virman NEW ff LINMFA * teaser pg 142 * 15 jan 2014 - Page 96

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: abbay

nalayak main ne kitni baar bola terepar tu mere requests to dekhti b ni and sirf reply ni upd8 krne ki b hti h!!!!! PTYKA ka kya hua??????????????😡 #ANGRY #ANKI

arrey PTYKA ka samajh hi ni aa rha k kya karu... ??? hell confused... i am struck up what to do...
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Posted: 11 years ago
thanks I always waiting for
this story I really like this story
update soon I am eagarly waiting

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Posted: 11 years ago
nainu!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! u and internet connection both are sadists!!!! PTYKA and LinFa ko aise turn pe lakar chodd diya h by god!!! and LiNFA mein dont make my Viru cry more and upd8 soon as soon your net connection revives!!!! Tere net connect ko to lagta h Ventilator ki zarurat h!!!!

Do upd8 jaldi jaldi!!!! as soon as your net revives!!!!!
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: abbay

nainu!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! u and internet connection both are sadists!!!! PTYKA and LinFa ko aise turn pe lakar chodd diya h by god!!! and LiNFA mein dont make my Viru cry more and upd8 soon as soon your net connection revives!!!! Tere net connect ko to lagta h Ventilator ki zarurat h!!!!

Do upd8 jaldi jaldi!!!! as soon as your net revives!!!!!




I know anki... I agree but main kya karun... 😕 ventilator mil ni rha 😛

N u know wat main itni bore hui k maine dmg k 3 chapters likh chuki hoon...
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: naina927




I know anki... I agree but main kya karun... 😕 ventilator mil ni rha 😛

N u know wat main itni bore hui k maine dmg k 3 chapters likh chuki hoon...



Suna suna!!! aur suna!!! suna k jala daal meko!!😆
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Posted: 11 years ago

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Suna suna!!! aur suna!!! suna k jala daal meko!!😆




Main kahan jalaing anki... 😡
Main toh share karing bas...
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Posted: 11 years ago
ek writer k ni reader k aspect se soch nainu!!!!!😉
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: abbay

ek writer k ni reader k aspect se soch nainu!!!!!😉




Sochti hu anki... Par sochna isnt enough u see 😳
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Posted: 11 years ago

THIS ONE IS EXCLUSIVELY FOR YOU pink1 😃 if u hadnt asked for it again n again, i wouldnt have typed this part... i was studying today when i read ur comments, you were asking for only one thing n that was LINMFA... so i just now typed it... here it goes... hope you enjoy it and give me alongg comment... (i am very greedy u see )

*****CHAPTER 19*****

it was a beautiful morning... sweet sounds of birds can be heard... the sun has already risen... people had get up to go to their respective jobs.


manvi made a face when a ray of sunlight fell on her face, and she cuddled more and more, in order to hide her face but soon she realised that she wasnt cuddling to a lifeless pillow like always. she was cuddling to virat who was no longer her friend, her partner. she was sleeping in the arms of her husband and surprisingly she was not feeling anything wrong in that... just there was some kind of awkwardness... cmon it was the first time, she woke up in somebody's arms... nooo... in her husband's arms... for the first time ever, she was so close to someone. manvi without any second thoughts, closed her eyes in order to sleep in his arms, because this was something which was comforting her... whenever he was close to her, she never felt lonely and this was the very thing she wanted from life right now.


manvi was happy that she has virat who would always understand her and standby her like he did last night. as soon as she thought about last night, all the memories of kabir came running back to her and again her eyes were filled with tears. manvi felt some movement, and saw virat stirring a little, she hurriedly closed her eyes and caught a fistful of his kurta.


virat opened his eyes and saw manvi sleeping in his arms peacefully and soon his eyes were fixed on the portion of his kurta which manvi was holding in her hands like a baby. his left arm was wrapped around her while with the other he tried to free his kurta out of her hold, but all in vain... she snuggled more close to him creating havoc within him. virat smiled and was about to close his eyes again when something caught his attention... her partition which he filled with vermilion, she was his officially... his bandariya, his dedfutiya was his NOW and no kabir could snatch her away from him... nothing in this world would be able to separate them now... they are married and bounded to each other for eternity. his right hand made its way to the back of her head and pulled her closer to drop a kiss on her forehead.


virat : i love you partner... i am always there for you manvi...

manvi felt him kiss her forehead and then his words... his words touched her heart... and she suddenly realised love is what virat feels for her... but how can she believe him so easily when last night only her dreams got shattered, her heart broke... heart... her heart was not filled with immense pain... it was filled with anger and hatred... anger for kabir... the guy who promised to be with her till the end of the world, the guy who taught her what love was... the guy who was her everything... the guy who left her on her wedding day... the guy who destroyed her in the worst way possible on earth... the guy who hurted her so much that she is scared of love... and hatred for herself... yes she was hating herself... how can she be so naive that he kept on playing with her, and she never noticed it... how can she be that blind to not see his real intentions, how can she be so stupid to love that guy... and now... now after getting married to virat, she is hating herself more... the fact that she has been hurting virat was hurting her... how can she not see his pain... how can she get so lost in her happiness that she failed to see the sadness and emptiness in virat's eyes... how can she...???

" i love you partner... "
" i love you partner... "
" i love you partner... "


virat's words kept repeating in her mind making her more and more vulnerable and weak. how will she be able to love virat the way he loves her... will she ever be able to become worthy of him... will she ever prove to be a good wife to him... and what about being a good daughter-in-law to the vaderas... her every action will be under surveillance from now on and her di would be questioned for her every wrong step... and moreover virat's decision to marry her would also be questioned... nooo... she cant let this happen... virat and her di are the two pillars of her life and she would do anything for them... losing anyone of them would mean losing her life and its meaning.

manvi opened her eyes to see her husband sleeping with his hair messed up and mouth slightly opened. if it was any other day, she would have teased him like anything but now, she looked at him and smiled. she put her finger under his chin and closed his opened mouth. she shifted a little in his arms and ruffled his hair and something was pulling her towards him... her lips were inch away from his forehead when she saw the time in the alarm watch kept on the side table and shouted.

manvi : ahhh...
virat : ahhh...
virat also got scared and got up shouting.
manvi suddenly stopped shouting and looked at virat...


manvi : why did you shout...???
virat : you shouted and scared me... hadd hai yaar...
manvi : virat tum pagal ho...
virat : dekho manvi... subah subah irritate mat karo...
manvi : virat we are gone...
virat : what do you mean...???
manvi : its 9 am... we missed our breakfast...
maine toh kuch bhi nahi khaya hua yaar...
virat : what...??

manvi : haan... sach mein... i am damn hungry...


virat was imagining what would be his situation, when he goes down. viren wouldnt leave a single chance to tease him today...


virat : aaj toh bhai badla lega mujhse...
manvi : mujhe bhookh lag rahi hai...

virat : bahut bura haal hoga...
manvi : kyun...??? bahar se khaalenge na...
virat : hum toh gaye...
manvi : pizza mangwa lenge... tum tension mat lo...
virat : kaise na loon...??? shit...
manvi : virat main paise de dungi...
virat turned to look at manvi with a confused look adoring his face.
virat : paise...??? excuse me... what are you blabbering...???
manvi : i will pay for the pizza... dont worry...
virat : pizza...??? ye kahan se aaya beech mein...
manvi : hamesha se hi tha... what were you talking about...???
virat : arrghh... forget it... nothing...
manvi : tell me na... virattt...
virat : lets get ready first... fir neeche chalte hain...
manvi : main tumhare saath nahi aa rahi hoon...
virat : kyun...??
manvi : hawww... main kaise...??? i feel shy...
virat : what is there to feel shy about...??? we are married...
manvi : tum itne besharam ho mujhe nahi pta tha virat...
virat : arrey isme besharami ki kya baat hai... neeche jaana hai sabke saamne... usme kya hain...???
manvi : tum neeche jaane ki baat kar rahe the...
virat : toh aur kya...??? tum kya samjhi...??
manvi : woh... mu.. mujh.. mujhe lga ke... wo fresh.. bathroom...
virat : goddess of polluted minds... gande dimag wali aurat... chiii...


virat bursted in laughter and rolled on the bed making manvi more n more embarrased...

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Edited by naina927 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
arey waah!!!!

u made my viru laugh!!!! thank u!!!
Edited by abbay - 11 years ago

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