OS-Untitled-based on precap *COMPLETED*

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Hi Guys I am a silent member of the forum I don't post maybe once in awhile but I just got this idea for a one shot from the precap

Naitik and Akshara arrive at the competition and Akshara is feeling nervous as to how the performance will go.

"Akshara aap nervous maat ho main hoon na aap ke saath"

"Naitik who toh theek mujhe dance karke nervousness nahi ho rayi hai, who toh main bhi jaanti hoon ke aap mujhe girne nahi denge"

"Toh phir nervousness kyun"

"Naitik...who dress dekh kar sab kya..."

"Akshara tum fikar mat kara sab theek ho jayega"

SCENE CHANGE

Dadda ji sitting in the office next Rajbanna

"Tum dekhna humra munna aur bahu kitna ache se yeh western dance karenge"

"Haan who toh hai" Rajbanna agreed

"Bhabhimaa mujhe toh bilkul aacha nahi lagta ke bahu yeh dress pa kar dance karegi" whispered Gayatri

"Haan Choti Dulhun par zaamana badal raha hai aur hume bhi uske saath chalna parna hai"

"Ji bhabhimaa mein abhi aati hoon"

SCENE CHANGE

"MAMA" Naksh called running to Akshara and wrapping his arms around her "Thank you Mama aapne mere liye dress ke liye haan kar diya love you Mama" he said kissing her cheek

"Mama aapne Duggu ke liye kuch bhi kar sakhti hai"

"Haan sab pyar Mama ke liye aur Papa ke liye kuch nahi"

"Nahi, Papa I love you too" *family hug*

ANNOUNCEMENT IN THE DRESSING ROOM "ALL CONTESTANTS PLEASE CHANGE INTO YOUR COSTUMES"

"Chalo Naksh change karne ka sama ho gaya"

IN THE DRESSING ROOM AKSHARA LOOKS THROUGH HER BAG BUT THE DRESS IS MISSING

"NAITIK...NAITIK...NAITIK" Akshara cried running toward the men's changing room crying

"Akshara kya hua"

"Naitik meri dress nahi hai"

"Kya, kaha gayi dresss"

"Naitik, mera yakken maniye maine dress rakhi thi apne bag mein ab nahi hai"

"Bas ro mat main jaanta hoon aapne dress rakhi thi bag mein"

"Naitik, humari turn next hai ab kya ho ga" Akshara cried hugging Naitik "Duggu ka dil toot jayega...Naitik mera bacha"

"Ro mat humara bache ka dil nahi toote ga" Naitik said wiping her tears

SCENE CHANGE

Naitik and Akshara are called to the stage and the lights are dimmed

Naitik and Akshara perform the salsa beautifully and are awarded first place

PRECAP

"Bahu, tumhe sharam nahi aayi aaise kapre pehnke stage par char gayi"

"Maa...aap"...

Part 2(Last Part) coming tom


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Posted: 11 years ago
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nice os
waiting for nxt part
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Nice
Waiting for next part 😊
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Duggu runs on to the stage and hugs Naitik and Akshara " mujhe pata ke first place mere papa aur meri mama ko hi milega"

Naitik and Akshara hug Duggu "First toh humhe aana hi tha mere baby ke liye"

"Chalo Akshara hum ghar walo se milte hain"

The family is standing together near the back of the room

"Dekha humhe toh pehle hi pata ke humara munna aur bahu hi jeet kar aayenge"

Naitik and Akshara take blessing from everyone Gayatri half-heartedly gives blessings

Not being able to hold it any longer

"Bahu, tumhe sharam nahi aayi aaise kapre pehnke stage par char gayi"

"Maa...aap"...

"Tumhe zaara se bhi sharam nahi aayi aise kapre pehne mein"

"Maa yeh meri dress nahi hai" Akshara cried "jo dress maine apne saath le aayi thi voh pata nahi kaha kho gayi yeh toh mujhe costume department se borrow karni pari"

"Maine kya voh dress dekhi nahi thi kya itni choti"

"Maa main voh dress vaise nahi pehne wali thi maine uske saath black tights bhi bag mein rakhe the par pata nahi voh kaha kho gaya"

"Bag maine nikala tha" Guiltily Gayatri spoke up "Mujhe maaf karde bahu maine tujhe galat samja"

Gayatri realized that she had once again misunderstood her bahu, Akshara had come up with a compromise for Duggu's sake she would wear the dress but wear in her style

"Koi baat nahi Maa" Akshara said quietly "Chalo ghar chalte hain"

Naitik called Duggu who was playing with his friends and everyone quietly left for home

NAITIK AKSHARA DUGGU IN CAR ON RIDE HOME

"Mama aap itne sad kyun ho aap toh first place mein aaye" Duggu worried

"Mama sad nahi Duggu Mama bas thak gayi" Akshara whispered

Naitik looked over at her and understood that she was hurt by what had happened he wished he could take the hurt away from her

AT HOME

Everyone is in the living room " Lalla zaara voh video game toh shuru kar hum dono khelenge jaa" Dadda ji said sending Duggu away

"Aaj joh kuch bhi mane aacha nahi laga isiliye maine vaisla liya hai" Dadda ji began "ke agar bahu ko western pehna hai to vo pehan sakti hai"

Everyone looked at Dadda ji shocked

"Dadda ji yeh aap kya keh rahi hain" Gayatri asked

"Haan Choti Dulhun zaamana badal rah hi aur hume bhi zaamane ke saath saath thora sat oh badal nah parta hai"

"Daddi ji" Akshara interrupted "mujhe western nahi pehena who Dugu ne zid ke isilye maine voh dress peheni"

"Nahi bahu tumara Dadda ji theek hi toh keh rahe hain" Rajbanna spoke up "Agar tum western pehen bhi lehti ho toh is main koi buri baat nahi hain"

"Akshara mujhe bhi is baat mein koi galat baat nahi lagti" Naitik said " aur aap kaun sa koi galat kapra pehene wali hai, mujhe aap pe poora barosa hain"

"Munna theek keh raha hai bahu" Bhabhimaa too assured Akshara

"Toh phir theek hai aaj se agar bahu ko western pehena hai toh who pehen sakti hain" Dadda ji declared

"Ji" Gayatri agreed dejectedly

Episode ends on Gayatri's constipated face on one side and Akshara nervous on one side

The End

Hope you liked it and hopefully I didn't offend anyone please tell me what you thought😊

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