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Posted: 12 years ago

PART-8

Ayesha: shree, liza or chotu tum logh ETF jayo main thodi der main aati hoon.

Liza: but ayesha tum jaa kaha rahi ho?

Ayesha: baad main batyungi filal tum jayo.

All nodded and left for ETf and ayesha was also going but someone closed her mouth and smelled her clorofome and kidnapped her.


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Rathore and ariya reached office first and waiting for the shirza, ayesha and chotu.

Arjun: rathore abh to yeh case jald se jald pura karna hoga.

Rathore: tum theek keh rahe ho rawte varna commissioner sir hame nahi chodenge.

Riya: yes sir aap dono sahi keh rahe hain.

Rathore: vaise riya tum aaj khush to bahut hongi.

Riya: kyun sir (she asked confusedly)

Rathore: tum to aise keh rahi ho jaise tumhe kuch pata hi nahi.

Riya: sir aap kya keh rahe hain mujhe kuch samajh nahi aa raha.

Rathore: dekh rahe ho rawte yeh kitni bholi ban rahi hain jaise isse pata nahi main kis bare main baat kar raha hoon

Arjun: mujhe bhi nahi pata rathore tum kis barein main baat kar rahe ho?

Rathore: bhool gaye kya abse har sunday riya hamari boss hain vo hame shoot karna or hamara fitness test legi.

Arjun (rudely): to??

Rathore: abh to riya humpe hukum chale ghi.

Riya: aisa nahi hain sir bhale hi main ek acchi shooter hoon par boss or mere mentor to aap hi rahenge and rathore sir main aapko apne se bhi bahut bada samajhti hoon kyunki aapne hi to mujhe balki hum sabko criminals se kaise baat karna team main ek doosre ke saath work karna sikhaya hain. you are the inspiration of our sir. and we respect you as a father, brother and a special person in our life.

Rathore: yeh kuch zayada nahi ho gaya riya?

Riya: yeh sir hamare dil ki baat hain.

Rathore: acchaji yeh bahut zayada ho raha hain. main jaanta hoon tum log mujhe piche se sadu or akdu bulate ho sivaye ayesha ke sikho kuch usse.

Riya: jee sir hum ayesha se zaroor sikhenge akhir vo hi to hain hum sabs achhi hain na.

Rathore understood that now riya is in teasing way mood and arjun just stairing riya at amused face and also her great bond with rathore.

Rathore: dekho riya jaisa tum she intrupted

Riya: main kya samajh rahi hoon sir.

Suddenly Shirza and chotu came in the conference rom and greeted them.
Edited by ll_megha_ll - 12 years ago
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Rathore: dekho riya jaisa tum she intrupted

Riya: main kya samajh rahi hoon sir.

Suddenly Shirza and chotu came in the conference room and greeted them.

Rathore: shree ayesha kahan hain?

RIya: haan shree batao na where is ayesha?

Chotu: sir vo ayesha ne kahan hain vo thodi der main aaye ghi

Rathore: but vo gaye kahan hain?

Shree: sir usne hamein kahan ki vo thodi der main aaye ghi or usne kuch bataya nahi ki vo kahan jaye ghi.

Rathore: theek hain.

Arjun: vahan se koi surag mila?

Chotu: jee sir..

Rathore: kya mila hain.

Shree: sir hamein vahan ek shoes or khoon se sana hua rumaal or ek watch mili hain.

Riya: kya? Magar vo hain kahan?

Shree: sir liza uski checking karne gaye hain okzz

Chotu: sirrr

Rathore: haan bolo chotu

Chotu: sir ayesha ko gaye hue 1hr ho gaye hai8n kya main usse ek baar call karke puch loon

Rathore: haan pucho usse kahan hain vo

Chotu called her but she was not answering her call

Rathore: kya hua chotu?

Chotu: sir ayesha call pickup nahi kar rahi hain

Riya: ek baar main dekhti hoon. She also tried but again ayesha was not pickup her phone.

Soon all were trying but she was not picking.

Rathore: damit! yeh ayesha kahan hain or tum logo ko usse akela nahi chodna chahiye tha.

Chotu: sir hamne usse bahut roka but vo nahi maani.

Riya: kahin ayesha kisi musibat main to nahin

Edited by ll_megha_ll - 12 years ago
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Arjun: ho sakta hain
Riya: abh hum kya karein?

Before anyone could speak liza enter in conference room

Liza: sir autospy ki report aa gaye hain

Rathore: kya aaya usme?

Liza: sir in baccho ki maut ek jaise hui hain. Matlab in logo ka kaatil ek hain or vo koi psycho hain.l

Riya: psycho?

liza: haan psycho hain vo kyunki vo har 16yrs ke baccho ko kidnapped karke unke angoote kat raha hain to iska matlab vo psycho hi hua.

Arjun: I am agree with you liza.

Liza: sir or ek baat vo inlogo ka pehle angoota kaat ta hain uske baad inlogo ko poison deke maarta hain. Or kaatil ek ladka hain or uski age 20-25 ke beech main hain.

Shree: abh hame kaatil ke bare main kafi kuch pata chal gaya hain usse dhoondne main aasani hogi thanx liza.

Liza: your welcome shree

All are shocked becasue shirza gice smiling to each other.

Chotu wisper in riya ear: rii kya main sapna dekh raha hoon yaa yeh sach hain yeh shree or liza ek doosre ko smile kar rahe hain?

Riya: chotu yeh sach hain.

Arjun: abh hame deri nahi karni chahiye iss kaatil ko pakadne main.

Rathore: tum theek keh rahe ho rawte.

But suddenly rathore phone ring

Rathore: hello

Ayesha: hello rathore sir

Rathore: haan ayesha kahao ho tum or kaise ho.

Ayesha: rathore sir please mujhe bacha lijiye vo mujhe maar dega

Rathore: heelo ayesha tum kahan se bol rahi ho or kaun tumhe maar dega

Ayesha: vohi jisne unn chote baccho ko mara hain aahh... sirr..

Rathore: yells ayeshaaa...

And the call cut.

Riya: kya hua sir?

Rathore: usne ayesha ko kidnapped kar liya hain.

Arjun: kisne rathore?

Rathore: uss khooni ne jisne in baccho ko maara hain.

TO BE CONTINUED...

PRECAp:

1. Kya ETF ayesha ko bacha legi?

To know just give your feedback
Edited by ll_megha_ll - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Sorry guyes for giving you late part.
but please aap log comment jaroor karna

and give atleast 5line comment
Edited by ll_megha_ll - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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me first😉
superb yar...!!!
love the way rathore was trying to tease riya but riya ne pura game ulta kar diya😆 😆
omg shree said thanks to liza😲
and aisha kidnapped?😲 hope etf saves her on time...
continue soon...

Edited by devildiva21 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Hey megha what happened?why dnt u update the story?plz plz update soon can't wait so cute ariya
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Posted: 12 years ago

Super awesome update dr...!!!

Awww loved the way Rathod tried to teased Riya...!!!

Waaooo Riya respected Sam so much...!!! Loved their bonding..!!!

OMG the case is getting way too scary...!!!

Thy all r so worried for her n especially Sam...!!!

I hope Aisha is fine n thy all rescued her in time...!!!

Plzzz also include some glimpse of Ariya's past life...!!!

Banner was beautiful...!!!

Thanx 4 pm dr.

Continue soon.

Edited by Aks13 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
nice update dear.. Loved it.. Riya is going to be promoted.. Hell!! No aisha kidnapped by pyscho.. Let's see what's more.. Thanks for pm..
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Posted: 12 years ago
Awwssmmm
hope they find Ayesha sooon
cont sooon
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Posted: 12 years ago
Superb update.
Aww...
Loved how Riya was praising Rathod...
Ab har Sunday,Riya sabki shooting aur fitness class legi...
Not bad...
Haha...
Riya teasing Rathod...
Hehe...
OMG...
Ayesha kidnapped.. :O
please update soonish...
Thanks for the pm.

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