Punarvivah ..Thread# 4 - Page 2

Thank u so much friends for such a lovely response for this FF.I didn't think of getting so much appreciation as every one disliked Geet paired up with yash at beginning. now all are saying for not bringing the twist. I really loved it. It says that I m successful to touch your hearts.So accept my hearty thanks for your response.

And a very important note before reading the update

We are stepping in to our main concept of Punarvivah with this update.Friends I m really very sorry for this update..I m asking for the forgiveness in advance if you find this update heart breaking and and if it forces you to curse me. Just bear this pain for few updates. I will try to overcome it soon. I have already cried a lot while typing it.My friend Indu is so upset that she wants to skip this part but I m sorry Indu for not listening to you. One reader is liking Yash a lot now with Geet and she wants me to change the concept. But how can I do that? I have already planned it. Though I too find it very difficult to type these updates,yet it's my duty to give you the main twist. I m posting it to get rid of the pain which I felt while typing it. I m again asking for your forgiveness. From now onward whatever you will read here in next few updates is only a fictional presentation. I don't know if it happens in real or not. I have seen similar scenes in some serials and movies so I m presenting them here in my way to present the concept, and you will see that all these incidents will help us to move forward towards Punarvivah of your maaneet.I hope you always will be with me in this journey.- Rashmi

Part-10

Maan's flight landed at Delhi and he came out of airport but was surprised to see that no car was there to receive him. He called yash but his phone was switched off.he called Arpita then but it too was switched off.He called at land line and a servant picked up the phone.

Maan-maan here. Why no one is here to pick me.Yash aur Arpita ke phone switched off kyun hain.

Servant- maan bhaiya aap jaldi se taxi lekar ghar aa jaaiye.and he cut the phone. Maan was surprised at the behavior of the servant. Then it clicked him"HMM to ye Arpita aur yash ki surprise dene ki trick hai. No problem... ghar chalkar pata chal hi jaayega. Every one is now behaving like Geet.he smiled at his thought.

He reached at home and he found few cars in the compound. Maan thought-ye surprise party de kar surprise bataayenge kya?

He entered the compound,paid the taxi bill and entered the house and he found an emptiness in the house. The servant came and took his bag . his head was bent and he wasn't looking at Maan.he moved to leave with Maan's luggage and Maan stopped him-Suno sab log kahaan hain?

The servant signaled in one direction.

Maan- Are they planning to give the surprise or they are giving me the shock . The way every one is behaving is very unusual.He was moving in the direction where the servant signaled. And he heard Geet-Maaannn

and he saw Geet came running in his directions. Before he could understand she came near him , held his hand and dragged him in one direction. Maan couldn't believe what he was seeing. He saw Yash and Arpita lying on the floor. They were covered in a blood strained white clothes.

Geet-Maan dekhiye na in dono ko .ye koi tarika hai surprise dene ka. Main kab se kah rahi hoon in dono ko . Sunte hi nahin hain meri. Ab aap aa gaye ho to bolo na inko ki humen ye surprise achchha nahin laga. Yash aap ki har baat maante hain na to please kahiye inhen uthne ke liye.

Maan was looking geet and yash and Arpita one by one.Anie came near him and hugged him-bhaiya. Yash bhaiya and Arpita bhabhi humen chod kar chale gaye.

Geet- no anie .. ye dono sirf natak kar rahe hain. Tumhen pata hai Arpita maan ko aur yash mujhe koi surprise dena chahte the issiliye ye dono acting kar rahe hain.ab maan aa gaye hain na to ye dono abhi uth jaayenge.maan please kahiye na.Koi bhi kuchh nahin kahta sab aise hi baithe hain.

She went near Arpita-Arpita dekho maan aa gaye hain ab to uth jaao. bataao na kaun sa surprise dene wali thi tum.Arpita bolo na..

Maan was standing there like a statue. He couldn't get a word which Geet said.Then he moved where both were lying.he stood between them. He looked at Arpita first and then at yash. He turned towards yash-Yash dhokha diya tumne mujhe.Saath saath aaye the hum is duniya me aur chupke se jaa rahe ho. Kyun yash kyun kar rahe ho aisa.and he lifted yash in his arms and hugged him tight and he cried loudely-Yaaasshh.

Geet-Maan ye aap kya kar rahe ho.? Instead of waking him you yourself is crying.the people who were witnessing this couldn't control themselves from shedding tears. Priya was fainted because of the shock

Maan then turned towards Arpita. He took her face in his arms-You were worried for me when you were going to our parents house now you have gone forever Arpita . kyun nahin socha ab mere bare me.And he cried and cried.

Geet was looking at him confused-Maan now you too are behaving like them all. Maine kaha na ki ye dono natak kar rahe hai.She shook him badly and fell near him when she saw him too behaving in that manner. She was waiting for Maan as she knew that he will listen to her but nothing changed for Geet.

Finally Rahul came near Geet . he lifted her up from the floor and said - Geet sambhaalo apne aap ko.They both have left us.

But Geet was not ready to listen to him . Seeing no other option he slapped her hard though he didn't want to do this but it was needed for Geet to bring her out from the shock- Geet wo dono ja chuke hain. Kabhi wapas nahin aayenge. You get that. Yash has gone for ever.he is no more and this is the only truth.and he hugged her little sister as he wanted to protect her from every pain but it wasn't possible now. She was going to bear the pain for her life long.

Rahul-Geet I m sorry. But please understand that yash is no more . he will never come back to you.

Geet cried to hear her brother.She didn't want to face the reality.but She had to.

Rahul-Geet dekh lo aopne yash ko jitna chaahe utna. Aaj ke baad nahin dekh paaogi.

Geet now understood the reality . She set near yash. She held his hand-Yash itna bada dhokha aap kaise de sakte hain apni geet ko.I promised you to be a good wife .ek chance to diya hota yash. I was waiting for this day to come when I was going to learn to be a good wife.aur aap mera saath dene ki jagah mujhe akela hi chhod gaye.How will I manage yash? Please boliye nay ash kuchh to boliye.

Sudha and Gautam were watching their children helplessly. Sudha was crying for her daughter. Geet never saw sorrow in her life. She never cared for tiny pains seriously but this was a big blow on her daughter. How she will cop up with that .

Then all heard a loud cry. All looked in to the direction of that cry. Taiji was standing there. She came near yash and Arpita, looked at them and and again cried- bhagwan ne kaisa din dikha diya. Kiske paapon ka phal diya humen.Ek saath do do bachchon ko apne paas bula liya.

Maan was sitting there without a word.he wasn't able to understand whom he should mourn more? For his wife who left him without saying a word or for his brother who was the part of his soul-Yash who took his death on himself. May be this was for him. If he was on time to pick Arpita , it must not have happened with yash or nothing may have happened to both.Ram came near maan and he put his hand on his shoulder. Maan looked at him and hugged him-Papa ye sab kya ho gaya.?

Ram too was crying for his children- Maan control yourself .beta. we have to control ourself. Dekho zara kitne logon ko sambhaalna hai hume.he signaled at the ladies of the house.

Ram narrated maan how all that happened. The eyewitness told police that a truck on the road suddenly went out of the control of the driver. It was over loaded . May be truck driver was either in half sleep or was drunk. He lost the control and he hit in yash's car. The clash was so huge that yash's car was smashed completely and it front was pushed it to it's back portion. That truck driver too was dead as he too fell out of the truck and he came under the other vehicle which was just passing by that road.people tried to take them out but it wasn't possible. Yash's phone was completely damaged but arpita's was safe as it was in her handbag which was lying on the back seat. So they called home from that phone.They were taken out and were rushed to hospital but Drs. Declared them brought dead.Maan was hearing all this and thinking about the destiny

Just then some one brought the postmortem report which declared that Arpita was three weeks pregnant Taiji heard that and she started again- bhagwaan pura ghar ujaad diya. Bahu aur bete ke saath ghar ka waaris bhi chheen liya.kabhi kabhi bhagwaan bhi galati kar deta hai. Jo ghar ki bahu banne ki sahi haqdaar thi usko le gaye aur dusri ko sir par bojh bana diya.vansh ko hi mita diya.

No body was giving a ear to her as they had some other works too.They had to take them for the final rituals.

Taiji called some married women and some widows for the rituals to be done with Geet and Arpita. Sudha could see the worst coming in her daughter's life.Till now Geet too was as calm as no life was left in her. She was sitting there almost lifeless. Those widow women moved towards geet, and married women towards Arpita.Anie was holding priya as she was loosing her senses again and again.

At one side one DIL of the house who was dead now was being covered with colorful saree as she was leaving the world as sada suhaagan . she was being given all the marriage symbols which a married woman wears.

And on the other side, the marriage symbols were being snatched from the other DIL. Her bangles were being broken harshly which left her both hands wounded with the glass . the vemillion was removed from her forehead and her mangalsutra was broken with a jerk,due to which there was a scratch mark too on her neck but she was unaffected with all those happenings. She wasn't feeling even slight pain in those wounds as her heart was feeling more wounded in front of those physical wounds.

Sudha Gautam and Rahul wre watching all that happenings with their helpless eyes.

Arpita and yash were ready to leave the world for ever.all paid them their last homage. Sudha brought Geet near them . her hands were still bleeding . Sudha made her to pay her last homage to her husband who was ready to leave the world and was taking with him all the childishness of his wife.Geet fulfilled all the duties just like a machine. Her husband was leaving her to face the world alone. Maan too was ready to see his wife and brother off for ever.

Precap- Decision to be taken about Geet-Will she stay in KM or will move away with her parents.

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I may take time to update next part as I have suffered a lot at the time of typing this update. I need my mind to be free from the pain of giving this update-Rashmi