who is she referring to?, Asad asked himself. He realized that she could be talking to her ammi, or abbu. He didn't know whether he should interrupt her private moment or not, so he decided to wait until she was done. When he noticed her loosening up a bit, he walked towards her and held the mug up, in front of her. She looked up and frowned, as she noticed the coffee mug. He said, "Take it, then."
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So that was the teaser! I'll probably be updating tomorrow, I've finished more than half of the update. I hope this caught a little of ur interest. Hope u liked it and plz leave ur thoughts behind!

Ramya 😊



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Posted: 11 years ago
IT'S INTERESTING DEAR...PLS UPDATE SOON...WAITING...
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: stereohearts200

Hi guys 😊! I know it's been quite a while since I updated, so I decided to put up a teaser, here it is:

A Night to Remember

Sleep had evaded Asad in every possible way. He sat up from his bed, completely annoyed, he looked at his wall clock. "It's just midnight?", he groaned and flopped back down. He sat back up after a while and stared into empty space. He grumbled to himself and bounced off the bed. He made his way to his window and looked out and there she was. Zoya. His breath hitched as he caught sight of her serene form. She looked purely angelic under the shimmering rays of moon light. Her hair was swaying accordingly, to the wind, an instant grace surrounding her already beautiful form. Right then, she could have even given Aphrodite a run for her looks. But something was wrong, he could clearly tell she was crying, even from that distance. The way her shoulders lifted up and went back down, very few seconds, explained very well that she was crying. He sighed and made his way to the kitchen. He made himself his black and bitter coffee and made another one with milk and sugar. He quietly slipped out of the house and made his towards the bench were Zoya was seated. He stopped when he heard her say, "Why can't you be here?" Who is she referring to?, Asad asked himself. He realized that she could be talking to her ammi, or abbu. He didn't know whether he should interrupt her private moment or not, so he decided to wait until she was done. When he noticed her loosening up a bit, he walked towards her and held the mug up, in front of her. She looked up and frowned, as she noticed the coffee mug. He said, "Take it, then."
-~-~-~-
So that was the teaser! I'll probably be updating tomorrow, I've finished more than half of the update. I hope this caught a little of ur interest. Hope u liked it and plz leave ur thoughts behind!

Ramya 😊




Lovely teaser cant wait to read the rest. Pls PM
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Posted: 11 years ago
asad is so sweet..

continue soon..
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Posted: 11 years ago
Why was she crying?? When are you gonna update??

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