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@Sarangnunmul

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Posted: 12 years ago

Hello Every ONE.. I am REENE..

I Am here With You All To Share My First Work.

Then I started to Write Stories I don't know HOw to Write, I Even Didn't Knew How to express The cene Or Express The Emotions..

The first Step In the World OF WRITING I took with This Story.. Or You Can say A Chappy, Post, Whatever You Guys want it To nAme it..

But for ME it is some Thing Amazing.. Something Lie Changed In ME suddenly.. It Just took my breathe Away That Time.. When I finished Writing It, I was LIKE.. AWWW... DID I WROTE ALL THIS..BUT YES INDEED I DID THAT THING..

Guys I am not a Writer, Just a little Story Teller.. So this was the starting Of My STORY..

SO GUYS here I am sharing this thing with you all.. I now IT is Not easy to understand it, as story is far to Unfold itself.. But still I am POsting It, To share A PIece Of Heart With You All..

Please GIVE YOUR PRECIOUS Comments, OR like To IT, If you FEEL So..

ISS PYAAR KO KIA NAAM DOON.

1.ITS COLD FOR ME

haaawaon ne uski angarie ko,

yun choan ke fiza sharma gaie,

fiza ne akash se poucha " kia yeh wahi hai"

akash bhi nazar jhuka betha,

ne dekh fiza uss dilnashi ko,

wo tou pakezza hasti e dil rubba hai.

-RV-

A bright sun rising slowly in the glory of mid- winter morning, in beautiful country India, and the ancient city named Lucknow, Lucknow is famous for its history, Mughal emperor who ruled whole India (which is divided now in Pakistan and Bangladesh.) for more than 3000 years. Morning is chilled over here she don't want to wake up so early. she know curtains are flowing with the sweet flow of morning breeze, she look toward their with one eye and again hide it in the blanket, a bright sun light is glowing in a fantastic bright pink room coming out of the blanket, still she don't want to remove , it is to cold she shivered, walk out from the bed,

wear her shoe, ( her favorite fur shoes) walk toward bathroom, her face is covered with her hair, she tide them up in a high pony tail, but still one strand of hair is out on her face which is flowing with the soft morning breeze , she came close to the window stand their for awhile thinking something and smile, just cute little smile, and then close the window and ran toward the bathroom, she came out from bathroom, seems to be fresh now,

she turns suddenly may be someone calls her,

girl : coming mom.

She turn back and looked toward the mirror. Her face is rectangular shape but very small, her light golden brown eyes are full of shine, she smile to see herself in the mirror. She again put her left out strand of hair back to her ear. Again it came out, again she put it back.

Girl : stupid hair, be their only.

But she realize it wont stay their, she take a clip and attached it with other hair. She make lopsided smiling face and said

"now come out"

Again someone called her : Khushi come fast.

Khushi : coming mom 2 min.

She ran down to meet her mom. she feeling cold again

Khushi: so cold..

she took her sweater and ran down.

Khushi: good morning mom. how's your night?

mom: good dear, how you are feeling now? i know you don't like cold weather a lot but enjoy it.

Khushi : yes mom. You know nay

mom: Khushi.

Khushi: yup mom.

mom : Today is your college first day, (little worried )

Khushi : mom I am not kid and its not my first day, I am third year student. don't act like I am one year old kid, going to school first time , I know everyone their..( smiling )

Mom: its after vacation first day dear.

A boy entered. Girls mom welcome him, addressed him as Akash.

Akash: yeah aunty she is so big now, look at her, every way big (teasingly)

Khushi : do I look fat mom?

mom : no.

Akash shyly tells her not to say her, tell her she is fat.

mom: no dear, just little bit. nothing else, (with teasly smile)

she left the breakfast and ran angrily.

Edited by ReneeRV - 12 years ago

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@Sarangnunmul

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Posted: 12 years ago

Akash tries to stop her but didn't able top catch her, he shouted " we were joking" Mrs. Gupta tells her to go after her. When Akash follow Khushi Mrs. Gupta felt happy like pleased to see them together.

Khushi's room is beautifully organized perfectly with pink and light blue and yellow combination, (so odd combination) she is standing in front of open window, Akash entered in her room, he entered and stand near her, after standing for a minute he closed the window, she looked up. After one more minute Akash break the silence.

Akash : you don't like cold, do you?

Khushi : why do you care?

Akash : I am your friend.

Khushi :but.

(Akash stop her before she finished.)

Akash : the way you are. ( he express a lot from his three word) they both smile, but still something is missing. Some whole to be filled.

Akash after a pause : we are getting late. Lets go. (and he left)

COLLEGE

A BIG CAMPUS ,HUGE ENTERANCE AND PERFECT GLORY OF HIGH CLASS STANDERD,WITH LOTS OF BEAUTIFULL FACES AND OFCOURSE AROGANT ALSO. ;)

A : lots of beautiful new faces.

K : not your type.( watching some short shirt girls )

A : feeling jealous.

K with easy reaction : why should I be.

Akash seems like he was expecting what he say. he said : then I should talk to them.

he stand up but Khushi hold his hand, to stop him, he looked at her, first their hand and then her face, she looks little angry.

HEY GUYS" someone called them.

Vijay, Simran, Viraf, Sandriya and Neil. their friends coming toward them, Khushi see them and leaves Akash hand instantly. and got up and hug them and wish them morning.

Khushi left with Sandriya, Viraf and Neil. Simran and Vijay are in relationship, they saw what happened before their arrival.

Simran tell Akash : why don't you tell her?

Akash : tell what! ?

Vijay : don't act smart.

Akash : really? what am acting?

Simran now they are walking :we all know.

Akash : what you all know?

Vijay : that you love her. Akash stop instantly.

Vijay to Simran : I told you right he love her.

Simran surprisingly : seriously you love Khushi?

Akash : what nonsense!

Vijay : right dude, look at your self, don't you feel that you love her, how you look at her, don't say that you don't know.

Akash stop Vijay and Simran and very angrily he spoke.

DON'T TELL HER ANYTHING "

Akash : Please don't tell her.

Both were surprise by his reaction but didn't speak about it.

They entered the class room which was already full with students, everyone was talking about their holidays, family time , work etc.

it was looking like typical college class room, full of masti, enjoyment and of course LIFE. but who knows what will happen in

sometime and it will change every ones life.

Scream

Everyone is asking what happened? no one is answering, everyone is running toward ground. Akash, Khushi, Simran, Viraf, Neil, Sandriya, all came out of the class to know what happened. they all are surprised, at that moment they heard Ambulance Siren.

Khushi ask a student who was coming from the site of terror : what happened?

Boy : Mr. D'costa he died...!

Sandriya : what!! ?

everyone is with the same reaction.

Khushi: but how?

boy : I think heart attack..

Neil : now what? our Dean Died..!

Sandriya lets go their, see what is going on. They all run toward Mr. D'costa room. All teachers were their. All of them are confused. Miss Noreen saw all of them together, and walk toward them. They ask what happened?

she said: he got heart attack and died the same moment, all teachers are worried, lets see how trusties will handle this situation, now before anyone sees you go back to your classes I will catch you guys their.

They left silently

Everyone is surprised coz of the incident, this place before hour was full of life and now, its seems like so unreal.

Miss Genii enter the class and inform them that collage is getting close due to the unexpected death of our Dean. and also she announced that new dean will be appointed soon tomorrow will be the meeting of all our trustees and they will appoint someone

as soon as possible.

Khushi : Ma'am i hope they appoint you. All the best.

miss Genii pass the smile and left.

Viraf : so Khushi you think they will appoint her?

K : why not she deserve.

Akash :yeah she will be best. she is so cool with kids. Hope she be the next.

Sandriya : best not like Mr. D'costa.

K : San don't say that he is no more now..

Sandriya : I know but you know how he was, arrogant ,Hitler type.

Simran : and handsome too.

everybody look at Simran with weird reaction ( of course dean was old, how she can use a word like handsome for him, with such a lusty way ) she look down and walk ahead of everyone. Everyone left Akash and Khushi left together.at home Khushi tells her mom

what happened at the college, Khushi had dinner and went of to sleep.

..At mid-night..

Khushi is sleeping on her pink bed calmly, and peacefully, then suddenly in her dream, very divesting images which is making her restless, she wants to scream, wants to help someone she wants to run toward the image but she is so helpless, she feel herself but cannot help to help the image and suddenly, she scream a woke-up.

Mrs. Gupta : Khushi my child, What happened? are you alright?

Khushi : YEs mom.

Mrs. Gupta : what happened? again the same?

Khushi she didn't speak first but her mom can read her mind and eyes : The same mom.

Mrs. Gupta hug her and tell her to sleep back. She console her and keep weaving Khushi's hair till she sleep. She feels Khushi is off to sleep, she got up and when she is about to leave Khushi asked her.

Khushi: Mom who was she?

Mom : who dear?

Khushi : the lady in my dreams?

Mom : Lady..!

Khushi : My dream mom, I don't know but I feel I have some connection with her, but what I don't know. You know anything about it?

Mrs. Gupta didn't answer first but after a while which seems to be a very big pause, says : Nothing dear, or I would have told you. Trust me.

(TRUST ME..SEEMS LIKE SHE IS PLEADING NOT TELLING, SOME HIDDEN TRUTH IS BEHIND TWO SIMPLE WORD KHUSHI CAN SENSE THIS, but she didn't ask her, again without answer she sleep silently.)

Next morning

Mrs. Gupta greeted Khushi : good morning.

Khushi didn't reply

She again said: you didn't sleep last night. Did you?

Khushi : mom getting late.

Mrs. Gupta : Khushi I am asking something.

Khushi : Mom you know, I didn't sleep then why are you asking.

Mrs. Gupta : Khushi dear..!

Khushi : see you in eve mom. And she left.

So tell Me guys, Hows It??

Little Imature, writing.. or Okay, Or good for the first Take...

How You will describe it...