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Posted: 12 years ago
Thanks for all support. Without your support it would not be possible to reach at this stage.
This is the last part of this FF. I dedicated to all those who constantly read, like and comment on it.
I also thanks to all silent readers.
Here comes the update
Hope u all like this too.😊

PART- 40 LAST PART

KK saw Priya is also upset.

When Ram left for office, KK asked what the matter is

KK:- mein bahut dino se dekh rahi hoon Priya...Ram hamesha sabse naraz rehta hai...aur tum bhi koyi hui si rehti ho!!!!!!! Sab teek toh hai na..

Priya:- Haan Maa sab teek hai and looks down.

KK:- beta mein tumhari Maa hoon...muje pata hai kuch toh hai jo tum dono mujse chupa rahe ho...kya baat hai bolo...shayad mein tumhari madat kar saku

Priya:- Pata nahi Maa...lekin Ram ko eise lagta hai ki mein bachho ke aane ke baad unhe nazarandaz kar rahi hoon. unhe eisa lagta hai ki mein unhe dhyan nahi deti...

KK smiles and said "Bas itni si baat. Arre sirf ram hi nahi sabhi aadmi logo ko yahi lagta hai ki bachho ke aane ke baad hum biwiyaan unse jyada bachho se pyar karte hai, unka dhyan rakte hai...aur yeh log bachho se bhi bachhe bann jaate hai. Aur tum toh Ram ko janti ho ki woh tumhe ek pal ke liye bhi kahi jaane nahi deta...thoda possessive hai"

Priya:- maa mein janti hoon aur yahi toh samja rahi hoon ki eisa kuch nahi hai..par woh maanne ke liye taiyaar hi nahi hai

KK:- achha ek kaam karo..aaj tum lunch lekar Ram ke paas jao...usse achha lagega

Priya:- Mein?????aur bachhe

KK:- tum uski chintaa matt karo mein bachho ko sambhal lungi.

In the afternoon,

Priya went to office with lunch. She entered into the cabin and saw Ram is busy in some work. She placed everything on the t-table and calls him.

Priya:- Ram..aayiye na..pehle khana khaa lijiye...baad mein kaam kar lena..

Ram:- muje abhi bhook nahi hai Priya...mein baad mein khaa lunga...

Priya:- lekin muje toh bhook lagi hai na...aur waise bhi time ho gaya hai...aur subah aapne teek se naashta bhi nahi kiya tha...

Ram:- oh!!! Toh tumhe pata hai...

Priya:- haan aur issi liye toh mein aaj lunch lekar aayi. Abb bahut baate ho gayi aur chaliye khana khaa lijiye...aaj dekho meine aaj sab aapke pasand ka banaya hai.

Ram stares at her and again engrossed in his work. Priya goes near him and hold his hand and slog him.

Priya:- Ram..dekho muje gussa aa raha hai...agar aap aaye nahi na toh mein...

Ram:- kya karogi Priya... and pulls her near him and she falls on his lap.

Priya kept her hand around his shoulder.

Ram:- Kya karogi Priya...

Priya move her finger around his face and said "toh mein aapko kaam karne nahi dungi"

Ram:- achha toh kya karogi...

Priya slowly kept her hand near his neck and loosen it and opens the first button. Ram feeling it and enjoying the moment. He is happy that Priya is in mood.

Priya:- chaliye...Khana tanda ho raha hai

Ram:- Priya...tum sach mein bilkul Romantic nahi ho...meine abhi bahut kuch soch liya tha...

Priya:- ho gaya...abb chaliye...

Both enjoyed the lunch. Priya feeds him and Ram enjoying licking her fingers.

In the night,

After dinner, KK:- Priya...bachhe so gaye kya...

Priya:- nahi maa...abhi khel rahe hai...

KK:- achha toh ek kaam kar...tu bachho ko mere kamre mein lekar aa. Muje neend nahi aa rahi..aur aaj muje mere bachho ke saat khelne ka mann kar raha hai

Priya:- Maa...lekin..woh itne jaldi nahi sone wale...abhi jage hai...mein sambhal lungi..

KK:- wahi toh keh rahi hoon..muje neend nahi aa rahi...beta meine Ram ko bada kiya hai...sid jab ek saal ka tha tabb se usse bhi meine hi pala hai...mein keh rahi hoon na ki mein sambhal lungi

Priya:- achha teek hai maa...

She gave her kids to KK and said " agar jyada pareshan kare toh muje bula dena" saying this she went back to her room.

She saw Ram is sitting on the bed keeping his head on the bed rest closing his eyes.

Priya went to the changing room and ready herself. She wore the same red color sari which she wore during grahpravesh.

Priya Entered,

She bolts the door. She saw Ram is sleeping facing her back. She went near him and turns towards her and moving her finger on his face. Ram removed her hand. Priya switch on the lights and Ram gets irritated. He switches off the light.

Ram:- Sone do Priya, neend aa rahi hai.

Priya again switch on the light. Ram turns his face to other side. Priya step on the bed. Ram understood and said "kya hua Priya neend nahi aa rahi...aur bachho ko kahan chodke aayi ho.

Priya wishper "Bachho ko mummyji ke paas choda hai...

Ram:- Priya...maa ko kyun pareshan kar rahi hoo...tum bachho ko yahan lekar aa jao.

Priya:- le aayenge...itni bhi jaldi kya hai

Priya turns him again. Ram gets angry.

Ram:- Kya hai Priya...kyun pareshan kar rahi ho...sone kyun nahi deti...Aur yeh sab kya laga rakka hai...jab mein tumhare paas aana chahta hoon toh tum mana kar deti ho...abhi mera mood nahi hai...issliye jao bachho ko maa ke kamre se lekar aa jao...

This time Priya felt very bad. She steps out of the bed and went near window and looking outside. She is crying.

After some time Priya felt warm touch on her waist. Ram slowly comes near her and slides his hand on her waist and kept his chin on her shoulder. Priya try to remove his hand but he holds it very tightly. He pulled near him and kiss on her neck to ear. She turns towards him. Both intently look into each other. Ram saw tears. He pulls towards him and she fall on his chest. Ram kisses her tears and Priya closed her eyes. He slowly pecks her lips and she responded. He lightly lifts her and both are engrossed in each other.

After some time both separates. Ram squeezes her in his arms. His hand caresses her back. He holds the dori of her blouse and unties it.

Priya:- achha teek hai...mein bachho ko lekar aati hoon.

She goes when he holds her wrist and pulls her.

Ram:- arre tumhi ne toh kaha ki bachhe maa ke saat hai...so rahe hai

Priya(teasingly):- toh...aap hi toh chahte hai na...ki mummy ko pareshan na karu.

Ram:- agar tum chahti ho ki hum aage na bade toh lekar aa sakti ho

Priya smiles...and Ram hugs her very possessively...

Ram carries her and took her to the bed. He placed her carefully on the bed. Priya smiles and turns her face. Now, her back is facing him. Ram bends and kiss all over her back. Priya closed her eyes. She is breathing hard and holds the linen tightly. Ram slides the hair on one side and kiss on her back of neck. He unhooks her blouse and turns towards him.

Both desire for each other. He kisses on her forehead, then to her eyes and slowly comes down. He removed her pallu and giving wet kisses on her cleavage.

Both are dissolved in each other after many months of wait. Their craving, their need are fulfilled. Both are sleeping peacefully in other arms.

After sometime Priya senses and she suddenly gets up from the bed. Ram holds her.

Ram:- Kahan jaa rahi ho

Priya:- Ram...bachhe maa ke paas hai...unhe bhook lagi hogi...mein dekhkar aati hoon...

Ram:- toh kya karne wali ho abhi tumse unka pett nahi barne wala...

Priya hits him on his chest and said"sach mein bahut besharam ho gaye hai"

Ram:- Please Priya...stay like this na...Maa sambhal legi...

Priya:- Ram mein bhi yahi chahti hoon but abb hum parents bhi hai...hame bachho ke baare mein bhi sochna padega...

Priya gets up from there and went to washroom. After changing she went to KK's room.

She opens the door and saw kids are sleeping.

KK:- aavo Priya...meine abhi sula diya hai...tum chintaa matt karo

Priya:- Lekin Maa...bachoo ko feed

KK:- meine bachho ko lacto de diya hai...abhi woh bade ho rahe hai..unhe tumhara feed kafi nahi hoga...tum jao aur aaram karo...bachhe abhi uthne wale nahi hai...

Priya:- Maa..aap mere liye...

KK:- Priya yeh mere bhi bachhe hai...aur kabhi kabhi apne pati ko bhi samay dena chahiye..

Priya felt shy and gaze down..

KK:- arre isme sharmane wali kon si baat hai...sabhi ke saat eise hota hai...bachho ke aa jaane ke baad hum bachho mein itna ulaj jaate hai ki hame kuch aur dhyan nahi hota...tumhe toh ek nahi do do bachho par dhyan dena hota hai. aur waise bhi aadmi log itna kuch sochte nahi...

Priya:- thanks mummy ji

KK:- thanks sab chodo aur jao...Raat bahut ho gayi hai so jaao

Priya goes and came back to her room. She saw Ram is sleeping. She went near him and sleeps besides him cuddling him into hug.

Days passed and Raya's kids grown. Myra is just like her father. She completed her studies; she did MBA and now helping her father in Business. Presently she is working her father's guidance, but some time Ram also surprised with her business knowledge.

On the other hand Pari is just opposite. She took sports as her career. She is the best swimmer. Though Priya is not a sports person but she is the inspiration for Pari.

Priya is always concern for her children's but she trusts her children more than anything else.

Sid and Ayesha also came back from US. Sid realized his mistake. He said sorry to Ram and Priya in front of all family members. Now, both are staying in KM. They also blessed with one child Kush. He is also grown and now also involved in business.

Myra, Pari and Kush are the heart of the KM.

Now, our Raya

Ram and Priya love is still going very strong. Both still madly in love with each other like they before during initial time. They still craved for each other. How much busy is Raya but they manage to took time for each other.

Myra and Pari sometimes makes fun of Raya and call them love birds. It never affects their love.

One day Ram is standing near window. Priya goes near him and stands beside him keeping her head near his chest.

Priya:- kya soch rahe ho

Ram:- Yahi ki hamare bachhe kitne jaldi bade ho gaye...

Priya:- hmm...

Ram:- Pata nahi mein kya karunga..jab woh iss ghar se kisi aur ke ghar chali jaayegi...mein soch bhi nahi sakta

Priya:- toh kya chahte hai...yahi apne paas rakne ka irada hai kya

Ram:- Nahi...Priya...par darr lagta hai mein kaise jiyunga unke bagair...

Priya:- Ram..pata hai...Maa-Baap ka farz tabb pura hota hai jab hum apni betiyon ka haat ek achhe se ladke ke haat mein de dete hai...

Ram tight his hold on her and said "haan jiss tarah tumne iss ghar mein aakar iss ghar ko sambhala hai, roshan kiya hai, ussi tarah hamari betiyaan bhi kisi aur ke ghar mein jaakar uss ghar ko roshan karegi"

But, the truth is parents responsibilities never end. They are always concern for their children

This is the small love story of our Raya. Hope u all like this. 😊

Please hit the like button and comment

Sorry for the mistakes.

Edited by sandhyasn - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
not liking that u ended so soon and this way wished for golu😕 😭
ek epilogue dedo and have priya pregnant like father of bride 2 where he make his wife pregnant and soon when his own daughter is pregnant😆

loved the romance part 😉 but priya was unromantic kiski taraf muje pata hain😉
and bedroom mein bus itna sa romance toda aur dediti kanjoooss😡

babies slept 😆 with daadi😆 krishna is sweet and understandable 👏 and understood her don and dil's pain of being away😆 sweet daadi

i wished u had send back that sid and conda so as kush🤢 how can he be apple of eyes🤢 villain of raya life

as usual dint like myra's name but pari name is cute 😳 but ye kya yaar golu to banta ta

who all support me ask for golu.(i know may be 4 atleast who think as me )

i did not like u ended soo soon
can't say continue soon also
i wish u give an epilogue where along with girls priya is also pregnant😉 like santo in bandhini😆 for an golu😆


Edited by shavii - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago

i captured dear u can capture in my ff 😉 don't worry
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Posted: 12 years ago
Lovely update...
haila etni jaldi end bhi kr diya😭
are abhi to love story shuru hua tha😆
Abhi to 3-4 SR baaki tha yaar😆
Are raya ko buddha kr diya pr pyaar to abhi bhi barkarar hai😳
oyee hoy priya ji office aa gyi..
pr office wala romance half hi reh gya yaar😉
oyee priya ne saree kyun pehna 😆
roz ka normal bhi pehn sakti thi na😉
chalo bachhe bade ho gya...
aur sid sudhar gya😲😲
badiya hai...
are raya ka ye love story end kiya to koi new love story start kr do😳
are shama ko,ek chota golu de,deti na 😆
thanks for pm🤗
Edited by Mini1991 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
yahan pe bhi leap hogaya aur end mai sid sudhar bhi gaya 😆
it was good...now u hv ended this so it means u'll update the new one😊
thanks for the pm😛
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: shavii

not liking that u ended so soon and this way wished for golu😕 😭
ek epilogue dedo and have priya pregnant like father of bride 2 where he make his wife pregnant and soon when his own daughter is pregnant😆

loved the romance part 😉 but priya was unromantic kiski taraf muje pata hain😉
and bedroom mein bus itna sa romance toda aur dediti kanjoooss😡

babies slept 😆 with daadi😆 krishna is sweet and understandable 👏 and understood her don and dil's pain of being away😆 sweet daadi

i wished u had send back that sid and conda so as kush🤢 how can he be apple of eyes🤢 villain of raya life

as usual dint like myra's name but pari name is cute 😳 but ye kya yaar golu to banta ta

who all support me ask for golu.(i know may be 4 atleast who think as me )

i did not like u ended soo soon
can't say continue soon also
i wish u give an epilogue where along with girls priya is also pregnant😉 like santo in bandhini😆 for an golu😆


hmm...har cheez ka ek end hota hai...isse bhi kar diya.
no epilogue and no more bachha😆
kanjoos kisko boli..tum toh kuch nahi dhikati Angry aur Priya kiske samaan hai.
agar gharwale help kar de toh life achhe se aage badta hai...😉. waise mein maasi ko bhi bhej sakti thi😆..lekin maasi jab dekho ghumti rehti hai.😆
tuje kya karna hai myra hai ki pari..Raya ke bachhe hai..unhe pasand tha toh rakk diya 😆
tum eisa epilogue apne ff mein do...badiya rahega😉
thanks for comments🤗
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Posted: 12 years ago
Thx for the PM.
Yaar kudos to saasuma😆 sab ko KK jaisi saas mile aur ram jasa beta😉 jai ho KKji.
priya jaisi kisi ladki uljhan mein reh jaayegi ki pati ko samhaale ya bacchoan ko😆.
Yaar ek update mein kya kya kara diya yaar romance , bacche bade bhi hogaye aur raya boodhe bhi.
Last mein jo aap ne tadka daala hai na just true n perfect ending. With so much ease u penned down brilliantly. Kudos..
Yes u indeed pointed out the truth parents responsibilities and unconditional love has no end however grown up they are. How true..
Just fabulous.👏👏👏👏
aapka upate padha meine aap ko rishtoan ki samjh jitni hai na usse kayi zyada easily ,saralata se aap likh leti ho, jo seedha har kisi k dimaag tak dil takpahooch jaata hhai.
Edited by bpatil3 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Nice part... dis was a nice nd diff story nd i enjoyed reading d whole story... hoped u hv continued further... will miss dis... thnx 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome one
ram is not angry with priya and their problem also solved
raya children are also now grown up
ending is very good loved it
can't say continue soon as the ff has ended
but thanx for the pm
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Posted: 12 years ago
A nice thought framed as a beautiful love story .. I love this end , everything is perfect since the start. i loved it to the core.. hmm but i dont like it to be ended soon , i love this romantic ram kapoor very much .. thanku for such a lovely story

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