#2 TaaRey: Love, Trust, Jealousy (Moved to thread 3) COMPLETED - Page 19

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Posted: 11 years ago
yaar examss mein bahut zyada thinking ki hai...ab jab exams khatam huye toh tum yaha sochne ko keh rahe ho...😡
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: dh19

nice and funnry update


Thank you
stay tuned😊
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Posted: 11 years ago

hahahahaha🤣
Edited by sashaz_sis - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: muskituski

yaar examss mein bahut zyada thinking ki hai...ab jab exams khatam huye toh tum yaha sochne ko keh rahe ho...😡


mere abhi tak chalu hai...so thinking mode still on😛😆
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: ziya_taarey

Yippeee...!!!!!

Swayam ko sab pata tha...this depicts perfect boyfriend...
he thought its important to inform him first...
so nice...
thankyou for an amazing update and when u post again Pm me...!!!!!!


Rey is a perfect boyfriend material☺️
will be updating in 2-3 days..
will PM and also scrap this time😛😆
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: QTPie99

awesome update
thanx 4 the pm and sorry 4 being late
update soon and pm me...


Thanx
next time I want a lambu comment -.-
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: sashaz_sis


mere abhi tak chalu hai...so thinking mode still on😛😆

kkk sooo continue ur thinking n all d best...👍🏼
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: muskituski

kkk sooo continue ur thinking n all d best...👍🏼

Thank you😳😳
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Posted: 11 years ago

Finally written exams over!😃 Practicals still to go.

But I'm back with the update. It feels so good to write.

Start reading.😊



Part 23

Everyone is busy dressing up in their own rooms. It's evident that everyone is planning to blow their date's mind off.

*Ting tong*

Swayam opens the door and finds the whole gang standing at his door. He takes them in. Again the bell rings. He gets a ticklish feeling and runs and opens the door to find Sharon.

(The one in gloden and black)

Swayam: Beautiful! (Sharon blushes and enters.)

Taani (coming out from her room): Bhai sab aa gaye?

Everyone just stares at her. It's very rare for them to see her wear western clothes. She feels a bit uncomfortable because of their stares. Swayam diverts them.

Swayam: Almost sab aa gaye bas Rey aur Niki nahi aaye hai abhi tak.

*At NikAnsh's Place*

Rey: NIKITA SINGHANIA are you coming out of your room or should I leave?

Niki: Dare you call me like that again. Just give me two more minutes. I'm almost done.

Rey: Nik tu abhi neeche aa rahi hai else I'm out of here!

Niki came out of her room. Rey went to her.


Rey: You're looking like an angel! Miss. Angel hum chale? Meri Princess mera wait kar rahi hogi aur tera chocolate tera.

Niki: Its chocopie! (and stamped her foot and left.)

Rey: Be careful yaar ghar toot jayega.

Niki: Yansh!

Rey: Mazak kar raha tha. Chalo abh warna sab hume maar hi daalenge.

*At TaaYam's Place*

Nil: Yeh Rey aane bhi wala hai ya nahi?

Vicky: Yeah dude sube se gayab hai. Abhi bhi nahi hai. Is he coming?

'sube se gayab hai' Taani recollected their date and started blushing. The girls saw her blushing and started teasing her.

Simi: Aaj kal Rey kaha hota hai vo toh Taani ko hi pata hota hai na.

They looked at Taani who was trying real hard to control her blush.

Sharon: Taani ab bata bhi do, Rey hai kaha? (and nudged her)

Taani blushed even more.

Rey (entering): Mera hi intezaar kiya ja raha hai!

Rey and Taani looked at each other.


Rey looked at her from head to toe. She looked very pretty in her pink dress. Taani too looked at him. He was looking handsome in this style of clothing too. Their lips curved into a sweet smile on seeing each other. Rey started to take steps towards her. Swayam noticed this.

Swayam: Finally tum dono aa gaye.

This brought the two Majnus; Rey and Shivam, who was staring dreamingly at Niki, back to earth. Rey's smile faded and a frown appeared as yet again Swayam: 'The Possessive Brother' had spoiled his about to begin romance.

Rey: Mujhe aise dekh mat Nik was taking ages to get ready.

Niki: Time toh lagega hi na ready hone mein. (said with a cute pout.)

Shivam: Rey come on yaar itni pretty lagne ke liya usse time lagega hi na!

Nil: Agar tum logon ka compliment session khatam ho gaya ho toh hum chale?

They left the place. Soon they reached a night club.



They were entering the club. The entrance was too dark. Rey was walking with Taani and Niki on either sides. Due to darkness, Niki clutched Rey's hand tightly. Rey could feel her hand shiver. The shivering went on decreasing. He looked at Niki and found Shivam, with his arm around Niki, firmly holding her. They all entered the club and all the couples went in different directions.

Rey took Taani to a cozy corner of the club. The both sat hand-in-hand. Both were feeling each other's warmth and love. Rey broke the silence.

Rey: Taani, you're looking gorgeous today, yet again.

Taani's cheek turned the same colour as her dress. Rey saw it and placed a peck on her cheeks. She buried her head in his chest trying to hide the crimson colour which was now appearing.

Rey: Ahem ahem. (Rey made her look towards him) Tum shayad kuch bhool rahi ho.

Taani: Nahi toh. Mein kuch nahi bhool rahi.

Rey made a sulken face. She hid her smile.

Rey: I think hume group ke saath jaake baithna chahiye.

Rey said this with sadness and anger in his voice. Taani couldn't control herself for long and immediately pecked and hugged him. Rey was startled for a second, but quickly recovered and hugged her back.

Taani: Rey mujhe batane ki jarurat nahi hai, but still aapke liye keh rahi hoon. You are the most handsome person in this entire world!

Rey: Batane ki jarurat kyun nahi? Yeh toh cheating hui na. (gave a pout)

Taani pulled his cheeks.

Taani: Nah,this is not cheating. Abhi chale? Warna bhai hume yaha dhoondte dhoondte aa jayenge.

They started to go towards the gang. Rey spotted Shivam sitting alone.

Rey: Taani tum chalo mein aata hun.

Taani left. Rey went to Shivam.

Rey: Hey dude, Nik kaha gayi?

Shivam: Gang ke saath hai. Mein bhi bas ab wahi jaa raha tha.

Rey: Mein bhi. Chal saath mein chalte hai.

Shivam: I saw you going with Taani. Mujhe dekh ke you came here. Jhut kyun bol rahe ho? Whats the matter?

Rey: No matter. Bas tumhe thanks kehna tha.

Shivam: Thanks kyun?

Rey: You know mein kyun bol raha hoon.

Shivam: Ya I know, but tumhe thanks bolne ki jarurat nahi hai. It's my duty to take care of Niki.

Rey: Okay, I take my thanks back. Nik ne tumhe poora change kar diya hai. Meine kabhi socha nahi tha ki hum aise baat bhi kar payenge.

Shivam: Socha toh meine bhi nahi tha but as they say 'Jo hota hai atche ke liye hota hai'

Both reached the place where gang was seated.

Sharon: Hum aise oldies ki tarah kyun baithe hai?

Rinni: Club mein oldies bhi aate hai? (everyone dropped their head as Rinni striked again.)

Rey went on the dance floor.

Rey:

I am here in this party like woow..
The DJ karo hands up,, [hands up]..
Karo..Hands up, [hands up]

Come tied this party like woow
I have show your hand hands up..
Karo [hands up, hands up]..

Dil to deewanaa angrez badaa hai..
Desi sharam koi jane nahii..
Bandaa rangeela rangrezz badaa hai..
Naina ladaaye binaa mane nahii..

He does some hip hop steps.

Rey:

Dil to deewanaa angrez badaa hai..
Desi sharam koi jane nahii..

Swayam:

Bandaa rangeela rangrezz badaa hai..
Naina ladaaye binaa mane nahii..

Swayam joins him.

Rey:

Hey Mr. DJ jo bhi ho nateeje
Hey Mr. DJ gaana baja..
Hey Mr. DJ raat jawaa hai..
Changaa sa groove lagaa...

He does the DJ step.

Boys:

Lets get incycle put your hands up and say..

Girls:

Let's go bananas.. bananas.. bananas..
Bananas.. bananas.. bananas.. bananas..(x2)

The girls too join.

Dil ki kahani zara si adhoori, adhoori
Tabhi to hai poora banana

Let's go bananas.. bananas.. bananas..
Bananas.. bananas.. bananas.. bananas..
Hey.. hey..

Rey:

Mauka milaa hai badmashiyon kaa..
Lab pe labon ki nakkashiyon ka yahan..
Abhi isi jagah dil ke irade kah jayenge..

Rey pulled Taani towards him and pecked her near her lips.

Taani:

Jiski nigaahein karke ishaare..
Loote hamare saahil kinare..
Unhein nahin pata ke hum..
Doobe nahi to beh jayenge

Taani blushed and slowly moved aside for the boys.

Boys:

Hey Mr. DJ jo bhi ho nateeje
Hey Mr. DJ gaana baja..
Hey Mr. DJ raat jawaa hai..
Changaa sa groove lagaa...

Girls:

Lets get incycle put your hands up and say..
Let's go bananas.. bananas.. bananas..
Bananas.. bananas.. bananas.. bananas..(x2)

Gang:

Hey.. Hey..
Jumbi ka bajnaa..
Doston ka tapnaa..
Show us your best moves..
Crazy hoke nachna..
People say we are same..
But we do this everyday..

Lets get incycle put your hands up and say..
Let's go bananas.. bananas.. bananas..
Bananas.. bananas.. bananas.. bananas..(x2)

Dil ki kahaani zara si adhoori.. adhoorii..
Tabhi to hai poora banana..

Let's go bananas.. bananas.. bananas
Bananas.. bananas.. bananas.. bananas..
Hey.. hey..

[I am here in this party like woow..
The DJ karo hands up,, [hands up]..

Karo..Hands up, [hands up]..

The team dances to the tunes.

(see the video for few steps and imagine a few)

They return back with happy and sweet memories.

As soon as they reach TaaYam's house, Taani and Shivam get a message saying they have been selected for internship of event management at the same place where D3 team has got a contract. Their happiness knows no bounds. Everyone is super excited to work together, this time on professional basis.


Song:

https://204.45.41.186/file/ppnh/play/Hey-Mr-Dj.mp3


Video:

[YOUTUBE]https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=fhwfwZhYfJs[/YOUTUBE]


So as promised I'm updating today😃

Remember the TWIST of which I had once spoken about? Its set to come soon.😉

Hit like and comment till next update.😳

If interested you can see the replies to your comments.😳

Edited by 2111_shweta - 7 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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yipee me first...before pm...

awesome update dear...lovely...

sh looking gorgeous ..

taarey are so cute...

waiting for twist...

love the dance...
Edited by CrazyDips... - 11 years ago

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