#1 TaaRey: Love, Trust, Jealousy (Moved to thread 2) COMPLETED - Page 57

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: raddhi

wow awsm stry i luv it

today only i star reading it
n i must say it awsm stry n i luv how
taarey luv each other n niki n rey bond is awsm
n shivam n taani too nice stry but i want taarey
romance n taayam bond thanks for PM


I'm glad you liking it😳😳
will surely show some more romance
and also great bonds😊😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
aww such a awesomeupdare loved the way in which Vicky try to tease taani but rey cooped his plan omg niki and shivam.scene are cute but rey also right actually both are right, don't know agge kya hoga eagerly waiting plz update soon. and pm me
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Posted: 11 years ago
Ab raha nahi jaa raha...
Pls jaldi update kardo...
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: --taareylove---

aww such a awesomeupdare loved the way in which Vicky try to tease taani but rey cooped his plan omg niki and shivam.scene are cute but rey also right actually both are right, don't know agge kya hoga eagerly waiting plz update soon. and pm me


Thanx a lot😃
Yes you are right...both of them are right..
Aage kya hoga uske liye aur thoda wait karna please😉
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: sumana.shesha

Ab raha nahi jaa raha...

Pls jaldi update kardo...


Sure dear😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
Unresed my comment on pg 78!!!😃...sry for beong late!!😛
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: shikha_taarey

Res!
Unres
Awesome update yaar!!!! 👏 👏
Vicky teasing taani n saying dat she was seeing rey...hehehe 😆 😆 ...awww...n rey ka dialouge...meri gf hai to mujhe hi dekhegi na...tujhe kyun bura lag raha hai!! 😳 😳...loved it !
N swayam as usual...feeling awkward... 😆 😆 ...
By he said it ryt...jab niki kisi ke saath hogi to rey will come to know!! 😉 ..sabka tym aata hai 😆
N den sabse bada dhamaaka of d update...nikki n shivam caught by rey... 😲
Yaa ryt ...is baar sabne guess kar liya...including me...so suspense create nai hua!!😆
Bt rey ka angry look is quite scary...we all know dis...jab taani se gusssa hota tha...he actually is soo scary!!!
Bechaare nikki n shivam...i loved d way shivam cares for nikki...wen rey was tightly holding her wrist n shivam told him dat its hurting her...he luvs niki soo much!!! 😳 😳 😳
N taani told rey dat she knew dat shivam has a gf...firstly mujhe laga ko kahi rey taani ko misunderstand naa kare bt luckily she cleared his doubts!!!
N usne sahi to kaha...dat even swayam should be upset wid him den!!!! N ab rey taani ko galat samajh raha hai...really dont want dis to happen!!!
As a bro he is ryt...cuz shivam ki image is quite bad in front of rey...bt hope ki vo jaldi samajh jaaye dat shivam has changed!!! Really feeling bad for shivam n nikki...n rey n nikki...n taarey!!! 3 relations at stake!! 😭
Pls update next part soon...n yaa...suspense created...wats rey gonna do!!! 😕 😆


Thanx a lot😃😃
Happy that you liked that scene...as I wanted this kind of interaction always😉
Its Swayam's birthright to feel awkward😛😆
Rey ka time ayega ya nahi yeh toh abhi tak sure nahi hai😉
Koi nahi sabne guess kar diya....ab karo guess...😈
Well this is Shivam with qualities of Mac😛😆
TR ke beech MU nah...😛
Swayam kya upset...vo toh mazak kar rhi thi..dnt take it seriously😵
At this moment all are right...and dont worry sab ke relations bohot strong hai😳
Rey kya karega yeh sochte raho...😉😛😆
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Posted: 11 years ago
plz update soon :D

waiting since long time😃😃
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Jhanvi_TaaRey

plz update soon :D


waiting since long time😃😃


will update it today pakka😃
working on it😊
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Posted: 11 years ago

Hey guyss😃😃

I'm finally here with an update.😃😃

Sorry late hua uske liye as college ke kaam se fursat hi nahi mil rahi.

But still took out time for all those who were waiting eagerly for the update.

Chalo now start reading.😊



Part 18

(Rey is at his place very angry or disturbed or may be confused to be angry or not.)

Rey: I never expected ki Niki mujhse ye baat chupayegi! How could she! Aur Taani, voh bhi uss Shivam ki side le rahi hai! I didn't expect this from you.😡

*At Sharon's place*

Sharon: Niki, whats the matter? Tum aur Rey itna weird kyun behave kar rahe the?😕

Niki: Di please leave it na.

Sharon: You have to tell me!

Niki: Yansh ko pata chal gaya ki I'm in a relationship..

Sharon: Oh.. wait a sec WHAT?😲

Niki: Hmn..

Sharon (composing herself): Rey ko itna gussa kyun aa raha hai? I mean even he is in a relationship. Then why is he over-reacting?

Niki (cutting her): As I'm in a relationship with Shivam.

Sharon: Do you even know what you are saying?😲😡

Niki: I know very well di.

(Niki tells Sharon about how she met Shivam and how she fell in love with him.)

Sharon: So, Shivam has really changed.That's good.😳

*At TaaYam's place*

Swayam: Taani kahan thi tum? Itni der laga di.

Taani: College mein kuch kaam tha bhai.😵

Swayam: Taani jhooth kyun bol rahi ho?

Taani: Vo bhai.. (and tells him what all happened between NikAnsh) Isliye thodi pareshaan thi. Rey Niki se naraz reh kar khud bhi bohot dukhi hai.

Swayam: But Rey is right, Shivam pe firse trust nahi kar sakte.

Taani: Bhai abhi Shivam ko chodo. Pehle Rey ko kuch bhi karne se rokna hoga. Vo bohot gusse mein the.

Swayam: Chalo chalte hai.

(Taayam, Sharon and Niki leave to meet Rey. When they reach his house, they become tensed as the door was left open, which Rey never does. They become tensed and rush into the house. On reaching Rey's room, they were shocked.😲😲😲

The lights in his room were turned off. The room was a complete mess. All things were lying on the floor. The mirror was shattered. Rey was aggressively punching the punch bag and his fingers were bleeding.)

Taani (immediately rushing into the room): Rey aap yeh kya kar rahe ho! Apne aap ko chot kyun pahucha rahe ho? (starts crying😭)

Rey: Taani tum yahan? Mujhe laga tum Shivam ke saath hogi!

Niki: Yansh tum mujhse naraz ho na toh mujhe daato but please baki sab se aise rudely baat mat karo!

Sharon: Par Rey tum Niki se bhi naraz kyun ho? I mean I know that she likes Shivam, but itna gussa?

Rey: You are okay with the fact that she and Shivam are a couple?

Sharon: Yes.

ReYam: Have you lost it?😲😡

Taani: Bhai, Rey, aap dono ek baar humari baat sunn toh lo.

Rey: Mujhe aur kuch nahi sunana hai. Guys please leave. I want to be alone.😡

(Swayam takes them out of the room)

Swayam: Tum teeno neeche ruko. Rey ka gussa jab thanda ho jayega tabi upar aa jana. (and again goes into his room.)

Rey: Swayam agar tum bhi mujhe 'Shivam badal gaya hai' yeh samjhane aaye ho toh please, I'm not interested in listening.

Swayam: No rey. Infact mein toh tumhe batane aaya hu ki tu bilkul sahi kar rahe ho.

Rey: Matlab?😕

Swayam: Matlab yeh ki tu Shivam ko hate karta hai, for obvious reasons. Then tu Taani and Sharon pe gussa hai as they trust Shivam. Yeh hi nahi tu apni darling sis se itna naraz hai ki uski baat ek baar sunne ke liye bhi ready nahi hai. Bohot sahi kar raha hai tu!

Rey: Aur kya sunne hai?

Swayam: Rey pehle tu baith yaha pe.

Rey: Ab bol.

Swayam: I know tu Shivam ki wajah se upset hai, but atleast Niki ko ek baar apna POV batane toh de.

Rey: Vo mujhse baat bhi nahi karna chahati. Isiliye Sharon ke ghar chali gayi.😒

Swayam: Vo chahati hai ki tum usse apni baat samjhane ka ek mauka do.

(Saying this Swayam left his room. After a while Niki entered. Taani and SwaRon were near the door.)

Niki: Yansh..

Rey: Come in Nik.

Niki: Why did you hurt yourself? Galati meine ki thi na toh mujhe daato, mujhe maaro, but please don't hurt yourself.😭😭

Rey: Nik stop crying. I promise ki aage kabhi bhi aise nahi karunga. Aur haan galati tumhari nahi meri thi.

Niki: Tumhari kaise?

Rey: Vo isliye ki tum humesha apne friends soch samajh ke banati ho. So Shivam ko bhi jaanane ke baad friend banaya hoga. But meine yeh sab bina soche over react kar diya.

Niki: No Yansh, you were right bas ek baar meri puri baat sunn lete toh yeh sab nahi hota.

Rey: Sorry.😒 Abh batao.

Niki: Ek saal pehle Shivam ne London University join ki thi. He was always very lonely. Kabhi kisise baat nahi kuch nahi. Then one day we friends were playing Truth or Dare, tabhi I got a dare to go and talk to him. When I went and spoke with him I realized ki he hates himself and wants to change but usse ho nahi paa raha tha. Friendship ki kami. So I started talking to him. One day all of a sudden he came and told me to stay away from him else that won't be good for me. Something inside me told me not to go away. Then later I forced him to speak about his past. He agreed and told me everything that he did here but never told me the names of you people. After hearing all that, I slapped him and didn't even look at him. But andar ek darr rehta tha ki what if voh badla le. But he didn't. So finally I asked him if he really wanted to change. He said yes and then slowly he came out of his bad phase. Aur pata nahi kab but we both started having feelings for each other. Later he confessed and we came in a relationship.

Rey: After listening to you, I can say that you have really changed him. But still..

Niki: I know. Tumhe darr hai ki agar purana Shivam jaag gaya toh? Don't worry Yansh, agar aisa hua toh sabse pehle mein usse durr chali jaungi.😊

Rey: Nik I'm really sorry.

Niki: Tumhe mujhse nahi but kisi aur se maafi maangani chahiye.

Rey: Kisi aur se? Shivam?😕

Niki: No. Taani se. Tum faltu ka uss par chillaye. Taani please come in.😊

(Taani came in. She had tears in her eyes.)

Niki: I'll leave you two alone. But haan jaldi neeche aa jana for dinner.😉 I'm sure no one has had dinner. (she leaves)

Rey: Taani tum ro kyun rahi ho? I'm really sorry for shouting at you in college. I didn't mean to hurt you.😒

Taani: Mein jaanti hu Rey. Aap bas pareshaan the aur please sorry mat boliye. Mein aapse bilkul bhi naraz nahi hoon.😳 Actually hoon.😡

Rey: Huh?😕

Taani: Yeh aapne room ki kya halath bana ke rakh di hai? Aur aapke haath. Aapko kya lagta hai aapka khoon sasta hai ki aap usse itna bahate ho? Aap na apna khayal kabhi nahi rakhte.

Rey: Meri Jodhpur Express, saans toh lo.😆

Taani: Rey mein mazak nahi kar rahi.

Rey: I know Taani. But now no more of this sadness. Abhi sirf aur sirf happiness hogi. Kal semis then finals, I promise you Taani NDC ki trophy St. Louis hi jeetega for their GS!😃

Taani: Rey neeche chaliye warna Niki upar aa jayegi.😆

(All of them have dinner. Everyone goes to their respective homes and sleep peacefully)


Phew done with the update.

My poor fingers hurting a lot.

Now you all give some stress to your fingers and comment warna mein update nahi karungi.😉😆

Coming to a serious note please answer this:

I'm really confused how to move further with the story. I have two ideas, actually its just one but two. Jyada zor mata dalo dimaag pe, continue reading😆

1. To take a huge leap and show everyone settled and marriage.

or

2. To show how they pursue their career and a small twist (not actually a twist, but a trust test).

please do answer😊

Edited by 2111_shweta - 7 years ago

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